Ok, just want to make sure everyone know this. This story was written poorly when I was 12 years old, and you know how they are. With me especially, I was terrible in terms of grammar and story telling etc.
I have edited chapter 1 to 6, but as for the rest. Too lazy I guess? I might when I am motivated.
My point is, I am sorry it is poorly written and most likely will not continue on.
Thank you for your time and if you do not mind this, it would be a pleasure if you would read this book ^-^