Abhira ka Abhir

By Asmi1312

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my take on the 6 years leap that took place. More

prologue
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
Question
chapter 18
chapter 19
Chapter 20
chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter - 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
Chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
Chapter 30
chapter 31
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Chapter- 23

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In car:

(Abhimanyu was constantly looking outside the window with tears in his eyes. krishna looked at him and sighed.)

Krishna: (in mind) bewakoof hai ye dono. 6 saal pehle jo hua nahin hona chahiye tha. lekin inn dono ko uski itni badi saza nahin milni chahiye thi. aur woh bechara baccha ye deserve nahin karta. woh apni khudki ek happy family deserve karta hain, jo usse milegi. dusron ke galti ki saza main abhir ko nahin bhugatne dungi. aur uske liye mujhe kya karna hai ye main samajh chuki huin. 

Krishna: abhimanyu?

Abhimanyu: haan.

Krishna: ghar aa gaya hain utro. tum jaao andar, mujhe ek important call karna hai. main woh call khatam karke aati huin.

Abhimanyu: jee. thank you aap mujhe

Krishna: utro abhimanyu. mujhe call karna hai its urgent. 

Abhimanyu: haan sorry.

(he got down and went inside.)

krishna: ( on call) hello. main jaanti huin ki aap udaipur mein dubara kadam tak nahin rakhna chahte. but please aayiye.  yahan aapki bohot jarurat hain please. woh dubara uski shaadi karvane ke peeche padi hain. aur woh bhi ek compromise marriage ruhi ke liye aarohi se.

Person: thike. kal ki ticket book kardo. main aa raha hoon.

IN HOSPITAL:

Nurse: aap iss room mein baithiye. main aapke kuch basic tests karti huin.

( she attaches the needle and makes it ready for a blood test when suddenly akshu shouts)

Akshara: nooo...

Abhir: aa mumma mere kaan. aap itna kyun chillayi.

Akshara: i..i..tni badi needle ki kya jarurat. mera haath hi kitnusa hain. chote sui se bhi kaam chal jayega na. main itni badi needle nahin lagvaungi. 

Abhir: jaan please ACBNH. Aap chote baby nahin ho. Jaldi se ye lagwa lo hume nanu nani ke Ghar jaana hai. Mujhe bohot bhuk lagi hai.

Yash: akshu baccha kuch nahin hoga. Chotu si sui hain abhi ho jaayega.

( But akshu started crying and Yash and abhir were having hard time controlling their laughter)

Abhir: maasa itna toh main bhi nahin darta.

Yash: teri mumma na darpok hain.

Abhir: iss mamle mein toh hain.

( They finished all the tests and akshu without talking to anyone went in anger and sat in the car)

Yash: akshu shaam Tak saare tests ke result aa jayenge. Okay

Akshara: ..........

Abhir: mumma nanu nani ke Ghar kya hoga lunch mein.

Akshara:  .........

Abhir: maasa lagta hain aaj tava bohot garam hain.

Yash: haan abhir, iss aag ke gole se bachne ke liye jaldi nanu nani ke ghar pohochna padega.



Goenka Villa:

( Krishna came back and saw abhimanyu waiting for her)

Krishna: tumne doctor ka job kab choda?

Abhimanyu: aap aisa kyun puch rahi hain

Krishna: ( sarcastically) nahin mujhe laga goenka house main chaukidaar ka job le liya ho

Abhimanyu: ( irritated) andar jaana odd lag raha tha isiliye aapke liye ruka tha.

Krishna: tum

( before she could say anything abhir shouted from the car)

Abhir: docmannn

( he came running and hugged abhimanyu. )

Abhir: docman aap yahan?

Abhimanyu: woh kya hain na mujhe aapki yaad aa rahi thi toh isiliye main aagaya aapse milne. 

Abhir: lekin aapko kaise pata ki main yahan aaunga?

Abhimanyu: arre aise kaise pata nahin chalta, aap toh mere junior ho na toh mujhe heart ke signal mil gaye toh main aa gaya.

Abhir: woww. toh ab kya aap mere saath football kheloge pleaseeee. mere yahan koi bhi friends nahin hain aur main mamu, dada aur maasa ke football khelke na bor ho gaya huin. 

Abhimanyu: offcourse junior. aapko pata hain jab main chota tha na toh mujhe bhi football khelna bohot pasand tha. infact main toh apni school main sabse best football khelta tha. 

Abhir: wow docman aap toh hero ho. aap mujhe bhi sikhaoge na football khelna. 

Abhimanyu: bilkul. aap jab bhi bolo tab hum khelenge. 

( abhir kissed his cheeks and abhimanyu lovingly kissed his both cheeks.  he went to ruffle his hairs when abhir whinned)

Abhir: docman baal mat kharab karo.

Abhimanyu: ( laughing) same pinch. mujhe bhi bilkul pasand nahin hai agar koi mere baal kharab kare toh aur main nahin bigad raha betu. 

Abhir: aap bhi mumma ki tarah mujhe betu bolne lag gaye. MABBH. main ab big boy huin. 

Abhimanyu: accha big boy. betu jara apni class batana

Abhir: UKG 11

Abhimanyu: hmm. tab toh sach mein aap big boy hi ho ab toh.

( and both of them started laughing)


( akshu was having tears witnessing the entire conversation. yash and krishna had smiles on their faces. only if abhimanyu had not acted impulsive that day, the picture would have been much different )

Akshara: ( in mind) kyun kiya tume woh abhimanyu. agar meri baat sun li hoti toh shayad aaj hum. tumne kahan tha ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho toh kya mujhe chodna tumhare liye itna asaan tha kya?.  nahin lekin main abhir ko tumhare jyaada kareeb jaane nahin de sakti. main abhir ko woh sapna dekhne nahin de sakti jo kabhi pura na ho. main koi jhoti umeed nahin de sakti abhir ko. 


Akshara: abhir andar chale ab. nanu nani wait kar rahe honge na. 

( thats when abhimanyu noticed akshara and yash standing there. abhimanyu clearing his throat stood up with abhir holding his two fingers) 

Abhir: ( happily) jaan aapko pata hain docman mere saath football khelne ke liye maan gaye. ab main roj unke saath khelunga.

Akshara: ( gulping her tears) abhir betu, woh doctor hain na toh unhe bohot kaam hota hain. toh woh aapke saath nahin khel sakte roj. aur waise bhi jab hum mumbai wapas chale jaayenge tab apne friends ke saath khelna okay.

( abhimanyu's face drained all his colors listening that they will go back. but offcourse they weren't abhi and akshu anymore. they were abhimanyu and akshara. and more over akshara was someone else's wife and mother. how could he even think about them being a family. but he knew he had to apologise before its late. he could never stay alive with the guilt of breaking his akshu. he just couldnt muster up to say a sorry. 

ironic isn't it. that day when he said so many things to her without thinking was so easy to say and now to apologise for the same, his words died in the throat.)


Abhir: haan. jab tak hum yahan hain main docman ke saath hi khelunga. hain na docman

Abhimanyu: ( small smile) haan. 

Abhir: jaldi chalo andar warna saara khaana khatam ho jaayega.

( he held akshu's hand and with other hand held abhimanyu's hand and started pulling them together. they all looked like a perfect family. akshu and abhimanyu were looking at each other with tears whereas abhir was happily holding their hands and taking them inside.) 


Krishna: ye teeno saath mein kitne acche lagte hain na yash. aur abhimanyu woh abhir se kuch hi time mein kitna pyaar karne laga hain.

Yash: kyun nahin karega krishna. aakhir khoon khoon hota hain. abhir aur abhimanyu ka rishta khoon ka bhi hain aur dil ka bhi. aakhir abhir ka aadha dil akshu aur aadha abhimanyu hi toh hain. 

Krishna: pata nahin bhagwan ji kya chahte hain ab inse. phir se inki jindagi ulajhne ke kagar par hain. i hope sab theek rahe aur abhir hurt na ho. 


(if only they knew abhir will get hurt soo badly in future. )



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Hope you guys liked the chapter. stay tuned for more. 

i just wanted to show some bonding scenes which were missing in the show. 

sorry for not updating for soo long been little busy with work.

abhir's identity revelation soon. 


lots of love,

Author🤍


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