When The Sun Goes Down - A Mi...

By ObsceneIrrationality

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----- In serious need of revision! ----- Wanna-be journalist Kate Santoro would do anything for the scoop. A... More

About
One
Two
Three
Four
Five
Six
Seven
Eight
Nine
Ten
Eleven
Twelve
Chapter Thirteen
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty-One
Chapter Twenty-Two
Chapter Twenty-Three
Chapter Twenty-Four
Chapter Twenty-Five
Chapter Twenty-Six
Authors note!
Chapter Twenty-Seven
Chapter Twenty-Eight
Chapter Twenty-Nine
Chapter Thirty
Chapter Thirty-One
Chapter Thirty-Two
Chapter Thirty-Three
Chapter Thirty-Four
Chapter Thirty-Five
Chapter Thirty-Six
Chapter Thirty-Seven
Chapter Thirty-Eight
Chapter Thirty-Nine
Chapter Forty
Chapter Forty-One
Chapter Forty-Two
Chapter Forty-Three
Chapter Forty-Four
Bonus Chapter
Chapter Forty-Five
Chapter Fourty-Six
Chapter Forty-Seven
Chapter Forty-Eight
Chapter Forty-Nine
Chapter Fifty
Chapter Fifty-One
Chapter Fifty-Two
Chapter Fifty-Three
Chapter Fifty-Four
Chapter Fifty-Five
BONUS CHAPTER
Chapter Fifty-Six
THE END

A/N

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By ObsceneIrrationality

I apologize if anyone thought this would be an update but I wanted to again remind everyone that I am writing a bonus chapter.

I just sat down to write it and there was really no clear winner on which chapter you guys wanted rewritten. So I'm posting again to give you as the readers the opportunity to decide rather than me deciding which of the given I like the most lol.

So here are the chapters that were requested through comments and private messages. A few of them have been requested by two people but none have gotten more than two requests and I would like to go with whichever is most popular)

The chapter in the hotel room where Kate is drunk and tries to have her way with Alessio (chapter 17)

The chapter in which they are to take a shower together and Kate accuses Alessio of being gay (chapter 40/41)

The chapter in which his mother comes home to find them mid-spank (chapter 51)

The chapter in which drunk Kate tries to take charge and accidentally professes her love (chapter 54)

And lastly, but certainly not least

The chapter in which they try to do the deed and are interrupted (chapter 55)


So, please comment or send me a private message letting me know which of these chapters you would most like to see rewritten and whichever gets the most requests will get rewritten hopefully by Saturday (a day or two to vote, a day or two to write)


If you'd like to see TWO of these chapters rewritten head over to my new book titled "when darkness calls" and vote. If the preview or chapter one gets twenty votes I will do another rewrite. And hell, if both get twenty votes I'll rewrite three chapters. 

So please do comment and vote letting me know which you'd most like to see rewritten, and vote on the new book if you'd like multiple rewrites.

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