So, after attempting to write new stories, I have come to the conclusion of editing this one. This story has obviously had the most views, and for that, I want to thank all of you for reading, commenting, and liking. I worked hard on this, and I was proud of it.
Now, I'm curious as to what everybody really thinks about this story, and how I should edit this. Should I not involve so many characters or make the characters more descriptive? Should there be more romance or drama or a better crime?
Please, share your feedback, and be on the look out for a "new" story!