The Virgin and The Young Don

By Diamondbaby8

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Denique is an innocent virgin girl who met the young don and fell inlove. Read to find out more๐Ÿ“š More

Introduction.
1.First day
2.Match.
3.New feelings
4.Closer
5.Date
6.Jealousy
7.Meet
8.Argument
9.Hurt
10.Celebration
11.Surprise
New characters/face claims
13.Shy
14.Awkward
15.Unexpected
16.Unexpected pt2
17.Confession
18.Taboo
19.Shame
20.Disbelief
21.Compliment
22.Talk
23.Clarification
24.Ownership
25.MIA
26.Denique's day
27.Time
28.Trigger happy
29.Mission
30.

12.Sleepover.

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Denique's pov
📍 Norbrook
October 4

While am packing my bag for the sleepover I started singing rajah wild's new song "Monster"

"Would you bleed fah me"I sing

Oh and am wearing a black sweater,black cargo, colored Jordan shoes and a red and black sonic bag.

Hopefully mhi spirit take Akira friend Dem enuh

Dialing Akira's number to ask her if she could pick me up because I still remember that I hang up in Akeil ears.

I got to understand that Akira will be staying with her aunt who is Akeil and Shakeil"s mother for the year before going back to California.

Yea we almost get to bridge and yuh still nuh know fhi cross it jahjah

Hearing a car honk outside I picked up my bag for the night before texting my girls that their boyfriend will be there chauffeur for the night.

I went outside and froze when I saw Akeil exiting the car.

Mhi blct a weh him a do yah

Nuh Akira mhi call

Akira affi go down with verga cause why mhi call this girl fhi come fhi mi and she send dah Dutty mawga boy yah.

Mi call back Akira and asked"weh yuh cousin a do yah"her line immediately went silent before she hang up.

But she rude ehh mn

Chro now him ago start now mhi cah bother enuh

"Garcia yuh nuh plan fhi enter the car"Akeil asked with a mischievous smirk..not replying I enter the car and greet him but he didn't return it

Heavy on the government name tho

"Yuh forgot say yuh hang up in a man ears"He asked bringing me back to reality.

"Umm..umm"I stuttered not sure what to say or how to answer his question

"Umm..umm nothing mn yuh diss mn by hanging up on me something that nobody has ever done"he hissed

"But...."he trailed off

"But wah"I asked

"But it's gonna be a long night"he said finishing up what he was gonna say.

A wah him a talk bout tho

Mhi nuh in a nothing wid him enuh

.....................

1 hour later

It's been one hour since I came and all now Akira friend Dem nuh reach moya and sash deh downstairs watching TV while am in Akeil's room waiting on them.

Weh the f--k Dem deh so long mn

Have patience young girl my subconscious said

"Denique them reach"Akira shouted causing me to fly up off the bed and head out of the room.

If unuh a wonder weh Akeil deh him gone buy KFC for me

When I reach downstairs I realized that one of Akira's friend keeps giving me stink eyes.

A which one a har man Dem mhi tek weh mhi nuh know bout tho God

"Anyways guys this is Tehrya and this is Thaneecia"she said pointing at each of them.

Oh so a Tehrya the Gyal name

"Nice to meet you Tehrya and Thaneecia"The three of us said at the same time

Seeing Akeil walk in I smiled and he smiled back at me before heading in my direction when he in front of me he handed me the bag and said"B them Neva have nuh have nuh barbecue zinger so mhi hot & spicy"and I nod hearing a hissed Akeil and I looked round to see that it was coming from Tehrya.

Oh!

The girl literally hates me for no reason bro

Well she nah be the first and she nah be the last...any Gyal weh nuh like mhi go drop asleep and dead!!.

"Yuh Neva brush yuh teeth this morning cause a couldn't nothing else"Akeil asked dragging me from my thoughts.

Murdaa him nuh have nothing bout him enuh

One thing with me..mhi nuh walk and trouble people she come in here and scream at me and I screamed back I was being fair my subconscious said in fit of laughter

"Mtchh"she hissed again before walking off

Oh that's crazy!!

So we're just gonna ignore the fact that he called you B in front everybody.

Him a own up him girlfriend who's not him girlfriend if that make sense

"Okay guys so we're gonna start the sleepover activities around 6:00"Akira said while walking back to the living room.

Why she make mhi come so early then fah mn chro

"Ok"they all said

"Garcia come nuh"Akeil said while heading towards his room and I followed him.

10 minutes later

"Garcia put down yuh phone nuh and give mhi some a yuh attention"Akeil said causing me to ask if I'm his gf.

"Come on nuh am bored...yuh have mhi yasso a crave yuh attention something weh me neva yet do"he said

"Aii what you wanna do"I asked

"Let us watch a movie or something before the time"I suggested

"Aii"

I reached for the remote on the night stand and power on the TV after the TV powered on I went on Netflix in search of movie which we could both agree with after looking for a movie for which felt like eternity we both agree on watching "Too Hot To Handle"

This yasso soon too hot to handle bc unuh soon start remake the show my subconscious said

"Nuh bother f--k off each other in a aunty Aliyah house now"Akira said from behind the door and we both laugh at what she said.

............

2 hours later

The sleepover was now in full swing and Akira said we will be play Never have I Ever and I nodded.

"Never have I ever went out in the public without panty but we're Jamaicans we call it drawz"Moya said and said"I have" looking around seeing that my hand was the only hand up it made it funny.

What I said next cause everyone to be in a laughing mess."Honestly the doll don't like wear panty"I said and the whole room burst in a fit of laughter except miss nuh brush teeth from morning.

"Akeil ago know weh fhi do wid yuh bout yuh nuh like wear drawz"akira said causing me to playfully roll my eyes and then I heard a hissed knowing it ms.nuh brush teeth from morning.

Yuh affi go down enuh cause why yuh know the girl name and a call har ms.nuh brush teeth from morning

"Girl if yuh nuh like har just avoid her simple if yuh realize from yuh come she nuh see yuh fly a night and pitch a day blct"moya and sash said before I could even open my mouth

That's my girls.. that's my girls

"One thing wid we nuh fight Gyal over man but we nah go stand up and make a gyal beat we tho....if a akeil yuh want yuh nuh f--king take him as long as him want yuh"I said causing everyone to laugh including akira and thaneecia.

"Girl yuh ago leave my cousin-in-law to be yere we could a be friend fhi eternity mhi nuh care yuh nah come diss Denique bc yuh like Akeil and him nuh want yuh"Akira said everybody looking at her shocked

Then a suh she did straight forward

"Yuh know what left mhi aunty blct place to yam head Gyal"Akira said and I tried controlling my laughter

Aye she nuh have nuh limit enuh murdaa god if yuh nuh busy stop yasso

"Let's continue mhi nah make bc a she my sleepover mash up enuh"Akira said and we nod in agreement

After that little session with ms.nuh brush teeth from morning we started to play scavenger hunt and I got excited because of the stuff we're finding will be ours at the end.

There are really expensive

Before we start our next game I hurriedly put away my findings which are:Brand clothing, stacks of money and a few makeup products.

"Arite now mhi tired fhi play hide & seek"I said sitting down on the recliner asking moya to pass some water for me since she was closest to the kitchen area.

"Let's watch movie please"I said and they said alright

Couple minutes in the movie in the movie I heard soft snores looking around I realized that Akira and I was the only one up.

"Mhi wah sleep..which room is mine"I asked her

"Girl don't ask mhi foolishness because yuh know say Akeil ago make yuh sleep in a him room"she said making me roll my eyes playfully.

"Alright mhi ago sleep yere"I said going up the staircase.

Pushing Akeil's room door open I entered and close it behind me looking around the room I didn't see Akeil well am gonna and sleep.

When I Was finish bathing I walked in the room in my towel just to see Akeil sitting on his bed with his eyes pierced on the phone screen I hurriedly pick up my clothes and head back to the bathroom to put them on.

"Think yuh Neva did ago come up"Akeil said from the bathroom door so suppose mhi did naked

"Weh yuh did deh"I asked ignoring his question

"Balcony"he replied

"I have something I wanna talk to you about tomorrow"he said making me anxious to know what he wants to take to me about.

"Ok" I responded

"So come make we guh lay down nuh"he said

Not replying I head towards the bed and lay down some minutes after he joins me... trying to find a comfortable space on the bed to sleep I couldn't.

"Wahm to yuh"he asked

"I'm uncomfortable"I replied

Without replying he pulled me onto him and I immediately felt comfortable.

A lay yuh wah lay down pon him mn

"Alright now"he asked and I nodded waiting for sleep to take me over


Akeil's pov
📍The Anderson's residence
7:00 am

I tried getting up only fhi realize say Denique is still laying in the position she fell asleep in.She sleep like a little newborn baby cause a first mhi see somebody sleep in on position throughout the night.

Seeing my door pushed open I realized it was my mother as she came in the room her mouth fell because she sees a girl laying on me in my bed.

She nah done off a this now enuh and mhi can bet say a Akira send har up yah

"Baby breakfast is downstairs waiting tell your girlfriend when she's awake"she said smiling while
leaving

"Okay mommy" I said

Mhi nuh affi tell bellaz nothing when she wake but mhi nuh hungry so mhi nah nyam the message

Seeing her twisting and turning I assumed that's she's gonna wake anytime soon or she a have a bad dream.

My time fhi get up now enuh cause Ms.Martinez nuh plan fhi wake up

Cah wait fhi she be mhi woman dawg...can have har lock down anytime

Yuh think we still in a the pandemic bout lock down my subconscious laughed

Yuh just know fhi sick mhi stomach bro!!..mtchh

"The breakfast a get cold Akeil hurry up and come down"My mother shouted from downstairs

Mhi know a mhi business she wah nuff up in a enuh but mhi nuh know a who and she cause mhi nah tell har nothing.

Gizee please remember to vote 🌟 and comment
Sorry for my mistakes

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