Badr Al-Din

By TheWhisperingFire

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This is the story of Badr and his four brothers, a story of brotherhood, love, and the power of faith. More

Character Sketch
Chapter 1 - He Killed Her!
Chapter 2 - The House Lost his Glory!
Chapter 3 - Will the Justice be Served?
Chapter 4 - Invitation
Chapter 6 - He got saved!
Chapter 7 - They went too harsh!
Chapter 8 - Will They Realize?
Chapter 9 - Comforting Him!
Chapter 10 - A Mysterious Letter!
Chapter 11 - Why is he behaving like this!?
Chapter 12 - Is Badr Scared?
Chapter 13 - Playing with little Badr
Chapter 14 - The Truth That Was Kept From Him
Chapter 15 - The Secret is Out!
Chapter 16 - The Stained Relationship

Chapter 5 - Curiousity kills the Cat!

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By TheWhisperingFire

Third Person Pov:

Badr groaned as he was woken up by the sun rays. He pouted angrily sitting up and he looked at his brothers who were sleeping peacefully. He can't see his brothers sleeping peacefully so he covered the sun rays by closing the window curtain for himself and whacked  Fayez with a smirk on his face.

"Ouch! Why did you whacked me!?" Fayez said angrily woking his brothers.

"Make breakfast! I am hungry" Badr replied acting innocent.

"You are the eldest! You make breakfast every day not me!" Fayez groaned irritated, looking at him with a glare while his brothers were looking at them with an irritated face for disturbing their sleep.

"So what!?" Badr said doing exactly like what Fayez did yesterday.

"Fine" Fayez grumbled getting up, knowing very well Badr is taking his revenge from him.

• Who told you to act big yesterday, Fayez!? Now, bear the consequences. Who thought helping anyone would have such a dire consequences!• Fayez scolded himself while huffing and puffing. But deep down, he love this side of Badr.

"What are you both looking at!? Affan, iron my cloth. I need to take bath today. And Fakhr, clean my black shoes. I will go to market, today." Badr said sternly while inside he was enjoying it.

"Whattt!! You are eldest brother. You should do yourself" They yelled together shocked. Why were they being taken bait of Fayez Akhi revenge!?

"Not mentally" Badr said indicating he heard what they said yesterday, laying down on the bed again covering himself with a duvet and snuggling into it.

"It's the true" Affan mumbled but was whacked by Fakhr.

"Do you want to increase Akhi revenge!?" Fakhr said glaring at him while dragging him away.

Badr tried to sleep again but he couldn't. Finally, after a few minutes of trying to sleep, he got up and went outside. He smiled widely entering Affan's room as he saw Affan ironing his clothes.

"I will do it. Leave it. Go and get ready. I will iron your clothes too. Get Fakhr and Fayez clothes too. Tell Fayez that I will cook the food"  Badr said taking the iron from Affan, knowing very well Fayez hasn't even started cooking.

"Weren't you taking revenge from us?" Affan questioned raising his eyebrows.

"I will make you all do another thing" Badr replied ironing his clothes.

"Okay but for now let me do it. You will iron our clothes, cook breakfast and go to market to buy things Ammi asked as well. Nope. At least let me do the ironing." Affan said , trying to take iron from his brother.

"Affan! Do what I said! Don't make Fajr prayer wait" Badr said sternly looking at him with a glare making him gulped.

Affan obeyed. It was difficult wining any arguments with Badr while he was in strict mode. After ironing the clothes and preparing the breakfast, he took a bath and got ready.

"Food is served" Fayez said coming towards Badr who was about to go in the kitchen. Badr made O face and went in the living room and sat beside his mother. Starting with ' In the name of Allah, the most Merciful and the most Gracious' , they ate and with Alhumdullillah.

Time skip after Fajr prayer:

"I am going to my laboratory" Fakhr said each of them and left. Affan did the same and left to teach.

Fayez went into his room as he had a meeting. He manages his business online through his laptop. No one uses laptop except him but uses it for his business work only. Badr was left. He didn't had any Qira to do and he was bored so he read Quran until Fayez meeting ends. After an hour, he went to Fayez room and saw him still in the meeting. Fayez noticed him and paused the meeting.

"What happened?" He asked worriedly looking at Badr.

"Bored" Badr mumbled with a pout, making his brother chuckle. For sure, Badr knows how to worry them for nothing!

"Come here" Fayez said patting the place next to him.

"You are in meeting. Don't wanna disturb" Badr replied like child, puffing his cheeks out while pouting. He was looking looking so cuteee!

Fayez made a thinking face and said "Come naa"

Badr obeyed and sat beside him. Fayez laid Badr's head on his lap and started the meeting. The meeting was in video call but he had off the front camera so no one was seeing it. While with his one hand, he was managing his meeting, his other hand was caressing Badr's hair. Whenever Badr was bored, they couldn't spend time with him due to something, they would do this.

"Let's finish the meeting now. Deal is done" Fayez said ending the meeting.

"What you want to-- Fayez cut himself off seeing Badr sleeping.

"For him, I ended my meeting quickly and he slept " Fayez chuckled while laying him on the bed carefully. He whined in between missing the warmth. Fayez chuckled again and putting his laptop in the drawer, he laid beside Badr and hugged him while sleeping.

At 10'o clock , Fakhr and Affan came back from their work. They found Badr in Fayez's room, sleeping with him while snuggling into him. Smiling, they laid beside him but were scolding by a sleepy person.

"Freshen up first!" Badr said sternly, his eyes still knowing his brothers works.

"Even in sleep, he scolds us" they mumbled and got freshen up. Then they slept.

After two hours, Badr's mother came into the room and smiled. They will never change.

"Badr, woke up!" Umm Badr said shaking Badr's shoulder gently.

"What happened?" Badr questioned rubbing his eyes.

"Go to market. You told me to wake you up. List is prepared. Fresh up and take it from me" Umm Badr replied, ruffling his hair.

"Why do every one ruffle my hair!?" Badr pouted getting up.

"Because you are too cute for your own good" Umm laughed and left.

After freshening up, Badr took the list and went to the bazaar (marketplace).

At first, he went to the vegetable shop and bought some listed vegetables and then he bought some fruits. While he saw a market a bit far away, curiousity filled in him.

"What is that Market?" Badr asked the vendor looking at the shop with curious eyes.

"A new market opened up. But be careful while going, there's a big pit there." The vendor replied with a smile.

"Oh! Did no one complaint?" Badr asked perplexed.

"Every one told the head. The head did it but there aren't responding. You know this is a small and backward tribe that's why the government isn't paying attention." The vendor explained disappointed with the government.

Badr hummed and put the keys at the motor bike and went towards the market. When he reached, he was shocked seeing Sachin brother of Raj.

"So you are the owner of this market?" Badr asked shocked looking at him surprised.

"Yes, I thought to do something here as I was bored sitting in house" Sachin replied with a chuckle.

"That's great idea! I see it's vegetables. I will buy from you next time!" Badr said excitedly.

Sachin laughed and nodded his head.

"I will come back in a minute. You can leave" Sachin said leaving the place.

"Well, See you later!" Badr yelled leaving but  he saw the put which the vendor was talking about. He went towards it as saw it while sitting. Then he stood to leave but while he was leaving his foot was slipped by something and he fell into the big and deep pit which was behind him.

"Ahhhh!" He screamed  escape his mouth while falling in it. He was moving his hands and legs to save himself. He was panicking due to which some water went into his mouth.

(Ignore the things and imagine it is full of water.) Most people died while falling into this pit but only few survived.

Author Note:

What do you think?

Will he survives or die?

Don't think he will survive because he is the main character ! The story can continue without him too!

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