Manan FF-You Are Mine(Complet...

By I_am_his_star

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You Are Mine is a story where manik n nandini falls in love on their first meeting... slowly both accepted ea... More

~Chapter 1~
~Chapter-2~
~Chapter-3~
~Chapter-4~
~Chapter-5~
~Chapter-6~
~Chapter-7~
~Chapter-8~
~Chapter-9~
~Chapter-10~
~Chapter 11~
~Chapter-12~
~Chapter-13~
~Chapter-14~
~Chapter-15~
~Chapter-16~
~Chapter-17~
~Chapter-18~
~Chapter-19~
~Chapter-20~
~Chapter-21~
~Chapter-22~
~Chapter-23~
~Chapter-24~
~Chapter-25~
~Chapter-26~
~Chapter-27~
Everyone dresses
~Chapter-28~
Promo & Dress
~Chapter-29~
~Chapter-30~
~Chapter-31~
Haldi dress
~Chapter-32~
~Chapter-33~
Wedding outfit
~Chapter-34~
~Chapter-35~
~Chapter-36~
Reception's Attires
~Chapter-37~
~Chapter-38~
~Chapter-39~
~Chapter-40~
~Chapter-41~
~Chapter-42~
~Chapter-43~
~Chapter-44~
~Chapter-45~
~Chapter-46~
~Chapter-47~
~Chapter-48
~Chapter-49~
~Chapter-51~
~Chapter-52~
~Chapter-53~
~Chapter-54~
~Chapter-55~
~Chapter-56~
~Chapter-57~
~Chapter-58~
~Chapter-59~
~Chapter-60~
~Chapter-61~
~Chapter-62~
~Chapter-63~
~Chapter-64~
~Chapter-65~
~Chapter-66~
~Chapter-67~
~Chapter-68~
~Chapter-69~
~Chapter-70~
She is the One!!

~Chapter-50~

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By I_am_his_star


~A one week later~

Manik and Nandini was sleeping peacefully when nandini feels immense pain in her lower body...
she started sweating and crymied in pain..

nandini-mumm manik..manik...aaahhhass

manik woke up with her voice..
manik-kya hua jann
nandini-manik aahhaaa its paining.
..
manik-but dates
nandini-manik I can't handle..its paining aabhhaaa.h ..she shouted..and soon was losing her consciousness..

manik-dont loose it...he picked nandini in his arms safely and rushed outside..

he shouted for neyonika and raj..
raj-manik rush to hospital immediatley..I will inform doctors about it..

manik rushed with nandini in his arms..and kept on talking to her

nandini was breathing heavily due to pain ...

they reached hospital and Mancini was taken to ICU...

Manik was pacing to and front in tension soon everyone arrived..

doctor came out and said

Its not labour pain but babies head has turned upside down..due to that she is having a pain..
we need to operate her right now but

manik-but what doctor..

doctor- but chances r less for babies to survive when they turns upside down..and nandini  is already weak..we can save only child or mother

manik-no no aisa nahi hoskta...

raj-manik sambhal apne aap KO..

manik-dad suna na apne..

doctor-decide immediately... we have to operate her soon...sign this papers...
child aur mother...

neyonika-beta sign it ... god will bless u with baby again save nandini

manik-how can I kill my babies myself...but I can't be selfish..
he signed the paper to save nandini...

doctor went inside and started the operation..

here manik went to a small temple in hospital..

neyonika and raj prayed for safety of all three..

Manik- aiyappa ...meri nandini me aiyappa...aap toh rakshak ho na.. please mere bacho ko and meri nandini ko bacha lo...nandini to apko bahut manti hai na...mai toot jaunga...nandini wo kaise rah payegi...
he cried and prayed for the safety..

inside ICU
doctor started the operation...
ultrasound showed that one baby head was above and one was down..

but when the babies were out their breathe was working...doctor asked nurse to keep babies under observations..
and nandini survived the pain too

and yes miracle happens..it was like Aiyappa listened to manik and blessed them with babies..

doctor came out happily and nandini got shifted to private room..

manik-nandini kaisi h

doctor- congratulations nandini and babies both r fine..and babies r under observation..don't worry..

manik- my babies..and nandini kaha h..

doctor- yes your babies god blessed u with a boy and girl..
and nandini she has been shifted to private wardu can meet them she will get back her consiousness in some hours..nothing to worry...

Manik moved inside to see nandini sleeping peacefully...

He moved near nandini and kissed her forhead and admire her...she gave him the best gift
nurse came and said that he can see their babies in another room ...

manik went with nurse and his eyes got teary ..a happy tears to see babies..his own babies...
covered in white sheet

(imagine them under observation)

He tried to capture them in eyes as much as he can...

Nurse gave baby girl to Manik saying doctor first took out a girl so she is elder than her brother..

manik kissed her softly pouring all his love to her princess..

nurse then placed baby girl to swing and then gave baby boy to manik...
then to manik kissed his son too with the love he has for him..

manik went out to share this happiness to nandini when a man behind him smirked seeing him leaving..

Man POV

So what that I wasn't able to ruin your married life earlier but now I can ruin your parent life this time...feeling proud manik for having a girl..but what if today u saw her for the last time..he laughed evily and moved inside..

Manik Happily moved to nandini's room to share how beautiful her daughter is and how handsome is his son...to mother of his babies..

manik entered to see nandini already looking and asking to him for manik and babies..

manik came and firstly hugged nandini and kiised her forhead thanking her to gave the best day of his life..

manik-thank you so much jann..u know they r so cute ...and at the same time so delicate...
let's go ..we will meet them toghter..
neyonika-manik beta she can't go right now

manik-she don't have to walk I will take her with me..

He picked nandini up and moved out so that she can see the heart of their life..

the man entered inside to see two babies ...
he saw one swing and their was written Child Of Mr.and Mrs.Malhotra he picked up the child without seeing another swing..
he hide baby inside his clothes and runs away from there..hiding...

outside hospital

Hahhahahah Manik Malhotra finally u will be defeated by Harshad Saxena..

Manik with nandinj came to see their babies nandini eyes fall on the swing which was empty ..

manik put her on floor and checked ..
maybe doctor have taken them from checkup..
she moved to another swing and saw her another baby..

nandini-but manik see our son is their..meri beti kaha hai...
manik-what. ...

nandini started crying and manik rushed to doctors..

doctors-nurse nurse..he too shouted..
nurse-jee doctor
doctor-baby kaha h
nurse- we don't know doctor

manik-how irresponsible this hospital is...he shouted at him..

nandini-manik mujhe meri beti chahiye..she said holding his collar and crying..

raj called commisoner and asked them to find his grand daughter...

manik was consoling nandini ... she was holding her son tightly to herself and crying more and more..

his patience level was crossing his limits..
but its reaches to its height when he received a unknown call

manik-hello
man-manik tch tch ...u lost this time
manik-harshad...how dare u how dare u to call me
harshad-toh kisko call krte..Teri beti mere pas hai..
manik-whatt ..harshad I will dig your grave
harshad-awaz neeche manik.... don't forget your baby is with me

nandini snatched the phone

nandini-harshad pls meri beti dedo mujhe.. please meri beti ne kya bigada hai.. please I beg u

harshad-ok then u have to come where i will tell u but without manikin and POLICE 

nandini-i will come..but pls don't do anything to my daughter

harshad cuts the call and laughed evily..

manik-uh r not going anywhere
nandini-manik humari beti wah h..so rori hogi ..pata nahi kaisi hogi..no no I will go..I have to go

manik- nandini hosh me aao...harshad kuch bhi krskta hai...

nandini-manik mai hu na mai sab sambhal lungi..

they were talking when Ria and Rishabh entered with lots of balloons..

nandini started crying more to see them but three were shocked..
but more than shocked they were angry..

manik-what r u doing here

nandini-bhai ..Bhai..
manik looked at nandini ...WHAT BHAI..ye bhai...

rishabh-manik listen ye khushi ka time h and ye baat humlog baad me krskte h

nandini- Bhai meri happiness wo harshad legya

rishabh-what harshad but so toh jail me tha

nandini-bhai wo mere bachi ko legya mujhe Janna h uske pas

rishabh-nandu tu pagal h tu kahi nahi jaari...

manik-ye hokya raha..nandini tm rishabh what's happening..

ria told him then everything..how he came back and how he proved himself and asked for forgiveness..

manik looked at nandini with shame in his eyes..she broked his trust ... he went away and nandini looked down..but she asked rishabh to take her to harshad place..

manik was broken but this matter can be solved afterwards..right now his priority was to safe his daughter from the devil...

he called police and informed..they assured him to come to the place and they will be their capturing whole place...

rishabh-nandu tu sach me jyegi
nandini-ha Bhai..
they left to the place where he called them..

and manik too left with police force ...

harshad was waiting with his men ..and baby was with his men..

they saw manik coming with police..
harshad-ye tune sahi nahi kia manik...
listen take this baby with yourself ...and hide yourself..
man-ok sir..

harshad went out and smiled evily...

harshad- u did a mistake manik...

manik-mai akele aaya hu..

harshad-but Maine nandini ko bulaya tha..wo bhi without police...
with that he took about his gun and aimed at manik..and police too came in front..

manik-no no u r not going to shoot...

Nandini and rishabh reached after manik....nandini was shocked that manik came with police..she was standing their with shock but rishabh saw a man leaving with crying baby..he left leaving nandini and followed the man..

Nandini saw harshad aiming gun to manik...she runs to manik and stands in front of him..

nandini-no no don't shoot..harshad give my baby back to me

harshad-uh won't be getting her back..
with that he fires gun aiming manik...but to his back luck his aim got distracted..and police man shoots harshad and he died at the moment..

nandini-ye kya kia...maar dia...meri bachi...
manik-sambhalo khud ko nandini...

nandini-dur hato mujhse.. meri bachi dhundo..

police searched baby all over the place..but their was no clue..
one police constable shouted that their r blood strains..and that was fresh..

nandini-nahi nahi aisa nahi hoskta...

manik-meri bachi zinda hai..ye nahi hoksta.

police- lekin

manik- dhundo..

nandini walked back aimlessly on roads..when manik came back to her place..

he moved to find her and saw nandini moving aimlessly..

manik-nandini listen..he hold her but she pushed him

nandini-dont touch me u killed my baby...

manik-i killed her..r u mad..

nandini-tm police nahi late toh meri bachi mere pass hoti

manik-wo meri bhi bachi h

nandini-hai nahi thi...u killed her manik...u killed her...

manik grabbed her hand and in anger moved back with her to home..

Neyonika, Raj and Ria was in Malhotra Mension ...baby boy was with neyonika ...

manik came to house dragging a crying nandini..

and slapped her ...

Nandini  too slapped back to manik....as her baby to whom she carried for nine months was no more and here manik was showing his anger..when the majority mistake was his..

manik-how dare u

nandini-and how darre u to slap me...it was all your mistake manik...all yours..because of u my baby is not with me...
manik- toh tm kya chahti thi...mai tmko akela jane deta....so that wo harshad tmko and humari beti ko maar deta..

nandini-mujhe nahi pata ..maine toh usko dekha tak nahi....
manik was about to say when baby started crying...

nandini rushed to him and took him in her arms and kissed him...

baby recognizing his mother warmth stopped crying..
nandini-mera bacha..mai mai tmko kuch nahi hone dungi...
with that she started moving out with baby boy in his hand..when manik stops her..

manik-where r u going..

nandini-i am going taking my baby with myself.

manik-whatt

nandini-yes...

manik snatched baby back to him..

manik-he's my baby too

nandini-nahi..ye Mera bacha h..ek KO toh tumne maar dia...ab dusra nahi....

manik-aur mai tmhe apna bacha nahi lejane dunga..waah jah rishabh rehta h...
neyonika- he kya krre hotmlog...bacho aaram se baith kr baat kro...
nandini-mom ab kuch nahi bacha...
nandini-manik mujhe mera bacha do

manik-get out..just get out
..with that manik again dragged her out..family members tried stopping him...but he closed the door at her face.....

nandini banged the door ..but manik didn't heard her nor gave her his son..

ria asked nandini to move back as she was breathing heavily due to excess crying and shouting....and they can solve this tommorw..her heath was inportant ..

Nandini-manik listen I hate you..you killed my baby ...I won't forgive u ever....I hate you ...

manik opened the door...and said I hate you too nandini for breaking my trust and then blaming me for this...

Nandini tried to touch her son but manik moved back closing the door back..

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Ok...please don't hate me for this...
Don't worry it will be going to be alright soon...
just wait OK...

So,a big congratulations to All of us for half century...
I am so so happy...
just can't tell u ppl how close this story is to me..and slowly slowly the love increased..from the day I have started writing...
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

And here's the new poster

hope u gonna like it..

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Now important notice..

I have a wedding at my home in February and my Semesters in March...so for studies I have only two months left...
so I am thinking to keep my story on hold ..but a small promise that if in break I writes than I may can update but chances r less...

I hope I won't be loosing uh all as a readers....
And I hope I won't be getting negatives comments..coz I love manan too specially here coz this story is close to my heart...
I will bring them back toghter...
just wait for my exams to get over...
and I promise that you ppl will enjoy...

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love u all💋

#KirtiMakhija❤

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