Rehbaar : Mere ishq ki tu ank...

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*mature theme* the story of a bad boy or more correctly a villian who gets the chance to be the hero of his s... Více

two sides of a coin
ake dard do alaag vaaste
overheated heatwave
zakhm dard bnke nikal jainge ya is aag me sab jalenge
har faisla dard se lipta raha
ae zakhma itna bata kyu jia lage fasana tera
she will be my target
intahaan zindegi ka
dard dilon ke : khauf ashon ke
the predator's steps
define being heartless ...
the unsuccessful attempt : darkness beyond lights
tum...
kya likh jaingi ab ye lakeeren
dard jo bayaan na ho vo sukoon hai tu
Aisi koi aash nahi jo kabhi toota nahi
tu hi chup si bhor bhi
saadhgi
bedard hai dil ye tera ...
ishq ye lazami sa mera
dard jisme bayan hone ka shor na ho ...
kyu milta hai bekhata dil ko saza ?
berukha sa ye samaa
pal bhar ke lia koi humse pyaar kar le
kya yahi hai kisi se bepanaah mohabbat karna ?
bol na kaffara
ishq pe kahan bas kisi ka chale
bekhata dil ...
Apni kabhi tu kashmen na khana
Ishq ka raang safeed
Meri bechainiyon ko chain mil jai
Tere mere pyaar ki umar salamat rahe
Jaanta tha jaan hai vo phir bhi juda kia
Tere liay dil rota na kabhi
Agneepariksha ye tera mera
Shayad ae pal hamara nhai
Na jane ai ake aandhi jane kis oor se
Undisputed
Phir kyu juda kia

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Od rehbarxpreeran

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You were the one I always wish for in all my prayers . but fate and time played so badly I just couldn't realise we were in front of me with me for all the time

Ketan : I still can't believe Bhabhi . itne saalon se jiska nan am yaad than a chehere . jiske itne saalon se bhai andar hi andar intazar karte rahe aur unhe dil me usne pyaar ken am ka hi jeher bhara gaya . unhe itna bura bana dia gaya ki ...

Preeta : yahi taqdeer hai ketan . jo jitna bhi bhid jao kabhi apni marzi chalne hi nhai deti .

Ketan : agar mahira ko bhai se itni mohabbat thi to usne kabhi bhai se shaadi kia kyu nhai . uske pas ko kai moke the

Preeta : kyu ki Prithvi janta tha vo karan ko kya bana raha hai ... ake haiwan aur uski behen uske saath kabhi khush nhai reh pati .

Scene shift

Rishabh : ye Prithvi ka mujhe kuch samajh nhai aa raha . ye karan se kya baat kar raha hai ?

Aryan : ye to varun hi bata sakta hai

Rishabh : pakka kisi ke khilaf bhadka raha hoga .

Aryan : technically possible nhai hai . kyu ki vo already jo sabse bhadka hua hai ussey kya bhadkana

Rishabh : preeta ji ??

Aryan : kosish karega to marega . kyu ki preera pe haath dalne wale ko agar karan mout ke ghat utar sakta hai to us ke bare me kuch bolne wale ka khan na nikal lai . aur agar vo 10 saal pehele ka baat kholega to khud fas jaiga kyu puch

Rishabh : kyu ?

Aryan : kyu ki karan ka top mal teri tarah khali nhai hai .

Rishabh : joke tha ?

Aryan : katai na

Rishabh glared at Aryan

Scene shift

Karan : bahat wakt baad apni sadhi hui sakal dikhla raha hai .. chakkar kya hai

Prithvi : kya yaar tu bhi na

Karan : yaar to hum bilkul nhai hai . jo khud ka na ho saka vo mera kya hoga

Prithvi : purane ache dost hone ke bhanti ake hello bolne aaya tha

Karan : tu un me se to bilkul nhai hai jo bina matlab ke purane rishtey refresh karne pahanch hai vo bhi mere jaise admi se jo teri nind ka sabse bura sapna hai

Prithvi : isiliay to aaya hoon apne bure din ko jagane .

He shows karan a pouch of drugs

Prithvi : do do haath ho jai

Karan takes the packed from his hand and scans it

Karan : tarika acha tha purane din taje karne ke lekin ab hum vo wafadar karan Luthra nhai rahe . bahat bewafa ho chuke hain hum

He pours all the drugs into a bottle of water and shakes it well and slpashes it at prithvi's face

Karan : itni jaldi apne purane din nhai bhulunga aur na hi teri gaddari kyu ki dost to tu kabhi tha nhai . aur meri dushmani tune dekhi nhai hai . mere andar ki saitan ko jagane me majboor mat kar mujhe . tu pachtaiga

Karan leaves the place

Prithvi remembers something

Flashback

Prithvi : bahat badal gaya hai tu mere bhai . chakkar kya hai vo ladki ne aisa kya jaadi kia hai tujhpe jo tu meri aur mahira ki dosti bhul gaya aur us pe jyada bharosa karne laga jis ladki se tu sabse jyada ladhta hai us se

Karan : jab dost bewafa ho jate hain tab dushman ache lagne lagte hain

He shows karan a pouch of drugs

Prithvi : do do haath ho jai

Karan takes the packed from his hand and scans it

Karan chuckles .

Karan : yaar main a bewafa hina tujhse seekha hoon . wafai mere ragon se mit chuki hai .

He throws those drugs and leaves the place .

Mahira comes running to Prithvi

Mahira : bhai ye pura hamare control se nikal chuka hai us preeta ki wajah se . vo iske bacche ki maa ban ne wali hai . aur karan ne saari buri adaten uske vaste chodne ka faisla lia hai . hame kuch karna hoga bhai

Prithvi : aisa nhai ho sakta . preeta ji ko mai issey apne was nhai lene nhai dunga . mai us se pehele preeran ki kahani mita dunga

Flashback over

Prithvi's pov

Kahin preeta ji karan ki zindegi me wapus to nhai aa gai . maine us din preeta ji ko jinda chod ke bahat badi galati kar di . lekin preeta ji aur issey to maine ake dusre se bahat dur bhej dia tha . ye preeta ji to nhai ho sakti . kya koi aur . nhai jo bhi ho mujhe pata karna hoga warna jo maine planning banaya hai luthras ko barbaad karne ka vo barbaad ho jaiga aur mere carodon ki jaidad pane ka sapna ake aur baar toot jaiga . pichle bar ake galati ki wajah se karan mera sabse bada dushman ban gaya aur ake moka chuk gaya . is baad dushmani se sab karne ka plan bhi choupat ho jaiga . nhai . mujhe sab bigadne se bpehele sambhalna hoga .

On the other side

Varun : kya mara uske muh pe bhai . matlab mujhe to dekh ke ishqbaaz ki anika yaad aa gai .

Karan glared at him

Varun : nhai bhai ab to ap iski adaat dal lo . jab koi apse impressed hota hai to vo jo Khushi prakat karta hai ussey accept karne ki adaat dal lo . han har kisi ka apna utsaah prakat karne ka tarika alaag hota hai kyu ki haathon ki 5 ungliyan barabar nhai hoti . aur ye preeta Bhabhi ka strict order hai apko 24 X 7 hasai aur khush rakhe

Karan : tujhe hi sirf personally bola hoga ... huh

Varun : nhai ... mujhe ketan Raghav ranvijay vatsal Arijit Soumya sabko bola hai jo log apke saath jyada time rehete hain

Karan : pagalon ki sena ko hi sirf bola hai

Varun : dekho ap bhi hum jaise baten karne lage ho . so basically mai samjhata hoon apko . ake admi jaisa mahol me reheta hai waisa ban jata hai . jaise hum log apke saath reheke apke saath kam karte karte kahani ke villain ban gaye the . lekin ab dekho preeta Bhabhi ke aane ke baad mahol me kitna change aaya . kabhi apne socha tha ake ladki jise ap paise kamani ke liay laye the vo apka pura ghanda band karwa degi

Karan : peheli baat preeta ko mai kabhi us kam ke liay nhai laya tha if you clearly try to remember dusra dhandey se yaad aaya sari ladkiyon ko jab dilwa dia .

Varun : sabko . infact sab khush bhi hain aur sab shocked bhi hain aur unhe warn bhi kar dia hai kisi ko kuch na batane

Karan : good

Hours later ...

Preeta was sitting numbly in her room . all those thoughts , memories of years ago flashed in her mind not letting her rest in peace . she had right now nothing in her mind . just karan and nothing else . her heart was not ready to accept all those sufferings of all those years she had been through .

She wipped the tears flowing from her eyes .

Karan enters into the room and sees preeta lost . he thinned his eyebrows and waited for her to notice him . but that didn't happed . for the whole time he tried to guess but he couldn't . he decided to clear his throat to gain her attention but then realized it would not be the correct approach .

Karan : preeta

Preeta lifted her eyes to see him

Without getting any second thought she ran to him and hugged him sobbing into his arms

Karan : preeta kya hua ?? sab thik hai . tum ro kyu rahi ho . dekho mai yahan hoon kuch galat hua hoga bhi to mai sab thik kar dunga .

Preeta separates herself from his embrace and cups his face .

Karan : kya hua babydoll

Preeta : tum thik ho ?

Karan : ro tum rahi ho aur mujhe puch rahi ho mai thik hoon ya nhai .

Preeta wipes her tears

Preeta : Prithvi kon hai ? aur uska tumhare saath kya Rishta hai ? aur koi Rishta hai bhi to kyu hai ?

Karan : ye sab kam ki baten hain tum jan ke kya karoge

Preeta : sirf kam ki baat hoti to mai jane deti lekin ye mere pati ki zindegi ka sawal hai mujhe tumhare ha rake dushman ke bare me jankari chahiye . atleast un sab ke bare me jo tumhe aise threatening paheliyan bhejte hain ...

Karan : kyu usne kya bheja ?

Preeta : maine pehele sawal kia tha

Karan : jabab bhi tum pehele de do

Preeta : karan mai Mazak ke mood me nhai hoon aur tumne ab tak mera rudra avatar nhai dekha hai

Karan : kitna kamal hai jo mere sare sahakarmiyon ko mujhe hasane ke lia apna pagal mode on karne kaha vo ab khud udaas hoga gussa ho rahi hai aur kuch pal aur bit gaye to naraz bhi ho jaigi

Preeta : baat ghumane se baat nhai badalta karan

Karan : thik hai jaan batata hoon . Prithvi mera collage ka dost the . ok uski ake behen thi mahira jo mere pcihe pagal thi lekin thumara hubby kisi ko bhau nhai deta . tumhare alawa ofc . to hua yun meri ake dost hua karti thi . ladki thi nam sakal dono yaad nhai mujhe kyu ki kuch saal pehele mera accident hua aur memory loss . Prithvi aur mahira accident ke baad mere bahat ache dost ban ne ki kosish kiay aur ye ladki jo meri dost thi unhone kaha isne mujhe pyaar aur dosti dono me dhokha dia . aur jo karan Luthra ko unhone banaya ussey tumne dekha hai . phir jab Prithvi ke haath me power aaya vo mujhe fasake ukahad ne ki kosish kia but babydoll you know I am the karan luthra . maine ulta ussey fasa dia . game over . lo de dia maine tumhare sawal ka jabab ab tumhari baari

Preeta forwarded him a letter . the letter read..

Kafi wakt huay dushman bane ao ake baar aar par kar dete hain the karan Luthra kea age se the hatane ka sapna apna to mai pura karke rahunga . lekin soch raha tha the hatane ke baad tumhara nam bahat suna suna lagega . isiliay kyu na the karan Luthra se is baar late karan Luthra bana dun . ab tumne dushmani nibhana chuna hai to hum kyu piche hate

Tumhara pehela pyaar

Prithvi

On reading the letter karan burst out into laughter ...

Karan : babydoll . tum ye padh ke aise ho rahi ho . bhulo mat I am the karan Luthra . apne sabse bure dushman ko jinda tumhari aankhon ke samne jalaya hai . ye kon sa kida hai . mere saath lagne se pehele sau baar sochega kyu ki ye bhi janta hai mai josh me aaya to iska kya hoga . aur rahi baat is letter ki to khali matka jyada awaaz karta hai jisme pani bhara hota hai vo bajta nhai hai babydoll

Preeta : beheki beheki baten karna band karo mujhe pata hai tum issey seriously nhai le rahe ho . lekin karan ake baar uski taraf dekho . uske pas power hai position hai bap ka paisa hai sab kuch hai . power raha to police kisi bhi wakt tumhare pcihe laga dega aur power na raha to uske gundey . vo kisi bhi wakt power play khel sakta hai

Karan : arrey wah babydoll mere saath rehete rehete sochna bhi seekh gai

Preeta : babydoll bolna band karo mujhe . mujhe irritate lagta hai .

Karan : aur mujhe tumhe irritate karne me acha lagta hai .

Preeta pouts and turns to the other side

Karan : sirf paisa power aur position se har jung nhai jeeta jata . waise to duryodhan ke pas 11 wahini sena aur 1 narayani sena thi aur pandavon ke pas sirf 9 wahini sena . phir bhi jeet kiski hui ?


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Tu hai wahi rehnuma
Tere bina mushqil hai
Ek bhi kadam chalna❤️

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