Demon Slayer rewrite

By LegendOfAlpine

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This fic (at first) follows the basic storyline of Demon Slayer, starting with chapter 106 of the manga, foun... More

Introduction 1. Original characters
Introduction 2. The Kazuyuki Clan
Introduction 3. Ice Breathing and the Ice Imbuing Technique
Introduction 5. A few changed details
Introduction 6. Nezuko Kamado's alteration
Prologue
Season 1 Episode 1. Hantengu arrives
Season 1 Episode 2. Gyokko arrives
Season 1 Episode 3. Kimi and Kimiko arrive
Season 1 Episode 4. The fifth demon
Season 1 Episode 5. Muichiro remembers
Season 1 Episode 6. Kimi finds Muichiro
Season 1 Episode 7. Muichiro with the mark
Season 1 Episode 8. Gyokko is defeated
Season 1 Episode 9. One upper rank demon left
Season 1 Episode 10. Fear and resentment
Season 1 Episode 11. Hantengu is defeated
Season 1 Episode 12. Aftermath of Gyokko and Hantengu's deaths
Season 1 Episode 13. Upper rank meeting
Season 2 Episode 1. Hashira meeting
Season 2 Episode 2. Hashira training begins
Season 1 Episode 3. Strength training with the Stone Hashira
Season 1 Episode 4. Endurance training with the Ice Hashira
Season 2 Episode 5. The first task of endurance training
Season 2 Episode 6. The second task of endurance training
Season 2 Episode 7. Letter from Muichiro
Season 2 Episode 8. The third task of endurance training
Season 2 Episode 9. Into the Infinity Castle
Season 3 Episode 1. Giyu and Tanjiro fight Akaza
Season 3 Episode 2. Kokushibo, Muichiro's ancestor
Season 3 Episode 3. Kimi and Kimiko meet Kiroyuki
Season 3 Episode 4. Genya's sacrifice
Season 3 Episode 5. Kirokomi Kazuyuki
Season 3 Episode 6. A fatal wound
Season 3 Episode 7. Forced to the surface
Season 3 Episode 8. Countdown
Season 3 Episode 9. Aftermath of Muzan's death
Season 3 Episode 10. Joining the Kazuyuki Clan
Season 3 Episode 11. Muichiro and Yuichiro

Introduction 4. Removed characters

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By LegendOfAlpine

Now for the characters that I've removed. The characters that I've removed are Mitsuri Kanroji, Aoi Kanzaki, Kiyo, Sumi, and Naho.

I didn't think Mitsuri fit into the story very well in terms of writing, didn't match the theme of the story, and just overall felt like a character that was very out of context.

Mitsuri's reasoning for becoming a hashira was extremely ridiculous and incredibly shallow compared to that of the other hashira, and had nothing to do with demons at all. She's always had everything that she needed to live a proper life, unlike everyone else, making her reasoning for becoming a hashira even shallower. The fact that she threw a whiny hissy fit and said her day was ruined just because someone didn't respond to her when she said hello to them says a lot about how spoiled she is, and she is therefore the opposite of the other hashira.

Mitsuri wasn't even a decent character in terms of writing, and was really just the second worst character. She was also incredibly useless as a character. She could easily be taken out of the story without having to change much, so that's what I'm doing. The story is better off without her.

The story is also better off without Aoi, Kiyo, Sumi, and Naho. They're overall useless characters and aren't necessary for the story or its narrative.

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