๐—ฆ๐—ข๐— ๐—˜๐—ช๐—›๐—˜๐—ฅ๐—˜ ๐—ข๐—ก๐—Ÿ๐—ฌ ๏ฟฝ...

By firery_vry

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"๐’๐Ž ๐–๐‡๐˜ ๐ƒ๐Ž๐'๐“ ๐–๐„ ๐†๐Ž ๐’๐Ž๐Œ๐„๐–๐‡๐„๐‘๐„ ๐Ž๐๐‹๐˜ ๐–๐„ ๐Š๐๐Ž๐–." ... More

๐— ๐—”๐—œ๐—ก ๐—–๐—”๐—ฆ๐—ง
๐—–๐—Ÿ๐—”๐—ก ๐—œ๐—ก๐—™๐—ข
๐— ๐—จ๐—œ๐—–๐—›๐—œ๐—ฅ๐—ข ๐—œ๐—ก๐—™๐—ข
๐—ฃ๐—Ÿ๐—”๐—ฌ๐—Ÿ๐—œ๐—ฆ๐—ง
๐—ฃ๐—ฅ๐—ข๐—Ÿ๐—ข๐—š๐—จ๐—˜
|1| New Beginning
|2| First Day
|3| New Friend
|4| Graduation Day
|5| Team 7
|6| Survival Test
เผ„๐–ฆน๐™๐™๐™š ๐™ƒ๐™ž๐™™๐™™๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™ˆ๐™ž๐™จ๐™ฉ ๐™‘๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก๐™–๐™œ๐™šเผ„๐–ฆน
|7| C-Ranked Mission
|8| Momochi Zabuza
|9| Kakashi Of The Sharingan And Muichiro Of the Moya
|10| Just Who Are These People
|11| Haku
|12| Number One Hyperactive Knucklehead Ninja
|13| Land Of Waves Mission Complete
โ€ปThe chunin examsโ€ป
|14| Sand Sibling
|15| the Chunin Exams
|16| Rookie 10
|17| Written Exams
|18| Forest Of Death
|19| Panic In The Forest
|20| That Snake!
|21| Another One
|22| Demon?
|23| Force
|24| SET YOUR HEART ABLAZE
|25| Preliminaries
|26| Per-Finals
|27| Byakugan v/s Byakugan
|28| Preliminaries Ends
|29| New Sensei's
|30| Final
|31| Zero Motivation: Guy With Cloud Envy
|32| At Long Last
๐–ฃKonoha Crush๐–ฃ
|33| The Obi Sash Demon
|34| Under Attack
|35| Brother?
|36| Tokito v/s Demon
|37| Watch The Hands!
|38| Defeating An Upper Moon
|39| Undiscovered
โจทThe Search For Tsunadeโจท
|40| Unpleasant guess
|41| Eye to Eye
|42| New Jutsu
|44| Gamble

|43| Not There Yet

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By firery_vry

━━━━━━ Not There Yet ━━━━━━

━━━ Third person

The Submergence of destruction, also known as Hakai no suibotsu no jutsu, is an unknown secret technique in the Shinobi world.The jutsu was created by Tomioka Giyuu. One of the swordsmen that fought in the final battle against Muzak Kibutsuji. He was known as the water hashira and created water breathing eleventh form: dead calm.

'Submergence of destruction 'is an SS ranked Jutsu that is very complicated and can only be performed once as it takes up most of the user's chakra.

Muichiro hummed as she read through the stroll that Jiraiya had given her. She laid on the grass bored and only looked up to see Naruto progress before going back to the scroll.

The Jutsu can only be performed on water because the user must not draw their chakra to curtain parts of their body but instead outwards.

The user must draw their chakra outward so that it impacts the surface that they own.

When on water the user must focus and split their chakra into two, inside and outside. The chakra inside will sustain the user so that they are able to properly stand on the water while the chakra outside must take the shape of a monstrous creature.

This sub version is specifically designed for covert operations, enabling a surprising attack on enemies by pulling them underwater. Once under water the enemy's body should be shredded to pieces.

But when the full version is performed the creature is at your will and will. It will surround the user and act as a while that fights on their behalf.

"This is so stupid!" Naruto yelled out of frustration.

"Tell me about it..." Muichiro mumbled as she stood up and started walking towards a nearby lake.



























Muichiro sighed as she focused her chakra on her legs and walked across the water until she was in the center. She then took out the scroll and read the words; split the user's chakra into two.

She frowned 'How am I supposed to do that?' The young Tokito silently stood on the water thinking how she could draw chakra out from her body.

Suddenly she heard the sound of trees ruffling. She quickly turned around ready to swing if anything tried to attack her, but nothing.

From the same trees games out a pitch black bird with strangely long eyelashes. "MUICHIRO-SAMA!!!!"

"Ginko?"

Suddenly the said bird came crashing down on Muichiro. Ginko's wings were spread across Muichiro's face making the younger unable to see.

When Muichiro was able to remove Ginko's, she held the bird in front and took into account how tired the bird was. "Muichiro-sama! I missed you." Ginko cried.

"Ginko what are you doing here?" Muichiro asked. "I came looking for you, Muichiro-sama. I couldn't possibly trust that toad Sanin to look after that hyperactive nut job and you!"

Ginko answered. Muichiro just nodded along not know what she should say next, but think Ginko seemed to have taken a look at the open scroll in her masters and and read it.

"You're learning Submergence of destruction Jutsu?" Ginko questioned and Muichiro nodded. "I am but I don't know how to split my chakra and combine is with the water..." Muichiro stats.

"Well you're in luck, Muichiro-sama!!" Ginko shouted as she happily flapped her wings. "I just so happen to know how it's done!"

"Try releasing you're Ki, Muichiro-sama!" Ginko said as she grabbed the stroll from Muichiro's hand and opened it before flying up.

She did it so that Muichiro wouldn't get the stroll wet.

"Remember your time in the hidden mist village?"

"No."

Ginko sighed. "At that time you released your KI which affected the area that you were in."

"Are you sure Ginko? This is water... there is no telling what would happen if I do that..." Muichiro said. But Ginko hushed her.

"Trust me, Muichiro-sama."

Muichiro signed and did as she was told. Out of nowhere, the earth began to tremble, causing a stir among the birds and other animals to hastily darted away in a frenzied frenzy, sensing the impending danger that was around them. It was a captivating sight as a powerful, blue aura engulfed Muichiro. The girl's hair was standing up as she struggled to maintain herself in the water.

Suddenly she slipped. Muichiro plunged into the water below, where the young girl desperately struggled to swim to the surface. However, the precious gold fan that had been given to her by Douma became an burden, dragging her down.

As she sunk deeper, a large hand pulled her out. Muichiro's face planted on grass as she started to cough out all the water that had gone into her lungs.

"MUICHIRO-SAMA!!" Ginko cried out as she immediately rushed over to her master. "I'm so sorry!! I WAS WRONG!" the bird cried but Muichiro just waved her off and signaled that she was fine.

When she had stopped coughing she turned to the person that had saved her. There stood a fairly tall young man of a lean muscular stature and pale complexion. He has unruly black hair of uneven lengths that sticks up in tufts around his head, that he wears tied back in a low messy ponytail at the base of his neck. His bangs fall over his eyes in an uneven fringe. His eyes are sharp and moderately large, their irises a deep sapphire that fades to a lighter blue and their pupils a bluish-black, and are framed by thin eyebrows.

The man appeared to be young in Muichiro's eyes, but the young Tokito took to account the uniforms he was wearing, it was a dark cyan-tinted version what Muichiro's cloth but the said male had a haori that's split down the middle into two different patterns: the right one a solid dark red, and the left one geometrically patterned with rhombi of green, orange, and yellow.

"Who are you?" Muichiro questioned as she stood up from her spot. The man seemed to have been taken at back by her voice.

"Tomioka Giyuu."























Muichiro had spent hours as she was currently smoking wet while Tomioka stood on the side watching her.

"Don't forget this Tokito." Giyuu said as he started to make his way over to Muichiro who was on her knees panting.

"Imagine there is another person in you." He then points to Muichiro's chest and lower half. "All it takes is coordination. Think of this as a heart. The right side of your heart is responsible for receiving chakra and distributing it throughout your body, while the left side of your heart is responsible for releasing that chakra. The chakra comes out from the left side like a combination." He explained then told Muichiro to copy him.

He stood in front of her. As he let out a deep breath, his hands stretched out from his chest, gradually descending to his hips, and in an instant, the water began to tremble. Muichiro had a hard stand but when it stopped she froze.

She saw a large beast in front of her. It had sharp water claws. When it saw Muichiro it was about to attack her but it stopped when placed his hand in front of her.

The beats stood there staring confused at the sudden act. It then disappeared.

"You see what you need to do?" Tomioka said.

Muichiro slightly nodded and got into position. She closed eyes and placed her hand to chest. She took a deep breath in, her hair suddenly started to levitate in the hair.

Tomioka's eyes widened because of this and decided to take a step back from Muichiro.

When she exhaled and lowered her hand to her hip. The seal, accused of stealing her atom, began to glow increasingly brighter. Suddenly the seal started to engulf Muichiro's body with an illuminating turquoise color.

As before the water below started to rumble, now even a few seconds have started to increase. Trees fall rapidly and the water below has been getting pushed away by the massive aura around Muichiro's.

Naruto, who was deep in the woods with Jiraiya, felt the rumbling and accidentally dropped his water balloon.

"What was that?" He questioned the noticed that rumbling strong came from the direction Muichiro's when.

Jiraiya, who was snoring away, felt the ground shaking and immediately woke up. "Naruto! What's going on?" He asked if the blond only struggled his shoulders with a worried expression on his face.

"I don't know, but it's coming from the direction Mui-chan went off!!" He yelled then started running towards the area, Jiraiya quickly stood up and started running after the blond boy.

But when they reached the lake, Naruto was about to call out to Muichiro, but Jiraiya's hand clasped over his mouth. Naruto wanted to ask why he did that but when he followed the older man's line of sight he froze. They saw a large creature that resembled a dragon.

Its entire body was made out of water, it's main body being a lighter Azure blue, while his talons and horns colored in more of a darker midnight blue.

It also emits light from different areas of its body, notably his eyes that seem to have a blue flame effect, and the scales on its wings that emit an aqua glow.

It possesses a total of six large wings on his body (three on each side) Behind those wings is its massive tail, which resembles bird-like feathering.

It possesses two horns on its head that resembles that of a goat, with a blue gradient that gradually fades to black.

it's front beak is incredibly sharp and possesses very sharp teeth, albeit a low amount. There are four sets of nails on each of the four talons, being very long and sharp with a gradient.

The dragon raised is claws and heavy water fall follower, Naruto saw that it was reaching for Muichiro's head so he quickly took out a Kunai and threw it at the beast.

But sadly the Kunai got stuck floating in the body of the beast.

When the beast saw Naruto it quickly tried rushing over to him making the blond hair boy shrink in fear.

Before the best could reach Naruto its body started to deform am before being submerged into the water. Naruto quickly directed his attention to Muichiro's and saw that she was lying face first on the water.



























Muichiro's rubbed her eyes and woke up, she realized the Jiraiya and Naruto hadn't woken her up.

The young Tokito sighed and got up from her bed and looked outside the window and saw Naruto training with his water balloon.

She quickly took a shower and found something to eat before heading out. It was like this for four days.

The two rookie ninjas would pass out by dawn and wake up before sunrise to train. Muichiro kept working on the Jutsu, but she couldn't help but to get frustrated when it would deform the moment she created it.

But until one day the show got it. "You have to enter a state of tranquility." Giyuu stated. "You keep worrying about your surroundings when the thing you should be focusing on is the Jutsu."

On the fifth day, Naruto popped his balloon.

They were eating breakfast and Naruto used both his hands and made the water swirl in different directions before it burst on Muichiro.

He immediately apologized to her, but Muichiro told him that it was okay. He then went on to explain that how the inn keepers car was the one who taught him how to do it.

Muichiro deadpanned and turned to Jiraiya. "Even a damn cat is a better teacher than you..." She said,

They went to the training grounds and Jiraiya showed Naruto the next step.

The second step for Naruto- which was to pop the rubber ball, as for the 'Submergence of destruction' for Muichiro, she was having a hard time finding that tranquility within her.

It's been three weeks and the two rookie ninjas still haven't mastered their technique.

Currently Naruto and Muichiro are sitting under a tree. Muichiro held Naruto's arms in her hands as she healed the boy pain.

"Mui-chan?" Naruto called. Muichiro hummed and motioned for him to go on. "Y-you never really knew your parents right?" He asked hesitant to which Muichiro just nodded along. "Have you even felt money because of that?"

Muichiro stopped working on his arms and thought before looking back at Naruto. She saw a hint of envy on his face as a child and his parents passed by then eating popsicles.

"If I'm being honest... I've never flet lonely because of the people in my life." She started. "I always had Tsunade nii, Shizune and Jiji." She then let the glowing green die. "Look Naruto, you have Kaka, Sasuke, and Sakura. But most importantly, you have me, your sister."

He started at Muichiro which was shocking but that was quickly replaced with a bright grin. "Gosh! Mui-chan stop sulking , and lets get back to training!"

"But I'm not sulkin-"























































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