Manan Pyar Ho Jaye Ga

By SweetInara23

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It's a manan story where two strangers eventually fall in love and get married after lot of twists and turns... More

Character sketches
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Apologies
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
New Cover And 50 K
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Characters and New Cover
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Epilogue

Chapter 27

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By SweetInara23

In one of the room of Murthy Mansion

Fab5 were sitting in row on bed in order like Alya, Mukti,Manik, Cabir, Dhruv.

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Mukti was crying badly her face was red because of constant crying and tension. Manik and Alya were consoling her but they weren't able understand why was the strong tomboy girl of their group was crying like this and Manik was way too much worried as Mukti was crying and Cabir was sitting numb & silent , Dhruv was trying to talk to him but he was sitting like an expressionless statue and he didn't know the reason behind it.

Nyonika and Sameer were sitting in front of them on couch with serious expressions.

When they saw a little pearl drop rolling from Cabir 's eye they stood up and went near them, as they thought it was right time to start their talk.

Sameer : Mukti I will ask you a straight forward question and you will give me genuine answer ? Will you ?

Mukti who was crying in Manik's arms was not in state of talking nodded her head little as she sensed coldness in her father's voice which he never used while talking to her.

Even Manik was worried and hurt because of his parents' such behavior,they could never stand for a tear in Mukti's eyes were looking unaffected by her hysterically crying.

But he chose to stay quiet because Mukti nodded in yes as an answer to his father's question.

Sameer : Mukti Do you love Abhimanyu Murthy ?

Fab5 looked too much shocked with this question. Manik ,Alya and Dhruv in surprised shock as they never had any idea like this in their minds, where Mukti was in fearful shock as she thought that her parents will curse her,scold her, she never in her life felt so afraid of her parents. She lowered her gaze due to fear.

Cabir who was till now looking down looked up towards Mr and Mrs Malhotra with unknown expressions.

Sameer : Cabir my boy don't give that stare and miss Mukti Malhotra I'm asking you again do you love Abhimanyu Murthy ? Yes or No ?

Now Mukti was sure that her parents will never let her and Abhi come together and she will loose Abhi. That thought made her shiver, Manik sensed her tension and thought that the answer is NO and his parents are having some misunderstanding and tried to talk to Sameer.

But Sameer showed him his palm to tell him to be quite and again asked Mukti the same question.

Cabir slightly pressed Mukti's shoulder from back by leaning over Manik's back. Mukti looked at Cabir and he gave her an assuring nod.

Getting a little confidence Mukti in very low voice which was almost a whisper said : Yes Dad I love Abhi.

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Well now using word 'shock' to tell position of of Alya , Dhruv and especially MANIK was an underestimate, when they came to know that Mukti was in love with Abhimanyu.

Well before any of the three could react Nyonika spoke with same cold tone as Sameer : Cabir it's your turn give an honest answer, Do you love Navya ?

This time their attention went towards Cabir they looked at him like stupids as they were still under the shock of Mukti's confession.

Cabir was bewildered by the question. He sat silent for few minutes looking downward then in the same position he nodded his head in yes,whilst whispering the same in almost inaudible volume.

There was complete silence in the room for few seconds everyone was absorbing or we can say trying to absorb the newly revealed information.

At the same time The room of the door was closed in which all these were sitting and an old servant was passing by the same room, he suddenly fell on the floor with thud because he heard loud, well very very loud sound of shouting,cursing and breaking of things from inside the room. Poor man ran away from there listening to such ghostly sounds.😂😂

Manik ,Alya and Dhruv were in chasing, shouting and cursing Mukti and Cabir who were now running for there life as these three were following them to beat the shit out of them.

Sameer and Nyonika were smiling looking at their fight. But soon decided to interfere as they had many more important things to talk.

Sameer rescued Cabir and Nyonika rescued Mukti who were lying on bed and other three were beating them with pillows.

Manik furiously : Mom, Dad leave them how could they hide such big thing from us.

Alya : Mukti, Cabir how could you. We have promised right Fab5 don't keep secrets. Still you hid such big thing for us.

Dhruv : We are Fab5 guys 'one for all and all for one' only secrets can break us you know it right ? Still you hid it from us ?

Manik in hurt tone : Mukti were you after of me. Have I ever said no to you for anything ever ? And Cabir you are my best buddy I knew that you liked Navya but you started loving her and I didn't know. Wow my best buddy and my own sister are keeping their relationships secrets from me ? From us ? ( pointing towards himself ,Alya and Dhruv)

Alya, Dhruv and Manik looked away from both of them.

Sameer and Nyonika : They hid it from us as well.

All looked at them with confused expression.

Nyonika : Calm down guys they hid it from us because they themselves don't know about it. That means k Cabir doesn't know whether Navya loves him back or not and same with Mukti and Abhi. They haven't confessed their feelings to each other.

And you both idiots Mukti and Cabir you guys hid your feelings from your friends and he took advantage of your weakness kids.

Fab5 : Who ?

Nyonika : Mr Murthy

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Cabir : What ? Where did he come in this discussion Nyo Aunty ?

Mukti : Chuck that Mom how you came to know that I love Abhi and Cabir loves Navya? Who told you ?

Nyonika : Well When Mr Murthy and Mr Singhania started forcing Abhi and Navya for marriage and They both protested I thought I should stop them as both the kids were unhappy with this marriage. So when Soha , Mr and Mrs Murthy went To talk in private I followed them and heard their full conversation.

Manik furiously interrupted : wow mom it's good you realised that they were forcing Abhi and Navya for marriage but what about my and Soha's marriage aren't you forcing me into it. Didn't you feel pity on Nandini when she was crying to stop her marriage with Harshad.

Nyonika lowered her gaze her eyes filled with tears and she in chocked tone said : I know I was wrong, and I'm extremely sorry for that, please forgive me beta for doubting you,for not trusting you,for accusing you.

Manik immediately cupped her face only to see her shedding tears of guilt.

Manik : Mom no, please no Mom don't cry mom. I know those jerks manipulated you it's not you fault mom. Calm down na Mumma.

He lovingly caressed her back and sweetly consoled her to which she smiled a bit kissed Manik's forehead and hugged him again tight. Fab4 and sameer joined the family hug.

After a while they broke the hug.

Nyonika : Still I'm at fault beta i should have trusted my own blood and not them.

Manik sighed and changed the topic : Chuck that mom and tell me what did hear in from their conversation ?

Nyonika narrated the whole conversation to them.

Sameer : Well Manik you are safe from an character less woman saying so he hesitantly showed a pic of Soha with a boy in very compromising position.

All looked horrified seeing the pic.

Sameer : As soon as Nyonika narrated all this to me I asked My Private Detective to do search on Soha and I got this in few minutes I wish I had done this before your engagement with that woman.

Manik was now at peace as his parents,his biggest strength was with him.

Cabir : Now what to do guys ?

Manik : First thing to do is find out whether Abhi and Navya love you both or not as it is Mr Murthy's plan's base right, we will break it and secondly he said Dhruv and Alya are not dangerous then guys let's show them how dangerous each member of Fab 5 is.

Fab4 : Yes

Just then Manik remembered something & called someone and gave an evil smirk.

Nyonika : Whom did you call this late ?

Manik : Nothing mom just was giving instructions to my men to arrange a SPECIAL GIFT for Harshad. As tomorrow is his marriage with Nandini.

All understood its meaning and smiled hooted for him.

Manik : Guys we have very less time so Alya and Dhruv you guys go and search what's behind the 'secret room' as evils are partying now so it will be very easy task.

They both nodded in yes

Manik : Cabir go straight to Singhania Mansion and confront with Navya and confess your feelings to her.

Cabir with horrified look : What ? No no no. How can I ?

All gave him a stern look.

Dhruv : Cabir if at this point you didn't confess to Navya na then you will lose her for forever, Do you want that ?

Cabir instantly nodded in a big No

Sameer : Go my boy make me proud. Be a man and win your lady love.

All started cheering him and finally feeling confidant he agreed.

Cabir : but what if she says no ?

Alya : then why do you think she was crying so much Cabir? There was pain of losing someone in her eyes. It's just that you both didn't get to spend enough time with each other that's why you are unsure about each other's feelings. But I'm damn sure she will say yes.

Nyonika : Cabir stop predicting and go fast.

Cabir hugged all and ran out of towards Singhania Mansion.
While Alya and Dhruv moved out carefully to go in search of the mystery room. Now only Malhotras were remained in the room.

Manik turned towards Mukti : What to do with you now ? Hmm?

Mukti nervously looked down.

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So are you all happy now ? Bazi palat gayi. I have noticed that response is going down with each update. Please tell me what went wrong, I would appreciate if you point out what's wrong and if you are getting bored with the slow track then tell me Do you guys want me to wrap up the story fast then please tell me I'll wrap it up in few updates. I'm waiting for your response feel free to say what's in YOUR HEART.

Till then take care 😘

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