So I updated again and I'm not going to update again until I get some comments on this story, I real would like to know what you think and if there anything I can improve on. Some of you may not like Louise after this chapter and the other band that she likes may be in this story at a later date. On the side there is a picture of Lola and the Video of lose my mind which max sings along to.
love Jazzie x
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Max P.O.V (8pm still the same day as last chapter)
After we had our wonderful picnic. I drove Louise to the second part of our date. When I parked out she squealed with Joy she told me she haden't been to a fun fair since she was five. We been riding on rides for the past twenty minutes.
Louise: "This is so fun Max, come on let's ride on the waltzers next."
Max: "Okay"
We are waiting in line to ride the waltzers when 'Lose my mind' started playing. I started to sing along.
Louise: "You must be a fan of who ever sings that song, you knew all the words."
Max: "Something like that."
Louise: "Who sings that song?"
Max: "The Wanted."
Louise: "They sound familiar, If I remember who they are I will tell you."
Nathan P.O.V (8pm)
It's been half an hour since Lola wiggled her fingers. The doctors have been running tests on her now. Sarah took Roxy back to have so she can rest.
Jason walks up to me
Jason: "Have the doctors gave you any news yet?"
Nathan: "No not yet but she moved, Me, Sarah and Roxy saw her move she waking up isn't she?"
Jason: "I.....I don't know Nathan, She could be waken up, she could of woke up and relapsed. I'm not saying this to hurt you Nathan but remember there is two sides to every coin."
Nathan: "what your trying to tell me is there two sides to everything, your telling me to think of a side to this? I THOUGHT YOU SAID DON'T GIVE UP HOPE."
Jason: "Calm down Nathan, All I'm saying is prepare yourself so that if you don't get the news you was hoping for . When Sarah was in a coma she relapsed back in to her coma, I thought she moved and was going to wake but when the doctors gave me the news that she relapsed I got so upset and depressed it knocked me in to drinking to solve my problems. I don't want that happening to you . I'm only looking out for you.
Nathan: "thanks."
Jason: "If your ever angry right down your feelings in to a book it helps you calm down and helps you think"
A doctor walks over to Nathan and Jason
Doctor: "I'm sorry but Lola is still in a coma, Her movement was caused by an old synapse, more random synapses can occur. On some test we have done It seems Lola Brain activity is getting less and less, She may have about two months before she come brain dead, she has some brain damage that dosen't help. The chance of partial recovery is about fiveteen percent and the chance of full recovery is low but a person with low chance of recovery may still awaken but it is very unlikely, again I'm sorry."
Nathan: "Are you trying to say that she wont wake but be in that state for two months before she dies?"
Doctor: "What I'm saying is that she will be in the state she is in for about three months if your lucky but her brain activity will slowly lower and then stop, she will then be announced brain dead. After that we can only keep her on life support for about a month then we have have to turn it off or you and her family can, Again I'm sorry Mr Sykes."
Nathan: "But surly there something you can do!"
With that sentence My whole world crashes down. I fall to the floor clutching my chest as tears fall and sobs escapes my lips. The only one who I love is slowly dieing and there nothing I can do about it.
Jason P.O.V 8.20pm
I look at the broken man before me. There is no advice I can give him to ease the pain. There is no comforting gesture I can give him that will take those words the doctor says back. There is nothing I can do. Now it is a countdown to her death.
Max P.O.V 8.30pm
Me and Louise are walking around deciding what ride to go on next, Louise is clutching her gaint teddy bear that I won her.
Louise: "There has to be a ride that we haven't ridden on yet."
Max: "How about we go on the fairest wheel next?"
Louise: "Are you sure it looks a bit unstable."
Max: "It will be fine trust me."
We go to the line
Louise: "Let me pay for this ride"
Max: "No I told you that i'm going to pay for everything."
Louise: "But I don't want you wasting all your money on me."
Max: "Don't worry I have a well paid job."
Me and Louise get to the front of the line and get onto the ride and the owner puts the bar over us and starts the ride.
Louise: "Max can I admit that i'm a little scared of hights."
Max: "If it get's to much just close your eyes and sqwease my hand."
Louise holds my hand.
Max: "So Louise what else do you do in your spare time?"
Louise: "I make baby and doll clothes and sell them to make some extra money."
Max: "So do you have a job or do you go to collage or something?"
Louise: "I have a job, I work as a waitress in a little cafe they pay is okay."
Max: "Okay what is your opinion on football?"
Louise: "It's a good way to keep fit and I don't mind watching it but I think they get paid too much. A soldier gets paid up to 15,000 pounds a year to defend there country or help other countries but a premiership footballer get's paid 250,000+ to kick a ball around it's unfair and unjust."
Max: "A vaid point."
We reach the top and it gives a beautiful view of the fun fair and the surrounding area.
Louise: "It may be high but it's beautiful."
I stare directly at Louise as sensing my eyes on her Louise turns her head to look at me. I look directly in her eyes as she looks in to my eyes . I slowly lean in giving her time to move if this isn't what she want's . She dosen't move away but slowly leans forward too, I connect my lips with hers just as fireworks go off in the background.
Louise P.O.V 8:45pm
Our lips are moving perfectly in sync, my eyes are close but I can see fireworks and there not the ones that's going of in the background. This kiss is magical, this whole date has been wonderful. I would say Max is the one but unfortunately there someone else my hearts belongs too that I have no chance with. Max traces my bottom lip with his tongue asking for entrance that I happily give in seconds our tongues find each other and we fight for dominance. I give in a let max control this kiss, he tastes so sweet after the candy floss he ate unfortunately the need for oxygen becomes to great so i break away from his tempting lips.
Loise: "WOW"
Max leans in to kiss me again but gets interupted by an old lady
Old Lady: "Hey this is a family place so go and swap spit some where else!!!"
I chuckle at her
Max: "Fine it's getting late anyway."
The ride stops and me and Max gets off. We walk to the car and get in to start the ride back to my house.
Max P.O.V 9:30 pm
I decied to find out more about Louise on the ride back to her house.
Max: "So Louise do you like music?"
Louise: "I love music, I'm always listening to music when ever I get the chance."
Max: "Who is your musical hero then?"
Louise: "One Direction. I love them so much. I liked them ever since the group was created on x-factor, I voted for them every week and I was so disappointed when they came third in my opinion. I'm a huge fan of One Direction."
I'm shocked all what I can think is oh crap, why dose she have to like them.
Max: "Who is your favourite member?"
Louise: "Zayne"
Oh double crap, why did she have to like him the best out of all of them dose she know I had a twitter argument with him, wait she dosen't know I'm Max George she only knows my first name.
Max:: "What do you think of the Wanted?"
Louise: "Um there mean to One direction and there fans our mean to us directioners and there not that great there average singers."
Oh triple crap, I'm glad we have just arrived at her house. I open the door for her and lead her to her house door.
Louise: "I had a great time tonight."
Max: "Me too."
Louise: "We have to do it again some time."
Max: "Yer."
Louise leans over and kisses me on the check.
Louise: "Bye Max."
Max: "Bye"
I walk to my car and get in, at the start of the date I thought Louise was the one but now I have a lot to think about. My mind is going to be doing overtime.
Tom P.O.V 10pm
Me and Sophia have got more alcohol and she has more money we walks out the club.
Tom: "Where to now?"
Sophia: "I don't know I haven't got enough for a hotel so I don't know."
Tom: "How about you move in with me."
Sophia: "What are you out of your mind Tom."
Tom: "It will save you money in the long run and I don't mind."
Sophia: "I think about it"...........................................