So yeah re-reading this makes me realize (and cringe) on how much i've improved along the way.
Thus at some point sooner or later i will make a full rewrite on this, better dialogue and stuff, same will say with the original TvZ.
Join Michael, Jimmy, Carla and a bunch of random passenger's in their trip on rails through Amtrak's mainline... More
So yeah re-reading this makes me realize (and cringe) on how much i've improved along the way.
Thus at some point sooner or later i will make a full rewrite on this, better dialogue and stuff, same will say with the original TvZ.