Miñeil Expedition|A Mineil Fa...

By mineil_vibez

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Continuing the story which was left ... #BringBackPatialaBabes →If u enjoy or liked my story so please ‡Foll... More

NB knows Neil's truth
MINEIL and KIYA
CARTOON ENTRY
Ranu Aunty
mickey get to know about mini's love
All about MiNeil
Courtroom bettle get ugly
MiNeil separation
Mini's secret meeting
Khatri & Sandhu
Mini rocked😎, Isha shocked😱
Neil's Girl Friend
Celebration 🥳 & Dancing 💃🕺
New cover
MINI IN DANGER
kiya gains consciousness
Emotional Neil
Kiya agree to stay at haveli
1K Reads 🥺😭
Monkey.. 🐒🐒
SWEET DREAMS
All get fine
Part 21-MiNeil was injected 💉
Part 22- SIYAAPAA!!
Part23→ENTRY OF A NEW GUEST
Part 24→NB talks to Neil
1st April
Ending of FF?
Part 26- Pari's weired behaviour
Part 27- Hot mini 🔥
Part 28- Kiya wants to go Delhi
Part 29- Mini felt relieved
Part 30- chit-chat
Thanku ❤️ Note
Part31- Flashback
Part-32- what's happening?
Part 33-Engagement 💖
Part 34- Who was that?
Part 35- Dance
Part 36- Reunion and Storm
Part 36- Left for the Party
Part 37- Manmeet & Ankle lost
Part 27- Neil had fever?
Not an update
Sorry 👉🏻👈🏻😔
Part 28- Savina!
PART 29: Past meet Mini
Part 42: Any Danger?
Part 43: Arya n Kiya??
Not An Update
45: Will they able to rescue stolen girls?
46: Path of Victory
47: MiNeil Moments
2 YEARS ♡

44: Is MiNeil on mission?

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By mineil_vibez

Heyii!! I hope you all are doing well. So here's comes the next part of the story after a long time.

Ignore Grammatical Errors
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Neil informed Mini and other people present there that Manmeet and Savina are still in locker.

Mini- Agar voh locker mein hai toh Manmeet ne Arya or Kiya ka kidnap kaise kiya and call??

Neil: Lala Uncle ne kaha ki koi aaya tha manmeet se milne.

Biji: Lekin kon?

Neil: voh toh pta nahi but lala uncle poochenge manmeet se kon tha or usko firse bulayenge
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MiNeil reached Police Station to meet that unknown man.

Man: Why you called me here? What u want from me?

Mini holds the collar of his shirt and punched him right on his face.

Mini: bta meri behan or kiya kahan hai?

Man: mein kuch nahi janata, leave me!

Neil: don't u dare to lie

Lala Uncle: Dekh bta de varna dande khaayega tabhi haath aayega kya?

Man: arre jab maine kuch Kiya hi nahi hai toh q mujhe pareshan kare ho? Mein toh sirf Manmeet se milne aaya tha

Mini: Pareshaan toh tu hame kar raha hai, bta de varna ...

Neil: hamne toh nahi pucha tu q aaya tha

Man: a..leave me..chod mujhe

He pushed her but neil became her saviour and saves her. And he tried to leave the place. But other police man caught him.

Man: arre mein sach keh raha ho maine kuch nahi kiya

Lala uncle: toh fir bhaag q raha tha? Isko jail mein daalo or thodhi seva karo

He was brutally beated, and later on the truth comes out from his mouth. MiNeil were hell angry but moves out to the police station and plan to rescue arya and kiya
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Next day, in the afternoon, winds was blowing, the surrounding was silent.
MiNeil were outside of a building which was looks like a factory, in different attire. Neil was wearing a turban, an old kurta pajama, same with mini and having moustaches and beared like a man.

Neil turned when someone tapped his shoulder.

Man 1: Ji aap kon?

Neil: Voh..voh mein Seth Ghanshyam se milne aaya tha, ohji kuch deal vagera vagera karni thi..he he

Man 1 looked at Mini and find something odd. Neil intrupted him "oh ji yeh Mera dost hai ji..dost"

He went inside and after sometime they were called inside. The place was giving bed vibes,6-7 people eating bettle nut and smoking, raw materials, rice, wheat and chillies  and machines could be seen. MiNeil were observing the surrounding,

Man 1: Seth Ji yeh (points towards neil) aapse kuch deal karna chahte hai or yeh(points towards mini) unka dost

MiNeil greeted them with fake smile.

Ghanshyam: (while chewing bettle nut) ji boliye...amm..kya kaam hai? 

Neil: Oh ji Seth ji hamne aapke baare mein khub suna hai ji, aap jo chawal, gehu, mirchiyon ka vyappar karte ho ji,, badi achi quality mein sold karte ho ji

Man2: Chahte kya ho

Neil: oh ji mein na deal karne aaya ho voh ki hai na meri behan ki shaadi hai ji uske liye samaan lena hai ji per baki jagah gaye toh chi chi keede nikle ji keede

Mini nodded her head. Ghanshyam asked him to introduce themselves.

Neil: Oh ji mein..Mera naam hai Amandeep or iska naam hai Ajeet.

Man3: Iska kya muh tutt raha hai jo yeh khud nahi bak sakta apna naam

Neil while controlling his anger exclaimed "oh ji bechara mera dost, bol ni sakta ji"

Man1: kyu, gunga hai?

Mini nodded and asked neil with facial expressions to talk about the deal with the ghanshyam.

Neil: Oh ji yeh chawal, or baki ke kitne mein kitne kilo milenge ji

Ghanshyam and other with MiNeil discussing. Mini started coughing.

Neil: Oyee Ajeet tu thik toh hai na..sab changa

Mini was coughing badly.

Neil: Oh ji iski toh khassi ki gadi rukne ka naam hi nahi le Rahi, yahan bathroom vagera hai

Man5: haa udhar seedhe jakar left fir seedhe fir right.

Neil: Aacha ji mein isko lekar jata ho

He started to go with her to the way of washroom but their route were blocked by Ghanshyam people. MiNeil exchanged looks.

Ghanshyam: Oh ji aap toh yahin teher jao aap bhi kya uske saath bathroom jaaoge😏😄

Other people: 😂

Ghanshyam: isko chodho khud chala jaayega yeh,,gunga hai andha ya langda thodhi Jo khud nahi ja sakta

Neil tries to argue but stopped by mini and she told that she will go by herself.

Neil: (talks with eyes)i can't leave u here alone

Mini: (replied with same language) don't worry, nothing will happen to me

Mini moves. Neil watched a man going behind her.

Neil: Abbe Oye..mm...mera mtlb hai..oh ji aap uske peeche peeche kidhar jare ho..voh chali jayegi akeli

Ghanshyam: ham yahan kisi ajnebe ko akela nahi chodhte,, bahot maal hai ya koi risk nahi

Neil: Oh ji aapki baat to ek dam correct hai ji, per voh bechara kya karega,, voh kuch ni karega ji, aap apne aadmi ko bula lo vapis

Ghanshyam: toh fir apne dost ajeet ko bahar bhejdo ya khud bhi chale jao uske saath iss factory ke bahar,, yahan meri marzi chalegi,, samjha

Neil: Ji..ji (in mind- bahar jana hota toh andar q aate, mini dhyaan rakhna apna)

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Kiya: Arya mujhe yahan se bahar Jana hai

Arya: Mujhe bhi

Girl 1: ham ab yahan se kabhi bahar nahi nikal sakte

Girl 2: yeh sahi keh rahi hai

Kiya: lekin kyu

Girl 1: ham sab logo ne koshish ki thi yahan se bhaagne ki but nahi bhaag paaye

Girl 3: yeh log hame bech denge

Arya: Kya

Kiya: Kisko

Girl 2: pta nahi, ham se unn uncle ko phone per baat karte hue suna (pointed towards a man who was lying on a old cot)

All girls were weeping, arya and kiya also felt tears on their cheeks.

Kiya: Mujhe papa ke pass jana hai

Girl 5: ham sabko bhi

Girl 4: per hame kon yahan se bachayega

Arya: Veer Balika or Neil

Girl 6: Voh kon hai?

Arya: Veerbalika meri big sister hai, voh bahot strong hai voh sabko bahot maaregi or Neil mera genie hai voh dekhna hamko yahan se bacha lega ekdum hero ki tarah

Girl 7: toh fir kya tumhari Veerbalika heroine hai

Arya: haan (proudly)

The man wakes up and scolded them " abbe oye chup ro, koi chain ki neend sone bhi nahi deta, agar ab koi kuch bola toh usko khaana nahi milega"

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The Man was waiting outside the bathroom for Mini, knocking the door continuously.

Man: abbe oye..mar gaya kya andar, bahar aa Varna gate tod dunga, yeh toh kuch bol bhi nahi sakta, kya karu mein

Mini(inside the bathroom): ab kya karu Mata Rani, bahar yeh hai, kaise arya or kiya ko dhundne jaungi,, unko safe rakhna Mata Rani, Neil kab Tak uss Ghanshyam or uske baki ke aadmi ko sambhalega

Man: Bahar nikal Varna gate tod raha ho mein

Mini comes outside.

Man: Itna samay q lagaya, so Gaya tha kya,, or yeh yeh kya

Mini: 🤨

Man: teri muchhe nikal q ri hai? Tu kahi tu

Mini tries toh cover her moustache

Man: tu ladki hai

Mini(in mind): Oh god!! Mein toh pakdi gai..ab ab kya karu

Man: q bhesh badal kar aai hai tu, or voh bandha kon tha, kahi tum log ladkiyon ko bachane toh nahi aaye, per ab tu kaise bachegi😏

Man removed her moustache, mini step backwards and he comes forward with develish smile and lustful eyes.

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