MANZIL (Book 4 - Birla Brothe...

By Taani10

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This book is the Continuation of book RASTA .. This book will revolve arround the broken pieces of hope in t... More

Introducing the Characters
Another set of Characters
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1. Pain of Brothers
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2. Missing each other
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3. Collapsed
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4. Diabetic Coma
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5. Brother's Outburst
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6. Protective Brothers
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7. Brother's Challenge
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8. Circle of life
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9. Efforts
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10. Hidden Love
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11. Getting Closer to Truth
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12. Emotional Outburst
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13. Walking Away
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14. Brother's Emotions
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15. Pouring out Bottled up Feelings
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16. Diary of Emotions
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17. Unspoken words
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18. Cute Attempts
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19. Much awaited Talk
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20. Truth Bomb
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21. Messed up Situation
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22. Heart to Heart
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23. Consequences of Messing with Birla Brothers
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24. Counting Days
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25. MANZIL
Epilogue

Prologue

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Auro se kia khafa hona
jab khudme he kami hai
Asmaan me urne ka h khawab hai
Aur pairo tale zameen nahi hai

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Birla Mansion

Nirbhay and nir were waiting outside nishu's room.. Kabir had come to check him up...

Nishant was just not gaining consiousness his pulse rate drop down.... drastically...

Nirav and Nirbhay were left out of scared ... Nir called Kabir Immidiately...   and he is checking on him..

Nirav tensed and looked at Nirbhay....  his brother has become dead cold silent after neevan left ..

he could vividly remember nishu was pleading... to neevan to not go but the boy did not turned ...   

Nir tensed for Nirbhay.... things works differently..  he would give u the world. when he loves you but if someone reject that love ...  he will just cut him off completely and in this case it was an insult to there love which neevan threw at there face...

Kabir came out after checking up..

Nirbhay tensed - Kabir ..   nishu?

Kabir sighs - He is fine now... hosh aa jaega thori der Mai......

nirbhay tens - pat kia hua tha use....   vo sachme thik h na kabir...

kabir sighs - We all know Nishant ki health condition kia h he just got discharged from the hospital ..  yesterday or aj ye sab hogya... bht kamzor h vo.... he needs to have rest food on time and most importantly his body just couldnot take that kind of stress.... or ye jo hua vo Shock tha Nishant k liye....  its obvious vo handle ni karpaya ...

Nirbhay closed his eyes they all know what neevan is for Nishant those boys shared soul with each other 

Kabir sighs - i know things are going to get difficult . as a friend as a family me samajta hu.. ki abhi kuch bhi sahi nhi hai .. .. but still as a doctor i would say . sambhalna hoga use....  is tarah tabyat or bigar jaegi ...   sath reh usk sath... aur khush rkhne ki koshish kar...

Nirbhay didnot replied to anything just entered inside Nishant's room....

while kabir startled.... he could see his bestfriends eyes were dead cold....   he had expected nirbhay to break out his anger but nirbhay did not .. he was extremely calm... that was very strange

Nirav sadly - bhai neevan k deceision se tut gye h bhaiya vo react ni krenge

kabir sighs n tensed - Use jane kyu dia nir.. vo baccha h sahi galat ki pehchan he kaha h use ...

nirav - Apko lgta h humne use rokne ki koshish ni ki hogi?? Use kisiki baat ni sunni use Mrs chauhan ko mauka dena tha....  hum chahe kuch bhi kehle vo manne ko he ready ni tha . bhai ne ye tak keh dia ki vo agar yha se gya to bhai shakal ni dekhenge still vo nhi mana ajib sa junoon sawar tha usk upar ..

kabir sighs and nodded the deceision of neevan had left everyone shocked ...  and the brothers shattered .  kabir just hope they can come out from this face stronger

kabir sighs - Nirbhay ko bhi tujhe smbhalna hoga  vo dikha nhi raha but me jnta hu neevan usk liye kia tha... nirbhay handl ni karpayega is sach ko chahe vo kitna bhi dikha le

nirav who was himself shatterrd nodded his head they all loved neevan but with nirbhay and nish ... neev had a very special connection.. for one neev was his son and another one his best friend his lifeline .  both wouldnt be able to hndle .. nishant had still reacted but the silenc of his brother was speaking much louder.. ..

Nirbhay  enterrd inside the room of nish ... his heart went  for his boy ..   he looked so pale and lifeless ...

Nirbhay sat beside him and gently caress his head.... 

Nirbhay remember the way nishant was pleading to Neevan to stay back and he didnt ...   he could never forget that site ever ...   neevan just crushed all there heart .. And left ...

Nirbhay sat beside him and just keep on holding his hand

with his gentle touch ...  Nishant open his eyes groggily.... 

Nirbhay caress his head...  - Abhi kesa lag ra h baccha?

Nish weakly - N..neev?

Nirbhay stiff... nish look arround his eyes searched for his baby boo ..

Nish tens up and sat up panicking - Bhai neev....

Nirbhay startled - Nishant aram se u r still weak beta..

Nishant tensed - Bhai.. bhai neev vo.... 

In his agitated state nishant woke up to remember neevan was going .  he did not cone across the term that neevan had already left

Nishant - Bhai...neev . neev kaha h.... vo nhi gya na use bulao please vo pagal hogya h kuch bhi bol ra h

Nirbhay cub his face - Neevan chla gya h .. Nishant...

Nish stilled

Nirbhay with dead cold eyes - Vo chla gya h usne apne liye kuch decide kia h .. and we have to accept that...

Nishant looked at nirbhay numb .   tears drop down his eyes - Vo sachme chla gya bhai? 

Nirbhay's heart break  to see the look of helplessness in his eyes..

Nishant hurt - vo esa kese karsakta h bhai.. vo jnta h hum usk bina ni reh sakte ...  to fr kyu bhai ...  kyuu

Nirbhay just pulled him closer to his chest... while nishant broke down in his chest  it killed them thousand time to think that there neev left...

Nirbhay - Use jab lgta h ki use Mrs chauhan k sath rehna chahiye to wohi sahi....



Nish was hurt very hurt it kills them to think that neevan had chosen Mrs chauhan... things could never go back to Where it was ...

Scene changes to chauhaan villa

The moment Neevan entered inside the house he shut himself up completely...  ..

Anamika saw the staff coming out of neevan's room..

Anamika tensed  she saw the food plate intact in his hand

Anamika -  usne ni khaya?

Staff nodded in no

staff - Subah se ye chauthi bar hum... khana wapas leke jaa re h mam...

Anamika sighs she took the plate she was not entering in his room because neevan was highly uncomfortable of her coming close to him.... he still did not Feel comfortable near her.... and she knows it no matter whatever she do the damage will be remain in his heart alive..

Anamika sighs and  entered inside his room and the look of him scared her... it was dead cold....   he was gazing at the rough tiles...

Anamika went near him and sar beside him - Neevan...

Neevan coldly - Chale jaiye yaha se Mrs chauhan...! 

Anamika tensed - Chali jaungi...  trust me mai tumhe yaha takliff dene ni ayi

Neevan closed his eyes - Apka yaha hona he mere liye sabse bari takliff hai... just go





Anamika teary - khana kha lo neevan please...!,

Neevan looked at her and then at the food  - Zabardasti yaha le ayi vo kafi nhi h?? ki apko ye dhakosla bhi karna h ...

Anamika gasped

neevan coldly - Common Mrs Chauhan... dont think i will fall in your trap.. apka ye sweetness ye ache bnne ka natak!!! ye sab isiliye tha na.. taki ap apne maksad me kamiyab ho sake ..! then congratulations... Mrs chauhan.. you have been succeded ab to ye Naqab hata dijiye

Anamika helpless n teary - Tumhe ab bhi lgta h ki mai natak kar ri hu neevan? do u really think i m enjoying this

Neevan - offcourse you are..!  apko kia lgta h me ap pe bharosa karunga? just because u saved my dada's life??? never.. Mrs chauhan... never ever!!!!

Anamika shattered

Neevan - Apke or Apke husband k liye Me sirf ek trophy hu sirf ek trophy...! jisko apne jit liya h!!!

Anamika cried out - Please stop it neevan! please!!!

Neevan angrily - No i wont!!! i wont Mrs chauhan... chale jaiye yaha se please chale jaiyee!!!! 

Neevan was hyperventilating again... his breath startrd to hitch

Anamika shocked and tensed - Neevan...! neevan kia ho ra h tumhe

she was about to touch him but neevan pushed her away causing the Food plate falling and shattering

Neevan agitated - Dont u dare!  dont u dare touch me!!! Mrs chauhan.. dur . dur rahiye Mujhse!!

Anamika tensed - Par neevan please tumhari tbyt kharab ho ri h

Neevan angrily - Hone do kharab!!! apko humdardi dikhane ki zarurat nhi hai... just get out of my room... OUTTT... (He screamed)

while Anamika immidiately rushed out because seeing her neevan was getting more agitated....   

While neevan broke down into tears.... he took out the only picture he  bring with him...

Neevan sat down and Caress the picture it was there picture four brothers the last memory of there happiness

Neevan caress the picture teary - i m sorry.. i m so sorry ... me janta hu meine jo kia h vo gunah h.... sirf apka Dil he nhi h apka bharosa bhi tora hai ... kia karta me bhai.. mere pas or koi option he ni tha...  ho sake to mujhe maaf kardena.... shayed mere kismat me aplogo ka sath itna tak he tha.....

Neevan hugged the frame closer to his chest he was again back to where he was...alone lonely and broken.....

Neevan closed his eyes only to visualise his broken memories

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Little neevan was sitting in his room sadly gazing at the stars...

Nani enterrd with a glass of milk - Neevan... beta aj school kyu nhi gya tu.. or subah se room me betha h

Neevan sadly - man ni h nani

Nani sighs - school k baccho ne wapas chera??

Neevan eyes filled up but he pretended that it doesn't matter

Nani - Kia hogya beta .. nani ko nhi batayega

Neevan teary - Apne kaha tha last time .. ki mumma ayengi... is bar annual week pe but

nani sighs anamika did told her that she will manage and this was the time when neevan still used to hope for his mother...

Nani sighs - Vo beta vo

Neevan teary - Nhi aa sakty na vo ..to apne jhut kyu bola nani....  jab unhe ana he ni tha to...

Nani just pulled him closer to her - ssh baccha bas . bas rote nhi...

neevan cried out....  

Nani caress his face - ek baat kahu beta...

neev quiet

Nani - Tu terr bhai se baat krega?

neevan scared Anamika told him that he hates him

neevan shook his head - nhi nani... 

Nani sighs - Beta nirbhay esa nhi hai....Vo ekbar tujhe mil lega na to vo khudse alag tujhe kabhi ni hone dega ..

neevan teary - nhi nani vo bhi mujhe ni leke jaenge apne sath i know..

Nani - nhi beta vo

Neevan hug her - nani please mujhe kisise baat nhi krni or na he kisise milna h just let me be please..... 

Nani caress his face - Baccha tujhe meri baat aaj nhi samaj aa ri... but ekdin zarur smjh ayegi ki tera bhai.. aur. tere maa me zamin or asman ka fark h.. vo wesa nhi h beta... tu ekbar unki zindagi me gya na vo khushiyo se bhar dega ...teri jholi... teri har tANHAYE ko Mita dega..  teri KHAMOSHI bhari zindagi k RASTE bhale he tehre mere  ho par teri MANZIL wohe h .. beta....

Lil neevan was too small to understand what his nani was trying to say...  

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Neevan open his eyes n let the tears fall - Me apne MANZIL se bht dur aa gya hu. Nani ab chah k bhi waha nhi jaa sakta.. ap sahi thi nani... galat humesha se me tha...  or isi baat ki saza mil ri h mujhe.... isiliye apke bhagwan ji ne meri jholi me khushiya to di lekin sirf kuch pal k liye..  or wapas dal diya is TANHAYE me....

Rajvir entered inside - Ye TANHAYE he ab tumhari kismat h neevan! jitni jaldi tum use manlo utna behtar hai....

Neevan stiff seeing him.. ..

Rajvir - Tumhe kia lgta h ye khana na khake .. apne kamre me akar k bethk tum kia sabit karna chahte ho? kuch nhi milne wala h ye sab krk...! rehna to tumhe mere sath he parega!!

Neevan look away

Rajvir gave him some papers - isme signatures karo

neevan angrily - what is this

rajvir - thats not important... just sign it..

neevan - No...

Rajvir angrily - Neevan..

neevan - Baat sirf vo ghar chork ane ki hui thi Rajvir!

Rajvir shocked n taken aback neevsn was calling him by his name

Neevan - kia hua.. tum jesa ghtya insaan.. izzat expect kar ra tha kia mujhse?? Mr chauhan tab tak tha jb tak us aurat k pati tha jisne mujhe janam dia... lekin jis din mere sath tumne mere bhaio k rishte ka Sauda kia! usi din ..  tum Rajvir ban gye!!!

Rajvir fumes - i dont give a damm about what u think about me! just sign it

Neevan took the paper and torn it into pieces ..

Rajvir angrily - Neevan!

And about to slap him

Neevan hold his hand - Sochna bhi mat! Rajvir!!! mujhe agar ek kharoch bhi ayi to bhai tumhara vo hashl karenge ki apne apko sheeshe me pehchan ni paoge

Rajvir smirk - Konsa bhai? vo bhai jisse rishte todk aye ho? ya jinlogo ne khud rishta tordia

Neevan - Rishte h Rajvir .. kou business deal ni ki tut jaegi... aj bhi agar ek pukar lagau to mere bhai bhagte huye ayenhe ye mere vishwas h... lekin me ye kar ni raha tumhari khushkismati hai!!! so just get out

Rajvir angrily - u need to sign those papers

Neevan - Nani k property ko mere rehte tum kuch ni kar sakte!!! Rajvir!.. i wont let u do anything...

rajvir shock

Rajvir angrily - Neevan tum jante ni ho me kia kr sakta hu

neevan - jo karna tha kar chuke ho ab or kuch ni kr skte... ab agar tumne kuch karne ki koshish ki to apne he bichaye huye jaal me khud fas jaoge .. n guess what u can just imagin what Nirbhay Birla will do with u..

Rajvir taken aback

Neevan - Apni bhalai chahte h to... chale jao yha se! akela chordo mujhe!!!

rajvir smirk - Jitna urna h urlo... Jab tak yha rahoge tumhe ese he urte rahoge... but dont worry bht jald hum yaha se nikl jaenge London k liye

Neevan gasped

rajvir -  or ekbar waha chle gye fr dekhta hu kese krte ho tum apni manmani

Neevan shocked n scared - No...! no me kahi ni jaunga

Rajvir - u dont have a choice neevan! do u...

rajvir left while neevsn sat down shattered helpless....   crying - i dont want to go...

yes he was pretending to be strong infront of Chauhan but he was not he was shattered..... will he really have to leave his brothers and Go ...  he dont know how will he survive without his brothers... but may be he was getting his price for hurting his brothers.... neevan had lost all his hopes for happiness .. will he ever get back those happiness and peace which he deserved ...

or his life will end here in the Darkness....

Raahein Mushkil hai...
lekin Manzil tak hum zarur pohoch jayenge...
Ye jo Raste Akar k bethe h ..
Inhe bhi hum ek din Zarur Harayenge....

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