I was listening to a song and it gave me an idea. I thought it would look cool if it was animated but I'm terrible at that so I just wrote it down. I guess I like the idea of it so I decided to post it for feed back.
-Elemental
"A late night bartender that was in the wrong place at the wrong time..."
ALICE POV
Today was another crazy night at the bar I work at
I saw they guy that comes in every Friday. He and I talked while I made his drinks. We ended up dancing and had a great time. I kinda developed a crush on the guy I must admit
But the time had to come to an end. He left and I started to close up the bar at 1 am.
I clean the tops of all the tables and set up the chairs.
The rest of the place is already clean so I go to my locker
I open it up and grab my bag and black leather jacket
I check my phone and see it's battery is low, I should charge it when I get home.
I close my locker with a clank and head out the door turning off the lights on my way out
I flip the sign on the door and lock the door, the jingle of the keys the last thing I hear as I pop in my headphones
Daddy Issues by the neighbor hood starts to play
I walk through the empty alleyways
The wet ground from the rain shined under the dull moonlight
I walk and walk listening to my song and eventually reach my favorite part of my walk home.
The old abandoned building I loved it, the vines and the rusty steel beams littered with graffiti. It's an amazing spot to me alone, especially in this busy city.
I can hear the distant sounds of cars and their loud honks
The Hills by the weekend starts to play
While walking I approach a fallen steel beam the I balance and walk across humming to the song.
*GUNSHOT*
I stop.
Frozen in place.
I take out my headphones slowly
The gunshot was close.
So close...
I need to run
I hear footsteps
Shit...
I run as quickly as I can
I run through the rusty structure and to another alleyway near it
I rush behind a trash can curling myself into a ball
I can't control my breathing
It's ragged and rough
I hear more footsteps and my blood runs cold
My eyes widen even more
I grip the cold ground under me
No...
I see a shadowy figure in the pale light illuminating the dreary passageway
The last thing I see are
Captivating...
Golden...
Eyes...