Reviewer: jungkooksistah
Author: strickingshadow
Book Title : 7/10
The title "Mariana Luanthes" is good but it can be something much more creative l.
Cover: 5.5/10
The cover of the book is beautiful and neat with its perfect design. But it didn't catch any attention.
Blurb: 10/10
The blurb is very short and perfect. As it makes one's curious about what will happen in the story.
Writing style: 10/10
The writing style is pretty good. It's perfect
Character Development: 9/10
I like the characters especially Lady Marine, she's very sweet, kind and mysterious woman. Also Mr. Stephan character is good too, he's fun person.
Grammar: 9.5/10
The grammar is perfect except at some part you used past tense when the story is going in present tense.
Vocabulary: 9.5/10
The vocab you used in your chapters are so good it's just you have to improve yourself a little bit in the vocabulary and have to use good vocab in the story.
Pace: 10/10
The pace of the story is amazing. I really enjoyed reading this story.
Overall Impression: 8.5/10
Overall the book is perfect you just need to improve in the title and cover.
Rating on Book : 9/10
The chapters are so good, I hope the other will also enjoy this story. I personally like chapter 6 when the dragon start talking with Mariana.
TOTAL: 88/100
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