RATCHASA MAMANEY 2

By prita_krishnan

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a village teenage love story between aththa paiyyan and mama ponnu... More

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EPILOGUE 1
EPILOGUE 2
BONUS CHAPTER

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By prita_krishnan

(sorry guys... I know am too late but I couldn't get proper time sorry... I will try to update soon .

Don't forget please support like always . 

Susi didn't said anything but went from there with vaidhi...

Mahi: ah...appa...

Vettayan: vidu maa.. kolandha vandhruva vidu ..nee po aprama andha vilangadhavanayum papa vayum kootitu veetukku vaa...

Mahi: sari paa...

Mahi went from there with Susi to home...
_____

Azhagi was waiting outside of the college for bus ... Suddenly a jeep stopped before her and inside is valavan...

Valavan: papa.. bus ku waiting ah?

Azhagi: aama mama...

Valavan: vandila yeru Naa drop pandra...

Azhagi: irukattum mama...

Valavan: Ada vaa maa... Un anna vandhutaanaam ipo dha Chitappa phone panni sonnaru..

Azhagi: vandhutaana? Avana....

She ran towards the jeep and sat down beside valavan,

Azhagi: vandi edu mama inikku Avana thoraththi thoraththi velakkamaathala adikkala en peru azhaginiyal paandiyan illa ah..

Valavan: sari dha oru mudivodha irukka.. chera seththan..

Valavan started to drive and Azhagi looked at him...

Azhagi mv: kekkalama vendama? Mmm..

Valavan: enna kekanum?

Azhagi: haain?

Valavan: illa maa en moonjiye paathutu irukka adha edhachu kekkanumannu ketta ..

Azhagi: naalaikku vela irukka unakku?

Valavan: Naalaikku leave vidra alavukku enna vishayam?

Azhagi: naalikku Feb 14..

Valavan: adha paththi commited dha kavala padanum Naa edhukku kalavala padanum? Enakku dhaa aal illaye .. idho veedu vandhuruchu ..

Azhagi glared at him and climbed down from Jeep and said,

Azhagi: mama...

Valavan: yen maa?

Azhagi: ipdiye mada saambrani ah irundhannu vai kadaisi varaikkum single ah dhaa da irukkanum maanga maanga ..  nee ellam kadaisi varaikkum ondikattaya irundhu dha saaga pora peh..

She hit his head with her book and went inside angrily... Valavan rubbed his head and looked at her...

Valavan: ippo Naa enna thappa solnannu ivlo kovama enna adichutu iva pora? Puriyalaye..
_______

Azhagi went to chera's room and saw him sleeping peacefully in his bed .. 

Azhagi : thoonguriya iru...

She took ice cubes from fridge and mixed it in half buget of water... she took the buget and went to his room and poured in his head making him shreik and woke up...

Azhagi: enna da Nalla kulu Kulu nnu irukka?

Chera: ading gommala unna..

He took a something to hit her but before that azhagi started to beat him with broom...

Azhagi: yaartayum sollama odiya pora? Ah? Odukaali .. inikku podra podula veetta vittu nee kaala velila eduthu vaikka koodadhu...

Chera: aai aai vidri... Ahh...

At the same time Susi n mahi who came back from temple saw the scenario  with wide eyes...

Azhagi was chasing cheran and sengu sitting in sofa and eating chips n looking at fight...

Chera: maa.. nee peththa pisasu adikira maa valikkudhu...

Susi: aii azhagi... Evlo dhairiyam d unakku?

Azhagi: enna susila? Un pullaikku vakkalaththa nee? Ah? Ippo ennandra?

Susi: yen d pudhu velakkamaru vachu adichutu irukka pinjupochuna... Kudri.. pinnadi already pinja velakkamaru irukku adha eduthuko...

Chera: ahhhh... Neeyellam oru thaayaa?

Susi Glared at him and azhagi Smirked at him... Suddenly a laughter sound filled the whole place and they around to see it's mahi...

She is laughing loudly and clutching her stomach... Chera looked at mahi with smile...

When mahi noticed that everyone now looking at her she ran towards her room immediately blushing..

Chera : maa...

Susi: azhagi... ellathayum clean Pannu po..

Azhagi: ok mii...

She came near Susi and kissed vaidhi's cheeks and ran towards her room..

Chera followed behind her and entered into the room and saw her standing near window...

He moved towards her and said,

Chera: mudhal muraya neenga sirikiradha Naa ketta...  Azhaga irundhuchu... Ini ipdiye sirichutey irunga ....

Mahi didn't said anything but blushed and looked down ..

Chera: apram... Mm...

He took a parcel from bag and gave it to her...

Chera: pudichirundha naalaikku kattikonga... Um... Happy valentine's day.. 

Mahi didn't know what to do...
_____

Kallu was sitting in temple pond and thinking about something deeply...

Kallu mv: pesama... Sengu mama sonnapla nammaley poi love ah solliruvoma? Appovachu andha kirukku payalukku puriyum ah?

Suddenly someone tapped her shoulder she turned around to see it's Veera ...

Kallu: hey maamzey... Inga enna pandra?

Veera: adha Naa kekkanum Inga Thaniya utkaandhu thanni paaththu enna olarittu irukka?

Kallu: yosichutu irundha mama...

Veera: edha paththi?

He sat beside her and started to eat prasatham and feeding her a bit...

Kallu: vaalkaiyya paththi dha mama...

Veera: yen en thangathukku enna? Nalla dhana irukka?

Kallu mv: unna maari oru cooker ah kooda vachutu Naa epdi sandhosama irukradhu?

Veera: aai enna d thirumba amaithiya irukka?

Kallu: onnula naalikku enna plan uh?

Veera: naalaikka? Medicine supplements maduraikku anupanum.. apram oru periya order pesirukka Kidaikira maari irukku... Adhu mattum kidachudhu.. apram ayya dha raaja..

Kallu looked at him boringly...

Kallu: unnayella peththangala illa senjaangala? Yen ipdi irukka?

Veera: Naa enna d panna?

Kallu: pinna valentine's day ku enna plan nu ketta business paththi solitu irukka...

Veera: oh adhuva... Adhu edhukku enakku...

Kallu looked at him with narrowed eyes,

Kallu mv: pesama Ivana indha thannikulla mukki kondralama?

Veera: enna d apdi paakura?

Kallu: onnula Naa kelambura...

Veera: aai indha d ..

Kallu: enna?

Veera took a bunch of Jasmine flower and gave it to her...

Veera: velila oru paaththa unakku dha gundu malli pudikumla adhaa vaanguna... thirumbu naaney vacchu vidra...

Kallu smiled and turned around and he pinned the flower on her hair...

Veera: naalaikku half day leave podu velila polaam...

Kallu: haain?

Veera: kaadhum pocha? Half day leave podu d naalaikku velila polaam... Ippo Po ..

Kallu was shocked to the core and Veera went from there casually...

Kallu: ennaley nadandhuchu Inga?
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Malar is cooking dinner and maayan hugged her from behind and kissed her ear ..

Maayan: malaru... En Chellam .

Malar: ayyo chumma iru mama... Innum kalyanam aagi Rendu naal aagudhunu ninappa? 28 varusham aachu ...

Maayan: adhukku? Naa onnum 50 varusham aanalum ipdi dha iruppa aah...

Malar: vaai nalladha irukku ...

Maayan: aai Chella..

Malar: enna mama?

Maayan: edhukku di ellarum thappu sonappo kooda nee enta vandha? Kalyanam kattita?

Malar: ellarum un veli thottradha paathaanga aana unmayana maayan yaarunnu indha malar ku Mattum dha theriyum...

Maayan: malaru... Apdiye unna kadichu thinganum pola irukku...

Malar: yaar ungala thadutha?

Maayan: hey hey...  Un pulla dha vandhu ammeyyyy nu picha kaaran maari   kathuvaanla Avan dha..

At the same time they heard veera's shout.....

Veera: maa pasikkudu...

Malar: varan da ok ... Neenga roomla irunga Naa poi ennanum paathutu muff ruller..

Maayan: seekiram vandhuru d ...

Say so he moved to his room...
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After dinner everyone went to their room... Meenakshi was cleaning kitchen counter..

Vettayan came there and asked,

Vettayan: adiye kundhani advance Happy valentine's day d...

He kissed her ear and she elbowed him..

Vettayan: ahhh.. yen d?

Meenu: dhoraikku ilama oosal aaduthunnu ninappo.. valentine's day kondadura moonja paaru ...

Vettayan: yen indha moonjila kondaduna othukka maatiyakkum.. nee venamna podi.. mayyilu...

Meenu: seruppu pinchurum unakku...

Vettayan laughed and hugged her... She kissed his chest and whispered,

Meenu: i love you maa...

Vettayan: injaaarrraa... Ah ..
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Susi sitting in bed and analysing a patient's file ..  arjun pulled the file from her and Glared at her..

Susi: mama enna aachu?

Arjun: enna mudhalla gavani d apram file pakkalam...

Susi smiled at him and sat down inbetween his legs and asked...

Susi: en Chella mama ku enna Venum?

Arjun: needha venum. 

Susi: mch..  ungalukku onnum ilama oosal aaditu illa... Peththi eduthachu..

Arjun: adhukku enna pandradhu.. peththi key kalyanam aanalum Naa ipdi dha iruppa...

Susi: sari edhukku ippo file ah pudunguna?

Arjun: naalaikku enga polaam?

Susi: edhukku?

Arjun: valantines day. .. 

Susi: mama.. namma onnum 18 20 vayasu chinna pasanga ponnunga illa. Idhellam kondada..

Arjun: mch.. en udambula usur irukka vara indha kondaduvan d undkooda... Ippo edhachu maamoool kudu.  

Susi: ah.. adhellaam illa poi thoongunga...

Arjun: nee enna d kudukradhu .  Naanwy eduthukura...

He tightened his hold on her and flipped her underhim and slowly started to kiss her ..
_____

Chanu sitting in bed and pouting...

Chanu: vara sonna varamattenu soliruchu mama... Ippo enna pandradhu? Naaney pesama kelambitura .

Suddenly a small stone hitted her head,

Chanu: ahhh...  endha naadhari da innerathula kallu pottu viladradhu?

She turned towards window and saw a shadow...

Chanu: aiyyo pei...

"Aai naandha d..  kadhava thora di"

Chanu: aaii..  mama... Needhana ?

Sengu: seekiram d..

Chanu: ah idho vandhutaa...

Chanu opened backside door and sengu came inside and went inside her room..

Chanu locked the door and turned towards him..

Chanu: vara mattannu sonna ippo enna?

Sengu: ah poludhu pola indha pakkama walking vandha adhaa pisasu mulichutu irukkanu pakka vandha...

Chanu: mch... Happy valentine's day mama...

Sengu: mmm..mm..

Chanu Glared at him and mumbled,

Chanu mv: vaaya thorandhu sonnadha enna? Me too.. vaa.   Ivanaila vachukittu.   Uff ..

Sengu: enna d yosikira?

Chanu: onnula ...

Sengu: sari wish mattum panna gift enga d?

Chanu: mmmkmm.. kilikira kilikku adhu onnudha Inga korachal...

Sengu: enna d ?

Chanu: ah onnula .. adhellaam onnum vaangala ..

Sengu smiled at her pouting face and took her foot making her shriek a little...

Chanu: ah mama enna pandra?

Sengu: iru d...

He placed her foot on his chest and removed old anklet and took another new one from his pocket...

Chanu gasped seeing it .. after put new anklet on one leg he took another leg and placed it on his chest and made her wear another..

He slightly traced the anklet and asked,

Sengu: epdi d irukku?

Chanu: mama ..

Sengu: enna d?

Chanu jumped on his lap and hugged her tightly and whispered

Chanu: I love you mama...

Sengu: i love you too d ..

He kissed her forehead making her close her eyes... He started to kiss another her neck and she fisted on his shirt...

Chanu: um...mama...

Sengu: shhh... Saththam podadha..

He pulled her into his lap and started to smooch her shoulder...

Continued...

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