Who's Fault

By Harshali510

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This is a short story based on the current confrontation track in YRKKH. More

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Announcement
Another announcement
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 19
Chapter 19
Author's note
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Update
Target completion
unfinished target
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Author's note

Part 18

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By Harshali510

First of all extremely sorry for not been able to update but I had my reasons. I was in India for my cousins wedding actually three cousins got married so was busy with that and then all the outings, shopping, family get-together, sickness and etc.etc.... took all the time when came back got even more sick than I was in India. BUT BUT now I am finally doing better so here is an update and I have decided to finish up one book and than focusing on the other. So her is the chapter. And do let me know which book do you all want me to finish off first- Who's Fault or Kahani Abhira ki. Happiness is all that matters and love story Harshad aur Pranali ki will have to wait as I want to focus on them later once I am done with my first two stories. So guys pick between Who's fault and Kahani Abhira ki only.  

Akshu is still in the hospital on ventilator and its been a week since they are turing the ventilator off to see how long can Akshu tolerate breathing on her own. She started from 5 minutes now she can stay for 30-40 minutes without ventilator. Abhi stayed with her throughout. Goenkas are still clueless about Akshara but Arohi is getting more and more suspicious as the days went by. Its morning Abhi is on his morning rounds to check his patients as Akshu is sleeping under the effects of heavy medications. 

In Dr. Abhimanyu's Cabin. 

Ab- Dr. Rohan mene sab patients ko check karliya hai aab aur kya baaki hai. 

Ro- Sir aab sirf ek he patient ko check karna baki hai. 

Ab- Kon mene sab ko check karliya. 

Ro- Sir aap kitni important patient ko kaise bhul sakte hai. 

Ab- Rohan lagta hai tum aajkal kuch zayadahe saas bahu vali serials dekhne lageho. 

Ro- Nahi sir aisa nahi hai. aapna apne dimagpe zoor daliye aur sochiye vo patient kon hai. 

Ab- Rohan aab na tu mere haathse maar khane vala hai. Bol Maar khayega. 

Ro- Sorry Sorry sir me to baas Akshara maam ki baat karraha tha. 

Ab- DR. Rooohaaaan Akshu meri kon hai? 

Ro- Akshara maam apka subkuch hai. 

Ab- Sahi kaha to tuje kya lagta hai mer meri jaan ko sabse last check karunga.

Ro- Nahi na Magar meneto nahi dekha aapko Maam ko check karte huve. 

Ab- Rohan mera baccha, mera lal, mera kala, mera pela, mera hara, tu bhul gaya me tujse senior doctor hu aur me tujse phele hospital aajata hu aur abhi kuch samese me yahi hospital me rehta hu raat ko bhi me Akshu ke paas hota hu to obviously me sabse phele subhe oothehe Akshu ko check karunga na. 

Ro- Ha sahi hai sorry sir me chalta hu. 

Ab- Rohan sunn. 

Ro- ji sir. 

Ab- Thank you mera aur meri Akshu ka khayal rakhne ke liye. 

Ro- Sir please thank you maat boliye. Aap aur maam he to meri family hai yaha Udaipur me. 

Rohan started to tear up a little Abhi saw it and smiled with moist eyes. 

Ab- Chaal aab aa idhar. 

Abhi hugged Rohan and patted his shoulder. 

Ab- tuje hug kiya iska matlab yeh nahi hai tum mere sar pe chadke nachoge aur apni manmani karoge, me abbhi tumhara senior hu samje DR. ROHAN. 

Ro- Samaj gaya SIR.

They parted and smiled and left for their respective work. 

Abhi went back to Akshu's room currently their room. As she senses his presence she woke up from her sleep. 

Ab- Good morning Akshu, meri jaan. Kaisa feel ho raha hai. 

Akshu blinked her eyes and smiled at her Abhi, her love. 

Ab- Accha Akshu tumhe pata hai aajna Dr. Rohan roo rahatha. 

Akshu scrunched her eyebrows. 

Ab- Batata hu baba kitni utavali horahi ho chugli sunne keliye. 

Akshu gave angry look to Abhi. 

Ab- Accha meri jaan Sorry sorry Vo kya hai na Rohan humdonoko leke thoda emotional hogaya tha. Vo kya hai na uski family yaha nahi rehti, vo log Kashmir me rehte hai aur Rohan yaha, Udaipur me, akela rehta hai aur uske liye hum dono uski family hai aur humme aise suffer karte huve dekh vo rone laga. Akshu pata hai me bhelehe Rohan ko tang kartahu per Rohan mere liye Neil ki tarha hai mera chota bhai jaisa. Magar Akshu yeh na Rohan ko mat batana varna ko chane ke jaadpe chadjayega aur phir mera kaha nahi manega aur muje pareshan karega. 

Akshu smiled at Abhi's talk and a tear slipped from her eyes. Abhi look at Akshu and wiped her eyes. 

Ab- Akshu baba me janta hu tum apni familyse bohat pyaar karti ho per situation he kuch aisi hai ki jaante huve bhi hum nahi bata sakte hai. I am sorry Akshu. Accha vo sab chodo kya tum taiyaarho, aaj phirse tumhara ventilator hold karenge tum bohat accha karrahi ho bas aab thoda time aur phir tum mujese jaldhe baate karne lagogi.  

As Abhi talked and checked Akshu simultaneously. Anand, Mahima, and Dr. Malik entered the room. 

Dr. M- Hello Abhimanyu aur kaisi hai meri sabse strongest patient. Ready ho khudse saase lenekeliye. 

Akshara blinked her eyes and Abhi gave a proud smile. 

Ab- Me to kabse ready hu sir aur Akshubhi keh rahihai ki vo bhi ready hai. 

Dr. M- Thik hai to phir hum sab kiska wait karrahe hai. Dr. Mahima please proceed.

Ab- Here we go. Ready Akshu tum sir mujpe focus karna aur mere saath saath breathing karna. Jaisa me karrahahu ok meri jaan. 

Mahima paused the ventilator. Akshu felt sudden short of breath which happens every time they first hold the vent. She kept her focus on Abhi. Abhi held her hands tightly to show his strong constant support for her. 

Ab- OK Akshu breath in slow and breath out slow. 

Akshara followed Abhimanyu's instruction. It went for over 15 minutes Dr. Mallik checked her vitals and they are really good compare to what it had been at previous times. 

Dr. A- Aksharake vitals kafi behtar hai aab I think humme EKG karana chaheye taki humme pata chal sake how is her heart behaving without ventilator support. 

Dr. Mh- HMM. Akshara tum bohat accha karrahi ho. Abb me pe yeh Sticky pads lagaungi aur phir yeh EKG machine attach karungi taki hum tumrahe heart rhythm dekpai ok. 

Akshara was too focused on Abhimanyu that she didn't hear what Mahima said. Abhimanyu showed thumbs up indicating Mahima to proceed with what she needs to do. As Mahima went near Akshu with the EKG machine she got startled. 

Ab- Shhh it's ok Akshu taiji na shir tumhare dil ki rhythm check karnevali hai. Iss machine se koi pain nahi hoga. I know tum hai inn sam machine ne kafi pain diya hai per yeh vaisa nahi hai. Ek raaz batau iss machine sena aab muje dikh jayega ki kaise tumhara dil mujedekhke somersaults karrahahai. 

Everyone let out small laugh at this statement. Akshu's eyes also shined. 

Ab- Laiye taiji me Attach kardeta hu EKG machine Akshuse. Abb khush Akshu. 

Akshu's eyes welled up at how Abhi knows her hesitation without her speaking. Since Akshu had gained her senses she always panicked when someone else touch her even if its Mahima. So it is Abhi who is the only one that attaches any machines, IVs or drips to Akshu. Abhi saw her tears. He smiled and wiped them with his thumb. 

Ab- Bikul roona nahi hai Akshu. Muje pata hai tumhe daar lagta hai jab koi aur tumhare paas  machines  leke aai. 

They perform the test, and continued to monitor her. 

Dr. M- Abhimanyu, Akshara bohat accha karrahi hai. Tum isse monitor karo me mere kuch aur patients hai unko dekhke aatahu. Dr. Mahima please keep me updated and make sure she is stable aur agar meri zarurat ho to please don't hesitate. 

Dr. Mh- Sure Dr. Mallik I'll keep you posted. 

Dr. A- Alright than Mahima agar tum yaha ho to me bhi mere patients ko check karke aatahu. 

Dr. Mh- Actually meri ek important surgery scheduled hai to muje uske liye jana hoga thodi derme. 

Ab- No problem taiji aap bhi jaye me hu yaha Akshu ke pass jab usko lagega ki saas leneme taklif horahi hai to me ventilator start kardunga. 

Everyone leaves and Abhi sat back beside Akshu holding her hand. 

Ab- Akshu tumhe thik lag rahahai na. 

Akshu blinked her eyes. 

Ab- agar taklif hone lage to muje bas ek ishara karna me turant ventilator start kardunga. Akshu tumna bohat accha karrahiho. Dekho jaise tum khudse saas lene lagogi na tum mujese baat bhi karne lagogi. Akshu me tumhari aavaz sunneko tadap rahahu. Tumhara gana suunna chatahu. Akshu muje patahai tum bhi mujse baat karneko taras rahiho, but don't worry meri jaan bohat jald sab kuck normal hone lagega. Tum already bohat acchi progress dekha rahi ho. Tumhe pata hai Dr. Mallik hai na vo tumhari bohat tarif karte hai, vo kehte hai ki tum na bohat strong fighter ho agar tum MMA player hoti to sab ko pachad deti. 

Abhi laughed and so did Akshu with her eyes. 

Ab- Jokes apart magar sach me Dr. Mallik ne itni jaldi tumhari recovery start hogi vo expect nahi ki thi. I am so proud of you tum sare odds se fight karrahi ho aur aisehe aagebhi fight karti rehna. Yeh sare tubes hatneke baad tumhari real recovery ki journey start hogi aur jaise tum aab strongly sab handle karrahi ho na vaisehe tab bhi karna aur me tumhare sath through out rahunga tumhe kabhi akela nahi chodunga. Jab tum ladkhadaogi tab tum muje tumhe sambhalta huva paogi, jab tum apne kadam aage badhaogi tab tum muje apne sath kadamse kadam milatehuve paoji, jab tum kadam piche logi tab muje tumhare piche paogi tumhe aage badneki himmat dete huve. jab tumhari himmat tutegi tab muje tumhara hosla banta huva paogi, jab tumhari thoughts bikhar the huve dekogi, temporarily, tab tum muje tumhare thoughts sammet huve paogi. Jab tumhare samne koi musibaat khadi hogi tab muje tumhare aage khada paogi tumhari dhal banke tumhe protect kart khada rahunga. In short tum muje hamesha apne aas paas paogi. I PROMISE AKSHU, MERI JAAN. 

By now Akshu had big fat tears running down her eyes and Abhi is also crying. He wipes both their tears and kissed Akshu's forehead nose, eyes, and cheeks. 

Ab- Bohat senti baate hogaina. Ek Happy baat bolu tumna jaldi se khudse saas lenelago tumhare ye jo pyaare-pyaare, soft-soft jo hoth hai na vo tumhare galose, ankhose, aur forehead se jaal rahehai aur pata hai kyu. 

Akshu scrunch her brow as if asking why. 

Ab- Vo kya hai na yeh jo ventilator haina tumhare muh me uss vajese me tumhare hothope kiss nahi karskta aur baki sab jagah karta hu iss vajah se tumhare hoth jealous hai tumhare baki sab features se. 

Akshu blushed the deepest shade of red. Her eyes shined with blush, happiness and playfulness. 

Ab- I know bohat cheessy hogaya na. SORRY per me kya karu tumhohi itni pyaari aur tumhara sab kuch bhi itna pyaara hai ki koi kaise tumse pyaar na kare meri JAAN, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU AKSHU.  

Abhi kept talking on random things which kept Akshu engaged in the conversation it went for hours. Dr. Mallik, Dr. Anand and Dr. Mahima is also back from checking their patients and surgery. When they entered they were shocked that Akshara was still off the ventilator and Abhimanyu was keeping time to time check on her vitals. 

Dr. M- Dr. Anand, Dr. Mahima let this continue we shall go to my cabin and discuss next step in Akshara's case. 

They left the room. Abhi started feeding tube gave all the timely medicines and again engaged her in his talks Dr. Rohan also joined him after he was off the working hours. 

Ro- Akshara maam aap na jaldi se thik hojaiye me aapko aur sir ko aise nahi dekhsakta hu. 

Rohan teared up, so did Akshu. Akshu signaled Abhi to console Rohan. Which Abhi gladly followed. 

Ro- Maam aapna sirf muskurati huvi aachi lagti hai. aapko aise dekhke hum sab ko bohat dard hota hai. Aur maam muje na aapse Sir ki complaint karni hai. 

Ab- Dr. Rohan kuch zyada nahi rohahai. 

Ro- kuch zyada nahi hai aur mena mere working hours khatam honeke baad aaya hu vo bhi apni bhabhise milne to aapna muje fire karneki dhamki maat dena sir. 

Ab- Bhabhi kon aur kaise????  

Ro- Sir off duty to me aapko mere bede bhai ki tarha manta hu tu agar aap mere bhai huve to Akshara maam meri bhabhi hui na. 

Ab- Accha to usse hisab se to me tumhe double tang karunga aur double punishment bhi dunga. Ek senior honeke nate aur ek tera bada bhai honeke nate chalega tuje. 

Ro- Sir aap na off duty aur on duty dono ko alag alag rakhna taki muje punishment sirf ek mile.

Ab- Thik hai vaise Rohan tumne kaha tum abhi off duty ho to phir tum Akshu ko bhabhi aur muje sir kyu bula raheho. 

Ro- Vo sir muje laga ki aapko accha nahi lagega agar me aapko aise achanakse bhai bulaunga to isiliye sir bularaha tha. Socha ek baar aapki permisson miljai to uske baad bhai bulaunga. 

Ab- thik hai jao di permission tum muje bhai bulaskte ho but sirf off duty on duty me tumhara senior aur tum mere under kaam karte huve ek intern. Me nahi chata ki kissi aur intern ko yeh lageki me favoritism ya partiality karrahhu. eveyone deserve equal opportunities to show their capabilities and equal punishments for their mistakes. Samje Rohan. 

Ro- Han bhai samaj gaya. 

Akshu felt proud of her Abhi. Rohan hugged Abhi out of happiness. Abhi hugged him back. Rohan left as he saw Akshara was slowly getting drowsy due to the medicines. Abhi kept running his fingers in Akshu's hair till she falls in deep sleep. Abhi stayed up all night as this will be the first night in around a month that Akshu will be sleeping without any external machine that will help her breath. 

So here is Chapter 18 of Who's Fault and please don't forget to vote which story you want me to finish first this one aur Kahani Abhira Ki. do leave you special special comments and I will happily take your alls gali for not updating this or any of my stories for a while. But please ha don't give too many galis ha lol. And also give suggestion about a particular topic any of you want me to include and soon drama will be introduce as if there is not enough drama in the book correct but need to show some characters their real place. Alright too much to read Bye see you all soon with new chapter. Lot of love to everyone from me to you. HAPPY MARCH.  

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