Jace's POV
Small house, small car, broken doorbell. What is this girl, a druggie?
Mom keeps saying:
" Be nice, her mother was so nice i'm sure she'll be the same"
Suddenly the door creaks open reveling a angel. I'm so shocked. My eyes travelled slowly up and down taking in her curves her beautiful flowing hair...
" and i'm so grateful of you for taking me in so quickly Mrs. ...."
" Call me Debbie darling and you are very much welcome" I'm brought back to reality by the voice of the angel and my not so angle-like mother.
" You must be Jace." said um... whatever her name is.
" Yeah, and you are?" I replied so calmly that i surprised myself
" Vannessa, my name is Vannessa" she smiled back with those beautiful, lovely lips and pristine white teeth...
Dude, snap out of it i scolded myself silently you need to focus on the real world.
To prove my point I saw that my legs needed to move forward, towards the car where my mother and Vannessa were heading. She reminds me of Trish.
Dude, not gonna think of her.
Vannessa's POV
OMG! Jace is the hottest guy on earth. Just looking at him makes me feel like i've shrunk out of the cheerleader league. Wait, stop right there, I need to stop having my blonde moments.....
Thankfully i didn't talk to him for i thought that if i uttered another word to him i would of fainted to the sound of his voice. If my squad could see him they would fail every move in the cheerleading book!
" So darling, have you got everything" cooed Debbie lovingly. Even though i've been with this woman for like 4 minutes i feel as if she my own mother.
" Yeah thank you Mrs - I mean - Debbie,"
I glanced behind me for a millisecond to see Jace walking behind me. Fortunately for me he was looking at the floor and didn't notice me looking at him. He looked as if he was trying to get somthing off his chest.... oh that beautiful chest with.
Snap out of it!
I wonder if he's single?
No he couldn't be...
Debbie's POV
Such a lovely girl! I can see the sparks and attraction between them. I so hope Jace says he likes her.She's not like all those other girls that he brings home. Ever since his last girlfriend he's been on a bit of an edge always moody. Playing his music loudly and screaming at me for the slightest thing.....
Vannessa's POV
I didn't know people could be so rich. I mean i was rich (you have to if you want to be a cheer leader) but mom insited we buy a small house and car seeing as it was just us two. They had a beautiful slick silver Lexus. I mean - i like my car but I love this one.
" Scared in might bite you?" a voice breathed in my ear.
I shivered but that was covered by me jumping then spinning around so quickly that it was a wonder how i didn't get a whiplash.And I came face to face to face with a smirking Jace.
"Please don't do that" I said with my hand on my heart taking deep breaths.
Slowly i ducked into the car crawling into the back seat.
" Get a move on granny!" ( no offence to grannies) shouted Jace
" Coming be patient will ya," I mumbled under breath sinking into seat. I turned to look out the window only to come face to face with Jace's face up against the glass. Will the boy leave me alone!? He looked so scary with his features all mashed and his eyes in slits.
I did what any sane person would do; I screamed.
Debbie rushed out the house, where she was recently looking for the key which I accidentally forgot. The neighbors ran out but after seeing no action was taking place they wondered back into their homes. And Jace...Jace was rolling on the floor laughing.
Debbie rushed up and slapped her son upside the head right after he stood up so he fell down again, it was quite amusing to watch.
"Are you alright Vannessa?" She asked looking concerned.
" Yeah, i guess" I said shakily.
"If he does on more thing just slap him round the head, okay" She said with such sweetness it was a tad scary. Jace seemed to think so too as he silently crawled into the car silently and buckled up quietly muttering about how women can slap hard.
I giggled softly at the back. Jace whipped his head round and glared at me so hard i stopped laughing. Debbie walked cautiously back into the house probably pondering on where the key could be. The silence between me and Jace was awkward. But my phone saved me. Bleep bleep. I had never been so happy to read a text from Lisa.
Hey hey nessa. hope ur having fun Lia txted me just now and she said that u r wit a dream boy down d road. Save him for me yea.
Lisa
" I'm glad your friends think i'm a ' dream boy' tell her i said hi"
I was shocked back to reality by Dave's voice above her. I blushed in embarrassment in honer of her friends.
" That message was from..um..like..eh..yesterday?"
" Uh huh, that's why it says today's date and time at the top where it says 'time sent'" Dave retorted sarcastically.
I couldn't think of a retort to that so i just let it go hanging my curtain of hair around me signalling to him the conversation had ended.
"Why do we have to live with a shy, stupid one...??" my head snapped up.
"What did you just call me?" I challenged Dave to speak piercing my eyes into him.
He wavered at first but then he lay back and had the cheek to speak back.
" I called you exactly what you are," he smirked
That was it. I gritted my teeth and lunged out at him. I slapped him, dug my fingers into his arms till he screamed and kicked punched at..well everywhere.
I finished him up by whipping my hair in his face. That should show him!
"Never call me something i'm not, got it." I seethed with anger, but the anger was slowly pouring out so I gave him a large smile. He yelped in shock and covered his face. When he looked up to see me on my phone again he sighed at glowered at me.
"Turn around" I said, as soon as I said that he turned so quickly to the front it was a wonder how he didn't get a whiplash. Is this deja vu?
That's when I realised Debbie was there clapping.
" Well done you passed putting him his place." She praised
I glowed with happiness and Jace did the opposite with anger this time. So in simple terms he growled with anger.
"Let's go to our house, now please, I have some people to call for a certain person." Jace turned to me " I have a hot date with revenge so if you could step on it," he turned back to his mother " It would be highly appreciated." He finished with a flourish.
Debbie granted her son's wish and soon they were zooming towards their house.
I must have drifted off to sleep during our journey because i felt a faint tapping on my shoulder. I groggily opened my eyes.
" She's awake" Jace said blunetly before walking away.
I Iooked to my right only to see my luggage still there.
What a gentleman. I thought sarcastically.
After a what seemed a light year of getting my luggage out the car without help. ( I don't know why I said I didn't need any help to Debbie)
When I finally got out with all my bags I faced the house... and dropped all my bags again. It was huge it was...it was.
"Speechless are we?" said voice you could practically hear the smirk in his voice.
" No I was just um.."
" Yeah." Jace said, just then he looked over my shoulder. Spotting someone he ran towards them yelling something but he was too far for me to hear what he was saying. I shrugged and picked up my bags again and stepped inside the house.
" Your room is on the second floor first room on the right" I heard Debbie's voice yelled.
" Thanks!" I yelled back.
2 hours later-
" Vannessaa! Dinner." Debbie screamed
Jace went out with friends and had come back about an hour ago.
Reluctantly walked from the comfort of my room to the kitchen. After dinner I heard two words I didn't want to hear
" Tommorow's school"
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