The Virgin and The Young Don

Por Diamondbaby8

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Denique is an innocent virgin girl who met the young don and fell inlove. Read to find out more๐Ÿ“š Mรกs

Introduction.
1.First day
2.Match.
3.New feelings
4.Closer
5.Date
6.Jealousy
7.Meet
8.Argument
9.Hurt
10.Celebration
11.Surprise
New characters/face claims
12.Sleepover.
13.Shy
14.Awkward
15.Unexpected
16.Unexpected pt2
17.Confession
18.Taboo
20.Disbelief
21.Compliment
22.Talk
23.Clarification
24.Ownership
25.MIA
26.Denique's day
27.Time
28.Trigger happy
29.Mission
30.

19.Shame

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Por Diamondbaby8

Breanna pov
📍Norbrook

Mhi nah go back outside in a Andrew mouth side cause right now mhi head side a tear off.

Too likkle bit and nuff

So yuh nuh plan fhi tell we about Tyreek

Mhi nah lie the boy handsome yf but the only thing is him give assassin and Choppa vibes and mhi nuh plan fhi deh wid no Choppa enuh.

That yuh say now!!

You don't know what the future holds

Mtchh

Anyways today a girl gotta call in sick because last night the lady did outside in a Andrew mouth side.Mhi would a wah fhi see back Tyreek though he seems like someone I could vibe with.

Just say yuh like ehh man

Mhi nuh like nobody

Anything weh make yuh sleep a night girly

Hmm

"brii"Denique voice brought mhi back to reality "mhi a come"I shouted while heading to her room

"What yuh want child and what's wrong"I asked her when I enter her bedroom and saw her curled up in a ball

"Mi period come and I'm not feeling well can you get some water for me please"she asked and I nod

Exiting her room I walk to the kitchen to get some water as per her request.


Denique's pov
📍Norbrook

A which obeah man mhi owe cause mhi nuh feel period pain fhi hurt suh no sah and mhi uncomfortable.Patting the bed for my phone I realized that it was at the end of the bed so I waited until brii came back I ask her to pass for me.

Mhi need mhi man fhi comfort mhi

Gwaan yah frighten

Kmt

Hearing the door being opened I looked up to see Brianna handing me a glass of water with a painkiller.Taking them both from her I take the painkiller and drink the water.

"Before yuh go weh can pass mhi phone please"I asked her while pointing at the phone at the end of the bed

Without responding she went for it and handed it to me.

"Thanks"I said to her and she nodded before leaving my room

"Siri call mah stink❤️🥺"I said

"Calling mah stink❤️🥺"siri repeated

Big informer enuh

So we ago skip the fact yuh store ehh boy suh

Yea most definitely

Ahh..wait until Akeil see it rass

Bye

"Mami"his deep husky voice called me

"Hey babe..can you please come over am not feeling good"I said

"Wahm to yuh"he asked

"Just girl stuff"I said feeling shy to tell him it's my period

"Denique you don't gotta be afraid to say it's your time of the month"he said and smile inwardly ready to tease him

"Okay but how yuh about that"I asked

"Mommy and Akira"he said and hmm

"Hurry up and come remember to bring chocolates"I said

"Neva affi tell mhi mami dis ago bring ehh factory come"he said and burst out into a laughing frenzy causing the pain resurface

Pussyclaat mn weh mhi go laugh fah..chro

Without telling Akeil bye I hang up on him because if him Neva give me joke mhi would laugh fhi mhi belly start hurt mhi back again

Man a crawsis

Akeil??

Him is a big crawsis

Just because ehh boy say something and yuh laugh subby asked practically dying with laughter

Feeling sleepy out of the blues I allowed the sleep to take over my body and I drifted off in a deep slumber.

.............

Feeling my bed dip I slightly turn so I could sit up with causing the pain to come back.When I was finally sitting upright I glanced at Akeil easing up off the bed and heading towards the bathroom.

When he exit the bathroom he walked to the corner of the room and I saw when he lifted the basket which consist of chocolate snacks and he also bought a big ass stitch teddy bear.

Aye denique yuh bingo enuh

Denique yuh bingo fhi true Gyal!!

So him did really mean him a buy ehh factory

"You're so unserious why so much chocolate"I asked while laughing lowly

"Just did wah make sure yuh comfy and the painkillers are on the night table by your right"he said and I look and the painkillers were indeed there.

You got yourself a good man denique a good good man

"Thanks mah stink"I said reaching to hug but he moved

"Yuh deaf fhi stop call mhi dah fuckery deh"he said before he hissed

"Aii am sorry...thanks babe"I said and he smiled and hug me

"Can cuddle with me please mhi still feel sleepy"I asked him and he nodded and went ahead to change his outside clothes.

Yes the boy knows the shweeps the ting and the boom

Don't like when people have the clothes weh them have on outside pon mhi bed

He came back in his pajama that was matching mine and we lay there until sleep took over.

Hearing the ringing of a phone I groan in my sleep and shook Akeil and tell him to check if its his.Akeil got up and answer his phone.

"Yo"he answered

"Later mhi check cause somebody about get it"he replied to the person on the phone

Weh him mean by "smaddy ago get it"

Mhi ago just pretend like mhi Neva hear that fhi now

Soon ask him

"What's wrong"I asked him while sitting up

"Nothing"he answered obviously lying

"Okay"I replied deciding to end the conversation there

"Wait Breanna know yuh up here"I asked him and he smirk

"So nique after mhi come we sleep and wake yuh Just choose fhi ask dah question deh"he asked ignoring my  question

"Neva remember now answer mhi question"I said

"Yea she knows B"he responded to my previous question

I started fiddling with my fingers because am nervous,Akeil realized and asked"B a wah do yuh"

"Umm umm-nothing"I answered nervously

"Stop tell lie denique what's wrong"he asked raising his voice a bit and just like that mah water starts

"Bumboclaat Denique weh you a bawl fah"he asked

"You're raising your voice at me"I replied truthfully

"Am sorry Mama but what's wrong with you"he asked while wiping my tears

"Am umm you know"I responded looking away from his stare

A wah him shift yuh cervix and kill yuh subby said

"Mami no you're not it's because its your time of the month but if when it's finish and you're still feeling that way I can please"he said and the last part caused me to blush

"Okay I said while hugging him

Akeil's pov
📍 Underground

I left Norbrook about 2 hours ago when eyeball my right hand man called telling me that the Spades gang from Spanish town sent warning.

I haven't taken the warning serious because I don't know of our gang and spades in anything but I still called gang meeting to see if anybody went in their territory.

I run more than off a Jamaica

Am the Don for 10 parishes which I assigned a sub-don to each

Pause a minute...when yuh plan fhi tell denique about dah life yah

In due time when the time is right

"Good night"I greeted them and a chorus of good night follows

"So as unuh know already say the Spades gang kill Duplex as warning"I asked and they nodded

All now dah bumbohole deh cah reach enuh

Watch mhi and him

"Am not taking the warning serious but smaddy ago dead back"I said and I heard a few of the men says "BLOOD!!"

"But here's the question I wanna ask did any of you went in their territory and antagonize them"I asked while observing everyone's body language

Aii so nobody nuh trouble Dem...so Dem a look war okay wah due sizza give to sizza

If a suh the saying guh

"No king"Tyreek responded mhi tell ehh pussyole fhi stop call mhi so enuh

"Aii...weh unuh been up to"I asked since it been a while since I came here

"Just a stock drugs and ship,use up ehh banga phone etc"Tyreek said while laughing

"Yuh nuh easy enuh genius"I said also laughing

"Love ehh look a things keep it that way and mhi ago start come back more often"I said to them

"King mhi would say that to"Tyreek said causing the gang to laugh

"Yo buil nuh youth"I said trying mhi best to hide my a laughter

Hearing a few of the men say goodnight I looked up to Shakeil walking in.

Mhi nah look pon him enuh cause mhi cah call yuh from 7:00 and tell yuh meeting and a keep and yuh just a reach at 8:30 qfta a nuh patty shop mhi a run

Not sparing him a glance I continue what I was going to say"so has discussion before I have decided that we start back hard training as of from tomorrow"I said and they nodded

"There will be a war soon suh buckle up"I announced and they seemed shocked except: Shakeil,Tyreek,choopie and eyeball

"So nobody Neva did listen to mhi"I asked because of their reaction to what I said

"We did a listen man Mob"choopie replied and I give him a head nod

"Just buckle up and get ready fhi war in the next two weeks"I said

"1Law"I said waiting on them to finish it

"1family"They all replied and I stand up

"Shakeil we need to have a talk"I said and instantly he looks uneasy

After I exit the underground I decided that I am going to call mommy and see if she good.Dialing her number she picked up on the 3rd ring.

"Mi Madre"I spoke first

"Wah gwaan mhi first son Neva know yuh remember dah number here"she said and I shake my head

"Mommy how mhi fhi forget yuh number mhi just been busy from wah day"I responded

"With the pretty girl"she said laughing

"Hmm"I replied not denying that Denique takes up most of my time these days.

"God alone can tell mhi say yuh nuh buck yuh foot and fall inlove enuh..mhi love dat fhi yuh mhi son"she said smiling

Love??

"Mommy mhi a come up a yuh workplace"I told her before hanging up

Likkle boy tap ehh mn

...........
Finally reaching my mother's workplace I entered the building and greet the workers heading straight over to my mother who was on her phone.

"Mommy mhi reach"I tap her shoulder and she looked around and hug me

Turning around to scan the hair/nail salon I saw a brown girl looking at me while biting her dry lips.

She must a plan fhi come beg mhi some chapstick

Har lip Dem dry like ehh pink lean wig pon har head

"So how school and things mhi baby"my mother asked pulling me from my thoughts

"School stressing mommy gald mhi soon done anyways"I replied to her truthfully

"Hush mhi boy just make sure you a study"she said and I nod and my phone started ringing same time causing siri to announce who's calling.

"Babe"I said when I answered

Only she and mommy can make mhi take first when a Dem cal mhi

"Babe I miss you"she said in a sad tone and I know she's pouting

"Nique mhi nuh left yuh yard like 3 hours ago"I asked

"Yea but it's a bit too long and I want lay down on you"she said and I smile telling her I will be there in a few and she hang up the phone.

One mind said that I should look back at the Ms.lean wig and I was just in time to see her rolling her eyes while roaming a frown.

"A wah"I decided to asked her even though she's shocked that she's the one am talking

"Umm nothing"she replied nervously

"So why you cut yuh eye...make mhi tell yuh this mhi have mhi woman and even if mhi Neva have mhi woman mhi wouldn't want yuh...betta yuh go get some chapstick fhi put pon yuh dry lip and some glue fhi glue own yuh lean and Dutty dry pink wig"I hissed before turning to mommy

"A wah happen between unuh"she asked

"When mhi just come in here she bite up har crusty lip Dem and look pon mhi but as mhi answer denique call she start cut up har eye etc"I explained to my mother

"Abigail we need fhi have a talk"mommy said sternly before getting up and I bid her goodbye

Too blct bright can have my good good woman and look yuh not even when mhi drunk

Mhi affi wonder if fhi har man look in har face when them a do the do cause she fava living walking dead tpc

If mhi see dat all a night mhi goodly faint due to her resemblance to the walking dead

Fava zombie

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