Immortal - One Piece x Reader

Por LAURYSAMA

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∆ Synopsis ∆ Y/n was living a boring and long life, of failure and disapointment. Even if their life had impr... Más

∆ IMMORTAL ∆
PREMISES
Ch- Mortal -1
Ch- From above -2
Ch- Paradise -3
Ch- King's path -4
Ch- Joining -5
Ch- Faster -6
Ch- Farewell -7
Ch- Picture -8
Ch- His last breath -9
Ch- The Reaper -10
Ch- Calls of the sea -11
Ch- Shiroi Machi -12
Ch- Sukaipia | Part 1 -13
Ch- Sukaipia | Part 2 -13
A/N : Did you know ? : 1K !!
Ch- Wa no Kuni -14
Ch- Egguheddo -15
Ch- Reaper Island -16
Ch- Mad Dog -Bis
Ch- Ball and swing -17

A/N: A bit late but here : 2K !!!

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Por LAURYSAMA

Did I ever tell you why Immortal was created ? 

Here the reasons : I am french and I needed to pratice both my english and my writing for greater purposes ! That's why the story was so bad at the beginning (for those who read it since day one). The other is because I'm, just like all of us, a big addict to wattpad and xreaders (I calmed down a bit because of school T T). And so I've a lot of husbands, we all share without accepting this fact, I read about. And my bigest crushes were the xreaders on One piece (Don't get me wrong my anime of heart is MHA). And you see, I read most of all the ones about Ace, and he died in a lot of them, so I got sad and depressed until I found a story.

The holy story I must say !

>>> Truly I got the strengh to wrote this story long after reading the holy story. 

I'll do a promo because it's my favorite story about Ace, I've got a lot of them, but none took my heart like this one did : https://www.wattpad.com/story/43718680-the-saver-portgas-d-ace-x-reader

Title : |The Saver| Portgas D Ace x Reader

Author : Tachibi-ken

Unfortunatly there isn't regular updates but the story stays magical. I cried a lot and I felt so much comfort.

And so on, I read stories about Corazon as well and one day I lost it after starting to even cringe in front of some Y/ns (May they rip).

So my objectif was to : satisfied my thirst to have a real fanfiction, do an original Y/n, make a story nobody read before and become skilled in english ! A lot more certainly but let's get back to our celebrations ! 

Let's see our little statistics ~

Immortal..

..Has 115 engaged readers !

..Has 2200 views ! (2 K !!!???)

..Has 107 votes !

..Has upload 16 chatpers !

..Celebrated its one year in july !!!

Who would have thought, after reaching the 1K, the story would reach the 2K right after ? I got a bit overwhelmed and since I couldn't bring myself to celebrate at that time I just push everything on the side. I'm scared to disappear like other authors and disappoint my readers. For the few I see, you should know I am truly graceful, and I know you'll like even this chapter, because I know you are angels. If you want to ask me anything about the story, I'll glady answer you first !

>> You receive the VIP - Immortal !! <<

Now some things about our beloved Ocs and.. Y/n !

Kanda, Godji and Benkei : You got a lot of things about them I don't have to add, but did you know how I create them ? 

They received their names from a friend of mine, who don't speak english unfortunalty. I will however give his insta account since he draws. Don't be surprised, he's french as well. I never told him but Kanda is actually inspired from him. But their personnality doesn't match, of course. Then the three of them are, in my eyes, just like Yao, Ling and Chien-Po from Mulan. Godji is litteraly a geek side, always stressed and always beaming over the characters. He's like all the wattpaders and anime's fans. And well, Benkei..

>> My friend's insta : Mehdy_drw <<

Panom : her name is because she don't have one.

She's inspired from a close friend of mine, who don't read my story but speak english (I'm not lying). One day I ask her a name for a character and she said "I don't know" as "je sais pas", so I said "She doesn't have a name then" as "Elle a pas de nom". So "pas de nom" turned into Panom. She likes pink because my friend does, and once more, she's a fellow wattpader. Don't you agree ??

Alberd, Tom, Nassim, Mary, Love and Luka (+Stéphanie) : I realised, I created them but they only appear in one chapter for most of them.

Alberd is litteraly a name of a friend, who kindly read my story to give me some advice. It helped me a lot, I feel a bit bad Immortal's Alberd is a dick. But he's cool, is that bad ? Like always the characters only look alike but their personnality doesn't match. I don't know why honestly..
Tom was originaly inspired from Papyrus, the skeleton in undertale. Because I am a big fan. But I change the first chapters and nothing can tell of the similarities.
Nassim is inspired of a friend I care darely for, I don't see him often (if not never), but he's truly kind and I love talking with him. Of course Y/n doesn't stand him, it makes sence.
Love, well I heard the name in my school (remember I am french) and I don't know why I thing of miraculous everytime I thing of this oc. Anyway I hated it so I gave her and appearance. But I forgot so let's move on.
I don't want to go in details for Mary, since you know what kind of relationship she hold with Y/n.
And Luka, if you read my A/n at the end of every chatpers you may know I am an artist and hold a drawings account. Well I also have Italiens genes and my family is very obessessed with art. I always received a lot of comment since I didn't do a art school (I'm poor and rebelling !) and Luka is maybe what I'd be if I lived with my Italiens fellows instead of my french ones. Happyly, I'm not by the way.
Stéphanie is just the waifu we needed, because I love woman, I love badass and I love cute men. And MUSCLES !

Our main character, I named.. Y/n : Have you ever read a story were you saw Y/n more as an Oc of the author ? 

I wanted to prevent it since I found Y/n less and less.. well Y/n. I found a way and I thought about seeing it as a OC, instead of my Y/N. You know the character I identify myself when I read xreaders. So I'll introduce you the Oc I create, and It's mine so you'll never hear of it in the story. 

Their name is : Nickphore ! For one reason..

..Nick = Nique = Fuck, Phore = Fort = Hard.. No need to get into details.

What the best name for a weird orphan that was never respected than a weird name with no last name ? And the best part, we know Y/n wouldn't give a **** about it. I censure it, you didn't saw that happening ?

And just so you know, I never said Y/n was a saint...

Lastly : The new cover ?!

It's a new cover I added when the 15 chapter was uploaded. I made it on my own since I didn't had any new of the small artist that offered their help. I'm good only on paper but when it comes to drawing on my phone, I struggle a lot. So you can find the paper version on instagram, it's slightly different because I did some changes. 

Now .. WHO AM I ???

I am the author ! And you may call me by many names, such as Author, Author sama or even Laury sama !

I am old enough to live alone but still hate to have to be an adult ! (Nobody will found my age at this rate)

I have siblings and I am the middle one, so the oldest (And tired of it). 

I have a lover (no gender needed !), and I am not ready to get engaged ! Let me dream of my young days T T

I got put in an english's class with a C1 rank (Means at one rank from being fluent), that's scary.

Brown hair and green eyes, I dream of being a dragon instead of living in front of my laptop.. I want drama and actionnns !!!

And without surprises, I love animes. I got a lot of mangas and figurines, but I'm still poor.

THANK YOU !!!

I hope I'll receive more comments from now on, because I'm a fellow wattpader who loves to comment on peoples story and get excited with the other readers. So less comment, more thinking my story is shit and more changes. 

That's a threat.

I am evil.

Hehehe..

If you have any questions for the future A/Ns (for 3K), ask away ! Who knows, it might interessed all of us ;)

AND SEND ME FANARTS FOR GOD'S SAKE !!
(On Instagram, use #LAURYSAMAW and notice me >l.aurysama< !)

LOVE YOU ALL

LAURYSAMA turned back in time to study.

I'll put updates in the next chapter "Maddog - bis"

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