Welcome readers!
I don't get why I had to do that sort of introduction but I just felt like it.
Now.., Some of you might've noticed that I unpublished then published the whole book. Well--- I've got a reason for that.
So a few weeks ago.., I was rereading the story, and I found some mistakes in not just grammar but also in the story itself. So I changed it in a way I think it's correct.
Below are some of the changes I made in the story as of this moment;
*The Spellings and the Grammars of course.
*Change bits of bits in the explanation about the S-System.
*Removed the Pool scene.
*Changed and removed a few lines.
*Removed the notes below the chapters.
I did more than that but I won't go into the specifics.
Now for the other concerns..., I knew I said that Kiyopon will be with Kaorin in the story.., But I'm willing to add a girl or two(Maybe Three) in the line. Although confessions will be a bit further in the story.
The options you guys have are;
Horikita Suzune
Kushida Kikyou
Karuizawa Kei
Ichinose Honami
Shiina Hiyori
Sakayangi Arisu
Sakura Airi
Kiryuuin Fuka
Amasawa Ichika
The girls(Preferably 2 or 3.. Up to you guys to choose) with the most votes wins. I'll eventually stop the voting when I reach Chapter 20 or 25.. But that's it.
In case either Fuuka or Amsawa wins.., I'll introduce them in the story earlier than in LN. I'll keep them a secret for now since it's only a what-if. Although it would be fun to do so.
Also, I think Arisu is more fit in the Little Sister category, and Sakura looks better with Sakuta. What do you guys think?
Anyways, that is all and bye~!