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Drunken KariTosh

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By BrainWritingtatva

Sorry for uploading late...!

It is a long part but surely you all will like it...

You might be knowing the very recent episode where our sweet and innocent KariTosh got drunk by mistakely so I will write from the time when Cheetah went In the room and helped them to come out....

So Here we start

Note** KS and SS are talking in childish way so the sentences which are written feel them in a childish way...

CC enters in the room,KS and SS were standing near the window side...

SS:Maddam.... Karishma Maddam wohhhhh dekhiye...(saying and pointing from where KS didn't understand anything)
KS:Amma kaa dekheee....(irritatingly)
SS:Arrey upar dekhiye.... zoooommm..mm... aeroplane gayi..... (Hahaha this we all have did in childhood)
KS:Toh usme zoooommm..mm.. kar ne ki kya jarurat thi (asking sweetly as a small kid)
CC goes near them.

CC:Karishma Maddam.... Santu jii
They both turned towards him as shown in the show with the same BGM...

CC:Ah..ha   ham... ham keh rahe the chaliye bahar... bahar Maddam Sir aur Pushpajii aapka intezaar kar rahi hai...
KS & SS:Pushpajii .... Issshhh...(They both acted like PS do)
CC sharma gaye SS ko Issshhh karta dekh
SS:Kya huaa Cheeetaah.....(doing a step of how Lion or tiger attacks)

CC takes his steps back....

CC:Aaplog... bahar chaliye... (a bit scared)
SS:Cheetah tu toh darr gaya... ha..ha..ha...
(SS pulls CC cheeks....)
SS:Karishma Maddam dekha aapne... Cheeetahh... dar gaya.... 🤣🤣
KS:Ohh naam ke Cheetah yeha kya kar rahe ho jaho yeh se....
CC:Quarters lagaya hai....
SS:Kya huaa...?(making cute faces)
CC:Chaliye aap dono bahar
KS:Nahiiii....  nahi.... jayenge....
CC:Maddam Sir ne order diya hai aap dono ko bahar aane ka.... warna....
KS holds SS hands and says
KS:Chalo Santu... Maddam Sir order diya hai.... chalo...
SS:Par kyu...?mujhe nahi chalnnaaaa....
KS:Shh...! Chilao mat... aur socho agar bahar nahi chale toh... phir....
SS:Arrey haa...haa... chaliye Karishma Maddam
CC expression was like.... **Chalo kuch toh kaam aaya..**

SS:Ek minute Karishma Maddam....
KS:Ab kaa huaa...?
SS starts looking in the mirror and giving a lot of pose in a minute....

CC:Uff yeh Masumiyat..... Santu jii... aap bahut khubsurat lag rahi hai.....bahut... ab chaliye.
SS:Chal rahi ho na.... dekho Karishma Maddam mujhe yeh paresaan kar raha hai....
KS comes near CC.
KS:Ek aur baar paresaan kiya na Santu ko toh.... she turn towards SS they both did a hi-fi  ham dono mil ke marengeee....
CC takes two step backs and then.
CC:Accha thik hai abhi aap log bahar chaliye...
SS:Thik hai chalo...(excitingly)

They 3 of them comes out of the apartment of that Principle...(Out of Principle apartment because they were there only na for jadui investigation)

Now whole MPT team is near the Police Jeep and KS bike.

KS & SS:Jaiiii Hindd.. Maddammm... Sirrr..
HM:Ham yehi hai thoda shanti se...
KS & SS:Okay...
A small smile crept on HM's face seeing both of them.
HM:Chaliye aap sab ghadi se chaliye Thane ham.... ham Karishma Singh ki bike se aajate hai.
PS:Maddam Sir par aap saath mein kyu nahi chal sakti....
HM:Pushpajii ghadi mein sirf 4 log acche se aayenge... toh ham kaha baithenge.... (calmly yet little sarcastically)
SS:Pucchpppeee....(SS pulls PS cheeks)
PS:Santu..! Aur Maddam Sir inhe ek saath kaun Sambhalega....
KS:Hamare toh bhaag hi fhooooottt gayeee...!! Hamari Sasu Mayia ko kisi ko sambhalene nahi aata....
PS:Ham...hamm...
HM:Pushpajii shant... Karishma Singh aur Santosh abhi nashe mein hai... toh aap ladna mat suru kijiye.
KS:Maddam Sir...!! Hamari Amma ladti nahi hai..! Woh toh pyaar karti hai hamse... toh...she looks towards SS.
SS:Aapne galat bola..... they again gave each other a hi-fi
HM:Accha sorry hamne galat bola...
KS:Hmmm....Amma...  KS hugs PS....
PS kept her hand on KS head...
(Yes PS was a bit angry as both KS and SS they should have not drink not only water but even anything else without  having the knowledge of assurance its good thing or not but unki pyaari  pyaari nautankiwas melting her anger)
SS:Hawwww.... Pushpeee mein...
PS let SS also joined the hug.

HM:Ab Thane wapas chale...(Someone is jealous here 🤣)
CC:Haa chale...(what a smell of jealousy 🤣)
Trio laughed at their state....

HM:Ab chale 😕
SS:Chaliyeeee... yupp....
CheeToshPa went inside the jeep.
CC in the front seat and PushTosh on the back.
HM:Karishma Singh aap ko kya huaa..? Jayie andhar baithye...
KS:No...noo...no.... ham hamari bike si hi wapas jayenge...(giving a flying kiss towards her bike)
HM:Karishma Singh par...
KS:Nahi..... ham kuch nahi sunenge... she kept her hands on the ears...
HM looked at her face... the innocence forced her to think what can she do now?
PS:Karishma jii yeh kaisi zidd hai...
SS:Mujhe kuch kehnaaaa haiii...
PS:Dheere Santu ham bagal mein hi hai...
SS:Aapko toh bola hi nahi... he..he..hee..😂
Cheetah... oo... cheetah...
CC:Kahiye Santu jii
SS:Tu peeche aa...
CC:Hnnn..?
SS:Arreeey.... tu peeche aaa... aur Pushpee aap aage jao....
PS:Ham...ham kyu jaye....
HM from outside pleaded PS to do what SS is saying....
PS:Par..
HM:Pushpajii...!
PS:Thik hai...

KS:Maddam Sir ham jaa rahe hai..... Bikeee se....
HM:Ek minute rukhiye Karishma Singh..!(HM said in a little stern voice)
KS kept finger on her lips... and nodded looking at HM.
HM would have laughed at any moment seeing KS that much obedient so she looked here and  there to control her laughter.
In the jeep PS went in front and CC came backside.....

Outside the jeep...
HM:Agar aap ek wada karengi toh aap bike se jaa sakti hai.
KS face bright up
KS:Wada...
HM:Toh aap peeche baithengi aur bike ham chalayenge.
KS made a weird face...
HM:Aapne wada kiya tha.... ab aap peeche nahi hatt sakti... kyuki pura seher jaanta hai Karishma Singh apne wade ki kitni pakki hai...
KS:Nahi.... bhala ham apni hi bike pe peeche kyu baithe...?? Nahii...
HM:Accha...hmmm... aapne kaha aapki bike hai...
KS:Hmmm...
HM:Toh phir aapne kabhi feel kiya hai... peeche baith ke  kitna alag aur accha mehsoos hote hai.
KS nodded negatively.
HM:Toh aaj try kar ligiye.
KS nodded energetically.

KS went and sat on back part of the bike....
(Yes KS got excited just by some words of HM... On the other hand HM was thankful **somehow KS got agreed with her otherwise God knows how will she would have taken KS back to Thane)

In the jeep....

SS hold CC one arm and rested her head as she is feeling very sleepy due to alcohol....
And CC woh toh satwe aasman mein the

**Important**
Further CheeToshPa talks are nor in normal voice but a little slow...

SS:Cheete...
CC:Jii...jii...
SS:Kuch nahi...
CC:Thik hai
SS:Ek baar puch toh sahi...🙄
PS laughed 😂
CC:Sorry sorry Santu jii... Sach mein kuch bhi nahi?
SS:Tu ek baat bata.... tu har baar tere ghar walo ko shaadi ke liye mana kyu kar deta hai....
PS:Ahh..haa...
SS:Pushpeee ghadi mein pani hai ki bottle hai pani pe lo...(Innocent SS)
PS:Ham thik hai..
SS:Okay... Cheete tu bata na...
CC:Ham...ham...
SS:Tu mujhse pyaar karta hai.... isliye....
CC looked at SS shockingly.

PS coughed loudly and looked behind;CC  shocked face and SS innocent face and smiled whole heartedly.

CC:Aap...aapko...
SS:Mujhko Billu ji ne bata diya hai...😂😂

CC on the face was batate hai billu ko... and inside.... Sukhriya Billu.

SS:Mujhe thoda time de... phir mein tujhe bata dungi... tab tak ke liye I like you...
CC was on the cloud nine.
SS:Okay?
CC nodded....

PS was more than happy for CCas she knows how much CC loves SS... and SS confession gave her a hint ki sab accha hoga ab...

Within 5 minutes SS slept on CC arm.... due to the effect of alcohol.

Now let's see KarEena...

(I am not taking proper mission topic here as I have wrote more than 1 or 2 parts only on Mission; so just the character of Urmila will be use not much but little nothing else)

So as of alcohol effect KS was also feeling very sleepy.... she just kept her head on HM's back...

HM was silently driving the bike as she was not much use to drive bike until KS started a conversation.

KS:Maddam Sir...
HM:Ji kahiye.
KS:Aap hame apna Dost maanti hai...?(KS said with a face having thousands questions)
HM:Dost nahi sab se Khaas Dost...(HM said smiling)
KS:Aap hame ek kabil police officer maanti hai?
HM:Isme manna kya... yeh toh haqekat hai... aap ek bahut hi kabil police officer hai... (HM again said smilingly)
KS:Aap hampar bharosa karti hai?
HM:Khud se bhi jyaada...(HM was answering without knowing that KS is bothered;bothered for something;she just thought ki nashe mein hai... isliye sayad)
KS:Jhooth...
HM was shocked with a sudden change in KS voice.The voice was not of anger; neither hate it was a voice of a big disappointment
But HM asked playfully.
HM:Aur woh kyu...?
KS:Aap agar hame Dost maanti toh mission ke baare mein jhuth bol ke hamare saath Urmila banke nahi rehti...phir bhi woh tohmaan liya ek majburi thi... par usse pehle bhi aap bahut jagaho pe hame ek Dost samaj kar kuch bhi nahi bata payi jiska matlab ek hi hai ki ham utni bhi khaas jagah nahi rakhte aap ke liye jitne baaki sab rakhte hai... toh ham khaas Dost toh nahi.... Aur kabil officer wohaap hame samajhti hi nahi hai...kuch hi gine chune case hamne khud ke bal pe solvekiye honge... baaki toh aap Urmila bankar bhi hame case solve karne nahi deti thi.... toh ham kis taraf se ek kabil officer hue... Aur bharosa... woh toh aap hame lagta hi nahi aap hampar karti hai... Warne itne bade Topa bhi nahi the ki aap hame mission mein nahi le sakti thi... aapne nahi liya kyuki aapko bharosa nahi tha ki ham kar payenge ki nahi....
KS unknown that in drunken state she said everything which she had kept only to herself from many days.
On the other hand.
HM didn't knew because of her some acts KS have misunderstood not her but herself...
Fir 5 minutes there was complete silence except the sound of the vehicles

Before HM could further say something KS almost slept.

After 5 hours... (almost night)

In the cabin

KS and SS standing in between surrounded by PS,CC, and HM.

KS:Maddam Sir... hame nahi bata tha pani mein sharab mili hai warna ham kabhi nahi pite...
SS:Haa Maddam Sir hame nahi pata tha.
KS:Hamne toh Santu se kaha bhi ki pani ka swaadalag hai toh Santu ne kaha ji Pure Water hai...toh hame pe liye. Sorry...
SS:Sorry

Trio laughed slowly at KariTosh after seeing their condition.

HM:Okay toh first of all aapne joh kiya by mistakely kiya par phir bhi aapko sawdan rehna chaiye tha... aise hi kahi se utha ke aap kuch bhi kaise pe sakte hai..! But as aap dono ki saari galti nahi thi... but thodi bahut aapki galti thi bhi... Waise toh ham aapko kuch nahi kehte kyuki joh huaa anjane mein huaa but phir bhi as yeh Police officer ke issab se dekha jaye toh aapko iss galti ki saza milengi... Isliye kal aap dono ki Night Duty hogi including kal ki Patrolling duty...
KS&SS:Jii Maddam Sir.
HM:Karishma Singh aap jara cabin mein aayie kuch kaam hai...
KS:Jii Maddam Sir.
HM:Baaki sabhi apne kaam pe lag jayie.

CC was blushing everything he was seeing SS and remembering the talk in the jeep.
SS:Kya huaa Cheete..?
PS:Santu... tum bas ek baar shanti se socho ki tumne Nashe mein kya kiya sab samaj jaogi aur Cheetah yeha aao kuch kaam hai.
Leaving confused SS back the duo got busy in the work.

In the Cabin.

HM and KS both were sitting but HM got up...  KS was about to stand.
HM:Aap baithe rahiye.
KS:Par..
HM:Kuch jaruri baat karni hai aapse...
KS just nodded.

HM:Aapne bahut accha kiya ki aapne apne man se kuch baate hame batayi nashe mein sahi... par hame realize kar ways ki ham bahut jagah galat ho jaa rahe the...
After listening to HM, KS forced her brain to get a flashback of what she said to HM.
Successfully she remembered it...
KS:Woh...woh...ham..
HM:Kohi dikkat ki baat nahi hai Karishma Singh hamne woh sab janke kuch galat kiya hai ki nahi pata nahi... par... itna jarur jan gaye ki aage ham sab thik kaise kar sakte hai...
Pehle toh ham Sorry kahenge aapse... kyuki woh saari baate aise ji toh aapke andhar nahi aayi hongi... uski kohi wajah hogi joh sayad ham nahi jan paye.
Par sach keh rahe hai aap bahut khaas hai hamare liye... Pehle utne nahi the par ab hai... pehle sayad ham bas Dost ban hi rahe the... sirf begin kar rahe the Dosti toh yeh realize nahi hua hoga ki aap bahut jyaada mayne rakhti hai aap hamare liye....
Aur aap sach mein ek kabil officer hai... hame bas darr rehta hai...iss baat ka daar ki sirf ek galat kadam... aur sab aapke khilaaf.... hame aapke gusse se pehle yeh daar tha.... par jab hamne ek baar Urmila ban ke aapko dekha toh aap apni puri koshish kar rahi hai... ab sayad ham pehle jaise har baar aapko mana kar de toh woh galat hoga... nahi keh rahe pehle joh kiya wo puri tarah sahi tha... kyuki agar hota toh aapko khud ek kabil officer hone par shak kabhi nahi karti... ham woh badal toh nahi sakte par aapse maafi maangte hai... ki hamari wajah se aapko laga ki aap KARISHMA SINGH ek kabil officer nahi hai.
Aur rahi baat bharose ki toh... ham aap par khud se bhi iyaada bharosa karte hai... par sayad hamare over protective behavior se aapko laga ki ham aap pe bharosa nahi karte... haa abhi hi sorry keh rahe hai... apna aapke liye protective nature toh ham nahi hatane wale... par puri koshish karenge ham Over Protective na ho jaye...
Aap ek bahut hi acchi Dost aur ek kabil Police officer hai... thi... aur rahengi...
HM hold her ears... Sorry hamari wajah se aap hurt hoyi hai.
KS stood up with tearful eyes and removed HM's hand from ears...
KS:Maddam Sir aap aise hame kahe emotional kar deti hai.
HM laughed a little.
HM:Phir bhi apni galti ke lite Sorry time pe bolna jaruri hai accha hua aapne kam se kam sharab ke nashe mein hi sahi kuch toh bataya hame...Bas ek request karenge aage se aisa kabhi mat kijiyega... apni baato ko nikalna jaruri hai... aap agar hame nahi bata sakti toh kisi aur ko batayie par apne andhar daba ke mat rakiye.
KS:Ham wada karte hai aaj se aisa nahi karenge.

HM went near KS ears.

HM:Hamri Galti ke liye hamari Dost ko thappad marne ka bhi haq hai... bas sabke samne nahi... izzat ka sawal hai...

Both started laughing now....

HM:Toh Friends Again?
HM forwarded her hand...
KS:Friends nahi Best Friends...
And both did their signature handshake.

On the other hand finally after long 15 minutes SS remembers the talk in the jeep and a blushes with a smile.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE END ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sorry I previously forgot this thing...
So idea for this was given by CoolGamio_0802

Bye bye....

Next part will be based on the vote given in comment section of previous part...
So go... read the ideas I got and from them choose and message which one you all want... the one having highest vote will be written

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