KHAMOSHI (Book2 - Birla Broth...

By Taani10

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This story is the Continuation of Book TANHAYEE this book will revolve arround the progress and equation of... More

Introducing the character
Another set of Characters
Prologue
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1. Hesitant Approach
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2. Appologising
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3. A charming Friend
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4. A welcoming change
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5. Breaking his trust
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6. The pain of Past
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7. Two Roaring Lions
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8. Trying to Sort out
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9. Hostaged
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10. New Mysteries
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11. A hint of Past
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12. Care of Brothers
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13. Learning to Let go
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14. Changed Dynamics
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15. 3 idiot Brothers
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17. Making it up
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18. Feeling unwell
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19. Health Condition
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20. Pacifying Angry Brothers
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21. Trap of a Psycopath
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22. Pressurized Situation
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23. Messed up
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24. Deceision taken
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25. Too late

16. An unhealthy joke

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Birla Mansion

Nirbhay gave a look to Neev who was appologising sincerely 

Neev sadly - Bhai me janta hu meine jo kia vo galat tha ... mujhe itna zyada react ni karna chahiye tha ..  age se me dheyan rakhunga....  

Nir and nishu could see how upset neevan was becoming... and they just could not see him sad this lil soul has wrapped everyone arround his lil finger and that is the fact ..  

Nishu - bhai ab ap use maaf bhi kardo dekho kitna upset hai vo... and wesw bhi esa bhi kia kardia vo RD to h he......

nirbhay shot him a glare and nish went quiet.. and hide behind nir...as nir is his saviour always

Nir sighs - Kyu ankh dikha re ho bacche ko ... bhai ap na kuch zyada he...

Nirbhay started to go near nir.. nirav shocked his voice dried out no one can handle that look

Nirbhay - kuch kehna tha tujhe nir... go ahead complete the sentence

Nir - uhh nhi matlab kuch nhi .. 

Nirbhay sighs - tum dono jao yaha se mujhe neevan se kuch baat karni h....

Nishu - dekho bhai baccha h vo... ap na zyada strict mat... bno ap

Nirbhay glared at him ....  nishu left with nir because he knew therez no use talking ..   now


Whilw nirbhay turned to neev to see him getting tensed and agitated.. the boy was thinking too much if it was nishant or nir they would have just showed million of tantrums to make him give in but the boy was carrying a lot of baggage with him that was scaring him .. he could read it in his eyes 

Nirbhay went upto him neev look at him teary he was getting scared what if he let down his brother?

Nirbhay take him to the garden area and both sat near the garden lawn area

Nirbhay - why are u crying neevan.. meine to tujhe danta bhi nhi na he kuch bola

Neev teary - kyu ni daat re ho ap mujhe? meine bht let down kardia na apko.... 

Nirbhay sighs he should have known neevan is not used to such things....

Nirbhay pulled him closer - itni choti si baat k liye koi let down hota h kia neevan?

Neev - To kyu ni baat kar re ho ap mujhse....

Nirbhay - Tune to kaha tha tune kuch galat ni kia .. to kia fark parta h me kuch bolu ya na bolu

Neev - fark ni par ra hota to me itne efforts karta kia?

Nirbhay look at him and sighs

Nirbhay - Jo Aj tumne principal room me kia vo galat tha neevan.... how could you behave that way with your professor? tu to mera samjdar baccha hai na....  tune kese ye

Neev - par unhone jo dhir k satj kia vo?... vo bhi to sahi ni h

nirbhay - Dhir se glty hui thi neev u cannot ignore that fact usne assignment nhi kiye tha.... to professor ka gussa hona jaes tha.... 

Neev - par dhir ko attack aa ra tha bhai vo bht dar gya tha use agar asthama attack aa jata to?? ap nhi jnte use na choty choty chize bht dara dety h vo exam k pehle kitna darta h ap soch bhi ni skte ....  kitni bar dar k mare bimar par jata tha....  tbhi meine apna assignment use de dia ..

Nirbhay just felt touched he could see his boy has a heart of gold .... how could anyone can even stay mad at this boy... he was just love ..

Nirbhay pulled him to his chest neev felt releifed this is the most safest place for him

Neev - Baat jab dhir ki aty h me khudko control ni karpata bhai... i m sorry

Nirbhay - baat kisiki bhi aye tu khudko control ni karpayega that just make u the person who you are?.. apne family sw pyaar to har koi karta h neevan lekin apne dost k liye kisiki parwah kiye bager khare rehna it takes a really big heart and i m very proud of you for that

Neev smiled

Nirbhay - par baccha u need to understand therez a certain way to behave in the classroom... specially infront of your professor .. your principal..  agar vo log kuch bol re h to tumhare bhale k liye he bol re h na... assignment time se complete karna sare students ki responsibility hoty hai...dhir se glty hui tbhi professor ne use danta har bar agar tu dhir ko is tarah se protect karta rahega to ye usk liye acha nhi hai... use bhi face karna sikhna hoga consequences...    that will just make him stronger... trust me whej i say this ..

Neev sighs and nodded .. nirbhsy kissed his forehead

nirbhay - or ye kia hai... itni choty choty baato me ansu kabse anee lge tere ankho me ..  tere trainers ne ye ni sikhaya ki mujhse kese deal karna hai.... 

Neev pouts - Ap kyu esa bolte ho kisine mujhe kuch ni sikhaya ...

Nirbhay - Acha mere he samne khare hoke mujhse he jhut bol ra h... beta tu jab paida bhi ni hua tha na tbsw janta hu in namuno ko.... so u better dont lie for them...

Neev sighs... 

Nirbhay - look neev dost k liye khare rehna is okay...  lekin uski galty chupake usko defend karna is not... mai aj wale incident ki baat ni kar ra hu .. i understand.. hojata h kabhi kabhi.... lekin me future ki baat kar ra hu...  agar dhir se ya krish se koi galty hojay to tu unhe smjhaega unki galty chupake use barhawa ni dega....  mera baccha na galat karega na galat ka sath kabhi dega...  okay??

neev look at him with a smile whenever nirbhay calls him baccha it just blooms his heart he put his head on his chest






nirbhay smile - I hope ajka ye lesson yaad rahega tujhe....  

Neev nooded while Nirav and nishant came there ... curiously

Nishu - wao bhai.. mtlb very good .. agar mai galty karu to kan khichte ho mere lekin yahi neev se Itna pyaar luta re ho

nirav - bht partiality h ye to ..

neev - kia h aplogo ka... abhi ap mere side tha na jese he bhai mujhse pyaar kar re h to Jalan k mare jaan nikl ri h apki

Nishu - eee jale tere dushman hum kyu jalne lge hum to bas ye bol re h itni partiality bhi thk nhi hai ... 

Nirbhay roll his eyes - Acha hua tujhe pta chl gya me partial hu chal ab nikal .. mujhe apne bacche se baat karni h

nishu shocked - haw bhaiyu dekh re ho... kese bol re h kahi me adopted to nhi hu na

neev and nirav laughed out while nishant pouts 

while he went near nirbhsy and sat on his lap

nirbhay - kia hua mr adopted...  ab idhar kese aa gye ap

Nishant hug him - adopted hu ya kuch bhi rahunga to apka he bhai na ... ap do ya na do me apki attention apni taraf khich he lunga..

Nirbhay shook his head .. nishabt is just a baby trapped in adult body but he love this child a lot ...  his purity of his heart just make him who he is .. he is the Joy of Birla house without him whole Birla mansion is gloomy....  there sunshine...   

Otherhand

Agnihotri mansion

Dev was in his study dhir was just preparing himself to go to the lions den...

Dhruv - Kia hogya lil rabbit ja na

Dhir - mujhr bht dar lag ra h bhaiyu ap chalo please

dhruv - mai.. mai kyu? aa aa me to kuch jnta he ni Mai kese

dhir disgusted - seriously? apki wjh se hua h jo bhi hua h me bhul gya assignment apki wjh se

Dhruv - haww meri wjh se kese kese

Dhir - Apne Netflix chalaya or vo stupid Vampire Diaries dekhi jispe mujhe bhi interest aa gya or me bhul gya

Dhruv - are to mujhw kaha pta tha tera assignment hai

They were going on and on that is when A voice from Otherside

Dev - lgta h bht serious discussion chal ri h mind if i join?

Dhruv and dhir stilled they turned to see Dev glaring at them..... 

Dhir - bhai

Dev - when did i told u to come to my room?

dhir look down - 4

dev - and now what is the time

dhir - 6..

dev - Kisiki baat ni sunne ka ye talent kabse jagruk hua h tumme dhiraj mujhe to pta ni tha .. 

dhir sadly - Bhai me vo actually

dhruv - bhai dar gya hoga vo kyu ap

dev - principal room me to ye dar dikha ni.. zaban kenchi ki tarah chl ri thi ..

dhir pouts.  

Dev glared - Assignment kyu ni kia dhiraj?

dhruv - are bhai usne kia tha leke jana bhul gya hoga

Dev knew dhruv will lie to protect him but dhir cannot lie looking into his eyes

Dev - tune kia tha assignment??

Dhir look down dev made him look up - look into my eyes when i m talking to u

Dhruv - bhai kyu dara re ho ap bacche ko vo

Dev - Dhruv out of my room

dhruv - nhi nhi me kuch ni bolunga but mujhe yhi rehna h

Dev groaned this idiot will just distract them ..

Dev - dhir i m asking u something! kyu ni kia tunw

Dhruv eyed him not to tell him anything but dhir just cant lie looking at his eyes so he just spoke up everything

Dhruv palmed his face Dev shocked - bing watching puri raat???

Dhir sadly hug him - age se esa kabhi ni higa bhai sorry....   vo date he dimg se nikl gya

Dev shot a disgusted glared at dhruv.. dhruv knew he was a dead meat...!!

At the Roy Kapoor Mansion

Krish running in the whole house because there was literally tsunami going on

Krish. - are bachao bachao koi bachao mujje ise khunkar  prani se

Kabir was running behind krish like an angry bull - khunkar prani k bacche tu ruk.. udhar ...

Krish - nhi nhi me ni rukunga mujhe meri jaan bht pyaari h bhai

Krish ran here to there while Kabir trying to catch him ...

Krish - bachao yr bhabhiii.... 

he ran and hide behind Avika His bhabhi

Kabir - Avi hat jao tum samne se aj me ise chorunga nhi ..

krish - bhabhi dekho bhai kese Mar re h mujhe

Avi glaring at kabir - what is wrong with u kabir baccha dar ra h na

Kabir - acha ye darta bhi h? thank u mujhe batane k liye mujhe to pta he ni tha

krish pouts - dekho kese tane de re h mujhe bhabhi

kabir get hold of him and drag him - Aacha beta ab meri shikayat tu meri biwi se karega jabki shikayate me teri sunk aa ra hu vo bhi college se

Krish meekily - ha to me kia

kabir whack him - itna palat jawab krish ye sikhaya h meine tujhe.... 

Krish pouts - par bhai vo principal mam jo itna Sara

Kabir - galty tumlogo ne ki h u cant deny the fact! Bhale he reason jo bhi ho jo galat h vo h krish!!

krish look down

Kabir - But as what u did . you did for saving your friend tere intention only tere intention ki  wjh se i m letting this matter go ....

Krish sighs in releif

Krish happily - to matlab no punishment

kabir  mockingly - but the name which u just gave me .. you will hand me your phone to me now

krish horrified - whatt phone???

kabir - Yes no screen time for 2 days ...

Krish - bhai mera ram nam satya hojaega phone k bina kese

kabir whack him - chup kar jab dekho bakwas karta rehta hai...

krish snuggle closer to him - bhai please na mere ache bhai ho na no phone please

Kabir - do u want me to make that a week

krish groaned while kabiir left taking his phone.....  krish pouts

kabir - shakal mat bna ... weekend me bna dunga tujhe tere BBQ

krish eyes beamed in happines he just love it ...

otherhand

Dhir and dhruv standing like a scared puppy .. dev was taking out there laptops and all video games out of the room

Dhruv - bhai ye ap kia kar re ho... age se ni hoga sacchi.... humne to bas 2 din masti karne ka socha tha

dev - age se ese hone k chnces bhi ni h abse leke finals tak ye sab mere paas rahega mere nigrani me

Dhir and dhruv horrified

Dev - aur agar tum dono me se kisine hoshiyari dikhayi then trust me boys i m going to lock u up and officially ground you for a year ...  i hope u dont want that

both shook there head Cutely.. dev control his smile

dev - Now common fresh n up and padne betho dono...2 din k liye bht zyada masti karli tumlogo ne now study...

Dhruv make faces while dev give him a glare dhruv hold dhir and about to go but dhir rush to dev n hug him

dhir smiling - abhi aur gussa ni hona ap

dhruv disgusted that mam just confiscated there video game here he was hugging him.. he dont get it what dhir gets by doing it . it is just too much fr dhruv to digest

Whilw dev smile and pulled him closer he just cant stay mad at this boy he has his heart.. his innocent smile is something which warm his heart

dev - tujhe teri galty ka ehsaas h na dhir

dhir nodded

dev - u wont repeat this right .

dhir shook his head

Dev ruffle his hair - this is only what i want . or apne bhaiyu se Achi adate Sikh ye bandaro wali Adate suit ni krty tujhe

Dhruv annoyed - mai bandar ni hu

Dhir giggles - to kia ho chimpanzee??

Dhruv shock while both dev and dhir laughed oit

dhruv fumes  - mujhe ni karni aplogo se baat saying he walked out

dhir gasped - oops bhaiyu to gussa hogye....me unhe manak aya

dev - koi gussa ni h attention pane k tarike h uske tu ni janta usw

dhir sighs - nhi fr bhi me ekbar dekh ata hu

saying he left while dev smile dhir and dhruv are like glue with each other just cant live without each other...  he is happy to see Dhir blooming under there love and enjoying his life ...   the way he should....

Next day morning ...

Birla Mansion

Nishant was showing tantrums - mujhe ye ni khana .. kuch aur bna do

Nirav - kyu subah subah nakhre kar ra h aj bhai ko jaldi office jna h or bhabhi ko bho

Divya - koi baat ni nir... kia khana h bata bna dety hu actually nir ne he kha ki

nir - Bhabhi isko sar pe mat charhao me bol ra hu ek din bread omlette kha lega. to kuch ni hoga....

nishu pouts ..

While neevan was having his food quietly

Nishu - but bhaiyu ye kitna boring h dekho

Nir - vo kesw kha ra h hum kese kha re h... 

nishu - ye to h he boring... mai ni hu borong

neev - me boring ni hu .. and seriously ek din thora healthy kha loge to acha he h bhaiyu.. bhai ne laad deke bigar dia h apko

Nir - i agree

Nishu - haww.... Laad ki baat kar kon ra h batao kal jo itna bara kand hua... bhai ne ise ekbhi punishment ni di.. yhi kand me krta to ek hafte ghar se niklna mushkil hojata mera

Nirbhay - Vo to wesw bhi hojaega nishant ...

nish stuck now what did he do.... he know the tone well

nirbhay glared - where is your car?

Nishu - uhh he started eating the food quietly suddenly this dish becane the most tastiest dish for him

Nirbhay - meine kuch pucha nishant!! kaha h teri car

Nishu - Vo.. vo servicing pe

Nirbhay - pichle hafte he servicing se ayi thi care to explain ek hafte me esa kia hogya ki servicing pe le jni pari and if i be specific kal kia hua tha

nishu shock he look at nirbhay .. did his brother get to know? he look at nir who has no idea about it... 

Neevan knew the entire thing nishant had shared it..

nish whisper - tune bataya

neev - mai kyu batane lga ... 

nish - to bhai achnk mere piche kyu pare h

Nirbhay - idhar udhar mat dekhiye nishant ji or zarw bataiye kal kia kya apne?

nishu - kuch nhi bhai .. 

Nirbhay angrily - you seriously think ..  i will not know? what the hell were u doing on that road .

nir - bhai vo

Nirbhay - tu to chup he reh nirav! dont think i dont know how u solved the matter

Nir look away...

Nishu - bhai mai ...

nirbhay - chup ekdam chup! handme your car keys

Nishant shocked - bhaii

nirbhay angrily - Nishant hand me your car keys Noww!!!

Nishu - bhai mai... sachi esa dubara ni karunga vo glty se

nirbhay angrilu - galty se nishant? galty se gari thok di tune? khudk sath sath Arharv ki jaan bhi khtre me daal di

nishant - bhai u r over reacting.. ap ko shayed apke tattuo ne over exegerate krk kuch bola hoga ... but utna kuch hua ni tha trust me

Nirbhay with dangerous hint - i will not ask you for the second time nishant.. keys!!!

Nishant flinched he gave the keys to him

Nirbhay angrily - Ab ye keys tumhe us din milengi jis din tum responsible bnoge! responsible enough to drive carefully...  keep your liscenes with you...


Nishu look down feeling bad

Nir - bhai.. baccha h glty hogyi vo

Nirbhay - or us galty ko kese sudhara tune? rishwat dekr? is this what u r making him learn nirav??? 

nirav - bhai vo Police officer rishwat khor he tha vo aya he tha paisa aitne jese he meine paise dia uski bolty bnd hogyi ....  

Nirbhay angrily he is just fed up of these two .. they think just the same direction

Nirbhsy - rishwat dekhna kitna bara offenc h jante ho? kismat achi thi tum dono ki vo officer paise leke man gya agar sachme Koi honest officer hota to tum dono ko jail hosakty thi!!!   how can you behave so immaturely nir! tujhse ye ummid ni thi....

Nishu -. Par bhai hum

nirbhay - not a word nish....  chup chap apna breakfast khtm karo fr driver chor ayega tumhe.... college no driving after this

Nishant annoyed he just walked out

Neev tens - Dada... dada khana to finish kark

Nirbhay angrily - koi ni rokega use...  is tarah se har din usk zid k barhawa mil jaega ye sochna uski nasmjhi hogi!!! he needs to understand everything is not a joke ...

While nirav - bhai ap ....

Nirbhay - tujhe ab bhi nishant ki careless ness ko support karna h? kl tu nhi hota to vo kitni baro musibat me fas sakta tha... do u even realise.. 

nir - but uski glty ni thi bhai vo

nirbhay showed hin the video nishant was really driving rashly .. if Kritika did not came in between ...  Car would have Collapsed dangerously

nir gasped... he didn't knew that....

Nirbhay - har chiz me usko support karna band kar nir... me uska dushman ni hu kal agar kritika nhi hoty to kuch bhi hosakta tha.... 

Neev also tens up... that is when kritika entered...

Neev smile - kriti di

Kriti smile at him.....  whilw neev hug her

Divya - Tumhare ehsaan to barhte he jaa re h kriti..... pehle tumne nir ki jaan bachayi ab nishu ...how will we ever   pay you back

kritika - pehle khud he apna bnate ho fr khud he esi baate bolk mujhe paraya krdete ho ...

nirbhay sighs - agar esi baat hai to aj meine tumhe bulaya to tum ayi itne din se man ni kia bhaiya bhabhi se milne ka?

Kriti just smile - esi baat ni h bhaiya actually Doc birla k absens me work load kafi zyada hogya tha hospital me ab vo aa gye h to unk patients vo khud smbhsl skte h

Everything changed but this Doc birla remained constant

Nirbhay - Kriti... fir bhi jo bhi tumne kal kia vo

Kriti - okay bas... Ab agar or kisine mujhe thank u bola to i will just  walk out from there or phir koi kitna bhi bula le me ni aungi

neev chuckled - esa kbhi ni hosakta hum bulaye or ap ma aye esa kbhi ho he ni sakta di... 

Kriti just smile

Nirbhay - Tumhare car ki kia halat hui h ye me bhr ache se jnta hu .. so jab tak vo thik ni hojaty Humare ghar ka ek car tumhare pas rahega

kriti shock - are nhi bhaiyaa  iski kia ye sab ki koi zarurat ni h cab le lungi mai iski kia

nirbhay - ab kon Paraya kar ra h? hmm

kritik sighs no one can win from this man..

nirbhay got a call - Acha mujhe niklna h abhi.. lekin tum aj bina breakfast kiye nhi jaogi.. neevan.. i can give u thr responsibility.. right make sure your kriti di have her breakfast... 

Kriti sighs they knew that she skips her breakfast to manage her hospital time neevan is  the reason behind it so whenever she comes home they make sure that she have her food on time.. birla house has become her second home ... now all thanks to neevan...

Nirbhay left while Neev made kriti sit

Kriti - Neev mai

neev - kuch ni sununga mai... bhai ne bola na breakfast pura finish karna hai apko so chup chap ap vo karo me thora dada se milk ata hu muh phulake bethe h bhai ne daat dia na..

Kriti sighs and nodded while neev turned n saw nir

neev - bhaiyu... ap dekhna kriti di ache se finish krle okay ..

nir sighs and nodded while neevan smiled he knew his dada wants there bhaiyu and Kriti di togethere theres surely a chemistry blooming between the two... but he is scared to approach what if his bhaiyu's wounds start growing fresh he has only started to heal....

Kriti suddenly started coughing as she choked on the food...

Nirav immidiately sat beside her  - aram se kia kar ri ho

kriti coughrd while nirav lightly rub her back and handed her a glass of water

nir - aram se kriti koi train ni chut ri h

Kriti - Aram se he kha ri thi..

nir - Nhi tumhe to rajdhani pakarni hoty h

kriti fumes - Dekhiyr ap


nir - mujhe jhgra ni karna tumse subah... subah chup chap kha lo fir nikalna bhi h

kriti -to sunaya bhi mat kijiye doc birla ..

Nir shot her a glare while kriti sighs and started eating...  she doesnt care about his angry eyes anymore...

while Neev smiled they were growing a bond and if kriti di  becomes his bhabhi he will be more than glad....

Neev took the Plate and went to nishant room who was sulking big time... 

Neev entered

Nishu - leave me alone neev please

neev sat beside him - ek to apne glty ki fir jab bhai ne daata to khud he muh phulake beth gye ho .. ise kia bolte h pata h .. ek to chori upar se sina zori!!

Nishu - ha sabko to mai he galat lgta hu na.. mtlb tang aa gya hu mai.. hey uparwale uthale mujhe or ni rehna yaha mujhe

Neev hit him annoyed - kuch bhi bolte ho dada...  and wese bhi uparwala k pass bht kam h apki faltu bakwas sunne k elawa...

Nish - Haww mtlb kesa bhai h tu... me apni dukh bhari dastan suna ra hu or tujhe fark bhi ni par ea h

neev tore a bite and fed him - Aap or apki dukh bhari dastan esi h na jo sunk logo ko Dukh to hoga nhi lekin hasi ki guarantee me le skta hu

Nishant look away neev sighs and fed him





neev - ese khane pe gussa ni utarte dada... bimar par jaoge na

Nishu - hitler kyu ni aye

neev raised his eyebrows - so hitler k ane k liye itne nakhre kar re ho vo nhi ayenge offic gye h ...

nishu pouts - koi pyaar he ni karta mujhse .

neev - ha bilkul ni karta ye to bilkul sach baat boli apne

While in the midst of tge arguemnt neevan was feeding nishant

Nishant - matlab tu bhi nhi karta

neev played along - aha bilkul bhi nhi .. me to bas apko bardash kar ra hu kia kare bhai ho na jhelna to parega he

nish groaned and hit him this was the exact thing which nish had said to him few months ago....  now cycl has reversed but unlike neevsn nishant is taking this as a challenge

Nishant annoyingly - mtlb tujhe koi fark nhi parega mujhe kuch hogya to?

Neevan gasped what was he even saying - Dada!!!!

Nishu laughed out - shakal dekh teri kese Hawaiian udd gyi h.. beta... tu na esi baate bola mat kar...

Neevan irritated - har chiz mazak mat karo mere sath!! mujhe acha ni lgta

Nishant - aww baby boo to kyu bola tujhe fark ni parta.. fark to parta h see see

Neevan completed feeding him - nhi parta mujhe fark...  or esi bakwas mujhr sunna bhi nhi h

Nishant - abbe oye

Neevan - nhi karni mujhe baat ... college k liye ready hona h mujhe bakwas kara lo bas subah suabah

Neevan was going nishant from back - abe jate jate itna to bolta jaa tujhe fark parega ya nhi... agar mujhe kuch hogya to

Neevan shot him a disgusted glare and left his dada and his nonsens will never end

neevan annoyed and murmured - bht bakwas bar gyi h dada is bar me khus complain karunga bhai se 2 kan k niche parenge na akkal aa jaegi inhe....

saying he was going to his room suddenly he felt black outs ... he hold a wall to support.. his chest started paining again... he just control his self this pain has started again why... 

Neevan felt bit dizzy he need to go to his room he was going but  misbalanced someone hold him on time.... 

Neev look up to see kritika ..

kritika tensed - Neevan... 

she immidiately made him sit in his room and check his pulse .. neev was trying to control the pain

kritika tensed - dawai li tune?

Neev tensed kritika just went near his drawer and took out the medicin box only to see the medicin strip intact ... she was furious but controlled herself!! and handed him the medicin

After gulping it down within few minutes the pain subsided ...

Kritika angrily - what is this neevan!! you are not even having your medicin on time?

neev look at her meekily

kritika angrily - dont look at me like that tune abhi tak nhi bataya  ghar me kisiko is bare me

Neev - par di ye itna kuch important

kritika angrily - agar tujhe ye important nhi lgta to mujhe bolne de mujhe kyu rok ra h

neev sadly - sab khamka pareshan honge di ..wese bhi ye problem thik hogyi thi






kritika - tujhe doctor ne sari zindagi ye dawaio ko continue krne ko kaha h na? then why the hell did u stop! and humare body me kab konse chngs aye we never know mujhe ni lgta tune apna check up bhi karaya hoga u need to have your check up on every 6 months....

Neev palmed his face he did not do that

Kritika - u know what bht hogya bht time de dia meine ab me tere bhaiyu ko he bataty hu vo he decide karenge age kia karna h

neev shocked n tensed - di no please ... bhaiyu ko nhi

kritika - kyu nhi neevan! tune bola tha tu khud batayega....3 mahine hogye tune abhi tak ni bataya problem bari ho ya choti family ko har chiz janne ka haq hota hai

neev tens - di please ap nhi batao.. mai bataunga khud apse janenge to bewjh bht hurt hojaenge me unse chupana ni chahta it's just i dont feel its important enough to let them know

kritika - again the same thing...  neev u cannot decide that .. ye teri family h they will take care of you ... ye jo tu medicin Lena bhul jata h agar unhe pta hoga to they will take care na . ya vo log tujhse pyaar ni krte! u still dont feel protected

Neev shock - kesi baat kar ri ho di esa kuch bhi nhi hai... i have never felt so safe...   before .... ye family meri world bn chuki h

kritika sighs - then what is stopping you...

neev sighs - me bata dunga di...! trust me...

kritika - i dont trust you.... i m giving you a week time tu nhi batayrga to me khud batadungi...  bcz i cant trust u with your medicin pehle nani ji thi vo dekh lety thi... lekin abhi... i just cant ..  take the risk

Nirav entered - konse risk ki baat ho ri h ...

Neev and kritika stilled

Nir raised his eyebrows - kia hua tum dono esw kyu react kar re ho jese bhut dekhlia ho or ese konse risk ki baat ho ri thi dono k boch

neev pleaded with his eyes not to say anything to nir .. 

Kritika - risk to hoga he na agar ye apna dheyan ni rkhega to...  thora low feel kar ra tha wohi baat kar ri thi... ki isko apna sugar level check karte rehna chahiye warna risk hosakta h

neev sighs in releif  while nir tensed

nir startled - kia hua?? neev tujhe chakkar aa re h!??

neev - nhi bhaiyu bas vo...

he immidiately check his pulse tensed tension was written on his face  he took out the machine to check his sugar level.... 

nir sighs - it was bit low not dangerously still a bit unstable

Nir tens - dawai ni li tune

neev - li hai ap chinta mat karo mera sugar level fluctuate krte rehte h its normal

Nir - its not normal tu chal mere sath hospital...  mere ek bht acha dost h Aman ...  he will check you is tarah sugar fluctuate karna achi baat ni h.... 

Neev whinned - nhi na bhaiyu hospital nhi abhi

nir - neev..!

neev snuggle into him - mai rest karunga to thik hojaunga bhai sacchi ... abhi mera man ni h ...  

nir - kisse sikh ra h itne zid karna? terr dada se

Neev pouts

nir - fine....Hospital ni jana to ghar pe raho ..  aram karo college jne ki zarurat ni h

neev was about to say something nir gave hin a glare

neev annoyed - par akele me kia karunga bore hojaunga

Nir sighs - tera partner in crime bhi rahega tera sath... wesw bhi janab ko college jne ki koi khas dilchaspi h nhi ...

neev smiled happily if his dada stays then he has no problem

Nir - chup chap rest karna no masti

neev - ye ap apne ladle ko bolo me krt bhi nhi kuch

Nir whack him - chup kar tu bhi kuch kam ni h... koi zarurat hui to cll karna

neev nodded whilw kritika could see how loving brother nirav is ... neevan is not doing right hiding his problem from them it will hurt them ..  she just hope He tells them before they found out.... 

They left while nishant came to neevan room

nishan - kia hogya baby boo bhaiyu bata re tha teri tbyt thik nhi h

Neev - thik h meri .. tbyt bas sugar thora low h to bas bhaiyu ne  clg jne se mana krdia.. dehradun me low sugar leke pura pura school bhi attend krta tha mai kuch ni hota tha

nish whack him - bkwas mat kar jb dekho bas bakwas

neev - mai bakwas nhi ap krte ho or ap baat he kyu kar re ho mujhe to baat he ni karni apse

nish - kyuuu (making innocent face)

Neev fumes - jesw ki apko nhi pata kyu

nish pretending - nhi mujhe to bilkul nhi pata... kuch hua tha kia..

neev annoyed - apnw kia bola tha apne kamre me

nish - mujhe ni yaad

neevan hit him - bakwas bolte wakt to sab yaad rehte h

nish mischief - aww baby boo guccha hai?

neev - ha hu kyu boli apne vo baat

nish - are to tune bhi to bola tujhe fark ni parta ..

neev glared at him nishant was enjoying his sulking face

nish - ese kia dekh ra h... ab fark ni parta to chup chap betha re na... 

neev stood up from his bed and hit him with pillow - u know what ap bht gande ho!, mujhe nhi karni apse baat

saying he walked out..

Nishant laughed and enjoyed his plight he cares but he has too much ego to accept ...

in the garden area

Neevan was ignoring nish ..

Nishu - are baby boo ab itna bhi kia gussa...   tune he to bola tujhe fark ni parta to meine wohe to repeat kia

neevan annoyed - just leave me

nishu - vo to nhi kar sakta ...  me puea din ghar se kisise to baat karu...

neevan - nhi koi zarurat ni h mujhse baat karne ki ...  or agar bolna h h to pehle sorry bolo

nishant eyes widen - Sorry kyu

Neevan - ye ghtya baate bolne k liye

nishant - konsi ghtya baat

neevan - wohe jo ap subah se bol ra ho

nishant laughed out - oh acha to tu bolle tuhhe fark parta h to me Bhi sorry bol dunga....   

Neevan fumes and started hitting him while nishant laughed out ..  he was loving to tease him.....

neevan pushed him and left to his room .. nishant followed him - are baby boo sun to.... 

neevan - mujhe nhi sunni apki koi baat ap jao... yha se... 

Neevan left to his room while nishant shook his head .. 

Time passes a bit...

neevan was studying but Nishant did not came to disturb him for a long time

neev frowns - kia hogya? inhe itna time hogya ye ekbar k liye bhi ni aye....

suddenly he heard a painful scream of nishant....

Neevan shocked - Dada!!!!

He rushed to the direction of the sound and shocked to see nish lieng near the kitchen floor....   while blood there

Neev still seems like nishant has injured himself and was unconsious

Neev terrified - DADA!!!!



He rush to him and took his head on his lap his eyes were closed .. neev gasped he felt he couldnot breath

neev tab his cheeks - dada.. dada utho...   dada kia hua??

But no response neevsn terrified.. his hands started shivering....

neev panicked - dada.. dada please utho.. kia hua .. please. ..mujhe bht dar lg ra h dada please!!!

but no response

Neev gasped and cried out - dada please ankhe kholo na.... mai kia karu mai.....

Suddenly nishant laughed out... while neevan stilled ....

nishant sat up giving a mischievous smile - kyu bacchu .. tune to bola tha tujhe koi fark ni parta...  to ye mote mote ansu kisk liye.. haan?

neevan shocked stilled his dada did this pathetic joke only to proof a point???

A joke like this can neevan handle it??




Precap :- Spoiler Alert to be posted in a while

Target :- 330+ votes and 350+ comments

Tani :- i know this unhealthy joke will not be taken easy on many of the readers still  i would say nishant is also a teenager he has not taken life that seriously as neevan does so there will be a differenc in both the teenager  but.. may be the reaction from neevan will give him a lesson for life.....

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