Tris Pedrad Dauntless Born

By jojo9635

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Tris was born in Dauntless and along with her twin Uriah and her big brother Zeke they mess up the daunless c... More

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chaper 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Authors note
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 69
Chapter 68
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Sequel (1)
Sequel (2)
Sequel (3)
Authors note: New Fanfics!

Chapter 3

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By jojo9635

The Choosing ceremony starts with a girl named Sabrina Adams from amity. She hops in the middle and takes the knife with a smile. I roll my eyes I don't have to look to know what she chooses. And sure enough a few moments later Marcus announces: Amity. The girl walk-hops back to her family which is smiling like crazy. Doesn't it hurt to smile so much? Whatever. I pretty much zoon out and nearly fall asleep till I hear Marcus shout: "Ezekiel Pedrad!" Zeke walks confidently in the middle and takes the knife to cut his palm. He doesn't hesitate a second and holds his hand over the dauntless bowl. When the zicceling of the cowls comes I begin to chear along with the other Dauntless. I jump out of my seat and run to Zeke to tackle him with a hug in the middle of the room. We get a few: awwwws and get a rooms but I don't care. My big brother Zekey-weckey stayed! I walk with him to sit down again and zoon out again. Finally the last one Adrian Zayn from Eruidte transfers to dauntless and we are free to go. Imediatly all the dauntless born jump out of their seats and run to the exit. The transfers staying behind confused. Well welcome in Dauntless pansycakes! I'm one of the first to climb up the railings of the brigde. After a couple of minutes everyone is up and you can the hear the louder getting noise of the coming train. I start to jog alongside the tracks and pull myself in the train easily. After all i'm doing it since i'm 5 and i am very good. After some more people jumped in i walk to the open door and look outside. I can see an abnegaition boy running and trying to grap the handle. Sighing i reach out for him and he greatfully takes my hand i pull him in and he lands on top of me. Two seconds later Zeke, Uri and Jon run over and push him down. I stand up quickly and say: "It's fine boys. I'm good." They nod and I look over to the stiff. I decide to be nice and walk over to him. "What's your name?" "You can call me stiff, for now." I raise my eyebrows but just say: "Alright, hey stiff. I'm Tris and the boys who shoved you so rudely are my brothers Zeke and uri," i point them "and my boyfriend Jon." "Ok, its always good to know the people that hate you." He looks at the floor. I push his shoulder a little bit and say: "they don't hate you! They are just very overprotective." He smiles and I say: "Wow stiffs can smile. Just kidding, now come, i'll introduce you to my friends." I pull him with him and walk to Mar, shauna and lynn. "Hey girls. This is stiff. He doesn't want to say his name. Stiff, these are Marlene, Lynn and Shauna" They nod and say: "hey stiff." "Why did you transfer?" Shauna asks. "Just didn't fit in there." He answers. She nods and i say: "allright i guess you want to meet some male dauntless members? Good!" I pull him with me andwalk to uri, zeke and Jon. "Guys, this is stiff. He doesn't want to say his real name." They nod. "Hey I'm Zeke." Says introducing himself. "I'm Uriah or Uri your choice." "And I'm Johnny or Jon." They say. They start to talk and I slowly walk backwards in the direction of the girls.

Ok this was Chapter 3 i hope you liked it.

Jojo

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