RATCHASA MAMANEY 2

By prita_krishnan

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a village teenage love story between aththa paiyyan and mama ponnu... More

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EPILOGUE 1
EPILOGUE 2
BONUS CHAPTER

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By prita_krishnan

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He looked at her face after a deep kiss ... Chanu opened her eyes and looked at him and trying to catch her breath...

She touched her swollen lips and looked at sengu...

Sengu: p...bha..  um... Ch...

Before he say anything she stopped him by placing her palm on his lips...

Chanu: un ooththa vaayala edhachu solli nalla moment ah keduththu vidadha...

Sengu removed her hands and chuckled and kissed her forehead..

Sengu: thoongu...

Chanu laid on his chest and hugged him tightly... 

chanu: padathulaila pakkum bodhu epdi irukumnu yosippa.. aana ipdi irukumnu ninaikkala..

sengu: epdi?

chanu: orumaari vaithula pattamboochi parakara maari light ah oru vali.. apram ..

sengu: apram..

he asked huskily and pulled her more towards him... 

chanu gulped her nervousness and hide her face on his chest... 

chanu: adi vayithula irundhu edhoo... oru liq...

sengu grabbed her hair and raised her face towards him and whispered against her lips...

sengu: vena d... idhukku mela edhum solladha...

chanu: solluva...

sengu: kalayanam vara edhum panna koodadhunnu irukka... pesama thoongu..

chanu: enna panna koodadhunnu irukka mama?

sengu: ah? pullu pudunga koodadhunnu pesama thoongu manushana summa nondi vittutey irukka.. aptram naa endhiruchu poiruva nee thaniya dha thoonganu..

chanu: ahn... sari sari pogadha naa pesamatta..

Both of them hugged each other tightly and slept like that...
______
Next morning,

Everyone sitting together for breakfast.. sengu looking at banana leaf curiously...

Chera: enna da vaala elaya suththi paathutu irukka?

Sengu: idhellam oru elaya da? Ithunoondu epdi da namakku paththum?

Azhagi: elayava da saapda poringa rendu perum?

Veera: nalla kelu d... Avan Avan pasila irukaan.. ivainga Ela chinnadha irukkunu panjayathu panitu irukaainga...

Suddenly they heard jeep sound...

Veera: yaaru da?

Chera: Ada namma killi mama...

Azhagi saw valavan entered into house and smiled at everyone...

Valavan: hi da..

"Hi maamzey"

chera: ada namma killi mamaley..

valavan: dei adi vaangiye saava enta...

He looked at azhagi and said,

Valavan: papa epdi irukka? Sorry da ma oru case adhanala function ku vara mudiyala...

They looked at valavan confusedly and sengu asked,

Sengu: enna mama solra? Avan en thangachi azhagi...

Azhagi: na un akka.. thangachi illa...

Sengu: chi summa iru..

Chera: Ava correct ah dhana da thambi solra?

Valavan: appo idhu papa illaya..

Suddenly someone said,

"Papa Inga irukka.."

Hearing the voice everyone turned around to see chanu standing there...

Valavan: papa...

Chanu: enakku anni ku kooda unakku vidhyasam theriyala.. andha latchanathula nee veetukku vandhutu pora... kadaisiya nee veetukku vandhadhu 5 varushathukku munna... apram epdi adayalam theriyum?

valavan: sorry da kutty maa... oor oorah transfer pottu ippo dha settle agirukka.. ini inga dha iruppa adikkadi varuvan...

chanu: solra seiriyannu paapom .. vaa vandhu utkaaru onna saapdalaam.. maa... valavan anna vandhurukku..

meenu: vara vara.. vada .. utkaaru da saapdlam..

valavan: ah idho vandhuta...

he sat beside azhagi and chanu sat beside sengu... susi and meenu started to serve them..

sengu: maa aththa neengalum utkaarunga... onna saapdalam..

susi: naanga utkaandha yaaru da parimaaruva?

kallu: naangaley eduthukurom...

chera: adhaana enagalukku enna kai vilangamaya pochu.. utkaarunga..

valavan looked at azhagi and smiled,

valavan: sorry dey papa.. naa unna kutty mannu ninachudha anikku...

azhagi: muththam kuduthinga theriyum... 

cheran who heard this converstion looked at valavan with wide eyes..

chera: yow mama..

valavan: dei papa nu niachu flying kiss dhaan da kudutha...nee ninaikira maari illa da...

chera: olunga iru illanu vai...

sengu: urichu uppu dhadavi thonga vitruvom...

valavan: dei idhu epdi dha andha last la utkaandhu irukavanukku ketuchu?

azhagi: triplets telepathy ... we can feel each other emotions..

valavan: enna elavo...

after breakfast susi told eveyone to get ready for temple..

susi: dei kovilukku ponum ready aagunga.. 

"OK"

meenu: valava neeyum ready aagu da... iru satta vesti thara...

They went to their room to change their dresses... Chanu locked the door and trying to select dress... suddenly she heard door knocking sound..

Chanu: yaar adhu ..

She opened the door and saw it's sengu..

Chanu: enna mama?

Sengu: amma idha kudukka sonnanga...

He handed her a bag..  she opened the bag and saw a purple & yellow colour half saree...

Chanu: ii..azhaga irukku mama.. thank you....

Sengu rolled his eyes and said,

Sengu: naan onnum vaangala amma vaangitu vandhadhu maathitu seekiram vaa..

Chanu: ok mama..

She changed into the half saree and smiled at her reflection...

Chanu: semmaya irukku...

At the same time azhagi came there to check if chanu ready or not....

Azhagi: aii.. ready aag.. oh.. wow..

Chanu: epdi irukku anni? Aththa vaangi kuduthadhu..

Azhagi: amma va?

Chanu nodded her head as yes...

Azhagi: amma enta sollavey illaye... Mmm..

She ran towards Susi who is arranging everything for going to temple...

Azhagi: amma...amma...amma....

Susi: yedhukku d ipdi kaththitu vara?

Azhagi: nee chanu ku edhachu dress vaangi kuduthiya?

Susi: illaye yen?

Azhagi: onnula...

She again ran inside without saying anything making Susi Rolled her eyes and mumbled,

Susi: paithiyakari.. edhukku vandhannu sollama odita..

Azhagi saw chanu twirling infront of mirror and smiling at the dress...

Azhagi: sengu dhana kondu vandhu kuduthaana?

Chanu: aama yen ?

Azhagi: right uh..

Chanu: enna anni?

Azhagi: dhora dha unakaga indha dress vaangitu vandhurukaan..

Chanu: nijama va?

Azhagi nodded her head as yes making chanu blush...

Chanu mv: mama ku en mela niraya aasa irukku... Aana yen solla maatingudhu... Mm... Sariyana kaloolimangan..

Azhagi: mmmkm...madam.. neenga vetka pattadhu podhum... Kelambalama time aachu...

Susi , meenu,  chera & azhagi sat in valvan's jeep... Kallu went with Veera in his bullet...

Sengu: dei naanga epdi varadhu?

Chanu: adhana.. nalla kelu mama...

Meenu: yenda kathuringa.. adhaa appo voda bike irukkula eduthutu avala kootitu vaada..

Chanu: lusu mii.. appa saavi ah eduthutu poitaaru naanga bike ah enna thallita vara mudiyum?

Chera: appo cycle la vaanga da.. nee vandi edu mama...

Sengu: adingu dei...

But they went from there making sengu huffed in irritation.. 

Chanu: mama nee kavala padadha.. unna vacchu Naa otitu pora...

Sengu: nee vera yen d vaa..

He took cycle,

Sengu: utkaaru d...

Chanu went backside but sengu stopped her...

Sengu: aai.. munnadi vaadi..

Chanu: yen mama? Pinnadiye utkaandhukura..

Sengu: edhukku last time maari keela vilarakka? Olunga gate kulla vaa...

Chanu pouted at him and sat down down in front inbetween his hands..

While driving he looked at pouting chanu and asked,..

Sengu: edhachu paadu d... Bore adikkudhu...

Chanu looked at him and started to sing...

Velayaattu pechula
Vesa oosi eathura
Nee lesaa paakka
Minnal kottiduthe

Sengu smiled,

Oli paanja onmugam
Manasoda modhuthe
Nee pesum pechu
Aiyyo alliduthae..

She leaned on him and started to sing..

Ennennavo unkitta
Sollavaum thonudhadaa
Kaadhal vanthe sattunu
Sallada poduthadaa..

He smiled and kissed her forehead,

Nadu nenjula onnoda vaasam
Enna edhedho pannudhadi
Thaangaadha sandhosam
Naan enna seiven pulla...

Chanu: Kangal edho
Theda kalavaada
Nenjam thaanae
Paada parandhoda...

Sengu: podhum podhum ellarum nammalaye paakuraanga..
Chanu looked around and saw people looking at them with smile making her blush and hide her face on his chest...
______

Azhagi was taking water from temple pond at the same time valavan came there...

Valavan: papa kudra.. Naa eduthutu vara..

Azhagi: illa mama paravalla..

Valavan: Ada kudu maa...

He took water pot from her and started to walk towards temple...

Azhagi: mama...

Valavan: enna maa?

Azhagi: aama.. oru case vishayam ah velila ponanu sonniye ena case uh?

Valavan: vaidehi nu oru ponnoda death case..

Azhagi s steps halted and looked at valla..

Azhagi: Ava suicide dhana panikitta adhula visarikka enna irukku?

Valavan: adhu suicide illa murder.. aama unakku andha ponna theriyum ah?

Azhagi shocked to the core hearing that...

Azhagi: murder ah?

Continued...

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