ANUSEENA ~ WHISPHERED PROMISE...

By TejaswiSuryawanshi

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Ek tarfa hi sahi, pyaar toh pyaar hai... unhe ho ya na ho, hume beshumar hai... Aaye the kuch kaale saaye mu... More

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Character Sketch
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Continued...



~Shubh Vivah🌸

I woke up jerking off the blanket over my face. 

"Shweta di....utho jaldi, der ho jayegi hume taiyyar hona hain!" I panicked.

"Kya! abhi toh soye the..itni jaldi subha ho gayi" she woke up with a jerk. 

She was staying with me at my home to help me throughout the marriage.

"Haan jaldi utho...nahi toh der ho jayegi!" I stood up, snatching the blanket from her for folding it. 

She looked at me in confusion with sleepy eyes and then glanced at the alarm clock. "Haseena...!" she yelled, startling me.

"Kya hua...kyun chilla rahi ho?" I questioned shutting my ears.

"Arey pagal ladki....raat ke 2:30 baje shaadi ki taiyyari karni hain tujhe..." she chided being irritated.

I spare a glance at the alarm clock and then passed a nervous smile to her.

"Hehe! hume laga shayad paanch baj gaye honge" she continued to glare at me. "Aap so jao na!" I said while throwing blanket on her face, pushing her down and tapping her head.

"khabardar agar phir meri neend disturb ki to" she warned making me hum. I laid down covering myself.

"Aaj humari shaadi hai....yess!" I muttered blushingly and covered my face with palms.



"Ahh...kya kar rahi ho Shweta di, thik se karo na!" I scolded her as the saree pin pierced me.

"Nahi ye chunri aisi acchi nahi lag rahi...kisi aur style main pehenaiye!" I complained to the parlor artist.

"Lipstick ka shade kuch thik nahi hain...doosra shade lagaiye!" I complained.

"Kitna loose hain...beech shaadi main hairstyle se baal na nikal jaye humare, thode aur hairpins laga dijiye!" I complained.

"Yeh jooti kitni tight hain" I complained.

"Yahan se thoda kajal bahar aa gaya hai...ise thik kar dijiye!" I complained again.

"Isss...Kitne nakhre hai tere Hasi" Shweta di hissed.

"Haan toh peheli baar shaadi kar rahe hain hum!" I said, admiring myself in front of the mirror. 

"Aisi kitni shaadiyaan karni hain tujhe!" she taunted.

"Shaadi toh hum sau baar karle, lekin ek hi bande ke saath" I wicked, making her smile.

"Chalo bacchiyon ho gaya kya----

Matashree's swallowed her words as soon as she noticed me.

I was clad in a light bottle greenish and slight chocolaty tinch colored lehenga with a very delicate and fine performed design and a maroon chunri tied around my waist with waistband which was adding a royal look over me. 



she walked towards me and cupped my face. "Kisiki nazar na lage meri bacchi ko" she said, applying some of her kajal behind my ears. Her tears started falling down, she hugged me tight. My eyes welled up too.

"Itni jaldi badi ho gayi tum!" she whispered in tears.

"Hum chahe kitne bhi bade ho jaye, apke liye hum wahi Haseena rahenge...humesha" I said. she broke the hug and kissed my forehead. 

"Chalo bahot ho gaya, baki ka baad main ro lenge...nahi toh makeup kharab ho jayega tumhara" she said wiping away my tears carefully. I nodded with a smile.

I entered the venue seeking everyone's attention. They awed in astonishment. Pitashree walked towards me as soon as he noticed my presence. He didn't spoke a word, but his actions were enough for me to sense his inner turmoil. He cupped my face and kissed my forehead deeply. Hiding his emotions he passed me his ravishing smile.

"Bahot sundar lag rahi meri gudhiya!" Dadu complimented softly patting on my cheeks.

"Thank you dadu!" 

"Mahurat ka samay ho gaya hain shreeman!" Panditji said.

"Chalein?" Pitashree asked forwarding his hand. 

I was very curious till I reached the wedding venue. But this question asked by him made me feel unwanted. It was true that I was not going to be far away from my parents, but I was afraid that I might neglect them because of the new responsibilities that would come upon me after marriage. 

I took a deep breath and held Pitashree's hand. No sooner I turned towards my soon to be handsome husband, my anxieties washed away, and I was excited again. My smile grew wider. he was practicing pre rituals. He was clad in a dusky, light chocolaty sherwani with classic ivory embroidery. A sage dusky silk stole and matching safa would have never looked this pretty on anyone.



I sat next to him and stared at him madly.

{As sweet, soothing aroma of her perfume hit his nostrils, he knew she was present next to him. In no minutes, she was going to be his.

'Kya ye sahi ho raha hain? kya hum Haseena ke liye sahi hain? kya hum kabhi use waisa pyaar de payenge jiski woh hakdaar hain?.....hum nahi hain uske kabil! abhi waqt hain rok dena chahiye hume ye sab----

"Agar tumne Haseena se shaadi nahi ki...toh bhul jana tumhara koi dada hain....sare rishte tod denge hum iss ghar se aur tum se bhi....apni astihyon ko bhi chune nahi denge hum tumhe..!"

As dadu's harsh words echoed in his mind, he retreated his thoughts unwillingly.

'Hume maaf kardo Haseena!'}

"Kanya daan ke liye kanya ke mata pita aage aye" Panditji's voice brought me back to my sence.

Then after, we got up for Saptapadi. He reached out to hold my hand, I responded with a sweet smile. we took seven vows circling the holy fire and promised loyalty, commitment in our relationship and seven births of togetherness.

'Hum vada karte hain Anubhav, apka saath kabhi nahi chodenge. aapke acche, bure waqt main humesha apke saath rahenge, apki parchai bankar. humare iss naye rishte ko nazuk haathon se seechenge hum, aur isse gehera banane ke liye har ek mumkin koshish karenge.....wada hai humara...' 

'Humare iss naye rishte ko hum kya naam de, nahi jante. Hum toh ye bhi nahi jante ki kab tak tikega yeh rishta. Par jab tak yeh rishta rahega, hum vada karte hain humari iss vikalaangta ki vajah se koi taklif nahi hone denge tumhe....'

"Var, vadhu ki mang main sindoor daan kare" panditji guided.

He took a pinch of vermillion and filled it in my hairline with the help of maa. while filling, a little bit of vermilion fell on my nose giving me a ticklish sensation. I closed my eyes, absorbing the warmth of the ritual and a tear dropped my eye. 

"Abb var, vadhu ko Mangalsutra pehenaye" Panditji added further.

He tied the nuptial chain around my neck, signifying my status as a married woman. 

"Vivah Sampanna hua...!"



(skipping the scene to AnuSeena's First night)

I entered the room. It was decorated with multiple flowers, lightings and incense candles spreading the elegant aroma around. It was no less than a dream decor. The feeling was exactly opposite of my previous visit to his room.

I sat on the bed with a huff after twirling all over the room and waited for his arrival, excitedly.

After much wait, he entered the room and locked the door behind. I stood up with a wide smile. But my smile faded, as he straightly went into the bathroom after taking his Comfies without uttering a word.

"Tch...thak gaye honge woh...itni bhi kya jaldi hain tumhe Haseena, sabar karo thoda, pagal ladki" I murmured, slapping my forehead blushingly.

But half an hour past, he didn't come out. "Inhe itni der kyun lag rahi hain, andar hi so gaye kya!"

After another half hour, haze of sleep took over me, but this guy seems was not willing to come out. I went and knocked on the door calling him.

"Anubhav, sab thik hain na. Itni der kyun lag rahi hain aapko!" I questioned, and in response he opened the door. he seemed disturbed.

"Anubhav kya hua aap---

----Hum thik hain" he said, walking past me in hurry.

"Anubhav sambhal ke neeche candles hain!" I screamed, as he was about to step on the burning candles.

He stepped back and sat on the bed "Shukriya...Jao tum bhi jake fresh ho aao" He further added in a strict voice.

"Par aa..j toh Humari.....first night hain na" I said, playing with my fingers. "Maa ne aapke liye badam aur keshar wala doodh bhi bheja hain aur kaha ki----

----humse umeedein mat rakho Haseena!"  he said, cutting my excitement filled words.

"Kya!...mhatlab?" I asked in confusion.

"Dadu ne blackmail kiya tha hume tumse shaadi karne ke liye...isiliye haan kahi humne" he said, shocking me.

"kyaa...!" I exclaimed in disbelieve. "Mhatlab...aa..pne majboori main ha..an kahi?" I asked, being shattered.

"Haan..Tumse shaadi karne main koi ruchi nahi thi hume" he replied plainly. And something pierced my heart. "Isiliye kehe rahe hain koi umeed mat rakho humse...Apni patni nahi mante hum tumhe, aur na iss shaadi ko mante hain..." He said being emotionless and slept with his back facing me.

I stood there being all numb. I didn't know how to react, what to react. I felt like all my happiness was drawn out of me. He married me unwillingly! He was forced to marry me! I was so selfish in my happiness that I didn't even ask him once.... I stayed awake that night, cursing myself.

{Haseena went into the bathroom and cried a lot. She felt that the sound of her cries would awake Anubhav. but she didn't know that Anubhav's condition was no less than her....}

Flashback ends...

She snapped back to the present as her shoulder started hurting for staying in the same position since past three hours. She crawled a little further and she began to pick up the pieces of the vase which were lying broken just like her heart. Some pieces were even piercing her hand, but her mind was occupied with Anubhav harsh words that she didn't feel it. 

She walked towards her room after cleaning the mess. She sat on the bed and removed the anklets from her feet and dumped them into the side drawer. She remained lying like the corpse for rest of the afternoon.

That evening...

"Hasi...!" Maa called her out once again.

"Ji Maa..." Haseena responded, coming down.

"Kya hua beta! kab se aawaj de rahi thi main." Maa said.

"woh maa thodi ankh lag gayi thi humari" Haseena said.

"Accha koi baat nahi... Par teri ankho ko kya hua? aisa lag raha hain jaise bahot roi hai tu, sab thik hain na beta" Maa said worriedly.

"Hum bilkul thik hain Maa...Company ko naye event ka project mila hai aur as event organizer hume appoint kiya gaya hai, toh bass uski chakkar main kal raat jagna pada, aur abhi dopeher main thoda jyada so gaye hum, isiliye ankhe suj gayi hain thodi" she lied cleverly, but--

"Kitna jhooth bologi Haseena" Maa said.

"Hu..m kyu..n jhooth bolenge bhala.." she fumbled.

"Tumhe kya lagta hain...pichle ek saal se tumhare aur Anu ke beech jo chal raha hain uske bare main hume kuch pata nahi hoga!" Maa said emotionally.

"Maa aap kya---

---Shaadi ki agli raat se jab hum geheri neend main hote hain, tum guest room main soti ho...kya iske bare main hume pata nahi hoga!" she said, shocking Haseena.

"Sab pata hain hume beta, sab kuch...sirf hume hi nahi papaji aur tumhare matapita ko bhi shak hain ki tum dono ka rishta thik nahi hain" she added further. Haseena kept quiet and bowed her head down.

 "Chalo mere saath.." They both went and sat on the swing outside. "Dekho Hasi, main tum dono ke beech nahi bolna chahti aur na hi tumhare iss rishte ko sudharne ki koi ray dena chahti hoon, kyunki kya sahi hain aur kya galat ye samajhne ke liye tum dono saksham ho."

"Anubhav darta hai!" she said. Haseena stared at her in confusion.

She continued. "Use lagta hai ki shayad uske vikalaangta ki vajah se woh tumhare yogya nahi hain, isiliye khood ko dur rakhta hain tumse. use lagta hain ki woh tumhe khush nahi rakh payega" Haseena stayed quiet.

"Bhale hi woh keheta ho ki use koi jaroorat nahi hain tumhari, par sehem jata hain jab tum uske bare main na poocho, dekha hain maine!...Apne Anu ko janti hoon main, woh ye rishta nibhana chahta hain...bass bichara pyaar ke mamle main dil se jyada dimaag dauda raha hain" she chuckled. but her each and every word was acting as a light to Haseena. Her eyes welled up.

"dil se chahta hain woh tumhe Haseena, bas ye sach apnane se dar raha hain" Maa said and squeezed her hand softly. she left after giving Haseena a forehead kiss who was engrossed in her deep thoughts.

'Kya Anubhav hume sach main chahte hain!' she smiled in her thoughts but her smile faded as soon as--

"humne ye pehele bhi kaha tha...abb bhi kehe rahe hai...nahi maante hum ye shaadi...nahi maante tumhe apni patni....samjhi tum"

His words echoed in her ears which were enough to dampen the impact of maa's words.



Next day...

'Yeh Haseena gayi kaha hain...jabse jage hai tabse aawaj nahi aayi uske payaliyon ki' Anubhav thought being restless as he knew, she used to wear anklets for him so that he could recognize her. 

'Kamal karte ho Anubhav, pehele khood dil dukhao aur phir apeksha bhi rakho ki woh baat karne aaye tumse' he heard his inner voice.

'Jyada soch rahe ho...jo bhi kiya aacha kiya. Haseena tumhe chodne ke liye majboor ho jaye, yahi toh maksad hain tumhara' he heard another one.

'Par kal kuch jyada hi jor se dhakka diya tumne usse, shayad darwaje se takrai thi woh. Usse koi chot toh nahi lagi hogi na! ya phir shayad lagi bhi hogi...'

'lagi bhi hogi toh kya, acchi baat hain ki tumhari chhavi kharab ho rahi hain uski nazar main'

 'Par woh pyaar karti tumse Anubhav...kya uske saath aisa bartav karna jayaz hain. Aur tumhara kya? tum jo uske liye mehesoos karte ho...uska kya?!'

'Toh apni bhavnayein kabu main rakho Anubhav, unhe badhne mat do. uske kabil nahi ho tum, woh nahi rehe sakti tumhare saath khush! woh kya, koi bhi ek andhe ke saath nahi rehena chahega'

'Par woh sabse alag hain. kya tum ek mauka nahi de sakte...khood ko! kya kabhi socha hain, uske jaane ke baad kya karo ge tum! rehe paoge?'

'Nahi...apne swarth ke liye uski zindagi nahi barbaad karoge tum!'

'Par yeh Haseena gayi kaha hai!'

He shrugged off his inner conflicts as he felt a slight bent next to him on the couch. As soon as he heard a kind of overdramatic music, he rolled his eyes with a sigh.

 "Maa..." Anubhav called her being irritated.

"Hmm..." Maa hummed who got busy in her 'Saas bani chudail' named T.V serial.

"Kya boring T.V serial dekhti raheti hain aap, saas bani chudail, aisa kon title rakhta hain bhala!" He complained with an eww face.

"Tu chup chap mujhe dekhne dega ya kan khichke kamre main band kar du tujhe" She chided as she was disturbed by her dear son.

"Accha thik hain, chilaiye mat" he said nervously.

"Hmm....Ek aurat aur T.V serial ke beech main nahi aana chahiye mardon ko" she stated.

"Ji..." he frowned. 'Haseena ke bare main inse hi pooch lete hai' he thought

After a minute pause, "Maa...." he nervously called her again. 

"Kya hain..." she yelled, startling the innocent Kid. "Tu nikal yahan se, ja apne kamre main...meri serial khatam hone ke baad aana....pareshan kar raha hain kabse" she shouted in frustration, and again got busy in her show.

"Arey maa thoda dheere chilaiye na" he complained innocently.

"Tch...bol kya kaam hain" she prompted him to speak.

"Maa woh...." He paused being nervous.

"Bol Anu..." she frowned.

"Haseena kaha hai?" he whispered, which went inaudible to her.

"Kya..?"

"Haseena...kaha hai?" he asked again in same volume.

"Thoda jor se bolne se gala phat nahi jayega tumhara" she taunted, slapping his shoulder.

"Hum pooch rahe the ki...Haseena...kaha...hain?" he whispered again but in an audible voice.

"Kaha hain mhatlab?" she questioned back.

"Mhatlab kya woh apne ghar gayi hain?" he asked.

"Nahi toh..." She said looking at Haseena who was working on her laptop on the dining table.

"toh kaha gayi hain woh...aaj toh uski leave thi, aur subah se uski payal ki dhwani bhi nahi sunayi de rahi hain hume" he said.

"Apni payal shayad nikal di ho usne" she replied.

"Nikal di....!" something pierced his heart.

"Itni hi apni biwi ki yaad aa rahi hain toh aawaz deke bula lo na" she teased.

"Yaad nahi aa rahi hai hume...aise hi pooch rahe the hum" he tried to cover up but "Waise bataiye na kaha gayi hai Haseena!" curiously asked again like a small kid.

Maa smiled at her son.

"Yahi toh baithi hain samne dining table par, apna kaam kar rahi hain" she speak out loud seeking Haseena's attention.

"Woh yahi hain...hashh!" he sighed out in relief.

"Haseena....tera pati bula raha hain tujhe" she said loudly, Anubhav snapped at her in shock.

Haseena stared at them without any emotion.

"Maa..ky..a kehe rahi hain aap hum na..hi bula rahe usse...aap apni chudail dekhiye na, hum ja rahe hain kamre main " He panicked and ran upwards....






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