NOOR

By Balkeesatu

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Noor and Asad A heartwarming love story of love and devotion. ✨'Will you marry me Noor Jameel?' ~~... More

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The hall was already crowded, every single person was enjoying the party to their heart content.

Adnan was with his fiancée; Rayhana, who was looking ravishing in her outfits, she scanned him for more than how Adnan could remember.

"You're looking way too handsome today!" She raised her brow, Adnan looked at her, then shrugged.

"Don't be cocky with me!"Rayhana said as she sip her drink.

"Baby if you think someone will snatched me away from you, why don't you accept by proposal." Adnan looked at her as she placed the glass she was holding before on the table.

"Baby!" She starts and Adnan looked down. "I don't want to end my career." He was looking at her out of word, they had countless of this kind of conversation before, he told her; career will never be affected, but she never listen to him.

He was thinking of a better way to convince her.

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"I told you mine, now tell me about your hobby." Asad starts, trying to get rid of the silent that inundated them. She smirked at him mischievously and Asad found himself thinking of how Noor can change her expression so quickly.

"I don't have one hobby, it has to be hobbies." She fold her lips.

"Ok tell me.... i mean about you hobbies." He dragged the word, Noor fixed her position on her seat.

"Well as you know i enjoy books, art display.." she trails up. "Yes i enjoy feeling the beauty of nature and i now enjoy telling you stories." She said while Asad was mentally taking all of them down in his head.

He was thinking of how he'll filled her life with all what she likes to do.

Her voice bring him back into the world.
"I know about your work because my sister works under you, now tell me did you have a girlfriend?" She said full of mischief.

"I don't."

"You?!" Noor gasped much surprisingly. "As handsome and big as you're?" She shakes her head, second later she pout and rolled her eyes.

Asad laughed, his laugher vibrating the place. "I'm telling you the truth." Asad depend himself and looked away his eyes twinkling with amusement. "tell me, how did you know I'm handsome?"

"Your voice,"

"How can a voice says a man is handsome?" Asad mouth, amused.

"I believed if a man had a husky voice he's handsome, while if a girl had a soft voice she'll definitely be beautiful." Noor shrugged, Asad was about to say something but Noor's phone beat him, she wandered her palm on the seat to pick it, after that she used her thumb and took the call, Asad was just observing her every move.

"Yaya Razaq!" She beamed while Asad frowned his heart beating faster than usual. Razaq smile and try to starts a chat with her, he was cracking a joke and Noor was happy and giggling while Asad had a blow on his heart.

"Send my regards to Aliya." She end the call after they talked for sometimes, Asad clenched his fists.

"Did she have a boyfriend?"

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Razaq

Sadiya was fuming, she was looking at her son whose eyes were still on his phone, she abruptly entered the living room anger evident on her face.

"Who were you talking to?" She asked angrily, Razaq was in his own world that he didn't know she was talking to him.

"Razaq!"

"Uhmm mama?" He finally answered her confusingly. Sadiya walked to him and hold her waist.

"I asked you, who were you talking to!?"Razaq stand not nothing why his mother was angry.

"It was Noo..." Before he closed his mouth, sadiya brushed her palm against his face in a loud slap.

"Sadiya what is the matter?" Razaq's father asked as he entered.

"I was asking this stupid son of yours who he was talking to on the phone, and he had the audacity to tell me it was Noor!" She was looking at his father but before she finished she was looking at Razaq.

"And?"

"You're asking me?" She trails up. "Dad Razaq asked your son what's going on between him That blind girl."

"Sadiya mind your tongue," He warned her, and looked at his son. "Razaq tell me."

"Dad I'm in love with Noor."

"Oh wow Alhamdulillah!" Razaq's dad was happy beyond explanation, it was his dream, he always wants his son to marry one of his sister's daughter, and it gonna happen.

"Your happy?" Sadiya asked, irritated by her husband's reaction.

"Yeah I'm, I'm happy my wish will come true."

"No way, Razaq will never get married to that disabled girl!" Sadiya yelled as she realized if she play around her son will be the husband of a disabled girl.

"I told you to mind your tongue Sadiya." He said again, furiously.

"I won't, im telling you Aliyu, Razaq will only get married to her over my dead body!"

"If he didn't marry her who did you wish to see him marry." Razaq's dad asked with a smile, sadiya grinned.

"My sister's daughter, Asma'u." She mouth excited by the idea, Razaq's father knew it, he had known his wife; the way she was yelling and shouting he knew she wants her son to marry the woman of her choice, and that made him made up his mind to not let her get what she wants.

Aliyu-Razaq's dad was just hoping that Noor will love his son.

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After Noor finished the calls, Asad was fighting the urge to asked her about the man who called her, his question were answered when she told him it was her cousin brother. Although he was relieved, his mind couldn't get over it.

'Could he love her?' He thought about it but try his best to stay calm. After so much fight with his mind and heart, Asad get back to normal and they continue to talk, while the party was still going on. Later on Waheeda called her because they're about to leave.

"I'll get going, it was my sister." Noor said even though she wants to stay a little longer, Asad stand in the hope of accompanying her.

"Here let have each other's number." She held out her phone, although it wasn't towards him but collect it and put his number, Asad dialed it and his phone ring.

"Ok! Save it with uhmm.." she starts to think of a better name. "Yes how about reading buddy?" She concludes, excitedly while Asad saved it, a smile visible on his face.

He saved her number too and returned the phone in his pocket. "I'll guide you." He mumbled and hold her hand, much to Asad's dismay his phone ring before they reached their destination.

The phone asked for help call once, twice and when it ring thrice Noor shook her head in amusement.

"Pick the call, i can go by myself, beside i count my steps earlier." Noor spokes.

"But.."

"No buts, i can manage." She shrugged proudly. Asad wants to help her but during the time he spend with her, he knew by now she don't want anyone to think she's weak, so he don't have any choices but to let her go.

"I'll call." His mouth said the unthinkable.

since when did he become like that!

That is what he can't answer!

He watched her as she took her steps, away from him and after some minutes the woman he love disappeared.

Noor was walking carefully, trying her best to focus on the walk, but she was giggling as she think of Asad's cuteness.

"Oh i wish i saw his face, he must be looking cute!" She beamed.

"Noor focused on your steps!" She scolded herself, before you know Noor found herself bumping into someone. She quickly try her best to maintain her balance, my holding onto something.

"Are you blind?!" An elegant voice reprimanded her, Noor was about to apologize but the woman beat her to it.

"And you don't have the manners to apologize, that was what i was worried about, mother made us had this party with this animals, they keep bumping into me!" The woman was angry eyeing Noor from head to toe.

"First of all I'm blind as you said, and this blind girl was about to apologize to you, and lastly we're not animals, please learn to respect people." Noor was angry too, she couldn't believe the woman called her an animal!

"So I'm i the reason behind your blindness? and if you're blind you should have stay at home." The woman who already took her steps forward said, calmly that if the situation wasn't heated Noor would've admire the woman's calmness.

"My only prayer for you is to learn how to treat people." Noor starts to walk away.

"You.,"

"Malika!" A voice interrupt her from talking. Malika was interrupted by her husband, he looked at Noor and smile.

"I'm sorry for the inconvenience." He apologized but Noor smile.

"It is okay uncle." She turned to the woman she heard was malika.

"Aunt Malika, I'm sorry for talking back." And Noor walked away upon hearing the ringing from her phone.

"That's why i told you be good to people Malika! Look at how you asked her if she was blind and it turn out to be true." Ameen Hamood try to made his wife understand.

She looked at him irritatedly. "If not for your mother's stubbornness I wouldn't have been here, so go and scold your mother not me." She walked ahead leaving him there. He looked at her, he knew his mother's decision was for them to learn how to respect people.

Could the change happen?

"Malika you have a good heart, but your only problem is you don't know how to respect people! I wish you can change."

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