Hello,author here, so I realized something... the trick to good writing basically you just have to over exaggerate what your describing, imma use boboiboy for example
No over exaggeration
I walked to see a boy looking to be a teenager, he wore a dino cap with an orange jacket and black undershirt
Over exaggeration
I walked over the halls till I turned and saw a boy who looked to be only fourten years of age, he looked at me with a bright smile, and waved at me, showing his fingerless red gloves as his brown hair followed in his movement, I quickly noticed his moving arm had a watch on it, it was orange matching his orange jacket and cap, I figured the cap meant something to him as it looked far to childsih for someone his age, I watched as his dark blue jeans moved closer to me, his black undershirt moving by every step, with every step I see his cap move a little and I saw some white, I figured he had some white hair, I looked as his brown eyes were looking at me, we both looked at eachother, I kept my complexion serious as I looked at his bright and cheery smile, smiling at me with pure happiness
Hello, author here again! So you can see it right..? Anyways you just describe EVERY SINGLE PIECE OF DETAIL there is and it looks goods ig, anyways, the person was KAIZO! yup fangs olded brother! Btw the second one kinda sounds like a "boboiboy x kaizo" book to to LOL anyways BYEEEE SE YA THE NEXT CHAPTER!
date finished:4/17/24
Date published:4/17/24