Abhira - Separate Souls

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Based on current track when akshu come birla house to take care of manjari . Więcej

Introduction
Chapter 1 ( Akshu come birla house )
Chapter 2 ( Fierce of chotu sherni)
Chapter 3 ( Jealous docman )
Note
Chapter 5 ( Akshu get emotional)
Chapter 6 ( Truth is out )
Chapter 7 ( Confrontation)
Chapter 8 ( Abhi 's realisation )
Chapter 9 ( Manjari get reality check )
Chapter 10 ( Her decision )
Question
Chapter 11 ( His efforts )
Chapter 12 (Abhi leave the house )
Chapter 13 ( sach ka khulasa )
Chapter 14 ( Biwi hai woh meri )
Chapter 15 ( Their pain and efforts)
Chapter 16 ( love all around [1] )
Chapter 17 ( Love all around [ 2 ] )
Chapter 18 ( All is well )
Note ( IMPORTANT)
Epilogue

Chapter 4 ( Lag ja gale )

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The scene start from everyone settle down on the sofa and chit chat with each other like everytime mahima again was fume in anger and jealousy . Naksh , natik and gayu saw angrily toward Mahima and anand as they heard everything .

Naksh - waise harsh ji ham aapse milne hi aarahe the mahima ji ne hame mail Kiya tha ki ham aaye aur aapse mile aur hospital se related kuch discuss bhi kare .

Harsh - haa naksh ji main bhi aapse milne hi aaraha tha but mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap akshara ki family ho warna ham direct usse hi puchte .

Mahima ( being extra sweet ) - haa akshu tumne bataya nahi ki you have an connections with Singhanias .

Harsh - ab aapni haar personal info aapke degi kya woh . Aap usse sidhe mu baat toh karti nahi then why she share her personal information with you .

Mahima fume in anger heard this but didn't react as she want to come in good books of Singhanias .

Harsh - waise akshara tumne pehele aapne nanihal ke baare main bataya nahi aur aap shaadi main bhi nahi aaye the .

Akshu - woh sir actually nanu ki tabiyat kharab thi isliye aa nahi paye waise mamu aur buami aane wale the but aa nahi paye aur nahi bataya iska reason yeh hai ki time hi nahi Mila kitna kuch toh hogaya inn 1 and half year main .

Abhimanyu feel bad when he heard that . Just then sahil pull her to another sofa and tried to distract her mind .

On the other side Abhimanyu noticed akshu and sahil giggle and talk with each other happily . Abhimanyu again fume in anger .

Abhimaniyu pov

I saw this langoor and akshu clinging and talking happily with each other and I hate this view . Just then I saw akshu said something and like always I saw shamelessly at her .

Akshu - nanu main yeh keh rahi thi ki ab aap sab yaha hai toh ..

Sahil ( complete the sentence ) - Singhania sadan chale .

Akshu happily nod .

Akshu - aare waah tumne toh mere maan ki baat cheen li . You know me very well .

Sahil ( dramatically) - ab main itna bhi kuch khaas nahi .

I saw this langoor act like Shin Chan and akshu laugh on his antics.

Pata nahi khud ko kya samjhata hai yeh bandar ka baccha aur yeh akshu itna kyu Haas rahi hai aur yeh kya keh rahi hai akshu yeh bandar tujhe acche se janta hai nahi main aapni akshu ko accha se jaanta hu .

Par tu toh yeh bhi nahi jaanta ki akshu ka nanihal bhi hai said my mind

And I feel my mind laugh on me and I shut my mind .

Just then maa grab everyone 's attention.

Manjari - haa yeh sahi rahega . Akshu tum jaao aapne pariwar ke saath time spend Karo aur Abhi tum bhi jaao akshu ke saath uski family ko jaan bhi Lena aur dono saath main time bhi spend kar lena .

Aare yahi toh main chahata tha akshu ke saath jaana taaki yeh langoor aur koyi hoshiyari naa maar sake meri akshu ke aage .

I happily nodded .

Theek hai maa jaisa aap kahe .

And I smile widely.

Pov end

Just then Neil said

Neil - bhai bhabhi main bhi chaluga aapke saath .

Nishtha - haa main bhi . Please bhabhi .

Akshu - okk nishtha .

And nishtha smile and thanked her . After that manjari , Harsh, Neil and Abhimaniyu go with akshu , sahil and Singhanias toward Singhania sadan .

Gayu , naksh and natik sit in one car , sahil and akshu sit in another car and harsh , manjari , Neil and nishtha sit in another car .

Abhimanyu was confused where to sit . He want to sit with akshu but he hesitate . He was about to go and sit in manjari car just then she said

Manjari - yaha nahi jaake aapni akshu ke saath baitho .

Hearing this abhimaniyu 's face lit up . Akshu get awkward .

Abhimaniyu ( in mind ) - thank you mahadev iss mauke ke liye nahi nahi thank you maa for this chance . Akhir maa kiski hai . I love you maa .

He go and sit in akshu car . Akshu was sat on driving seat before sahil go and sat beside akshu . Abhimaniyu go and sat beside her and give a victorious look to akshu and here poor sahil look confusingly toward Abhimaniyu .

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AT ABHIRA CAR

Akshu was driving a car and there was complete silence . Akshu and Abhimaniyu stealing a glance of each other make sure another person didn't notice. Sahil notice it and smile teasingly .

Abhimanyu - main bahaut bore ho Raha hu let's play some music ( take his phone ) main hi lagata hu .

He connect his phone to Bluetooth speaker .

Abhimanyu - actually jo main abhi lagane Jaa raha hu woh gaana nahi balki lori hai ek rap lori hai jo ek father ne aapni beti ke liye gaayi aur mujhe woh bahaut acchi lagi . Tum dono bhi suno I make sure you like it .

And after that he play the song and it was a same lori which was sang by kartik for his princess akshu .

Sweeti Cuite
OH My
Beauty Beauty
Sweeti Cutie

Akshu get emotional heard that . She was sure if she heard more she will surely start crying right now . Sahil notice her and he know it very well after hearing this lori she get emotional as he know this Lori is very special for her as it was sang by kartik her superhero and he also know how much akshu love kartik .

Akshu ( tried to composed himself ) - abhimaniyu please yeh band kar do . I don't wanna listen this song . Please band kar do .

Abhimanyu - par kyu akshara itna accha toh gaana hai . Dekho naa kitni cute lori hai . Kisi chotu sherni ke liye gaya hai how cute naa .

Akshu having tears in her eyes remember how kartik used to call her chotu sherni .

Papa Ki Tu Hai
Heart..
Beat

This line made her emotional as she was really a heart beat of her father . Sahil notice her tears soon will bursted out.

Sahil - please band kar do warna problem hojayegi .

Akshu ( bursted on him ) ek baar samjh nahi aaraha maine kaha band kar do toh kar do . Ek baat samjh nahi aati tumhe .

Abhimanyu - akshu par...

Sahil ( whisper in his ears ) - kar do warna bina galti ke dant sun loge .

Abhimanyu immediately stop the music and kept his phone aside and get confused why suddenly akshu behave strangely. Akshu wipe her tears from the corner of her eyes .

Abhimanyu ( get worried ) - akshu tum ro rahi ho please ro maat I am sorry mujhe nahi pata tha ki yeh lori tumhe itni buri lagti hai I am really very sorry .

Abhimanyu was feeling guilty to made her cry . Akshu realise she overreact and hurt Abhimaniyu . He don't even know the reason why she react like that . Akshu immediately apologise him.

Akshu - I am really sorry mujhe aise baat nahi karni chaiye thi .

Abhimanyu - tumhe yeh lori itni buri lagi mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum kabhi music ko naa pasand kar sakti ho. ( Getting emotional ) Haaye kitni Lucky hogi naa woh ladki ki uske papa usse itna pyar karte hai haar koyi itna Lucky nahi hota ki unhe papa ka pyar mile .

Akshu ( Getting emotional ) - aur haar koyi itna Lucky bhi nahi hota ki unke paas papa ka pyar forever rahe .

And they both had tears in their eyes . Abhimanyu remember how he yearn for father whenever he need his father a most his father was not with him . Although he is with him but for namesake and akshu remember how kartik used to pamper her and treat her like a real Princess and after his death no one love him like kartik loved him.

Akshu stop the car and both go down in the memory lane . Akshu remember her beautiful childhood that she spent with kartik and Abhimaniyu remember his bad childhood which he spent without his father and his love .

After sometime they end up crying and hugging each other . They need each other arms for which they crave from past 1 year . And by mistake lag ja gale play which suit their situation .

Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir Ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho

Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho

Lag Jaa Gale ...

Ham Ko Mili Hain Aaj, Ye Ghadiyaan Nasib Se

Ji Bhar Ke Dekh Lijiye Ham Ko Karib Se

Phir Aap Ke Nasib Men Ye Baat Ho Na Ho

Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho

Lag Jaa Gale ...

Paas Aaiye Ki Ham Nahin Aaenge Baar-Baar

Baahen Gale Men Daal Ke Ham Ro Le Zaar-Zaar

Aankhon Se Phir Ye Pyaar Ki Barasaat Ho Na Ho

Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho

Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir Ye Hassin Raat Ho Na Ho

Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho

Lag Jaa Gale ...

They were so lost in hug and didn't realise what happened in the surrounding . They both enjoy each other presence . Sahil notice them and thought.

Sahil ( in mind ) - inhe dekh ke kon kehata hai yeh divorce lene jaa rahe hai aur jaa kyu rahe hai . Everyone can clearly said that they yearn for each other.

But suddenly someone press the horn from behind and shout .

Person ( shout ) - kyu traffic jam laga rakha aage badhao naa gadi .

And the sound of horn bring back them to reality . They realise their position and get separated.

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So guys this was the chapter I hope you like it .

Precap - Akshu enter in Singhania sadan . She remember her old days and get emotional . Abhimanyu get to know more about akshu .

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