Tris Pedrad Dauntless Born

By jojo9635

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Tris was born in Dauntless and along with her twin Uriah and her big brother Zeke they mess up the daunless c... More

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chaper 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Authors note
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 69
Chapter 68
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Sequel (1)
Sequel (2)
Sequel (3)
Authors note: New Fanfics!

Chapter 24

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By jojo9635

The next morning i wake up with tobias's arms still around me. I try to wiggle out of his grip without waking him up but fail. He stirrs and then wakes up. "Morning Trissy." "Morning Toby." "Toby?" "Trissy?" We both laugh.
Tobias POV:
We laugh then suddenly tris gets pale. "What is it Tris?" "My brothers! I told the girls i would be back for the night, what if they told the boys i'm gone and now they are searching and and..." she babbels but i interrupt her: "if they would search you they would have been here already." She nods "that's true. But i still have to go now." "How long do we have to keep our relationship a secret?" I ask. I want to hold her hand and kiss her in public... "till the end of initiation. I'm sorry but if everyone would know they maybe would think my score was because of you." "But we can tell your brothers." I ask and she hestitates. "Well we could but..." she trails off "but what?" I ask getting annoyed. "no need to get agressive. I just thought that they would probably get angry and maybe it would ruin your friendship with Zeke..." "That's what you're worried about?" I ask she nods. "Oh trissy if he is angry because i'm together with you i can handle that, believe me." "Ok." She says but doesn't seem convinced. "Bye tris love you." I say and give her a quick kiss. "Love you too." She says and then adds "come to my apartment after the rankings are announced, then we are going to tell my brothers." "Sure. See you then." "yeah bye." Then she leaves.
Tris POV:
I walk back to Mar's apartment quickly and knock. Chris opens and pulls me inside. "Oh my god Tris you stayed over night... what happend?" "Nothing it was just late so i decided to stay there and nothing happend. Where are Mar and Lynn?" I say. "Here!" They scream out of the bathroom. "Hey girls and did my brothers show up?" I ask all of them. "Yeah they came here once to say good-night and asked wjere you were and we rold them you were on the toilet." "Thanks." "Ok but now you have to tell us what you did whit him." Mar says while walking out of the bathroom. "Well we met at the chasm and then went to a secret spot and just talked there." I lie "And did you kiss?" "Yeah. When we were back at his apartment but i stopped him before anymore could happen." "And did he was annoyed?" "No, not at all. He said he would understand it." They smile. "Whatever lets get some breakfast plus the rankings will be announced soon." They nod and we walk to the cafeteria. There i get me some food and then sit at our table. I'm greeted by Zeke and uri: "hey trissy!" "Hey boys." "And how was your girlsnight?" Uri asks and i say: "great thanks." Tobias trys to supress a smile and i kick him under the table.
At exactly 12am max and eric step on the podium. "Good morning everyone. We are here to show you the rankings for stage one. Initiates, if your name isn't on this board you are asked to leave the dauntless compund as quickly as possible. But i know the rankings i what everyone is waiting for..." then eric pushes a button and the rankings appear:
1. Uriah
2. Edward
3. Tris
4. Peter
5. Will
6. Marie (random dauntless born)
7. Christina
8. Lynn
9. Marlene
10. Claire
11. Tom
12. Molly
13. Al
I sigh out of relief.  All my friends are staying. We do an enormous group hug and then zeke, uri and i say "that means candor or dauntless!" At the same time and we head off in a laughing pulp.

Candor or Dauntless next chapter.
What will happen when Uriah and Zeke find out that Four and Tris are together?
Hope you liked it

Jojo

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