Thedalgal Theerathini

By ParvathiSureshSharma

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It is an story which is an ashaangi version of Bangalore Days. It is not exactly like that film. There are di... More

Chapter 1- Introduction
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47 -- Mature content
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
Chapter 76
Announcement -- Janana Ragasiyam
Chapter 77
Chapter 78

Chapter 56

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Athulya- "nee nijamave enna love panriah Siddhu?"

Siddhik- "yen di santhegama kekura?"

Athulya- "enaku unkita konjam pesanum. manasu vitu pesanum. pesalama?"

Siddhik nodded.  Rakshan and Karthik tried to move away. Pragyan and Sujan are talking with Sanjeev explaining everything on the other room. 

Athulya- "perusa personal ah onum illa. neengalum irukalam anna"

Siddhik- "kelu yaathu"

Athulya- "neeum un manasula ullatha maraikama pesanum Siddhu. I trust you."

Siddhik- "Promise yaathu. ethunalum maraikama soluven"

Athulya- "nee deepika ku support panna reason enna?"

Siddhik- "entha visayathula?"

Athulya- "first, antha dealing ava pesiruka maatanu sonna. entha nambikkaila apadi sonna?"

Siddhik- "avaluku avlo arivu kidaiyathu"

Athulya chuckled and said, "Second, deepika nallava nu nee solla karanam enna Siddhu?". Siddhik looked at her keenly.

Athulya calmly said, "Rakshan anna veetla, siddhu ava kita pesatha nu naan sonen. nee avala paaka kooda illa. enaku nallave therium, un manasula naan evlo niranchu iruken nu. But avala pathi un manasula irukura ennangal enna nu naan purinchukanum Siddhu please."

Siddhik- "Naanga pesum pothu, ennoda kuraiah ava perusa ninaikala.. enaku nijamave kurai irunthalum ennoda thaan valanum nu sonna. aduthu, Rakshan oda name ah delete pannathathu.."

Rakshan looked at him with a shock. He never imagined that he could be the reason.

Siddhik- "adutha reason, enaku certificates koduthathu.. naan nalla irukanum nu ninaichathu.."

Athulya- "ithula enaku santhegam iruku Siddhu. First Rakshan anna pera unakaga thaan delete panala nu epadi ninaikura? Rakshan anna award vangina intha center ku thane perumai. neraiah investments varum. projects accept panipanga.. oru vision kidaikum, athukaga kooda ava delete panama irunthirukalamla.. "

Siddhik looked at her with confused face. 

Athulya- " aduthuthu unnoda certificates. appo iruntha confusion la unaku perusa ethuvum thonama irunthirukalam Siddhu. but ippo yosi, athu epadi nee veetuku poi kilamburathukulla ava udane dress change panitu, certificates ellam eduthukitu vanthiruka mudium. athuvum experience certificate la seal vachu,  athuvum antha time la udane avala thethikitu manasa thethikitu, unna thedi vanthutala? head sign vangurathunu ellame udane panitala? unga head ah, athuvum appa va, ivlo nadanthathu ku apuram epadi udane samathika vachu sign vangiruka mudium?"

Rakshan- "amam la.."

Siddhik widened her eyes and said  "mudiathu thaan yaathu"

Athulya sat near to him, took his hands in her hand and said, " unaku kurai irunthalum un kooda valuven nu ava sonnatha  sonna.. aana, kurai irukalam nu sonnathe ava thane Siddhu. Intha test ah appove eduthu onum illa nu unaku hope koduthirukalam la.. ". 

Siddhik genuinely said, "antha visayathula ava panathu ellame thappu than yaathu."

Athulya- "unaku avala love panna nu thonutha?". 

Siddhik- "theriala yaathu.. antha varthaiah ketale appo ellam veruppa irukum.", he rubbed his hairs in frustration. 

Athulya- "nee pesum pothu sonna, sila thadava, avalae thana vanthalum nee vilagi poirukanu. oru ponna solren Siddhu, oru thadava vilagina oruthan kita marupadium poga mudiathu. "

Siddhik looked at her with tear filled eyes. 

Athulya- "ava unnaku adhigamana kutra unarchiya thaan koduthiruka Siddhu. una mentally attack paniruka. nee verukavum mudiama, virumbavum mudiama thavikura mathiri vachiruka"

Siddhik- " athuku avasiyam enna yaathu? enna yen ipadi torture pananum? ", He asked her with inability.

Athulya- "pesalam, pesina purinjudum.. Avala anaiku night 12 maniku avanga veetla apadi paatha piragu kooda nee manichuta. karanam enna Siddhu?"

Siddhik- "Naan olunga irunthiruntha avaluku intha nilamai vanthirukaathunu thaan. ennala thaan ava ipadi agitalo nu irunthathu. ellarum feelings common yaathu. ambalaigaluku maatum thaan sex desires jasthi irukanum nu illa. may be avaluku jasthi ah irunthirukalam. ava evlo try panium enaku interst varala, avala control panna mudiama thappu panitalo nu... enna kadhalichathala thappa na ponna agitalo nu.."

Athulya -"sari Siddhu, konjam deep ah oru question kekuren. enna thappa ninaikatha."

Siddhik- "unna pathi thappa yosika ellam enna theriathu yaathu, kelu", he pressed his hand on hers. 

Athulya- "appa va veetla vachukitu, unarchi vasapatu theriama thappu panra time ah athu? avanga theriama panna mathiri irunthatha?"

Siddhik eyes shed tears and nodded as no. 

Athulya -"nee sariah ah illainu ava thappu panitatha nee ninaikura. un kuraia perusa ninaikathava onnu unna sari panirukanum, illa ava sariah irunthirukum. etho oru thadava kattupata illantha okay. aana, anaiku nee pathathu first time polava irunthathu. "

Siddhik looked down and shed tears. 

Athulya -"unna hurt panrathukaga sollala. please nee enna ninaikuranu sollu. unaku nalla therium athu first time illanu apuram epadi avala manicha? "

Siddhik-  " ennala thappana ponna maritalo nu thonuchu.  Oruthiah thappanavala mathitenonu thonuchu. ava nerungum pothellam vilaginathala, Ennoda rejection ah yethuka mudiama, ava desires ah control panna mudiama ipadi poitalonu nianchaen. "

Athulya- "Siddhu, ava kita nee romba anba irunthiah?". Siddhik looked at her eyes the next second with guilt and inability. Tears flow from his eyes.

Athulya wiped his eyes and told, "apadi solla varala.. athavathu meet panum pothu enkita pesina mathiri ethavathu? asaiah illama pasama pesirukiah? enna pesiananu kooda solal vendam. just itha mathiri dialogues ellam solirukiah."

Siddhik left a long breathe and said, "illa yaathu. avaluku projects avlo seekram puriathu. naan than solli kodupen. oruthadavaiku rendu thadava sonna than purium. athu pola  engalukulla sandai thaan adigam varum. ellam sandaium potutu apuram vanthu, naan avlo love panren nu solluva. love panren love panren nu solite irupa.. aana sandai poduva. aana ellathukum sanda poduva."

Athulya- "enna sandai varum?"

Siddhik- "Rakshan kooda than project discussion panra nu sanda poduva. avaluku project pathi sonnalum puriathu. rakshan ku ellame purium. itha sonna othuka maata. Karthik kooda bike la varatha nu sanda poduva. avanga veetla irukathanu sanda poduva. Logan shirt pota pudikathunu solluva. sapatula kooda sandai varum. vachirukura pen la kooda sandai varum. kadaisila love panren nu sollitu pova."

Athulya- "ava sonathukaga nee marirukiah?"

Siddhik- "illa Yaathu. naan ethaium maathikala avaluku puria vaika thaan try panaen. sandai varum, but naan ethaium maathikala. appo than intha gender interest topic vanthuchu, enaku en mela doubt ae vanthuduchu. "

Athulya- " yen doubt vanthathu Siddhu?"

Siddhik- "ava kai ah aruthukitu ninnu un friends ah vitutu vaa nu sonna kooda naan vitutu poiruka maaten Yaathu. avala ninaichu feel panuven but avangala vitutu poiruka maaten. enaku ivanga thaan mukiam nu theliva purinchathu. athu enga interest ah maridumo nu bayam vanthathu."

Athulya- "hmm, aana ava unna un friends kita irunthu pirika try paniruka, athavathu sanda potu. correct ah Siddhu?"

Siddhik nodded his head and said, "naan avaluku bayam nu ninachen. possessiveness nu ninachaen" 

Athulya- "Nee rakshan annava adichathukum karthik anna kooda sanda potathukum karanam deepika va black mail panatha, Siddhu?"

Siddhik- " illa. antha video va kaati black mail panathuku thaan adichaen."

Athulya- "so black mail panathu unaku problem illa. antha video va kaati panathu thaan problem apadi thaane Siddhu?"

Siddhik- "amam"

Athulya- "yen siddhu? deepika hurt avana?"

Siddhik- "illa, Rakshan maritane nu thaan. ennala muthalla deepika thappu panna athuve enaku inum uruthuthu. naan ponungaluku evlo mariyatha kodukanum nu kathukitathe Rakshan kita thaan. oru ponnukita epadi pesanum nu avan thaan kathu koduthaan. ammavoda kooda naan palaginathu illa yaathu, enaku avan thaan ponungala epadi pathukanum, epadi palaganum, evlo mariyathaiah nadathanum nu solli koduthaan. Unna naan ipadi pathuka kooda avan enaku solli koduthathu thaan karanam. apadi irukura Rakshan, ennala maritan. oru ponnu kita ava udamba kaati black mail panni.. ellam enakaga.. ennala avan thappu panirukaan."

Rakshan- "dei Sid, athu apadi illada"

Siddhik- "Nee enna nalla manishana maathina, aana naan unna thappu pana vachutaenae da.. ithuku nee fake certificates ready pani anupirukalame daa" . Rakshan hugged Siddhik. 

Siddhik- "sorry da, adichathu valikutha?"

Rakshan- "illa da.. nee adichu enaku valichuduma?"

Karthik- "appo nee Deepika kaga adikalaya?"

Siddhik- "illa da, avala neenga thiturathum, ava ungala thiturathum puthusa enna. naan than sonaene, kondrukalam, aana itha paniruka vendam nu. oru naal oru thdavai nalum sister nu avala kooptrukeenga da.. Ungala ipadi yosika vachutaenae nu en melayae enaku kovam daa. atha thaan unga kita kaatiten sorry daa.."

Karthik- "avlo thana? sister nu koopta thangatchi agiduvala? naan onum manasara sister nu koopdala. unakaga thaan koopten.. sari vidu, naanga panathu thaapu thaan."

The trio hugged each other. Athulya smiled at them. After a while, 

Athulya- "sari Siddhu aduthu kekatuma?". Siddhik nodded his head. Rakshan and Karthik moved away.

Athulya- " naan ippo kadaisiah nadantha sambavatha pathi pesa poren. maraikama manasulla ullatha sollu"

Siddhik left out a breathe and nodded her head.  

Athulya - " unaku nee sariah thaan irukanu clarity kidaichurukalam. aana Deepika mela interest varala, apadi irukum pothu, senthu valalam vaa nu epadi koopta? "

Siddhik looked down and hesitated to answer. 

Athulya- "paravalla Siddhu, sollu.."

Siddhik closed his eyes and said, "tablets potu avala satisfy panalam nu ninachaen. Vera oruthana thedatha padi paathukanum nu ninachaen", Rakshan and Karthik was shocked to the core. But Athulya didn't

Athulya- "Yen intha mudiva edutha? ava oruthanuku thannaiyae koduthurukalae. avan kooda sethu vaikanum nu thonalaya?"

Siddhik- "apadi thaan muthalla yosichaen yaathu. aana, enna anga pathavanuku kandipa enakum Deepika-kum idayila love irukunu thonirukum. enna love panrathu therinjum avan ellam panirukaan. nalaiku avala thappaana ponna ninaika vaipiruku.. ennala ava valkai poidumo nu bayanthu thaan enkooda vaala koopten. "

Athulya - "sari, ava oodi poidu nu sonna piragu kooda unaku yen kovam varala? enna reason ah irukum nu ninaichu nee convince panna?  yarodaium contact vachukatha nu sollum pothu, anna va vitu piriya epadi othukita? "

Siddhik- "avaluku perusa project knowledge kidaiyathu yaathu. Rakshan thappana project ah upload panathu kooda theriama prepare panni inject paniruka.  athukum naan thaan karanam nu ninaichurupa. actual la athu oru illegal act. antha mathiri oru patient ku direct ah inject panna sattapadi avangala arrest panni punish panannum. police case agum nu thaan enna odi poga solranu ninachaen. convince panna try panen. Rakshana kaati miratum pothu ennala pidivatham pudika mudiala. enaku Rakshan name list la irukurathu thaan appo perusa therinjathu, athaan poren nu othukiten. but avala theriama en friends kooda contact la irukanum nu ninachaen."

Athulya -"pogum pothu kooda kaathirupen nu sonanthu, ethanala Siddhu?"

Siddhik- "Ennala ava valkai nasama poidumo nu bayanthaen yaathu.. Annaike therinjathu avaloda desires jasthinu. enga avan misguide panni iva valkai poidumo nu bayama irunthathu. ava vera yaraiyavathu love paniruntha kooda ava nalla valnthirupalo nu enaku adikadi thonum yaathu. Oru vela ethavathu thappa nadantha kooda udamba perusa ninaikama naan avalukaga kathirupen nu sonaen. aana ava.. ava vera mathiri panni kadaisila naan..  "

Siddhik looked at Athulya to say something

Athulya -"nee ellame kutra unarchila matum thaan paniruka Siddhu. oru idathula kooda nee Deepika va love panra mathirio, illa ava mela vachirukura anbula panna mathirio solala.. nee virumbirunthalo verunthirunthalo ethavathu solalam, nee avala valkaiah nasamakitom nra, kutra unarchila ellathaium paniruka. unake pudikama thaan ellathaium paniruka. unala oruthi valkaia tholachuda koodathunu nee un valkai ah panayam vachiruka."

Siddhik furrowed his eye-brows and started to recall all the question and answers. He chuckled sadly and said, "oru pechuku kooda anbu illa la.", his eyes mirrored his pain. 

Athulya- "athaan ipo naan irukaenae. atha vidu, nee odinathuku karanam. Deepika dress ah kilichathu, apuram unna ellarum thappa paathathu.. athunala thane?"

Siddhik nodded his head. 

Athulya- "petha ponnu udambula thuni illama guninju aluthukitu irukum pothu kooda, oru appa aduthavana adichukitu irupara Siddhu?"

Siddhik stood up in shock. Rakshan and Karthik too widened their eyes. 

Athulya- "nee romba nallavan thaan Siddhu, athukaga un kooda antha center la iruntha oruthar koodava nallavangala illa. anga iruntha oruthar kita koodava coat illa. at least head kita nalla peru vanga nallavan mathiri nadikurathuku koodava oruthanum coat kodukala ?"

Siddhik clutched his chest a little. The truth he is hearing is paining a lot. He felt like something is blocking.

Athulya- "thannoda ponna abuse pannavana oru appa summa vitruvara Siddhu? unnala oru patient iranthu ponathaku avanga kita paper evidence iruku. atha vachu un mela case kodukanum nu koodava try paniruka maataru? nee venumna kanama poirukalam. un family la ellarum apadiyae thane irukanga. avangala visaricha therinjidume.. entha step um yen edukala Siddhu?"

Siddhik- "sariah theriala, but Deepika save panirukalam nu.. "

Athulya- "epadi paniruka mudium? neenga love panathe theria koodathu nu sonnale.. athoda ava kita ketuta unga head ethaium seivaaru?"

Siddhik started to rub his chest, "nee... nee... nee enna solla vara yaathu?", He struggled to believe his findings.

Athulya- " unaku enna thonuthu Siddhu?" Siddhik looked at her. 

Siddhik started to think about everything from the first but in third person point of view. His body started to get cold. Everything that he believed is just a drama. Everything is a lie. Everything is false. The depressions, pressure, sufferings he had is planned. His day and night effort for the project is their plan. The last day at center is a complete plan. He stood like a statue. 

Siddhik - "ellame ivanga kita irunthu enna pirikurathuku pota plan ah? aana, enna yaen en friends kita irunthu pirikanum? enna yaen ipadi oda vaikanum? "

Athulya- "avanga kooda iruntha unaku un kutra unarvu poidum Siddhu, nee Deepika control la iruka maata.."

Siddhik- "athukaga ipadiah? naan enna thappu panen yaathu? anbukku mariyathai koduthu yethukitathu avlo pera thappa yaathu?"

Siddhik felt like the whole world is spinning. He clutched his heart tightly and fell down. Rakshan and Karthik shouted at him. There is no trace of breathing. Sujan and Pragyan rushed to them. Rakshan started to give first aid. 

Sujan - "enna aachu?"

Karthik- "romba unarchi vasapatutaan"

Sujan- "moochu vida maatikuraan". , he had little tears in his eyes. 

Karthik- "dei enna aachu yen kalangura"

Sujan- " pulse kuraiyuthu.'

Rakshan started to press his chest in high speed. Athulya and Pragyan was terrified. Athulya didn't expect this. Siddhik words echoed in her ears like, 'moochu vida kastama iruku di. aluthuthu' Sujan started to blow air in his mouth but there is no movement. Karthik and Siddhik started to rub his hand and leg. 

Rakshan- "sujju nee thallu, papa nee vaa. nee vanthu avan vayila oothu."

Athulya- "aana anna enaku.."

Rakshan- "nee thodu, unaku therinjatha pannu. avanala unara mudium. unna ninachu avanum poradi enthirupaan"

Athulya nodded his head and with Sujan's guidance she blow air on his mouth. She started to cry. Unable to control herself, she started to kiss all over his face. she kissed his lips once and tried her best. She moved away with tears. Karthik came near to Siddhik's chest. 

With much effort, Sujan and Rakshan pressed with a needed effort. 

Sujan- "anna please anna". 

Athulya -"Siddhu, I love you. please enthirichu vaa. enaku romba bayama iruku."

And with the next press, Siddhik coughed. Rakshan left out a long breathe and started to check him. Others left out a long breathe.

Pragyan- "intha love you va muthallaye sonna enna di? usurae ninnuduchu enaku"

Rakshan helped Siddhik to sit slowly. 

Karthik- "ungala kadhal aalamanathu thanda othukaren. athukaga ipadiya? yebba dei, vitta nanaga ellarum ticket vangirupom da saamy.", Siddhik smiled at him weakly with proud filled eyes. 

Sujan- "paithiam, love you solla ivlo nerama? ini daily rendu thadava solidu. engalala ipadi usura pudichukitu irukaa mudiathu".

Athulya smiled with tears and said, "nee kooda thaan anna anna kannera oothina"

Rakshan- "ini nee palasa pathi ethuvum yosika koodathu. ethirgalatha pathi yosi. unga valkaiah pathi yosi. marupadium solitu iruka maaten. thola urichuduven.", he said sternly to Siddhik.

Siddhik nodded. They all moved away slowly leaving the couple. Siddhik wiped Athulya's tears. 

Athulya- "moochu vidama irukavum bayanthuten"

Siddhik- "En ratchasi solli seiyama irupena? "

Athulya- "I love you Siddhu. "

Siddhik- "nee solum pothu 'love you' va keka pudichuruku di Ratchasi. nee enna romba maathita"

Athulya chuckled and said, " thirupi sonna ennavam? "

Siddhik- "sonna thaan theiruma? nee sonathum, idhayam olunga thudika arambichuduchu, moochu seeragiduchu. unakaga thaan uyire ulla iruku pola,.. inuma puriala.. nijamave puthusa porakka vachiruka.", he cupped her cheeks and said each word with full of love.

Athulya blinked at him with a blush," enna Siddhu nee ipadi pesa arambichuta?"

Siddhik kissed her forehead and said, "love you Yaathu. "

Sujan- "micha love ah ulla poi panunga. thookam varuthu engaluku. light off panitu poganum.. mathavan usura konja nerathuku munnadi oosalada vachutu ipo love you vaam love you. "

Sujan mumbled the last line. Siddhik and Athulya chuckled, stood up and moved away. Athulya helped Siddhik to walk. Still he felt a mild pain in the body. 

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