KHAMOSHI (Book2 - Birla Broth...

By Taani10

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This story is the Continuation of Book TANHAYEE this book will revolve arround the progress and equation of... More

Introducing the character
Another set of Characters
Prologue
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1. Hesitant Approach
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2. Appologising
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3. A charming Friend
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4. A welcoming change
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5. Breaking his trust
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6. The pain of Past
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7. Two Roaring Lions
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8. Trying to Sort out
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9. Hostaged
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10. New Mysteries
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11. A hint of Past
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12. Care of Brothers
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13. Learning to Let go
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14. Changed Dynamics
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15. 3 idiot Brothers
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16. An unhealthy joke
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17. Making it up
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18. Feeling unwell
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19. Health Condition
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20. Pacifying Angry Brothers
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22. Pressurized Situation
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23. Messed up
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24. Deceision taken
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25. Too late

21. Trap of a Psycopath

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Birla Mansion

Neevan was in his room  as no one was not letting him do anything

Nishant entered with a stack of books...   and handed it to him

Nishant - ye le tere fav writers k books ..  bhai k library se laya hu filhal to isee zyada or koi madat ni kar sakta me teri

neev sulking - kia h yr meko ese bed arrest pr kyu rakha hai mai bilkul thik hu

Nishant whack him

neev - ouuch! kia kar re ho lag ri h mujhe

Nishant - Shukar mana ki Sirf Hath se mara hai abhi tak danda ni uthaya h meine

Neev - Haww ap mujhe dande se maroge?? mar sakte ho

nishant annoyed - Beta zarurat pari to bht kuch kar sakta hu .. mai     tu abhi tak jnta ni h mujhe

Neevan hit him - kia h dhamki kia dete rehte ho mujhe.. mai darta thori hu apse...

Nishant - vo to isliye kyuki meine apna darawna side tujhr dikhaya nhi hai.... baki tu mujhse behes kar he kyu ra hai mujhe smj ni ara ..  tujhe books chahiye tha to dediye ab tu meri tarah normal hota to hum video games khel sakte tha..  par tu to..

Neevan did not let him complete he hit him with a pillow

Neevan - Dont u dare call me boring .!!

Nishant - me boring bolne bhi ni wala

neevan give him a look

nishant - mai Maha boring bolne wala tha... (saying he laughed out )

Neevan fumes - you .!!!

Neevan started hitting him with a pillow while nishant just laughed out...  on the bed... and they were having mini restling in the Bed...







That is when Nirbhay entered and his voice boomed - Ye kia kar re ho tum dono!!

both gasped and Immidiately sat straight... 

Nirbhay angrily - Neevan..  tujhe bed rest ka mtlb smjme ni ata? i told u to rest didnt i..?

Neevan - bhai vo

nirbhay - Shut up ...

neev poutS

nirbhay - Aur tu Mr Nawabzade! tujhe iska dheyan rkhne ko bola tha or tu isk sath restling kar ra hai...

Nishu - are par mai to

nirbhay angrily - just shut up both of you .. hopeless you two are ..! tum dono ko ek sath rakhna or ye ummid karna ki you people will behave ye meri nasamajhi thi!

Neevan - ap ese kyu bol re ho....  mere konse hath pair tut gye hai ki mai hil bhi ni sakta ..

nishant palmed his face this boy has just no self preservation ...

Nirbhay angrily - what did u just said? come again...

Neevan shocked as nirbhay was getting paranoid regarding his health he thought to cool him down  but nirbhay was more infuriated

Nishant - are are bhai.. calm down .....  acha we are sorry... hum ese he masti kar re tha... but from now we will behave..  or neevan  rest he karega sirf

neev was about to retort nishant squeezed his hand telling him not to anger him.. neev sighs and quiet

Nirbhay calm down and Sat with him with soup bowl...

neev cringed - mujhe ye ni khana pichle 3 din se yhi pi ra hu bhai please

Nirbhay -  tujhe yaad h na kabir ne kia bola tha? this week you have to follow his diet chart... next week se tu normal khana khaa sakta hai ...

Neev made sad face...

nishant - or chupa apne health k bare me ..  bht acha hua .. jo bhi hua mujhe to bilkul bhi sympathy ni aa ri hai tujhpe....

Neev sulking - bhai dekho na dada humesha ese pareshan karte h mujhe

Nirbhay - nishant... back off ..

neev is just the apple of Nirbhay's eyes he cant see him sad .. and he is openly being biased towards him...

Nishant - aree bhai... ap mujhe kia bol re ho ..  are agar yaha bhaiyu hote na to trust me iske sare nakhre hawa me phurr hojate

Neev pouts - apko bht maza ata h na jb mujhe daat party h ap ruko apki bari ane do chun chun k badla ni lia na to mera naam bhi neevan nhi

Nishant - chal chal ... 

Nirbhay sighs - hogya tum dono ka??

Both look at him... when they start they just forget that there is someone else also present

Nirbhay fed neevan while neevan had no other option but to have it .. 

Nirbhay - Kahi bhi shuru hojate ho na tum dono mtlb kuch sochte bhi nhi .. or nishu tu.. tu to bara h atleast tujhse to mai thodi smjdari ki ummid rkh sakta hu na?

nish made faces

Nirbhay - kuch ni hosakta tumlogo ka .. u gyzz are just hopeless

Neev - ye na ap bhaiyu ko bolo... gurudev se he sikha h inhone sabkuch

Nirbhay - ha jese tu to gurudev se kuch sikh he ni raha h na

neev look away

Nirbhay - wese h kaha mahashay... subah subah bina nashta kiye he nikl liye .. 

nishant sheepishly smile he knew his bhaiyu must have gone to meet kritika ... 

Nirbhay raised his eyebrows - muskura kyu raha hai...

Nish innocently - nhi to.. me bas ese he kuch yaad aa gya

while neev curious he knew something was definitely going on his dada's head while nirbhay after feeding neevan handed him his medicin... and left kissing him on his forehead

Nirbhay - rest okay .. agli bar agar tujhe tere dada k sath milk Uchalte kudte dekha na ..  to Dono ko alag alag kamre ne rkh dunga

nishant n neevan shook his head they love each other company a lot ..  Nirbhay ruffled both of there head and left....

Nishant sighs in releif

neevan. curiously - kia chl ra h apke dimag me.. kaha gye h bhaiyu

Nishant - are apni glty sudharne

Neevan - mtlb

nish - are jab tu bimar para tha tab hum sab bht dar gye tha..  kritika di ne tere health condition k bare me bataya to pta chla na sabko to bhaiyu kafi gussa hogye tha unse . bht kuch  suna dia unhe gusse me

Neev tens - what?

nish sighs and told him everything...

Neev - oh god unka koi fault bhi ni tha..  meine he unhe mana kia tha kyuki me khud batana chahta tha

Nishant - But tere khud batane k chkkar me lene k dene par gye na Baby boo!! (sarcasm)

Neev frowns

nishant - to bas bhaiyu wohe gye h ... kriti di se sorry bolne

neev - bhaiyu or sorry??

nishant - haa jnta hu bht mushkil h bolna ye word ..  but bolna to parega na glty jo ki h i hope vo bol paye

neev sighs and nodded....

Scene shifts to the car which kritika was in

Kritika  was looking here and there  they were moving far away from the city..

Kriti confused - ye jagah sheher se itni dur h kia? i mean hum kafi age aa gye h...apko nhi lgta

Driver - Are madam mujhe Jo adress bola gya h me usi hisab se to jaunga na... ap chinta mat kijiye bas pohochne  he wale hai

Kritika dont know why she was feeling bit uneasy the ride the driver the place everything was feeling her uncomfortable but she thinks she might be over thinking.....

While otherhand in Birla Hospital

Nirav entered he wanted to talk with Kritika first he knew he over reacted and he need to sort the mess out  by talking to her

Nirav went to her cabin but she wasnt there.... 

Nirav came out and ask a staff passing by

nirav -excuse me Tumne Doc kritika ko kahi dekha?

Staff - No sir... vo to abhi tak nhi ayi hai.. 

Nirav confused - abhi tak nhi ayi? strange...  umm agar vo aye to mujhe inform karna thik hai...

Staff nodded and left from there

While Nirav went to his room to check on the files of his patient...

That is when he saw A card stcking in his laptop

* I know whatever happened shouldnot have... it was my fault...  mujhe neevan ki baat ni manni chahiye thi mujhe tumhe bata dena chahiye... not jystifying anything... just wana say i m sorry... anything related to neevan was his  story  to tell .. me us space me enter nhi karna chahty thi...   I hope you will understand that and give me a chance ... *

Nirav sighs that was a sincere appology for the mistake which she did not even commit... she was right it was neevan's story to tell...how come being an outsider she could intrude in that space ...   

Nirav palmed his face He take out his phone to call her but it wasnt reachable...

Nira. frowns where was she....? 



Vanraj Mittal




otherhand

In a deserted area kritikas car was stopped...

she came out to see it was A romantic set up.. with rose petals and many other things

kritika tens up is that even a birthday celebration going on.... 

kritika turned but to her shock the car just zoomed away.... she was all alone there

kritika tens - agar yaha party chal ri h to baki log kaha hai?? 

That is when vanraj came from her back and huskily spoke - Thank you...

Kritika flinched chilled ran down her spine hearing that creepy voice

kritika turned to see Vanraj was Standing right behind her.

vanraj smiled - For accepting my invitation...

Kritika tens up and faked a smile - H..happy Birthday mr.mittal

Vanraj - Ohh this Mr.Mittal sounds so formal... from you... common you can call me Vanraj...  

Kritika stiff...  and look arround. - yaha apki party ho ri h ??

Vanraj smirked - yes offcourse

kritika - nhi mtlb koi dikh nhi raha

Vanraj - Oh common Kritika i told you it is..

kritika cut him off -  thats Doc thakur .. mr.mittal

Vanraj  taken a back but that spark is something which he love the most

Vanraj - umm okau i mean Doc thakur this is an  exclusive private party ... jaha pe sirf mere closed friends allowed hai.. and tumse zyada close to mera..

kritika shocked this man was again saying all this creepy things  while vanraj immidiately changed his statement

vanraj - uhh i mean... my close friends are on the way only.. you please come .. and sit.... 

kritika tensed - nhi ..  mujhe jana h Mr.mittal.. once again a happy Birthday...  i...

Vanraj stop her - aree are abhi to ayi ho...what is wrong with you...  abhi to meinr cake bhi ni kata see

Kritika tens while vanraj just gently take her near the table.. and made her sit...

Vanraj smirking - common Doc thakur i think you are not comfortable please ease out.. you are absolutely safe with me

kritika - vo gari... actually...  jo car ayi thi vo

vanraj - Jab tumhe jana hoga vo wapas aa jaegi for now lets enjoy the moment...

Kritika tens up she realised it was a clear foolishness that she agrees tp come over here... 

Vanraj - look Doc thakur i understand u r still not comfortable arround me... but trust me i m not a bad guy...  its just u r so beautiful that i just couldnt take my eyes off from you

Kritika stilled what was this man saying.... 

vanraj - but but it was all in the past....   Dekho ye to tum bhi smjty hogi attraction happens isme kisika zor ni hota i m just being vocal about it...

Kritika just look here and there she just have the gut feeling that being with that man is not safe!!

Vanraj offered her a drink - Acha jab tak mere friends ni aa jate u can have a drink

kritika - mujhr hospital jana h Mr mittal i hope you understand that i do a emergency job! my patients needs me ... beside agar mujhe pta hota ki apka venue itna dur hai to me kbhi ni aty... why didnt u tell me about this!

Vanraj thinks - Itni dur nhi rakhta to tumhe apne karib kese ane deta....

Kritika - Mr mittal i m asking you something

vanraj - uh.. uhh i mean see mere dosto ki demand thi so couldnt deny them ...  mere life me mere dosto ki bht ehmiyat or abhi ap bhi to meri dost he hai

Kritika absolutely hating this typ of conversation...

Vanraj - common doc thakur Ap mera birthday pe ayi hai... or kuch le bhi ni rahi

kritika - i dont drink Mr mittal ap...

and she started coughing a bit... 

Vanraj immidiately handed him a glass of water - are are aram se...

Kritika moved the glass away - it's fine..

vanraj - common pani to pi lijiye... i will arrange for soft drink soon

Kritika coughrd so much that she could not help but drink the water.. vanraj smirked... he looked at the waiter from far.. who just nodded

kritika just jerk his hand away the way he was holding her  it was just Making her uncomfortable

kritika - just dont touch me! i m fine

Vanraj - u r not fine doc thakur .  i think u should take some rest

kritika stood up she started feeling dizzy her head was spinning

Kritika - m.. mujhe hospital jana hai

vanraj smirked - chale jaenge... pehle ap thik to hojaiye.. 

Kritika - ma..mai thik hu .. just   let me .  go let me...  ..

and the world darkened arround her she fell unconsious.. while vanraj hold her .. he smiled he wanted this only and he was getting it

Vanraj smirked - Kaha tha na tumse Kritika... the thing which i want it i get it... at any cost .. aur tum sirf meri ho... kritika! 

Saying he picked her up and took her somewhere..... 



otherhand in Birla Hospital

Nirav was waiting for kritika its almost afternoon she was not here yet where was she......   she is new to Mumbai don't have any friends too whete can she go

nirav thinks - Kahi bhi jaye me kyu soch ra hu itna... 

that is when there was a knock in the cabin

nirav - Kritika tum..

he turned to see Nirbhay there...

nirav startled - bhai ap? ap kabse knock krne lge ... u can come in anytime

nirbhay - Bhai tu mera ghar pe hai... yaha you are a doctor i cannot just come in like that

nirav annoyed - me har jgh apka he bhai dont give me this stupid lecture... 

Nirbhay shook his head and sat 

Nirav - aap yaha kia kar re ho? kuch hua h? sab thik hai?? neevan? (tensed) vo thik h na bhai bo

nirbhay sighs and cub his face - ssh relax relax nir...  sab thik hai...

Nirav - To aap yaha kese

Nirbhay glare at him - Tu breakfast kiye bager ghar se kyu chala aya!!

Nirav sighs and palmed his face - god are u serious bhai ap isk liye

Nirbhay whack him - Nirav Birla apne ap ko itna bhi importance dene ki zarurat ni h....dont forget i m the Founder of this hospital .. kuch kam k silsile me ana tha... socha tere liye lunch bhi leta chalu... Divya ne gajar ka halwa bnaya h tere fav ..

Nirav sighs and smiled

Nirbhay - kia soch ra h .. kha le... Garam h thanda hojaega to phir acha nhi lgega ....  aur ye sab kia h nirav...  kab tak me tere piche piche ye sab karta rahu ..  doctor bn gya h ab to khudki responsibility lena sikh le ... 

nirav sighs - me kha leta bhai .. apne kyu takliff ki canteen h na yaha

Nirbhay - Acha to subah kia khaya tune....

nirav quiet

nirbhay mocked - canteen h na... kha lia?

Nirav raised his hands in surrender - apse baato me koi ni jit sakta...!

Nirbhay - to koshish bhi kyu karta h .. kha le chup chap...

nirav - Ap kese manage krlete ho bhai... itne sare kamo k bich hum sabka take care krna .. bhals he khudk sugar level ka koi ata pata na ho... but humari fikar karna ni choroge

nirbhay glared - bakwas mat kar... kha le .. Aj me hu puch ra hu ... kal jab nhi rahunga tab chalana apni marzi

nirav angrily - Bhai..

Nirbhay startled

nirav stood up - kitni bar bola h apse ye sab baate ni bolna fr bhi ap...! aur kaha jaoge ap? haan??? kia ye jane ki baat bolte rehte h

Nirbhay sighs - nir i didnt mean it that way ... 

Nirav - mtlb chahe jesa bhi ho! ap kyu bologe!! esi bakwas!! u know what bhai ... ap please jao mujhe bht kam h ..

saying nirav was about to walk out Nirbhay stop

nirbhay - Baapre itna gussa aa gya mere chote bhai ko... me kaha tujhe aj kal me kahi chor k jaa ra hu .. dont worry tera picha me ni chorne wala ..  kyuki meine agar chordia to tum tino pagal ne mere ghar ko tehes nehes kardena h .. 

Nirav just hug him nirbhay is the only treasure in his life whom he hold on his life is nothing without his bhai .

Nirbhay gently - Nir . i m sorry baccha.... me mazak kar ra tha...

Nir - mazak me bhi nhi bhai ..  esi baate mat bola karo please

Nirbhay sighs - okay i m sorry...  nhi bolunga chal beth....

Nirbhay made him sit and gently started feeding him nirav ate from his hand

Nirbhay - Baccha h kia nir... kyu kheyal ni rkhta khudka.... tujhe 12 ghnte duty krni hoty h kbhi kbhi usse bhi zyada khudko superman smjta h kia ...  bina khaye piye kese karega

Nirav sighs - itna lecture mat do ..  wese he bhuk bhi lgi h .. khilao ap ..wesw bhi mujhe to attention dete bhi nhi ho.. jabse nishu paida hua h mere jivan me grahan lga dia or ab ek aur aa gya h.  mujhe to bhul he jate ho ap...

Nirbhay whack him - sharam karle thora sa chote chote bhaio se jlta h

Nir - ese konse kitab me likha h chote bhaiyo se ni jal sakta ...




Nirbhay shook his head and fed him

while then Nirav's phone ring...

Nirav immidiately pick it up - hello kriti kaha ho tum.. mai..... (and he realised it is some other person) yeah bhej do...

nirbhay raised his eyebrows - kia baat h kritika ko kuch zyada yaad kar ra h .. me jb enter kia tab bhi uska he naam tha tere zaban pe or ab bhi

nirav sighs - esa kuch nhi h bhai .. actually  mujhe usse baat karni thi kuch and vo hospital me nhi ayi hai

Nirbhay frowns - kyu? tbyt to thik h na uski ..tune usk ghar call kia

Nirav - ghar se he aa ra hu bhai..vo nikl chuki thi subah subah ... pta nhi kaha gyi h hospital to ayi nhi h..  aur Mumbai me koi khas dost to h nhi uska.... 

Nirbhay - ohh... but shayed ho koi friend tujhe ni pta

nirav - nhi bhai nhi h .. aur agar h bhi to hospital duty krk to jana chahiye na esa kia bina bataye chli gyi ... har jgh safe thori hoty h or vo nayi bhi hai .. use utna kuch pta bhi nhi h ... u dont know her bht jaldi logo k baato me aa jaty h vo...

Nirbhay suprised that was a pure concern he was seeing in his brother's eyes for kritika.. is there something cooking? did he miss out something??

Nirav - kia? ap kia soch re ho

Nirbhay sighs - kuch nhi ...  agar kritika se baat ho to take her home with u ...  us din hospital me... kahi na kahi meine bhi over react krdia tha .. it was not her fault actually .. bring her for dinner ..! divya ko bhi acha lgega ..

Nirav - pehle vo mile to sahi bhai!! pta ni konsi duniya me jake bethi h...

Nirbhay smiled and left ... he just hope and pray that whatever he is thinking is correct and they pair up together...!

Otherhand In a close room..  

Kritika open her eyes slowly her head was feeling extremely heavy... where was she?

she look arround and gasped to realise she was in a room all tied up

kritika - mmm..

she wanted to speak but her mouth was also tapped

Kritika - mmm.. mmm... 

she tens up panicking she look at the door and vanraj entered

Vanraj huskily - Hello beautiful .. hope you had a good sleep

kritika panicking she wanted to freed herself but nothing was working...

Vanraj - u know what sweetheart.... jis din se meine tumhe pehli bar dekha tha na uff i fell in love with you.... isiliye to tumsw milne ata tha hospital... imagine hospital!! is that even a plaxe to come but i used to come every day almost.. kyu? taki tumhe dekh saku...  tumhe mehsus kar saku....  but.. u.. u never let me come closrr.. i wanted to date you.. just like any other guy but u didn't give me an option or phor .. tumhara vo stupid Doc birla pta ni kia smjta h khudko.. he closed my entry! do u even know that...







kritika shock she did not know that

Vanraj - isiliye to ye sab plan kia mane... mai tumhe apna bnan chahta hu.
kritika!! u r mine kritika!!

Kritika eyez had teayea she was feeling helpless..  why the hell she came here... she was a fool ...  oh god!! now who will save her

kritika tried untieing the rope by which her hands were guard on... vanraj was speaking something as the hands were tieng loosely a bit she tried to free herself .. and after few attempts she did it...

Vanrah was talking while she freed her hands and removed the tap from her mouth and SLAPPED. vanraj right across his face

kritika angrily - you Bustard!! who the hell do u think u r!! i trusted u!!! mujhe lga u wanted a chance u ...

kritika pushed aside him vanraj shocked kritika was about to ran away vanraj just grab her from the waist and pushed her back

vanraj angrily - not now kritika!! tumhe kia lgta h ... yaha se bhag sakty ho!! ye jgh sheher se bht dur h ...  no one can save you from me!!

Kritima shocked

vanraj - common kritika i love u only i want to love u .. aur pyaar koi gunah to nhi h

kritika loather he was a clear psycopath

kritika pushed him and truedt running away but vanraj hold was firm

kritika cried - vanraj.. Vanraj please.. please let me go!! meine tumhara kia bigara

vanraj - bigar to me bhi ni raha kuch sweetheart.. bas pyaar he to karna chahta hu ...

Kritika cried she just dont  know how to get herself out from that creep she tried to free herself but his hold was stronger...

Kritika saw a flower vas she hit in his shoulder with that  

vanraj -aahh ouch!!! what the hell

kritika pushed him she ran away.. grabbing her phone....   

Vanraj angrily... - ruko!!!  u cannot  run away from me !!

Kritika cried she came out of the room she donr know which place it look like a very creepy place....  Kritika cried she open her phone and saw few missed calls from nirav

kritika gasped while vanraj was running behind to catch her... she hide herself somewhete and called nir...

Nir who was Working saw the call and fumes now she was calling after ignoring his calls

Nir pick up - what the hell is this Kritika ... ek to tum hospital nhi ayi or upar se ye kia

Kritika cried gasped - H..help. . help please... ni..nirav

nirav gasped hearing her broken voice...   - kritika!!! (panicked) what happened

kriti cried - n..nir i.. i am trapped please please help me ... 

nirav panickrd - kia.. kia hua h where are u trapped? kia ho kia raha h

kritika - itna wakt nhi h nirav...he is following me...  i m hiding in a room...

nirav tens - kaun kaha... se bol ri ho tum

kritika cried - v.. vanraj.. vanraj mittal he trapped me!! (cried) mujhe nhi pta vo mujhe kaha phasa laya h....  i.. (she told everything)

nirav shocked - kritika relax mai.. mai aa ra hu.. tumje koi idea hai..? Location kaha j

kritika cried - pta nhi but sheher se dur

Nir tensed up - ok ok u just stay put apna phone ka GPS on karo...  i will trace u out!!!

Kritika nodded she opened the GPS... but vanraj just entered kritika gasped and phone fell from her.....

vanraj smirk - hello beautiful... loving this hide and seek

kritika gasped she tried to move away but vanraj pushed her she fell down hurting her head

kritika winced - aah!!

it was bleeding she looked at him with terrified eyes while vanraj approach to her




while nirav shock he heard the commotion between them

nirav scream - hello hello kritika!!! damm...

nir just rushed out of the hospital he need to reach to her as soon as possible?!!

otherhand

Kritika was feeling dizzy due to the bleeding but she needs to protect her self... she struggled and pushex him aside..

vanraj shock she lock him up

kritika gasped and came out she needed to run..! to save herself!!

While nirav drove the car in windspeed..... 

while kritika was running to save herself vanraj kicked hard the door and burst it open and ran to follow her...

kritika couldnot even ran faster due to Her injuey vanraj get hold of her And in this proces her dress tore a bit... kritika gasped and screamed for help - NOO PLEASE!!

But seems like vanraj was nothing but a Devil..! who was just trying to last on her.... 

While  one media person noticed the way nirav birla was driving breaking the traffic rules

Media - ye car Nirav Birla  ki h na?

other personality - ha ha

media - ChL chal cover krte h... i m sure Koi hot news ki coverage mil jaegi kl k headlines k liye! soch the great Nirbhay Birla ka bhai..!! Traffic rules tor ra h ...   sadak ko baap ka ghar smj ra h bht trp ayegi ..

Media - lets follow him!!

some media personalities tried following his car but nir was so fast that they could hardly catch him...!!!

Whils vanraj tried to force herself on Kritika .. kritika cried helplessly....  She felt she just lost the hope no one would be able  to save her !!!

That is when Nirav entered in the room Thudding ... the GPS location helped a lot

vanraj shocked - NIRAV BIRLA??

Kritika gasped.... nirav saw the sight he felt infuriated.....  he get hold of vanraj and kick and punch him hard while kritika cried coverong herself

vanraj shock - tum.. tum yaha kese

nirav slapped him punch him pushex him hs took hold of a wooden stick and started hitting him black n blue

vanraj - Aah.... nirav!!! nirav wait

nirav angrily - kaha tha tujhse!! apni limit pe raha kar! kaha tha tujhse ku dur reh!!!

Kritika cried and gasped nirav had become mad with angr he will kill him

kritika - Nir... nir vo mar jaega

nirav angrily - himmat.. himmat kese hui teri!! ek ladki l sath zabardasti karne ki.. himmat ..

kritika tried stopping him....

Vanraj was bleeding badly.... nirav pushex him to the window side n that is when vanraj show media personalities car entering he was shockex he couldnot risk his name coming

vanraj pushex nirab harshly .. and just ran away from there

nirav angrily -bbhagta kaha h sale... tu

kritika cried - Nirav please.. please...  stop it!

Nirav saw her bleeding her dress torn she was crying .. kritika hugged him...  and cried...

nirav just hug her tightly ... - sshh sshh calm down ... u r safe.... 






That is when they heard a click sound... nirav turned and shocked he immidiately hide kritika behind him..... while media was clicking pictures like no tomorrow....  now who will save them from the Messed up situation!!

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