"I knew this hotel was off."...

By Abbz2907_

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This story is a story based on the popular series, "The Music Freaks." by RosyClozy. Will a group of student... More

Chapter 1 - Arriving.
Chapter 2 - Hatred and Trust.
Chapter 3 - The night that would change everything.
WHOOPSIES
Chapter 4 - Again, Again and Again.
Chapter 5 - Hostage
Chapter 6 - Healing wounds before tragedy.
Chapter 8 - Alliances.
Update
Chapter 9: What is happening?

Chapter 7 - A mistake leads to death

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"AAAAAAAAAAAA OMG MILLY WAKE UP." Lia screamed, shaking Milly violently until she opened her eyes.

Milly quickly gasped and sat up, "What happened Lia? Are you okay?"

Lia's eyes started to swell up, as she pointed to Elliot's lifeless body. Milly's eyes widened in shock and fear as she rapidly escaped her bed, running over to Elliot's body, his chest was bloody with a deep wound.

"No... NO!" Milly screamed, she started to sob and she yelled, "ELLIOT WAKE UP."

Lia walked over to the door and sighed, "I'll go uh- get the others. I'm sorry.."

She was alone, with her crush's dead body next to her. Alone... But suddenly, she felt everything go blank...

...

???'s POV:

Darkness.. How I enjoyed it. Finally, power as the lights went out. My victims were ready.

I found a weapon. Walked around. Until I found...

Him.

I lunged the knife into his chest and out again, letting him bleed, I killed him immediately.

He was dead.

...

Milly was freaked out, what was that, why did she see that. She held her head in confusion and screamed. Why did the killer want to make her life a misery? This isn't fair. Why her? Why Elliot?

"Milly? Milly!" Sean screamed, running over to Milly and dragging her away from Elliot, "Are you okay?"

"Get away." The pink haired devil said with emotion, she marched past everyone. She wanted space. Alone.

The group watched Milly leave, and looked down, "I feel bad." Jake sighed.

However, Hailey was observing, and then she laughed.

"What the hell, Hailey, why are yo-" Zander said before being cut off.

"The killer left their weapon, meaning if we find some way to check the fingerprints we will know the murderer." Hailey explained, pointing to the knife next to Elliot on the bed.

"That's a good point."

"Does anyone have anything we can use to pick up the knife without getting fingerprints on it?" Hailey asked, looking around at the group who were full of trauma and paranoia,

"I think I have some gloves?" Lia stated, "I brought them in case it got cold during the trip."

"That'll work." Hailey responded, "Could you go get them?"

"Sure." Lia nodded, walking out of the room.

"I'm going to see Milly." Jake exclaimed.

"Me too." Luke and Sean said in union.

"If Luke is going, I'm going." Zander whined, clinging onto Luke's hand.

Hailey gulped, "I don't want to be left alone, come on guys."

Zander groaned, upset to see his sister scared, "I'll stay."

Hailey smiled and mouthed, "Thank you."

...

A couple minutes later, Lia came back with gloves, "Here Hailey."

Hailey pulled on the gloves, the room was silent, making her stomach tense up with nerves. She sighed as she picked up the knife slowly, she inspected the dry blood on the tip of the knife. Suddenly, an intrusive thought flashed her mind.


What if she stabbed Zoey with this very knife, causing her the pain she caused her.

She was conflicted at her own thoughts, she wasn't a murderer, she wasn't evil, but at the same time... Revenge and total relief from her schemes felt amazing.

"Hailey, are you okay?" Zander muttered.

Hailey shook her head, returning to the real world and smiled nervously, "F-Fine..! Haha.. Let's just put this somewhere safe."

"Oh... 'Kay..." Zander said, with a hint of suspicion.

Lia, Zander and Hailey walked out of the room, and hid the knife in a closet in another room close to them. They all stayed silent, as the trio felt angst and trauma rip them apart.

"No more messing around." Lia whispered angrily.

...

Drew read one of the books from the hotel library silently. He had a problem. As time went on, he started to regret what he put Hailey through. He hated her, but hurting her physically was too far. Heat of the moment, he guessed.

Slowly, he stood up and closed his book. He wandered out of the room, silently.

"Where are you doing?" Zoey viciously questioned.

"I- Uh- Just for a walk. I need to stretch my legs." Drew laughed nervously.

"Hmm. Fine.. But don't take too long. I need to go over my next plan.." Zoey announced, staring him in the eyes in a stern manner.

"Oh! Okay.." Drew mumbled, as he opened the door.

...

He didn't know where his legs were taking him, quite frankly he didn't care. He just needed a place to escape from Zoey, and escape from what he did to Hailey.

He was lost in his own thoughts, until.

"Oh my- Another survivor?!"

Drew returned to earth, and he replied "Huh?"

"Hey, I'm Stacy!" She said, holding out her hand for a hand shake, "And your...?"

Drew felt his cheeks go slightly red when he saw Stacy. She had beautiful long, dark blue hair. Her bright, happy eyes are sky blue.

"Hello..?" Stacy giggled, "Are you okay?"

"Oh, sorry. I'm Drew-"

"The Drew that bullies the music club?" The sapphire blue haired teenager said in an unimpressed tone.

"Oh- Uh... I guess." Drew sighed, "I'm sorry, I can go-"

"No, no. That won't be necessary." Stacy explained, "I believe people can change.. Well if you're willing too-"

Drew thought for a moment and sighed, "I mean- I can try."

Did Drew want to be with the club? No. Of course not, but he did miss Jake and Lia. He thought if he redeemed himself, he could become friends with his old friends and make friends with new people and then try and become a better person. If hanging around with Zoey was what was in the bag for him if he didn't change, he would be doomed. The only option was to escape and change for good.

"Great!" Stacy smiled, "Do you want to stay in my room, it's just me, Sadie and Daisy. You know them right?"

"Oh I certainly know them." Drew said as flashbacks of him getting terrified by Sadie and flashbacks of Jake simping over Daisy circled his head.

"Haha! Great.. So tell me about yourself." Stacy smiled.

"Well- Uh.. I like playing football. Like... a lot." Drew explained, "It's a big passion of mine."

"Would you feel sad if someone hurt you for liking football?" Stacy asked.

"Uh- I suppose..?" Drew answered, he felt confused on why Stacy was asking him this.

"Do you think it would be rude for people to dislike you for liking something simple?"

"Well- Yeah...-"

"See? First step into becoming a better person." Stacy smiled, before grabbing Drew's hand and running down the corridor, "Now come on!"

Drew felt happy, free. He felt at peace. He was excited for his future. Also, pride filled his head as he realised he could finally have a chance to gain a happier life. Firstly, he just needed to escape this creepy hotel. 



Made: 06/05/23

Words: 1109.

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