pyar ki kahani. (Completed)

By punam14

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shiva an angry young man and an IPS Officer, Raavi is a college going bubbly girl, two opposite characters m... More

introduction
first meet
misunderstanding
nok jhok
planning
Birthday
Kidnapping
care
dosti
Jealousy
diya's engagement
shivi meet
Shiva in hospital
shiva's ignorance
shiva's anger
unexpected
broken
Raavi's condition and shiva's worry
camping
shiva in raavi's house
reason
Raavi in danger
realisation
apology
antics
Jealous shiva
happy Birthday
bike ride
shiva reply to varun
proposal
worried
manali
raavi's efforts
party
confession
raavi's idea
haldi
cute moment
mehendi
shiva in trouble
raavi's trust
sangeet
jutaa churai
return home
raavi proposed
drunk raavi
kiss
varun true face
let's get married
family drama
kisse hogi raavi aur shiva ki shadi??
Shivi engagement
shivi moments
raavi in pandya niwas
ruthna manana
date
rain and sharing room
thank you
shopping
shivi's haldi
shiva is hiding something
shivi sangeet
do you trust me
in temple
raaavi trust
truth
shadi
shadi
after marriage rituals
gussa
raavi care for shiva
ready for trip
plan to make raavi jealous
raavi jealousy
pehli rasoi
pehli rasoi ka neg
walk
sach me chot lagi hai kya ???
party in pub
shiva ka gussa
Shiva's angry with all
ye kya ho rha hai
shopping for reception
plss maan ja na shiva
reception
reception continues
romantic moment
shiva wants to return
shivi plans to unite ashqi
ahsqi confession
new drabble

Gift

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Next day

Raavi tell her parents that she is going to spend the whole day with anshu at her house,  they agree

In pandya niwas
Shiva is ready in his uniform

Akash : ap ,..ap duty pr jaa rhe hai ??
Shiva : nhi baarat me ja rha hu, tu chlega( sarcastically)
Akash : baarat me aise jaenge to dulha
Bhag jaega( teasing)

Shiva glares him

Anshu : arey, bhaiya ap kaha chal diye,..hme to shopping pr jana tha
Shiva : ye shopping ka plan kb bna
Anshu : ap bhul gaye , ap hi to mobile dilane wale the

Shiva : oh to isliye shopping pr jaana hai tujhe,...ek kaam kr ,tu akash ke sath chali jaa,
Anshu : pr, mujhe apke sath jana tha, ap mt jao na aj duty pr
Shiva : itne dino se chutti pr th, bht sare kaam pending honge, I have to join
Anshu : thk hai , phr mai raavi  ke sath chali jaungi ,wo aati hi hogi
Shiva : raavi, ...wo yha aane wali hai ???
Anshu : haa, itne dino se mile nhi to maine use bulaya hai
Akash : kya hua bhaiya, kaha kho gaye, ab late nhi jo rha( teasing)

Shiva hit on back of his head, : tu nhi sudhrega,..ja rha hu

He leaves
Raavi enters , anshu hugs her

Anshu : I missed you sooo much....
Raavi : I missed you too
Anshu : jhut mt bol, bahiya se fursat hi kaha mili hogi jo hmari yad ayegi (teasing)
Raavi blushes : aisa kuch nhi hai
Akash : to phr kaisa hai,..hme bhi btao

Raavi blush more

Anshu : ab sharmati hi rhegi ya andar bhi chlegi, bht sari baate krni hai tujhse

The trio goes to anshu room while raavi is looking around

Akash : koi fayda nhi hai, jise tu dhund rhi hai na wo ghr pr nhi hai
Raavi : mai shiva ko nhi dhund rhi

Akash : maine kb kaha ki tu bhaiya ko dhund rhi hai,
Raavi realises what she said : wo...wo..mai..she blushes
Akash : tu aise sharmaegi na to tamatar mehenge ho jaenge .( Sarcastically )
Raavi : kya mtlb...??
Akash : ab tere gaal tamatar ki tarah lal honge to unki kimat to bar hi jaegi na ...
(Teasing)
Raavi hits him slightly on his arms : shiva shi kehta hai tu pita ke hi layak hai
Akash 😳😳: sun rhi hai  anshu ,av to hmari bhabhi bni bhi nhi aur bhaiya ki boli bolne lgi,..dosti ki to value hi nhi hai (Sarcastically)

Raavi : tum log aise chidaoge na to mai jaa rhi hu (fake anger)
Anshu : arey aise kaise, aj to pure din tu hmare sath hi rhegi,  hm tujhe khi jaane hi nhi denge

The trio do lots of chit chat
Anshu and akash ask her how all this happened and she tells them all except some personal moments
Teasing also continues

In the afternoon
Akash : hm shaam ko bahar party krne Chale
Anshu : haa , bht mja ayega
Ravi : pr jaenge kaha
Akash : wo mai dekh lunga, waise bhi tumhari taraf se gift baki hai, bhaiya ne
to de di
Raavi : kaun si gift
Akash :  acha, to ab tum bhul gayi,..galti hmari hi hai,...hme gift liye bina manna hi nhi tha, tb tumhe yaad rehta
Anshu : hme av bhi naaraj hi rehna chahiye tha
Raavi remembering: oh, yaad aya,...bolo kya chahiye
Akash : shaam ko party me chal phr 
btayenge

Raavi : nhi, aj rehne dete hai,phr kbhi
Anshu : kyu aj kyu nhi??
Akash : smjh na anshu bhiaya nhi hai na isiliye mna kr rhi hai,.(.teases )

Raavi : aisa kuch nhi hai, wo to mai bs aise hi...
Akash : rehne de,  sb pta hai mujhe,..

He calls shiva
Raavi : kya kr rha hai tu..
Akash : tu bs dekh
Shiva picks the phone
Akash : hllo, bhaiya,ap shaam ko free ho kya
Shiva : kyu puch rha hai
Akash : wo hm sb ne shaam ko party krne  ka plan bnaya hai,  to ap bhi join
krte to mja aata
Shiva : sbne mtlb,  aur kaha jana hai party krne???
Akash : sbka mtlb ap khud hi smjh jao ,..aur party krne hm club me jayenge

Shiva 😳: club me,pr club me jaane kin kya jrurt hai , tum kisi restaurant me bhi to jaa skta ho na
Akash : offho bhaiya, ap aur apki ye soch,...hm na club hi jaenge ,ap btao ap aa rhe ho ya nhi
Shiva : av bol nhi skta, thoda busy hu,..
Anshu putting the call on speaker : plss bhaiya , chliye na, ...
Shiva : anshu, try to understand

Akash signals raavi to convince him

Raavi : plsss Shiva chalo na, sbka kitna mn hai
Shiva : raavviii, tu bhi hai wha
Anshu : btaya to tha subah , phr bhi ap.chle gaye , aur ab party ke liye bhi mna kr rhe ho( sad)
Raavi : anshu, tu kyu naaraj ho rhi hai,  Shiva aa jaega, ..kyu shiva
Shiva : haa, baba aa jaunga , bs, ab khus
Akash : wah bhai, hm itni der se bol rhe hai pr ap nhi maane aur raavi ne ek baar kaha ap.maan gaye,...shi kehte hai log bhabhi aane ke baad bhai paraya ho jata hai..(.Sarcastically)
Shivi : aisa kuch nhi hai...
Akash : wah ab dono ek sath same  bol
bhi rhe ho,  wow(teasing)

Shiva : ae bandar chup kr, wrna bht maar khaega,.. kuch bhi bolta hai,..chal.phone rkh aata hu shaam ko

Akash and anshu gives a winning smile

Raavi blushes : kya akash tum bhi na...kuch jyada hi badmash ho gaye ho

Akash : maine kya kiya,....mai to bs chota bhai hone ki duty kr rha hu ...

Everyone laughs
In evening they get ready for party

Anshu : ye bhaiya kaha reh gaye, av tk aye nhi
Akash : hmesa late hi krte hai
Suman : tum sb khi ja rhe ho
All : haa, wo hm bahar dinner krne ja rhe hai

Shiva arrives
Raavi looks shiva and is lost in him

Raavi in mind: is uniform me to ye aur bhi dashing lgta hai
Anshu shakes her hand in front of her eyes  : kaha kho gayi
Raavi : khi nhi

Shiva looks at raavi and admires her
Akash : bhaiya kitni der kr di apne , late ho rhe hai
Shiva : mai abhi ready ho kr aya ,
After 10 min, shiva comes and they leaves for club

They reach the club , music is playing,
Raavi and anshu has came to the club first time
They are having a strange feeling
seeing the environment

Anshu : yha ka mahaul kitna alag hai
Raavi : haa, bht hi different hai,..sb log kaise dance kr rhe hai, bilkul apne me mast
Akash : tum log pehli baar aye ho na isliye aisa lg rha hai
He signs towards a table : chalo wha chl.kr baithte hai

They all sit enjoying the music and dance

Shiva : to aa gaye club , ab btao kya krna hai
Akash  : pehle kuch drink krte hai

Raavi : 😮😮 tu drink krega
Akash : aise look kya de rhi hai, mai cold drink ki baat kr rha hu,...club me
aata hu iska mtlb ye nhi ki tu kuch bhi sochegi...
Shiva : ab tu yha aise bolega to log to aisa hi reaction denge( teasing)
Akash : wah , bhai mere ho pr side iske...

Shiva gives a teasing smile

Raavi : sorryyy,  wo yh sb aise dikh rhe hai to mujhe lga ki.....
Akash : thk hai, thk hai ...it's ok

They all chit chat, teases each other, drinks juice and enjoy a lot
After sometime

Anshu : party to mil gayi hme aur bhaiya se gift ke paise bhi , ab bs raavi teri gift baki hai
Raavi  : thk hai,bolo kya chahiye

Anshu : jo mangenge degi na
Shiva : dena hi hoga, mujhe itna luta hai, ton ise kaise chod skte ho
Raavi : shiva , tum inhe uksa rhe ho,
Shiva : to ,tu bhi to inka hi side le rhi thi na jb ye mujhe lut rhe the, ab teri baari....
Akash : ap dono phr suru ho gaye ,pehle hme btane to.do ki hme kya chahiye
Raavi : hmm, bolo
Akash : raavi ,hm chahte hainki tu bhaiya ko hmare samne propose kre

Raavi was shocked at their demand and shiva just coughed and split drink
,,he looked at raavi to see her reaction

Raavi : paagal ho gaye ho kya,...kuch bhi bol rhe ho,...gift ki baat hui thi,  wo mango ,  aisa kuch nhi,..(nervously)

Anshu : arey, pr hme to gift me hi ye chahiye na
Akash : plss na raavi,  kb se wait kr rhe the hm , tum dono ke confession ka,..pr jb ye hua hm tum dono ke sath nhi the,...hm wo khusi dekhna chahte hai feel krna chahte hai plss..

Raavi : pr, mai hi kyu,..shiva ko bolo na

Shiva : ae jangli billi, mujh pr kyu daal rhi hai sb,  mai already tujhe propose kr chuka ho,..aur waise bhi unhe gift tujhse chahiye, mujhse le chuke hai wo

Raavi : to..kya hua ...mai nhi krne wali
Akash : raavi plss , hmne bhaiya ko
isliye nhi kaha ki ye step unhone hi liya tha,..ab tu kr na plssss

Raavi feels very nervous , : ma...mai...kai...se... nhi....akash ..mai ..nhiii
Anshu : plss na raavi maan ja na plss..

Shiva understand raavi's nervousness : rehne do na agr wo nhi krna chahti to , kyu force kr rhe ho .....

Akash : ye kya baat hui,..hm ise apko hi propose krne ko keh rhe hai aur ap hme hi daat rhe ho
Shiva : pr wo nhi krna chahti na, it's ok.
Anshu : thk hai jo ap dono ki mrji,..(fake anger)
Akash : haa, hm kuch nhi bolenge, nhi chahiye koi gift hme  (fake anger)

Shiva  : tum dono smjh kyu nhi rhe ho.... propose krna hai ya nhi,kb ,kaise ye kisi ki bhi khud ki mrji honi chahiye,...aise forceable nhi...

Anshu : arey, pr ap dono to already confess kr chuke hai,..phr kya problem hai...
Akash : rehne de anshu, inki mrji jo kre,...hm kaun hote hai bolne wale,...

Raavi :arey, tum dono naaraj kyu ho rhe ho,...( taking deep breathe) ok ,I will do it
Shiva 😲: tu..tu ..dekh tera mn nhi hai to rehne de
Akash and anshu : kya mn nhi hai.,jb wo bol rhi hai to apko kya problem hai....

TBC.......
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