Aspataal-E-Aashiqui

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A Hospital Based Story!! It's a story of two different people who have never met before but like each other a... More

Introduction (Break Ke Age)
1. Ek Ajnaabi!!
2. Their vacation
3. Thank You Gift!!
4. The Truth!!
Introduction (Break Ke Baad)
5. First Day At MPT
6. Takrana!!
7. Ye Kya Horaha hain..
8. The Party!
9. It's Hurting!!
10. Campaign Night
11. Backfire!!
12. The Next Day
13. Reality check!!
14. Pervert
15. Egoistic, arrogant, harsh, roughish women!!
16. The Gaurd & KS
17. Apology!!
18. Presence of each other
19. A new bond!!
21. Kya kiya hain tune..
22. Lingering gaze
23. Spit out the juice night!!๐ŸŒš
24. Reactions
25. You can do it!!
26. Karishma Singh's Past
27. Judge
28. Tea Time!!
29. Barso ki jaan pehchaan ya bilkul hi anjaan??..
30. Jalebi
31. Kya Hain Aap?!!!
32. Rabdi Jalebi!!๐ŸŒš
33. Bhaukali 2.0
34. Clashes!!
35. Caress
36. Something has changed!!
37. Nikah ki preparation
38.Phool Gulaab ka, Shadi Asfiya ka! ๐Ÿค๐Ÿฅ€
39. Glimpse of fear!!
40. Ruthe huye mehboob!
41. Zara zara Behekta hain..
42. Intezaar!!
43. Missing Era!!
44. Realization & Complications
45. The story of a sunset!!
46. Teasing game
47. I found a woman!!
48. Complicated feelings!!
49. It's a breakfast date!!
50. The Journey!!
51. Back to her arrogant avatar?

20. The Chaos!!

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Hm's cabin

hm was arranging the flowers on her flower vase and after arranging it she looked at the flowers & smiled unknowingly. Her trance broke by the sound of her phone's ringtone.

Hm: Hello

priya: Waah.. waah beta waah.. yehi saab karti hain tu!!

hm looked here & there to find priya and then asked

"kya matlab? kya saab karte hain hum?"

priya: hum yaha tere liye lade mare aur ap janab usi ladki ke sath raat gujarti hain.. aur unhi ki diye huye phoolo ke sath muskurate huye hospital jate hain?!

hm(shocking): 1st of all what is this "raat gujarna" n all. aur tujhe ye saab.. she paused and continued

oh... ammi.. itni jaldi saab nikalli ammi ki muh se?

priya: haan warna to mujhe pata hi nehi hota ki jisko mei galia deke ghumrahi hu tu usike sath raat..

hm cut her in the mid

hm(low voice): sshh!! Dheere bol aur ye saab kya shabd istemal karrahi hain?

priya: haan to apki pehli kiss ke baad to yehi word use hogi na?

hm closed her eyes with disbelief expression.

hm: Tujhe puri baat pata nehi hain isliye!!

priya: jo bhi ho you forgive her na?

hm: Haan humne maaf kardiya unhe... kyun ki wo sharminda thi..(thinking about ks) aur unhone jo kuch bhi kiya sirf mafi ke liye uske baad..

priya: aisa kya kiya?

hm explained her all the incident...

priya: hmm aur tu pighal gayee!!

hm: haan kyun ki wo genuine thi. aur ek baat tune unse jaise baat ki wo bilkul sahi nehi thi.

priya: ohooo ab main galat?

hm: humne aisa kaab bola? hum baas bolrahe the ki wo udas thi.

priya: Accha theek hain main sorry boldungi teri battamiz inte..( hm cut her)

hm: Priyaaa...

priya: I mean Apki intern ko.

on the other side

locker room

priyal: kyaah! ohoo matlab night stand an all..

ks: Amaaaa ye kaisi bhasha use karti hain?

priyal: waah tum karo to sahi main bolu to sala character dheela hain?

ks:Kuch bhi bakeiti karti rehti ho!!

priyal(excitedly): wo chhod matlab everything is normal now? she forgives you & you also forgave her right?

ks looked at priyal confusingly.

priyal: aree matlab saab sorted hain na? tune jaise bola tum dono ne accha time spend kiya aur wo wind chime bhi Dr. Haseena ne abhitak rakkha matlab..

ks cut her in the mid

ks: koyee matlab nehi hain.. haan unhone hume maaf kardiya aur hum Barish k waja se waha ruk gaye acche se rahe par iska ye matlab nehi ki humne unhe maaf kiya. whatever she did with me.. (ks was lost in her painful memory lane and after coming back in reality) I hate her.... she played with my emotions.

priyal: Paar tu aise kaise bolsakti hain? hoskta hain unki bhi apna side ho? why are you caring this grudges?

ks: Pri tu nehi thi uss waqt... jaab hume khudpe gussa arahi thi ki humne bewkoofo ki tarah unpe bharosa kiya.. tu nehi thi usswaqt jaab hum bikhar gaye the. jaab haar raat ko na chahte huye bhi phone hath mei leke hum baas ye sochte the ki kash.. kash unse baat karpate hum..

ks's eyes were moist.

priyal came infront of her.

Priyal: Haan nehi thi main paar ab hu main.. isiliye bolrahi hu.. (ks again cut her)

ks(looking at the other side with rage): Kuch maat bol plz. kyun ki humko kuch nehi sunna.

priyal: hmmm.. paar ek baat puchu?

ks looked at her and nodded

priyal: It was just 15 days!! ryt? How can someone affect on you so much? as you said you were totally shattered!!

ks looked at her eyes for a moment & said

"I don't know but I was not the person who use to talk with anyone.. humne humesha khudko logose dur rakkha. infact chavi ke alawa humari koyee dost bhi nehi thi college taak!! paar wo ek insaan chahe kaise bhi ho humari zindegi mei aye aur hum anjane mei hi sahi itna jyda dependent hogye unpe. unse baat kiye bina nind bhi nehi ati thi hume. haaah!! but yeah you are right it was just 15days!!!

after saying this she was about to leave but sinan came and

"Hello beautiful... (priyal was signing him not to poke her but sinan just ignored her and asked) missed me?"

ks looked at him and closed her eyes to control her anger.

ks: dekho sinan hume pata hain ye jo tum karte ho ye tmhra swabhav hain paar hum tumhe phir bhi batana chahte hain ki agar ye flirting sirf healthy flirting se age jaye to just stop it! hope you understood that I'm not interested even I have no interest on any type of relationship. we are just friend.

sinan was shocked by her sudden attack. he was trying to understand & was trying to compose himself but before that ks left.

priyal hit him on his shoulder and said "mana kiya tha aj maat bhidna paar sunte kaha ho!!"

priyal looked at him who seems distrubed. she asked

"Theek ho?"

sinan just nodded and asked "kya maine kabhi kuch jyda kiya?"

priyal: nope. it just her mood is off so she was so direct.. maybe wo baas itna hi samjhana chahti thi ki..

sinan: It's ok i got it.

after leaving locker room ks's pager ringed & she went to hm' s cabin.

ks(cold tone): May i come in Dr. Mallik?

hm: Yess.

ks came and was looking down.

hm: Hume apko ye bolna tha ki you don't have to assist Dr. asfi you can join ur team.

ks(looking at hm): It's ok Dr. Mallik I'm okay with Dr. Asfi.

but after saying this ks was about to leave. hm was looking at her confusingly & continued

Hm: Dr. Karishma it's not about your comfortness! you are joining your team. That's my order.

ks turned & looked at hm once after saying okay she just left.

hm(in her thought): Seriously? ye kya battamizi hain? Subha taak to theek thi!! Ya Allah! ye ladki humari samajh ki bahar hain.

Priyal's pov

I was looking at the duo who was working together with cold vibe!! It's been a month.. i have seen them in really intimate position.. sometimes they fight with each other like a real enemy.. though it always start from karu's side & ending up with Dr. Haseena's bossy attitude and sometimes they just lost in each other's eyes. But still they say they are just fr.. wait they are not even friends!!

her thought broke with their noise. they were again fighting over some stupid things!! maybe!!

Priyal: God!!! Idk what they want!!

she went towards the duo and asked

"What happened?"

Ks(with cold tone): Nothing

Hm(Stern tone): Better. you are gonna give your test tomorrow.

ks closed her eyes to control her anger and hm left.

priyal asked "Paar kyun? ab tune kya kiya?"

ks: Kuch nehi. bola to!!

a nurse came and gave a file.

"Dr. Karishma, Dr. Haseena sent this"

ks took the file and was about to leave when priyal stopped her "Ek min kaal general ward pe to maine duty ki thi to ye.. shit!! maine kuch galti ki?"

ks: Haan tune robin ke jagah rohit ka diagnosis result yaha chipkaya!!

PG's mind flashes with Dr. asfi's Walking style & she mumbled "Shit i was drooling him that time"

ks: Waah!! matlab hume kaal teri waja se nehi uss Dr. Asfi ke waja se test dena parega!!

priyal said with pleading eyes "Sorry!! but main abhi Jake Dr. haseena ko bolke.." ks cut her in the mid.

"Kahe? humne kaha? Unko baas humpe barasna hain aur kuch nehi warna iss choti si galti ke liye test nehi dena parta agar humari jagah koyee aue hota"

Pg: Aisa nehi hain..

ks: Aisa hi.. she stopped after hearing some noise.

"Amaaa ye shor kaha se arahi hai be"

Pg: Shayed bahar se!!

ks stopped ward boy billu.

Ks: Bille ruko.. ee shor kis chiz ka?

billu: Karishma madam bahar bohot bhid jama hogaya hain shayed kisi ka jaan gaya hain wo bhi humare hospital ke laparwai ke waja se. abhi to baas itna hi suna hain.

ks: Kaa? aise kaise hoskta hain?

the trio went towards the corridor

The front gate was locked, and 2 security guards were there, but the caos was coming from the main gate.

Billu: Maddam main Jake dekh ke Ata hu.

Ks: Hum bhi chalte hain.

Billu: nehi maddam waha bhid bohot hain main hu na billu the spy? Main Ata hu dekhke.

Billu left, Pg & Ks was waiting for him. after sometime cheetosh also came and asked, "eee saab ka hora hain udhar?"

Pg: pata nehi, Billu Ji gaye hain pata karne.

Ks: Amaa ye billu abhitak kahe nehi araha hain?

After some more time billu came.

Billu(In urgency tone): Bawal hogya waha to!! kaal raat paas mei hi ek accident hua tha bhayankar wala aur yaha emergency ke liye call kiya lekin hospital se hi kisine mana kardiya aur bola ki hospital band hain!

Ks: Kaa? Par (santu cut her in the mid)

Ss: Humari hospital to 24hours open rehti hain!!

Pg: wohi to!!

Billu: Haan aur phir dusre hospital lene ke liye jate jate wo ladka nikalliya!!

Ks passed a dead glare

Billu: Matlab margya. Aur abhi usi waja se bahar hospital band karwane ka andalan chalraha hain. Mehrab sir, Asfi sir aur Haseena Madam unlogoko samjhane ki koshish karrahe hain par wo log ruk hi nehi rahe hain.

Main Gate

"Band karo band karo!! Hospital band karo, marijo ke Jaan se laparwaahi nahi chalegi... Nehi chalegi!! Aisi Hospital nehi chalegi"

People were roaring with the slogan and security guards were controlling them. Gate was locked. Hm, DM & Asfi were trying their best to control them, but they were continuously shouting.

Hm(in low tone): Hume to samajh nehi arahi hain ye hua kab? Kaal to hum duty mei the raat ko!!

Asfi who was standing beside her right side said

"Mamla bohot age badhraha hain media wale agaye hain aur ye log itne jor se chilla rahe hain andar patients ko bhi disturb horaha hoga!"

DM: Dr. Asfi , Dr. Haseena aplog andar jaiye patients ko handle kijiye.

Asfi: But sir..

DM: plz go..

Hm: Dr. Asfi ap plz andar dekhiye hum yaha inlogose baat karne ki koshish karte hain. (She looked at Dr. Mehrab) sir plz hume lagta hain hum samjha sakte hain inhe.

Dm just nodded and asfi left.

Corridor

Ks: Hum jarahe hain dekhne ks was about to go and Asfi was coming towards them

Asfi(with stern voice): Aap saab yaha kya karrahe hain?

Ss: Dr. Asfi wo bahar kya chalraha hain wo pata karne aye the hum yaha.

Asfi: Hogya? Now get back to your work. We have to handle our patients. Unhe handle ke liye bahar log hain.

All in unison: Ji Sir/Dr. Asfi

But ks didn't respond instead of that she was going towards Main gate.

Asfi: Dr. Karishma apne suna nehi? Get back to your work.

Ks turned and looked at Asfi and said sternly "I have to go there" and she left ignoring Dr. Asfi's voice who was calling her.

Main Gate

Hm: Dekhiye plz samjhne ki koshish kijiye ye ek hospital hain yaha pe hazaro patients hain jinhe abhi problem horahi hain apki itni tez awaz se. Hum shanti se baat karte hain...

A lady: Abhi yaad aya ki ye ek hospital hain? Kaal raat ko kaha gayee thi ye hospital jaab ek 18 saal ka ladka isi hospital ke treatment na dene ke waja se margya?

And everyone again started

"Band karo band karo!! hospital band karo, marijo ke Jaan se laparwaahi nahi chalegi, nehi chalegi!!"

Hm. Looked at Dm, who was looking so stressed. And she continued

"Dekhiye jo kuch bhi hua usme sirf humari galti hain hospital ki isme koyee dosh nehi hain. Hum hi kaal raat duty pe the aur humne hi bina case sune mana kardiya tha koyee bhi emergency case lene ko. Hum aap saabse mafi mangte hain apni iss laparwai ke waja se"

Dm was shockingly looking at hm & ks who just came here and heard this immediately went towards Hm. "Ye ap ka bolrahi hain Dr. Mallik? Kuch bhi bakrahi hain ap inlogo ke samne"

Hm: Aap yaha kya karrahi hain Dr. Karishma? Apko to general ward pe rehna tha na?

Ks: Amaa wo saab chhodiye ap.. (Meanwhile, the sound of the public were increasing, and they were blaming hm for her irresponsibility. They all were in rage)

Hm: Dr. Karishma just stay quiet.

Dm: Dr. Haseena what are you doing?

Hm: sir plz let me handle it.

Hm: Dekhiye aplogo ko jo bolna hain hume boliye paar hospital ya hospital ke authorities ki isme koyee galti nehi hain. Unhe iss baat ki ilm bhi nehi thi. Hum apne iss laparwai ke liye ap saab se hath jod ke mafi mangte hain. aur hum wada karte hain ap saabse hum abhi isi waqt hospital chhod denge!!

Ks was looking at her with rage and she was controlling her anger by closing her fist. On the other hand people were continuously saying nonsense about hm. "Inki to muh kala kardena chahiye" & a man threw a stone to hm but ks catch that!!

"Amaaa ooo kiski harqat hain? Batarahe hain hum yehi gad denge agar kisine aisi wesi koyee harkat ki!! Insaan ki na sahi iss safed coat ki izzat karlo"

A boy: Madam agar aplog khud hi iss safed coat ki izzat nehi karrahe hain to hum kya karein? Sharm nehi ati aise gunda gardi dikhate huye?

Ks: Tumko hum batate sharm kya..

ks was about to go, but Dm hold her as he knows about his daughter's anger.

Dm: Dr. Karishma plz control yourself.

Ks: papa wo..

Dm passed a stern look and she stopped. Dr. Mehrab was about to say something but his pager ranged.

Dm (look at hm): I have to go plz take care.

And he left.

Hm: Dr. Karishma plz andar jaiye yaha

before completing her sentence ks held her wrist and dragged her from there, went to the stair room & pinned her to the wall.

Hm: ye kya battamizi hain Dr. Karishma?

Ks: Hum battamiz hain!! Aur wohi sahi hain, apko kisne kaha bahar mahan banne ke liye?

Hm: Dr. Karishma uss waqt hume jo sahi laga humne wo kiya.

Ks: ye sahi laga apko? Ye? Hum saabko pata hain ap ye kaam sapno mei bhi nehi karsakti to phir kahe sara ilzam khud pe lelia. Kahe??

Hm: Kyun ki yehi tarika thi hospital ko bachane ka. jaab taak hume asli culprit ka pata nehi chalta, Ye hospital bhale hi aplogo ki ho Dr. Karishma paar hum bhi iss hospital ko apna mante hain. Aur hum ye hospital ko band nehi hone deskate kisi ki laparwai ke waja se.

Ks: Bohot badiya to apko laga saab apne sarpe leke mahan banjate hain Dr. Mehrab ke samne.

Hm: Seriously?

Hm looked at ks's eyes for a moment and said "apko jo sochna hain sochlijiye, hume jana hain"

She pushed ks and was about to leave but ks held her upper arms tightly and again pinned her to the wall.

Ks: Mana kiya na apko ap kahi nehi jayengi. Samjh nehi ata apko humari batein?

Ks digged her nails in anger. Hm closed her eyes in pain.

Hm: Dr. Karishma plz leave.

Ks: Nehi chhodenge. Apko samjh nehi ata waha saab kitne gusse mei hain? Jo muh mei aya bolke ayee ap!! aur apko kya lagta hain apki mafi mangne se wo log apko ajayenge maaf karne? Jaan ke piche parjyenge wo saab milke ab apke, samjh nehi ata apko?

Hm(shaking voice): to kya karte hum? Band hone dete apni hi hospital ko? Ek masoom ladke ka jaan chala gaya. Bhale hi humne nehi kiya paar usswaqt duty pe hum the yaha Dr. Karishma!! Hume nehi pata kisne wo emergency call attend kiya paar agar hum wo call attend karte to aisa nehi hota!!

After listening Hm's shaking voice and moist eyes, she left hm's upper arms

"I... I'm sorry.. plz hum.. plz don't cry.. I was just worried about you.. aur isme apki koyee galti nehi hain.."

Hm up her head and looked at ks.

"Hum ro nehi rahe hain.. hum baas pareshan"

Hm stopped because of the sound of ks's phone. Ks pulled out the phone and it was flashing with Ammi's name. Hm & ks both looked at each other for once and after composing herself ks took the call.

Ks: Haan ammi kaisi hain ap?

Ammi: Ye saab kya dekhrahe hain hum news mei? Haseena ye saab kya bolrahi hain?

Ks closed her eyes in frustration hold her forehead by her palm & mumbled "ye media wale"

Ammi: kaha hain haseena hum kaabse call karrahe hain humari phn bhi nehi utharahi hain!! Karu.. karishma...

Ks: J..ji ji ammi hum.. humari sath hi hain Dr. Mallik. Hum unhe ghar leke arahe hain phir aramse batate hain saab ap pareshan maat hoiye. Hum ate hain.

She cut the call and looked at hm.

Ks: kaa? Abhi abhi apne sabke samne julm qabool kiya hain to hospital mei to reh nehi sakti na? Chaliye apko piche k gate se ghar chhodke ate hain hum!

Hm: Hum akele ja sakte hain.

Ks: haan maloom hain hume jhasi ki rani hain ap,(hm looked at her shockingly) ap akele sab karsakti hain paar ye humari jimmedari hain apko sahi salamat ghar pohchana!

Hm(folding her hand near her chest): Accha? Aur kaise?

Ks(thinking about the perfect ans): wo.. wo hum.. hum Intern hai apki to humari farz banti hain apni ma'am ko sahi salamat ghar pohchane ki..

Hm: Oh really? I thought you just forgot that I'm your senior!! And you behave like this with your senior right?

Ks finally found a perfect reason and said sternly

"aur haan iss hospital ki malik bhi hain hum. So it's my responsibility to drop you home safe and sound. Afterall itni mahan kam kiya hain apne humari hospital ke liye!!

Hm gave her an unbelievable look, and ks just left after saying "chalein"

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