LOTF: Before and After

By emmakatelyn8

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"๐ˆ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐š๐ฌ ๐š ๐๐ข๐Ÿ๐Ÿ๐ž๐ซ๐ž๐ง๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ฅ๐." "๐๐จ, ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐š๐ฌ๐ง'๐ญ... ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐š๐ฌ ๐š ๐๐ข๐Ÿ๐Ÿ๐ž๐ซ๐ž๐ง๐ญ... More

Phase 1: Chapter 1
Phase 1: Chapter 2
Phase 1: Chapter 3
Phase 1: Chapter 4
Phase 1: Chapter 5
Phase 1: Chapter 6
Phase 1: Chapter 7
Phase 1: Chapter 8
Phase 2: Chapter 1
Phase 2: Chapter 2
Phase 2: Chapter 3
Phase 2: Chapter 4
Phase 2: Chapter 5
Phase 2: Chapter 6
Phase 2: Chapter 7
Phase 2: Chapter 8
Phase 2: Chapter 9
Phase 2: Chapter 10
Phase 3: Chapter 1
Phase 3: Chapter 2
Phase 3: Chapter 3
Phase 3: Chapter 4
Phase 3: Chapter 5
Phase 3: Chapter 6
Phase 3: Chapter 7
Phase 3: Chapter 8
Phase 3: Chapter 9
Phase 3: Chapter 10
Phase 3: Chapter 11
Phase 3: Chapter 12
Phase 3: Chapter 13
Phase 3: Chapter 14
Phase 3: Chapter 15
Phase 3: Chapter 16
Phase 3: Chapter 17
Phase 3: Chapter 18
Phase 3: Chapter 19
Phase 3: Chapter 20
Phase 3: Chapter 21
Phase 3: Chapter 22
Phase 3: Chapter 23
Phase 3: Chapter 24
Phase 3: Chapter 25
Phase 3: Chapter 26
Phase 3: Chapter 27
Phase 3: Chapter 28
Phase 3: Chapter 29
Phase 3: Chapter 30
Phase 3: Chapter 31
Phase 3: Chapter 32
Phase 3: Chapter 33
Phase 3: Chapter 34
Phase 3: Chapter 35
Phase 3: Chapter 36
Phase 3: Chapter 37
Phase 3: Chapter 38
Phase 3: Chapter 39
Phase 3: Chapter 40
Phase 3: Chapter 41
Phase 3: Chapter 42
Phase 3: Chapter 43
Phase 3: Chapter 44
Phase 3: Chapter 45
Phase 3: Chapter 46
Phase 3: Chapter 47
Phase 3: Chapter 48
Phase 3: Chapter 49
Phase 3: Chapter 50
Phase 3: Chapter 51
Phase 3: Chapter 52
Phase 3: Chapter 53
Phase 3: Chapter 54
Phase 3: Chapter 55
Phase 3: Chapter 56
Phase 3: Chapter 57
Phase 3: Chapter 58
Phase 3: Chapter 59
Phase 3: Chapter 60
Phase 3: Chapter 61
Phase 3: Chapter 62
Phase 3: Chapter 63
Phase 3: Chapter 64
Phase 3: Chapter 65
Phase 3: Chapter 66
Phase 3: Chapter 67
Phase 3: Chapter 68
Phase 3: Chapter 69
Phase 3: Chapter 70
Phase 3: Chapter 71
Phase 3: Chapter 72
Epilogue
Ralph Langley
Jeffery Langley
Laurie Langley
Evan Merridew
Paige Merridew
Jack Merridew
Tony Hughes
Sam & Eric Brooks
Roger Conroy
Simon Bennett
Piggy
Conclusion

A/N and What's Next

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By emmakatelyn8

Author's Note:

I would like to thank everyone who has taken the time to read and indulge in this story. I hope my readers have all enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I know it doesn't have the largest audience and I can only assume that lots of readers didn't read it straight from Chapter 1 to 91, despite the fact that it was relatively necessary to in order for the events of the story to make sense. I hope anyone reading this will take the time to absorb the story as a whole, but I am also eternally grateful to those who enjoyed bits and pieces, whether that was the plot itself or the spicy chapters (lol), or the fallout after the island, or Jack and Ralph's relationship in general. Whatever it is that brought you all to this story, I'm glad you stumbled upon it and hope that you enjoyed it.

I was certainly not expecting this story to reach 91 chapters. In my original plan to write it, I expected maybe a couple weeks at the most. The reason Phase 1 only has eight chapters is because I was initially expecting to not go much more than that with Phase 3. I was surprised by my continued inspiration and how easily the story continued to flow through me. I would've liked to go into greater detail in Phase 1, and I likely would've had I known what Phase 3 would turn into. I simply didn't consider it when I first started writing well over two months ago now. There are still so many questions, plot lines, and situations that went unresolved by the end. I was feeling that seventy-one chapters in Phase 3 was more than enough, and so a lot of sacrifices were made in terms of character developments, plot lines, and unresolved issues. I simply didn't feel that I had the space to dive into everything I wanted to. I still have so many ideas and ways I'd like to explore the progression of these things, which brings me to the next order of business in this A/N.

I am planning on doing several character analysis chapters following this author's note. I will be diving deeper into most of the major characters themselves and into lots of their internalizations and expanding on their backgrounds in greater depth in a way I didn't have the chance to in the story itself. For example, a lot is to be said about Ralph's moral dilemma of trying to reconcile loving Jack with everything Jack did on the island. Also, Jack's power struggle with balancing both pleasure and control in the boys' physical relationship. Just a couple key examples. There will be a chapter on each character (except I think I will do the twins in one chapter). I'm not sure yet how many words I plan on putting into them, it could be more or less or approximately the same as the majority of chapters in the story itself. Surely, characters like Ralph and Jack will likely be longer than those who appeared in the story less often or played a more minor role in general. Nonetheless, I plan on examining most characters from the original Lord of the Flies story and those I created around them in the before and after phases (1 and 3).

The final note I'd like to make here is more of an announcement than it is a note. At the end of the story, Roger revealed that there would be a trial to determine the boys' guilt or innocence in the deaths that occurred on the island. Obviously I didn't expand on that at all before the story concluded. I won't go into any further detail about it now either because I plan on writing a sequel story in which the trial will take place. As of right now, I plan on going beyond the trial depending on how the story itself plays out and how I'm feeling about it in the trial's conclusion. The plot will essentially carry on from not long after where we left off here in Phase 3. The sequel will begin by focusing on the trial, but will follow the characters during and outside of it. I'm also excited to see where it might go after that. I also plan on starting a Lord of the Flies oneshot or multi-shot story for shorter stories and ideas I have. If you can't already tell, I'm simply in love with the story and the characters and I look forward to writing some of my own short stories beyond the full length story of Before and After.

Once again, thank you all so so much for reading and I look forward to reading it through for the first time myself so I can recap on the story itself, and then begin to work on the character analysis chapters, and finally the sequel which I plan to release the first chapters of sometime this month (hopefully sooner than later). I am going back to school next week though so it may be a slower updating process than it has been over Christmas break. Thanks for reading and for all your patience and I hope my readers will continue to follow the boys into the sequel story!

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