RATCHASA MAMANEY 2

By prita_krishnan

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a village teenage love story between aththa paiyyan and mama ponnu... More

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EPILOGUE 1
EPILOGUE 2
BONUS CHAPTER

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(comments mukkiyam bigilu...)

Susi sitting at entrance and vaidhi is sleeping in her lap... she's waiting for others to come home...

Susi: mama enga ponaaru? Ivlo neram aachu kaanum..  phone pannalama? Vendama? Panni paapom...

She took her mobile and called Arjun but heard ring sound nearby... She turned around to see he's coming inside along with wet cheran and mahi...

Susi: mama...

She came near Arjun and side Hugged him... He took sleeping vaidhi from her and kissed Both of their heads...

Cheran: naangalum Inga dha irukkom...

Arjun: yaar unagala irukka sonna?

Cheran: daddy.....

Arjun: poi mudhalla refresh aagitu vandhu saapdunga ponga..  sali puduchukka podhu...

Cheran: idho poita daddy... Vaa mahi polaam... Mii en ponna kudu...

Susi: pullaya thotta kaiyya vettiruva...

Cheran: yen mii?

Susi : night uh papa enga koodadha iruppa... Neenga poi dress change panitu saaptu poi thoongunga...

Cheran: yen? Papa enga koodaye thoongattum...

Mahi facepalmed herself and dragged cheran from there...

Susi: enna mama ivan unakku poranthutu ipdi makka irukkaan?

She turned around only to see arjun glaring at her..

Susi: nee edhukku enna moraikura?

Arjun: papa namma roomlaya thoonga pora? Disturbance ah irukkadhu?

Susi : oh sir ku ippo enna ilama oosal aaduthunnu ninappo?

Arjun: yen nethu night uh oosal aaduchey marandhutiya? nee koods ma...

susi closed his mouth before he finish his sentence...

susi: mama... vaaya moodu kolandha irukka... mmm...

arjun laughed at her red face and lifted her along with vaidhi and went inside the house..

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NEXT MORNING,

Everyone is eating breakfast except mahi and chera... susi is feeding vaidhi ..

sengu: emmov... nee peththu vairukiye oru dhadi maadu adhu enga aala kaanum?

susi: neeyu adhu kooda eruma dhaanda...

making azhagi laugh and valavan kept quiet knowing what sengu gonna comment next,

sengu: neeyum enga kooda porandha eruma dha eruma kutty...

azhagi: dei thambi vona solta...

sengu  : aai annanu koopdri..

azhagi : mudiyadhu thambi... adhukku nee innum valaranum...

sengu: neeye en iduppu size ku dha irukka nee valaradha paththi pesuriya d...

azhagi: aiii..

sengu: bbbbbb...

susi: chi vaaya moodunga... noi nointu... avanga varuvaanga neenga saaptu kelambunga...

sengu: amma.. enakku eve oru mukkiyamana vela irukku varakku late aagum...

arjun: sengu... indha...

he gave sengu 5000 rupees...

sengu: edhukku paa?

arjun:  chanakya va kootitu thiruvizhaku dhana thuni edukka pora.. indha selavukku vachukka enna kekuralo vaangi kudu..

sengu: irukku paa enta...

arjun: oh enta kaasu vaanga maatingalo dhora... avlo periya aala aagitingalo?

sengu: apdi illa paa...

arjun: pudi dandranla...

he took money from his dad and put in his pocket.. azhagi looking at them and pouting...

azhagi: daddy enakku?

sengu: nakku...  unakku dhaan un soon to be AC fiancée irukaarla anga kelu d... nalla bulk ah vachurupaaru...

azhagi: avar thaniya eduththu  tharuvaaru enna irundhaalum en appa eduththu thara maari aaguma?

sengu leaned towards valavan and whispered,

sengu: yow mama edho perusa plan potta un pondatti.. odiru illa un purse ohhhooo... sangu dha...

valavan: mama aththa enakku oru case investigation irukku naa poitu vandharra...

valavan rushed out from there without waiting for replay making everyone laugh at pouting azhagi...

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sengu reached hospital and started his duty.. when he is checking a patient , a nurse informed him that someone is calling his mobile continuously...

sengu: hello...

chanu: arivu ketta mama... ethana dhadava call pandradhu unankku enna vid aun vela dha mukkiyam ah pochula? ah? kalyanathukku munnadiye ipdi na appo kalyanam mudinja enna kandukkavey maatila? 

sengu: maa... naa..

chanu: oru manushi irukkala seththalannu paakuriya nee? neththu night veetukku pona oru msg illa oru call illa... athana reels share panna onnumey pakkala eve shopping polaamnu sonna epo vara ethana manikku naa ready ah irukanum... edhachu sonniya ne? ah?

sengu: aai naa sol...

chanu: idhula naa unna apdi paathuppa ipdi paathupan you are mine nu dialogue vera... udhaar paarty ah da nee? onathukkum aagadhavana irukka? epdi dha unna kattitu naa kuppa kotta porano ... aandava... 

Sengu:  aai paithiyam ... enna thittrakku munna un whatsapp eduththu paaru ...

chanu: adhula enna perusa msg panirkka pora? mmm... ah... apram thavara?

she opened the whatsapp and saw his message about their shopping and outing...

chanu: eee.. chowwy mama...

sengu: mundhiri kotta edhukku eduthaalum avarasram unaku...

chanu: sari naa ready ah irukka nee duty mudichutu seekiram vaa... bye love you muah...

she cutted the call and sengu rubbed his neck to hide his blush... his phone started to ring again showing, "BUNNU KUTTY"

sengu: enna d?

chanu: mama solla marandhuta... varumbodhu namma school pakkathula irukka bakery l;a irundhu cream bun vaangitu variya?

sengu: thinni maadu ... vaangitu vara vai...

chanu: mama rendu vanagitu vaa onnun paththadhu...

sengu: sari d yebba...

he cutted the call and shook his head smiling...

 one of his patient asked,

patient: enna dr sir unga girlfriend ah? ivlo vetka padringa?

sengu: illa... kattikka porava...

patient: appo pondatti nu urimaya sollunga...

sengu: aama aama ... innum thaali mattumdha micham ... 

patient : mmmhmmm... 

sengu smiled and went from there... After a long day of duty he washed his face and got ready to meet chanu... suddenly he heard a familiar voice called him... 

"mama"

he turned around to see its dharani...

 sengu: sollunga dharani...

dharani: mama inga paarunga... indha sandaiyellam vendaam... unaglukku dha guru avan appava paththi theriyumla  jeikanumnu enna venalum pannuvaan...

sengu: indha prachanaikkum unakku sambandham illa... unga velaya paarunga..

dharani: mama inga paaru... naa...

sengu didn't hear her and went from there... 

dharani: ayyo naa epdi solli puriya vaippa... avanga ivara kolla plan potrukaangannu... yaarta solradhunnu theriyalaye...

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vettayan was buying meat and chicken ... suddenly he heard some of the people in village speaking...

" irundhalum vettayan maccha kaaran paa... rendu potta pullaikkum periya idama paaththu valachu potaan paaren"

" pinna... kadasi kaalathula raja maari utkaandhu saapdanumla?"

vettayan fisted his hands in anger but didn't lash out because he knows that they are doing it purposefully ...

" rendu pullayum neram kaalam illama veliya aambala pasangaloda suthuraanga"

" hmmmkmmm pa... naa kooda chinnavala ippodha oru payyan vayakattu pakkam kootitu poradha paaththa"

" naa kooda periyavala oru payyan kooda hotel la paaththa.. naa matyumavanga appana irundha avnaingalyum vetti [pottu naanum naandukittu sethurupan..."

vettayan couldn't tolerate anymore and punched those men in anger... a small quarrel became a big fight.. in between the fight a man tried to stab vettayan but a hand hold the knife in a tight grip and punched that man...

vettayan looked at the source its...

vettayan: maapla?

arjun was standing in front of vettayan with red raging eyes and glaring at those men...

"dei unakkum avanukku dha pechu vaarththa illaila... neeye avana adichalla ippo edhukku da kurukka vara? oplunga vilagi po"

arjun: naanu en machanu inikku adichupom naalaikku koodipom... adhukkunu unna maari authavan podra pichhaya nakki thingara naai yellam naduvula vida mudiyadhu... enna meeri en machan ahana mudija thodunga da paapom... appo theriyum indha arjuna paandiyan yaarunnu...

continued..,,  

- your lovely innocent authoreyyyy...

(pre climax will be posted soon...)

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