Your Rival in Love Gets Prett...

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Big changes and even bigger twists. A drama within another drama. He'll find his way to become prettier and s... More

Chapter 1: You Have to be the Protagonist's Love Rival!
Chapter 2: How Did He Change His Appearance?
Chapter 3: Take This Role!
Chapter 4: You Ill-Intentioned Man
Chapter 5: His Fans Have Returned!
Chapter 6: That Yan Dog Dared to Steal My Man
Chapter 7: First Fierce Collision
Chapter 8: Is This Called Nothing at All?
Chapter 9: The Ass Reward Has Arrived
Chapter 10: Start the Face Slapping
Chapter 11: Amaze Everyone!
Chapter 12: Moving in With the In-Laws
Chapter 13: Role Change Storm
Chapter 14: The Little Fairy is Very Good at Playing
Chapter 15: Mystery Man
Chapter 16: Guess Who I am!
Chapter 17: Beauty is Coming!
Chapter 18: Jintai's New Clothes
Chapter 19: Fan Wars
Chapter 20: Compared with Yan Qiuchi
Chapter 21: I Saw It, I Saw It
Chapter 22: Stunning Comeback!
Chapter 23: Detonate the Hot Search
Chapter 24: Drunk
Chapter 25: Save the Hero
Chapter 26: Jintai's Scenes
Chapter 27: Double Performance
Chapter 28: Shen Yitiao
Chapter 29: He Really Changed
Chapter 30: Acting Day for Bai Yueguang
Chapter 31: Pretending to be Drunk
Chapter 32: Face Slapping
Chapter 33: The First Open Set Visit is Here
Chapter 34: The Trailer is Here!
Chapter 35: Please Call Me a Natural Acting Talent
Chapter 36: The Meal was Blocked, and the Couple CP First Appeared
Chapter 37: It's Time for Rejuvenation
Chapter 38: It's on the Air
Chapter 39: A Pool of Autumn Water
Chapter 40: Exploded Overnight
Chapter 41: Jintai Qiongying
Chapter 42: Look, it's Shen Jintai!
Chapter 43: Advertisement Shoot
Chapter 45: Returning Your Suit Jacket
Chapter 46: Sudden Burst
Chapter 47: The Ad is Coming
Chapter 48: A Self-Disciplined Man
Chapter 49: He's as Beautiful as a Rose
Chapter 50: Fengqi Jintai
Chapter 51: Movie Pie is Coming
Chapter 52: Husband Powder is Coming
Chapter 53: The Crown Prince and Li Xu
Chapter 54: Countless Fans
Chapter 55: It's Heartwarming
Chapter 56: Hold You In My Arms
Chapter 57: Disliked
Chapter 58: Is he the Heroine?
Chapter 59: Who Attacks and Who Receives
Chapter 60: Black Powder on the Face
Chapter 61: Birthday Gift
Chapter 62: The Death of Zhou Jing
Chapter 63: Moonlight Jintai
Chapter 64: He Likes Him
Chapter 65: Show Sincerity
Chapter 66: You Chase Me I Chase Him
Chapter 67: Why do you Have My Magazine?
Chapter 68: Of Course, You Have to Meet Your Father-in-Law During New Year's
Chapter 69: Countdown to The East Palace!
Chapter 70: Fix It
Chapter 71: The East Palace Finale
Chapter 72: Li Xu and Shen Jintai
Chapter 73: Three Masters* Reunion
Chapter 74: Peihua* Boy Walks the Red Carpet
Chapter 75: The Awards Ceremony is Here!!!
Chapter 76: Slender Waist
Chapter 77: I also Gave you a Gift
Chapter 78: Rejected Without Saying Anything?!
Chapter 79: Pilot
Chapter 80: Massage
Chapter 81: Charming Him
Chapter 82: Love Business
Chapter 83: A Smoking Gun Beauty
Chapter 84: President Yan's Charms
Chapter 85: Taking a Photo with your Beloved
Chapter 86: Kiss
Chapter 87: Sleeping Together
Chapter 88: His Unknown Side
Chapter 89: To Get Him
Chapter 90: Superstar Style
Chapter 91: Shura Field* Omen
Chapter 92: Vinegar* is Brewing
Chapter 93: What the Hell do you Mean Sister-in-Law!
Chapter 94: Blame These Beauty Rewards!
Chapter 95: Please Stay Away From Me
Chapter 96: Beautiful
Chapter 97: Confession
Chapter 98: Xiao Ai's Suggestion!
Chapter 99: Crazy
Chapter 100: Is Yan Qiuchi Being Coquettish?
Chapter 101: There Is No Danger*, Duo Lovers
Chapter 102: Why is he so Good-Looking?
Chapter 103: How Does it Feel to be looked at by Three Masters?
Chapter 104: BaiJin Love?
Chapter 105: The Charm of Yan Qiuchi
Chapter 106: Ambiguous
Chapter 107: President Yan Strikes
Chapter 108: Finally Looking Forward to This Moment!
Chapter 109: Slap in the Face! Big News!
Chapter 110: Prince Yan's Statement!
Chapter 111: Go After It!
Chapter 112: President Yan's Method
Chapter 113: What Kind of Gold CP is Qiuchi?
Chapter 114: Who Doesn't Love Shen Jintai
Chapter 115: Are We Really Just Playing Chess?
Chapter 116: First Kiss
Chapter 117: Too Fast
Chapter 118: Second Kiss
Chapter 119: Touhua, Touhua!
Chapter 120: When You're Older
Chapter 121: Warm Him
Chapter 122: Bai Yueguang is Tempted!
Chapter 123: See Your Heart
Chapter 124: The Drunkard's Intention is not the Wine*
Chapter 125: Vinegar is Brewing
Chapter 126: Contest
Chapter 127: Rainy Night Stand
Chapter 128: Filming in Progress
Chapter 129: Short Message
Chapter 130: Rivals Attack
Chapter 131: Welcome Rain on a Spring Night Starts Filming
Chapter 132: He Can't Help It
Chapter 133: A Beautiful Man
Chapter 134: Third Kiss
Chapter 135: Brewing
Chapter 136: Starlight Dinner
Chapter 137: Public Delivery
Chapter 138: Try a Few More Times
Chapter 139: Embraced
Chapter 140: Qingquan's Crisis, A Grand Confession
Chapter 141: Let's Go Together as Sisters
Chapter 142: Sweetheart's Confession
Chapter 143: Top Stream Popularity
Chapter 144: Warm Feet
Chapter 145: Vinegar is Coming
Chapter 146: Self-control
Chapter 147: Dedicated Passion
Chapter 148: Baby
Chapter 149: Blizzard
Chapter 150: A Snowy Night
Chapter 151: The Blizzard's Over
Chapter 152: Comfort
Chapter 153: Forever
Chapter 154: Significance
Chapter 155: When You're Older is out!
When My Lover Gets Old, I Will Still Be as Beautiful as a Flower
Chapter 156: You're the White Moonlight in my heart
Chapter 157: Hugging You
Chapter 158: The Golden Age!
Chapter 159: Drunk
Chapter 160: Meeting the Parents
Chapter 161: New Year's Embrace
Chapter 162: A Sweet Union on New Year's Eve
Chapter 163: Happiness
Chapter 164: Fatherly Love
Chapter 165: Moderation
Chapter 166: The Interaction Between Film and Reality
Chapter 167: Welcome Rain on a Spring Night Finale
Chapter 168: Beautiful Spring
Chapter 169: I want to work!
Chapter 170: I Want to Escape!
Chapter 171: A National CP's About to be Born
Chapter 172: My Man's so Excellent
Chapter 173: Let Me Warm You Up
Chapter 174: The First Appearance of the Male God
Chapter 175: Yan Qiuchi's Strength Is Too Great
Chapter 176: Hot Springs
Chapter 177: Sprinkling Sugar
Chapter 178: Touhua Slays!
Chapter 179: The Variety Show Explodes!
Chapter 180: Yan Qiuchi went viral!
Chapter 181: Husband Powder!
Chapter 182: Qiuchi Yingjintai
Chapter 183: Let Me Rest
Chapter 184: Brother Chi is the Best
Chapter 185: Sweetness Is Over
Chapter 186: Doomed Marriage
Chapter 187: Ring
Chapter 188: The Award Ceremony Is Coming
Chapter 189: Shen Jintai, Shen Jintai
Chapter 190: Ascend to the top!
Chapter 191: Everyone Should Be Happy
T/N

Chapter 44: In Arms of a Beautiful Man

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"Why don't I ask the crew for a sick day?" Li Meilan said. She had rushed over when she heard Shen Jintai was ill.

"It's okay. I can ride it out." Shen Jintai said: "I originally asked for two days off and delayed the shooting progress. If I ask for leave again, regardless of whether they'll let me, I'm afraid I won't be able to keep up."

The TV series was a simultaneous film and broadcast. Any delay, even for a few days, can hamper many things.

"Are you sure you can hold on?" Li Meilan asked with concern.

Shen Jintai: "It's okay, I'll take some medicine. After the shooting ends in the morning, I won't have many scenes in the afternoon. I'll go to the hospital if I have time."

He took some antipyretics and went to the set.

The weather was cloudy and chilly. He looked at the forecast while on the road. It had been raining these past few days.

Bai Qingquan was in the dressing room and asked his assistant: "Is Shen Jintai back?"

Assistant: "Not yet. He had asked the crew for two days off."

"I heard that he asked for leave to shoot an advertisement." Yang Lizhi said: "I don't know what brand it is."

"I heard it was an underwear brand called Aishang." A makeup artist chimed in.

Yang Lizhi smiled when she heard this: "It's not easy. He used to endorse top luxury brands. His current situation isn't too bad if he can still accept small businesses*." She was annoyed with Shen Jintai for becoming so popular but it was not to the extent of jealousy as he hadn't risen to that high of a popularity level yet.

*Clarity: this is supposed to be a jab at him.

She had also stood on stage the day before. There were hordes of people at the scene, indicating that the heroine role she took paid a lot of dividends. Her increase in fans was not as large as Shen Jintai's but that's only because she was already exceedingly popular and had limited room to expand.

Bai Qingquan was also in a similar situation. He was already a top traffic star. <The East Palace is Coming> becoming popular was just icing on the cake for him.

For Shen Jintai, it was charcoal in the snow*. He needed it to warm himself back up.

*Charcoal in the snow (雪中送炭) = metaphor for giving people material or spiritual help in times of difficulty or crisis.

Bai Qingquan thought about Yang Lizhi's words for a while and felt that it made sense. She Jintai had become popular again. It was inevitable that his nemesis made him lose a bit but if he thought about it carefully, Shen Jintai had fallen from the peak. He used to be able to endorse top luxury brands but now could only endorse underwear. He had never heard of Aishang so he figured it wasn't a famous brand.

Shen Jintai managed to arrive at the set on time. When he was applying makeup, he asked the makeup artist: "Paint my makeup a little thicker today."

"Are you too tired? I don't think you look well today." The makeup artist said.

Shen Jintai raised his head slightly, asked the makeup artist to give him a nose shadow, and said: "I have a fever."

Makeup artist: "Did you go to the hospital?"

Shen Jintai: "I'll go after filming this scene."

"My relatives and friends are all chasing <The East Palace>," the makeup artist said softly: "Did you know the ratings for the second week hit a new high? It broke over 1.5!"

These words stimulated Shen Jintai. Often times, there's only one chance to become popular in a lifetime. He had to seize it!

The scene for <The East Palace is Coming> had reached the sadistic part. As Li Meilan said, it was particularly mentally consuming. Shen Jintai read the script and adjusted his emotion. He felt his whole being was bereft.

The Empress' funeral had passed. The crown prince remained imprisoned in the East Palace where even Li Xu couldn't reach him. On the other hand, the energetic He Lanbi relied on her protagonist halo and was able to infiltrate the network. After getting in touch with the right contacts, she entrusted them to contact Zhou Jing on her behalf. Zhou Jing refused to see her.

She then entrusted someone to contact Li Xu. Their situation was both pitiful so he would certainly sympathize with her. She was the righteous daughter of the Xiao clan and was originally betrothed to the crown prince. Now that the Xiao clan has fallen, she was forced to enter the palace as a slave. She had never touched spring water* yet now she had to wash clothes every day.

*Reminder: ten fingers don't touch spring water = refers to a spoiled or pampered person, usually a woman from a wealthy family.

They felt sorry for each other and developed a bond. It's just that the friends of today may be enemies of tomorrow. The plotline where the heroine and her best friend turn against each other is a must for palace fighting dramas. <The East Palace is Coming> was unusual, in that the best friend was a man.

"This is for you." He Lanbi took out a piece of jade from her arms. It was a warm-textured white jade pendant with a pair of mandarin ducks craved in it. Li Xu instantly recognized it. It belonged to the crown prince.

Li Xu took it in his hand and hurriedly asked: "How did you get this?"

He Lanbi: "Two days ago, I asked my sisters from the Garment Bureau to switch places with me. Taking the opportunity to deliver clothes to the East Palace, I went and met with elder prince brother."

"How is he doing? Is he alright?" Li Xu asked anxiously.

He Lanbi shook her head and said: "He's very ill that he became so thin, but the doctors refuse to treat him."

Li Xu's eyes turned red holding the jade pendant as he sat by He Lanbi.

He Lanbi said: "Elder prince brother asked me to give this to you as a keepsake. Don't go to the East Palace anymore. He said you must live well before you have a chance to save him in the future."

Li Xu knew that He Lanbi spoke the truth. It was something Zhou Jing would say. He prayed that Zhou Ying would be okay by himself, won't be implicated, and be able to live a good life.

"We both have to live well," He Lanbi said with tears in her eyes: "Those who harmed us and those who harmed the elder prince brother are all still alive well."

Yes. They were all living well with a promising future.

Li Xu clenched the jade pendant in his hand and said: "I am just a little eunuch. With him, I am a man. Without him, I am nothing."

He Lanbi: "Eunuchs have highs and lows. The second prince has a ruthless heart and looks promising. If you follow him, you may become a Bingbi eunuch* and eventually the palm print eunuch*. Look at father-in-law Gao* who sits above 10,000 people." He Lanbi said: "I will also be the favorite concubine and the Empress in the future. Let's join forces to repair the Xiao clan and avenge elder prince brother."

*Bingbi eunuch (秉笔太监) = eunuch in charge of internal affairs such as court etiquette, correction of internal officials. It is the second highest position in the eunuch system only to the palm print eunuch. It's considered a very high position. (Ming dynasty)
*Palm print eunuch (掌印太監) = full name is the "eunuch of the secretary of ceremony and the eunuch of the palm seal" is the highest seat in the eunuch system. Main responsibility is the final decision maker in various national policies and in charge of the government treasury. (Ming dynasty)
*Father-in-law Gao (高公公) = refers to . He was advisor to . He was a very powerful advisor. He's usually depicted as an eunuch (for some reason). (Ming dynasty)

She was only 28 years old, with a beautiful face and a thin figure, but her eyes were firm. These words were like a crazy dream, but they gave Li Xu great hope. His eyes lit up from his gloomy expression: "Can you do it?"

"We have to try." He Lanbi said: "A'Xu, you have to help me."

Li Xu stared at her. He Lanbi matched his gaze and said: "The second prince always refuses to see me, but I believe that he has feelings for me. Find a way for me to meet him. As long as I can become a member of his palace, we will support him together and ascend to the throne as the 95th Sovereign."

Li Xu hid the pendant in his arms, got up, and said: "Alright, I will help you."

"Cut!"

Shen Jintai let out a sigh of relief as the makeup artist ran over to reapply his makeup. His face looked sunken, but it was also in line with Li Xu's current state. He felt that his eyelids were getting hotter. Whenever he lowered them, it felt as if it could burn tears out.

Since the start of filming, Yang Lizhi and Shen Jintai have had very few rival scenes. Now that He Lanbi and Li Xu became friends, they would have more rival scenes together. The next part would be focused on the interactions of the male lead, female lead, and second male lead.

Shen Jintai's state also match the scene shot today very well with his sick and haggard look.

Yang Lizhi didn't have any scenes with Shen Jintai before today. After filming today, she also became convinced of his acting skills.

So good!

Shen Jintai rushed over to a different set after his scenes were done. He would go to Scene B to shoot the scene of Ziwei Palace. The male and female lead's scenes were filmed separately today. They had no scenes together. The only common factor was him. When he arrived at the second studio, they were filming a dream scene.

Zhou Jing had been entangled in nightmares all year long. This time he dreamt about Exmpress Xiao who had committed suicide. Empress Xiao predicted that he would reach the peak of the tower at the second half of his life, but he would have no one by his side who was sincere or trustworthy.

This is also Teacher Song's final part. The crew had already prepared flowers and were holding them in their arms.

"Cut!"

As soon as the director finished shouting, the crew all applauded. Director Guo stood up with a smile and said: "Congratulations Teacher Song, you are done!"

Song Wei smiled and took the flowers handed over by the staff and bowed to everyone very humbly.

The next step is the photo session. The crew rushed over to take a photo with Song Wei. Song Wei, Bai Qingquan and others shouted at the crowd: "Xiao Li Xu, hurry over!"

When Shen Jintai heard this, he ran over smiling. Teacher Song took his arm and leaned her head on his shoulder. Shen Jintai said "YES" with a bright smile.

Song Wei saw his strangeness in an instant and asked: "Are you sick?"

Shen Jintai: "A little fever."

Song Wei: "Have you seen a doctor?"

Shen Jintai: "I'll go after filming the morning scenes."

"Your body is important. Don't push it." Song Wei said: "My role was too short. I haven't played enough scenes with you as my opponent. We must cooperate again if there's a chance in the future."

Shen Jintai smiled and nodded. He looked dispirited and sad.

Song Wei: "As long as you act well, you will have a very bright path in the future. You can't go wrong if you believe in Teacher Song's vision. I will continue to watch this series at home. If you don't perform well, I will definitely criticize you. Hahaha."

Shen Jintai could only continue to smile and nod.

Song Wei hugged him, patted him on the back, and said: "Shen Jintai, it was nice meeting you."

With so many young actors, only Shen Jintai had received such preferential treatment from her. Bai Qingquan stood among the crowd, envious. He had admired Song Wei a lot. She was a veteran actor with strong acting skills and a refined aura. Oddly enough, though he was envious, he wasn't deeply jealous. He felt that Song Wei should have heavily valued Shen Jintai.

At only 20 years old, Shen Jintai acting skill was already like this. It wasn't an exaggeration to say his future would be limitless.

"Ding Dong."

Shen Jintai was momentarily stunned: "Xiao Ai?"

"Hello. Xiao Ai had asked for leave. I will be serving you temporarily."

He hadn't contacted the system for a long time and had forgotten about this.

Shen Jintai: "You are... Xiao Mei, right?"

The other party gave a "Nn" answering his question. Hearing the voice, Shen Jintai thought it sounded extremely cold. Xiao Ai and Xiao Mei were like two completely different style of painting.

He had become accustomed to Xiao Ai Taobao's* customer service-like way of speaking. It made him feel a little uncomfortable when he encountered this kind of coldness. After all, it was more enjoyable talking to that flatterer Xiao Ai who was much more relaxed and naturally shameless. Besides Xiao Ai who could give him weird ass shit as rewards, like may cherries, and still kept a straight face. It eventually became a natural thing that made him no longer feel ashamed.

* = Chinese online shopping platform. I'm assuming it's like eBay in the US. According to one of the comments Chinese on-line support behaves in a "silly and bold but cute little brother/sister next door" way. They address customers as "dear/darling" and are openly shameless as they try to play the emotional card of "close friend" or "poor little slave in a big evil cooperation" to cease customers complaints/demands.

"Hello, Xiao Mei. What's the matter?" Shen Jintai asked indifferently.

Xiao Mei: "It has been detected here that Bai Yueguang's favorability for you has been increased again, accumulating ten points. The latest sexy rewards and flushing have been sent out. Please pay attention and check it out."

Shen Jintai: "......"

Shen Jintai glanced at Bai Qingquan in the distance. Bai Qingquan was looking down at the script, and there was no special reaction.

Shen Jintai: "Flushing reward. I don't remember hearing about this."

"Wait a minute, let me check it for you," Xiao Mei's voice was still cold. After a while he said: "Because last time you accumulated 39 points all at once, a series of rewards were given simultaneously. It was too sudden for you to choose between two options. This time there are two options for your sexy reward: the flushing reward or the sensitivity reward. If you are particularly dissatisfied, you may choose again."

Shen Jintai: "...Sensitivity reward?"

Xiao Mei read the description with a monotonous and mechanical voice: "The sensitivity reward, as the name suggests, rewards you with a certain degree of physical sensitivity, including, but not limited to, the waist, earlobe, back, indescribable areas of the upper body, and indescribable area of the lower body."

What does it mean by indescribable? What was the latter half of what he was saying? Why's the lower body included?

"Since this is a world of harmony and an era of harmony, we cannot describe things below the neck. This of course includes the lower body." Xiao Mei said coldly.

Oh god! He really can't have this kind of conversation with a voice like this!

Shen Jintai felt like was dying inside! He already had a fever and now his face was getting hotter. He felt uncomfortable all over. He hurriedly said: "Flushing. I'll take the flushing." He was too embarrassed to ask what flushing entailed.

Xiao Ai, come back soon!

Xiao Mei: "Okay, the flushing reward has been given out."

Xiao Mei was very direct. After issuing the reward, it disappeared with a beep.

Shen Jintai felt that he was going to faint. What kind of rewards are these?

He's not going to become some kind of ridiculous enticing masterpiece, will he?!

"Are you okay?" Shen Jintai turned his head and saw Bai Qingquan looking at him suspiciously.

Shen Jintai recovered and said: "I'm okay."

Bai Qingquan: "You don't look too well."

Shen Jintai simply smiled. He just received another reward. This meant that Bai Qingquan's affection towards him had increased. He didn't know why Bai Qingquan's favorability of him improved, nevertheless it was still a good thing. Don't bother mentioning his strategy for survival, Bai Qingquan himself was such a heavenly dish in the gay circle.

His little 0 beauty really had no traces of any shortcomings. In the future when the two of them are together as husband and wife, with their starlight mixed together, they would be invincible. Just thinking about this made him excited. He felt that he and Bai Qingquan had a one-plus-one effect that was greater than two.

There was an abnormal flush on Shen Jintai's face, and his eyes looked a bit dull. Bai Qingquan touched his forehead.

"You have a fever." Bai Qingquan said.

Shen Jintai was stunned. He only felt the slight cold touch on his forehead. Bai Qingquan put his hand down and said: "Are you able to do this?"

"After filming this scene, I will go to the hospital and have a checkup." Shen Jintai said.

Bai Qingquan, who was dressed in a green and white robe that was wafting with a light fragrance, said: "Then let's fight as one."

Maybe it was due to the fever, it was hard to concentrate, and his consciousness was a bit scattered, but Shen Jintai couldn't help but feel that the fairy Bai Qingquan in front of him was resplendently fluttering.

The current scene they were filming was when prince Zhou Jing discovered the double mandarin duck jade pendant hidden by Li Xu.

He walked to the couch and saw Li Xu lying face down, rubbing the jade pendant. He stretched out his hand and snatched it with one hand.

Li Xu got up from the couch and hurriedly stretch out his hand to grab it back. He wrapped his fingers around the red string attached to the jade pendant and pulled it twice. Their shadows were casted by the candlelight. Zhou Jing lost his footing. As he was about to hit the ground, Li Xu jumped up, hugged him by the neck and tried to reach out to retrieve the jade pendant from his hand.

Although the two of them had deep feelings since childhood, there was a clear line between masters and slaves. Li Xu rarely ever transgresses. Zhou Jing was caught by surprise seeing that he was suddenly jumped on by him. As Li Xu hugged his neck, heat started to spread from his ears.

Zhou Jing: "Get off!"

Li Xu: "Give it to me!"

Zhou Jing was furious, but he couldn't push Li Xu off. He reluctantly relented and stuffed the jade pedant into Li Xu's hand: "I wasn't going to smash it."

Li Xu immediately got off Zhou Jing after getting back the pendant.

"How bold you are!" Zhou Jing's face was flushed with anger.

Li Xu hid the jade pendant in his sleeve and turn back to look at Zhou Jing. His face was abnormally red and his ears were scarlet. Bai Qingquan froze for a moment as he stared at Shen Jintai blankly. Shen Jintai's lips moved but his expression was off. Bai Qingquan hurriedly step forward as Shen Jintai slumped into his arms.

Shen Jintai was wearing a loose inner shirt. His long black hair draped down his body. After his fall, his clothes loosen exposing his fair shoulders. Bai Qingquan hugged him around the waist and felt it was very firm and slender. A very good waist that could endured and be attacked.

The author has something to say:

The long-lost addition!!!!

Yan Qiuchi: Author, you can do it.

Author: It will be your play from now on, don't worry.

Kinky Thoughts: I spent way too much time figuring out what all those eunuch's positions were...

At this point I feel as if these rewards aren't so much to make him look sexier and prettier but to make him into the ideal shape for Yan Qiuchi lol. For a system that's supposed to be "correcting" a rotten novel, these rewards seem counter-productive...

Oh, Shen Jintai as much as I love for you to get together with Bai Qingquan, that's simply just a pipe dream. You really can't do math my dear. Two 0's does not make 1 let alone greater than 2 ^__^.

As I said this... the ending made me go O__O. WTF is with all these shous thinking they are gongs LOL. Don't get me wrong. I don't mind it. I'm all for versatility... it's just I don't think it's gonna happen like they think it will if the author has anything to say about it.

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