So, here are the results of the 'Best Male Protagonist' category. Congratulations to those who win, and congratulations to those too who participated. I hope nobody gets demotivated. These types of opportunities help us to improve more.
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JUDGE : NivethaBaranikumar
“Reviews”
Book : Love at Dawn
By : LiebeKlara
Total : (48/50)
Character development: (10/10)
Andre's character development unfolds seamlessly throughout the chapters, showcasing a journey from enigmatic artist to a young man deeply in love with Edith. His evolution into a mentor, guiding Edith in literacy, highlights his depth and growth. However, his return to being the elusive artist, leaving the town without a word, adds layers of complexity, making his character development truly captivating.
Impact on readers: (9/10)
The book's pacing is impeccable, drawing readers into the pure and enchanting interactions between Andre and Edith. Andre's allure and charisma will undoubtedly resonate with readers, leaving them eager to delve deeper into the story.
Realistic elements: (10/10)
Set within a realistic environment, the characters' portrayals ring true to life. From the small-town setting to the nuanced interactions between characters, the story maintains a sense of authenticity that grounds the narrative.
Emotions portrayal: (9/10)
Primarily told from Edith's perspective, the emotional portrayal of Andre may have been slightly overshadowed. However, the depth of emotion conveyed through Edith's experiences with Andre still resonates deeply, drawing readers into their bond.
Overall impression: (10/10)
Love at Dawn is a captivating read that leaves a lasting impression. Andre's character is masterfully depicted as a spirited young man with a tender heart, making the journey through the book both compelling and enriching. Readers will be left longing to uncover more about Andre's complexities and the intricacies of his relationship with Edith.
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Title : Total Eclipse of the Heart
By : strawberry1d
Total: (38/50)
Character Development: (8/10)
The portrayal of Yoongi's character at the beginning was compelling, capturing his initial demeanor and then gradually revealing his softer, more joyful side as he interacted with Joy. While his transformation showcases his love for her, a slower development could enhance the believability of his emotional journey, making it more captivating for readers.
Impact on Readers: (7/10)
While the story appeals to readers who enjoy teen romance, adding new elements or delving deeper into the characters' emotions could heighten its impact. Starting with a more thrilling or emotionally charged scene could hook readers from the beginning, keeping them engaged throughout the narrative.
Realistic Elements: (9/10)
The story's realism shines through its genuine portrayal of emotions and relationships. This authenticity adds depth to the characters and their interactions, making the narrative relatable and immersive for readers.
Emotions Portrayal: (7/10)
Initially, Yoongi's emotions were effectively depicted, drawing readers into his internal struggles and desires. However, minimizing unnecessary smirks and ensuring that emotions align with the character's personality throughout the story would enhance consistency and deepen emotional resonance.
Overall Impression: (7/10)
Overall, "Total Eclipse of the Heart" offers an engaging read for fans of teen romance. Yoongi's character is particularly well-crafted, with his evolution and endearing gestures adding charm to the narrative. Providing further insight into why he chose the nickname "Min.Y" or his desire for a special name from Y/N could enrich his character arc and strengthen the story's depth. Nonetheless, the story remains a delightful exploration of love and relationships, sure to captivate its audience.
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Book : Parth Probodhika: prestine hues of his peace
By : dwarkaratna
Total : (42/50)
Character development: (8/10)
Arjun in this excerpt is depicted as thoughtful, sincere, and deeply affectionate towards Subhadra. He prioritizes emotional connection over material possessions, as shown by his decision to gift memories instead of material items. His proposal for post-marital courtship reflects his commitment to nurturing their relationship. Arjun's character development showcases his transition from a disguised sage to a loving husband, emphasizing his growth and deepening connection with Subhadra. Overall, Arjun embodies qualities of compassion, empathy, and unwavering devotion .
Impact on readers : (9/10)
Arjun's character resonates with readers through his sincerity, commitment to Subhadra, and thoughtful gestures. Arjun's role as Subhadra's confidant and supporter adds depth to his character, leaving a lasting impression on readers who appreciate his genuine love and unwavering devotion.
Realistic elements : (10/10)
Arjun's character is depicted realistically with traits such as sincerity, vulnerability, and humility. His actions and responses reflect a genuine understanding of human emotions and relationships, adding depth and authenticity to the story.His playful complaint about not receiving acknowledgment for his actions adds a relatable element of teasing and banter to their interaction.Arjun's response to Subhadra's hesitation regarding post-marital courtship also demonstrates his realistic understanding of their relationship dynamics.
Emotions portrayal : ( 7/10)
In brief, Arjun's emotional portrayal depicts his vulnerability, affection, and understanding towards Subhadra. He expresses his love through heartfelt gestures and eagerly awaits her response . Despite initial disappointment, Arjun maintains his affectionate demeanor, showcasing his sincerity and commitment to their relationship.Portraying Arjun's emotions from his point of view would have provided deeper insight into his thoughts, feelings, and motivations.By experiencing the situation through Arjun's eyes, readers would have gained a more intimate understanding of his emotional journey and his connection to Subhadra.
Overall impression: (8/10)
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rjun's character leaves a strong impression as a sincere, caring, and emotionally nuanced individual.While the writing skill in portraying Arjun's character and emotions was commendable, the choice to focus on an ancient novel could have been utilized more effectively. While the themes and characters from ancient literature offer rich material for exploration, there's an opportunity to delve deeper into the complexities of the narrative and character development. By further enhancing the storytelling and character depth, the impact of the narrative could be heightened, creating a more compelling and immersive reading experience.
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Book : Meet Me at Midnight
By : SSears90
Total : ( 46/50)
Character development: (10/10)
Jungkook's character development in the story showcases a quick split personality, transitioning from vulnerability and fear to intense aggression and rage as he grapples with his newfound abilities and the trauma of his experiences. This rapid evolution adds depth to his character and heightens the tension of the narrative.
Impact on readers : (9/10)
Jungkook's character in the story has a profound impact on readers, but the narrative may not fully capture the depth of his emotional turmoil and panic.The rapid pace of the story, coupled with the emphasis on Jungkook's actions and physical struggles, may overshadow the nuances of his emotional turmoil.To enhance the portrayal of Jungkook's emotional journey and the tension he feels, the narrative could benefit from more introspective moments that allow readers to glimpse into his psyche.
Realistic elements : (9/10)
Jungkook's character exhibits realistic elements such as vulnerability, resilience, and moral conflict, making him relatable to readers despite the supernatural context of the story.Enhancing the description of Jungkook's actions and emotions during the scene where he kills people could indeed add depth and a different dynamic to the narrative. By providing vivid details or delving deeper into Jungkook's internal struggle and the psychological impact of his actions, the scene could evoke a stronger emotional response from readers . This approach would enrich the storytelling by immersing readers in Jungkook's experiences and shedding light on the moral and ethical dilemmas he faces.
Emotions portrayal : (9/10)
Jungkook's emotional portrayal in the story is impactful but could benefit from deeper exploration. While readers empathize with his fear and desperation, the narrative primarily focuses on external events, overshadowing his internal struggles. To enhance his emotional portrayal, the story could delve deeper into Jungkook's psyche, allowing readers to connect more deeply with his experiences and emotions. This would create a more immersive reading experience and highlight the complexity of his character.
Overall impression: (9/10)
Jungkook's character leaves a strong impression due to his resilience, internal conflict, and evolution throughout the story. Despite facing immense challenges, he demonstrates courage and determination in the face of adversity. His struggle to reconcile his moral compass with his primal instincts adds depth to his character, making him relatable and compelling to readers.
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Title : "The First Draft"
By : ineedsomesleeptoday
Total : (40/50)
Character Development: (8/10)
Spencer's character is intricately woven with layers of past deeds and the weight of depression, creating a multidimensional portrayal that resonates with readers. To enhance this, delve deeper into Spencer's internal struggles, providing more nuanced emotions that allow readers to empathize with his journey. Highlighting moments like his gratitude for Eleanor's kindness adds depth to his character, showcasing vulnerability amidst his inner turmoil.
Impact on Readers: (8/10)
The story's multifaceted plotlines captivate readers, ensuring their engagement throughout. Strengthening the writing style can deepen the connection between readers and characters, fostering a greater sense of empathy and investment in the narrative. By refining the writing to be more immersive, readers can more readily relate to Spencer's experiences, enhancing the emotional impact of the story.
Realistic Elements: (10/10)
The setting of the story is authentically portrayed, grounding the narrative in a believable space where elements and plots unfold realistically. This authenticity contributes to the overall immersion of the readers in the story, allowing them to fully immerse themselves in the world you've created.
Emotions Portrayal: (6/10)
While Spencer's emotions are effectively conveyed, there is room for improvement in the narrative approach to enhance emotional resonance. By incorporating more descriptive language and exploring Spencer's emotional landscape with greater depth, readers can more fully experience the highs and lows of his journey. Engaging all the senses and utilizing vivid imagery can evoke a stronger emotional response from readers, further enriching their connection to the story.
Overall Impression: (8/10)
"The First Draft" is a captivating tale that seamlessly merges disparate plotlines into a cohesive narrative. Readers will appreciate the intricate character development and realistic elements that anchor the story. Strengthening the writing style to enhance emotional portrayal will elevate the reader's experience, allowing them to fully immerse themselves in Spencer's journey of self-discovery and redemption. With continued refinement, this book holds the potential to deeply resonate with a wide audience.
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“Results”
➷ First Position
LiebeKlara for “Love at Dawn”
➷ Second Position
SSears90 for “Meet me at Midnight”
(Note : Originally, the mini categories only had two winners, but I announced three winners of those mini categories which had more contestants, such as Best Cover)
➷ Rewards will be distributed soon.
➷ Heartiest congratulations to everyone. If you want the certificate and sticker by Pinterest (in case, you use a laptop), then dm me... ♥