pyar ki kahani. (Completed)

By punam14

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shiva an angry young man and an IPS Officer, Raavi is a college going bubbly girl, two opposite characters m... More

introduction
first meet
misunderstanding
nok jhok
planning
Birthday
Kidnapping
care
dosti
Jealousy
diya's engagement
shivi meet
Shiva in hospital
shiva's ignorance
shiva's anger
unexpected
broken
Raavi's condition and shiva's worry
camping
shiva in raavi's house
reason
Raavi in danger
realisation
apology
antics
Jealous shiva
bike ride
shiva reply to varun
proposal
worried
manali
raavi's efforts
party
confession
raavi's idea
haldi
cute moment
mehendi
shiva in trouble
raavi's trust
sangeet
jutaa churai
return home
Gift
raavi proposed
drunk raavi
kiss
varun true face
let's get married
family drama
kisse hogi raavi aur shiva ki shadi??
Shivi engagement
shivi moments
raavi in pandya niwas
ruthna manana
date
rain and sharing room
thank you
shopping
shivi's haldi
shiva is hiding something
shivi sangeet
do you trust me
in temple
raaavi trust
truth
shadi
shadi
after marriage rituals
gussa
raavi care for shiva
ready for trip
plan to make raavi jealous
raavi jealousy
pehli rasoi
pehli rasoi ka neg
walk
sach me chot lagi hai kya ???
party in pub
shiva ka gussa
Shiva's angry with all
ye kya ho rha hai
shopping for reception
plss maan ja na shiva
reception
reception continues
romantic moment
shiva wants to return
shivi plans to unite ashqi
ahsqi confession
new drabble

happy Birthday

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Raavi introduce the man

Raavi: ye varun  hai, mere bachpan ka frnd..

Anshu : pr, tune pehle kbhi btaya nhi iske baare me

Raavi : actually, iske papa aur mere papa frnds hai, to hm  sath me hi khele aur bade hue,..phr higher studies ke liye varun US chla gaya, aur uske baad itna contact tha nhi ,doctor jo bn gaya, bht busy tha, to maine kbhi btaya nhi,.. aj hi aya hai waapas,

Varun : pr ,ab yhi rhunga ,tumhare paas,..
Shiva fakes smile

Raavi's parents come
All take their blessings

Radha : baate hi krte rhoge ya cake bhi cut kroge

Raavi : haa,  chlo cake cut krte hai

Everyone gathers around the cake,
Raavi cuts the cake

She feeds first to her parents

She takes a piece and looked at shiva, she wanted to feed him first bt varun holds her hand and take the bite

Varun : ye mere liye hi thi ,...right ..

Raavi didn't like it bt fakes smiles

Shiva feels irritated
Shiva in mind : ye khud ko smjhta kya hai...Raavi ke bachpan ka frnd hai to kuch bhi krega ...

Akash  in shiva's ear : ye kuch jyada show off nhi kr rha...

Shiva : dikh rha hai mujhe (angrily )
Shiva went to other side as he was really irritated

Raavi saw him going
Raavi also went to him with a peice of cake
Raavi : shiva, tum yha kyu aa gaye..
Shiva : aise hi...
Raavi  : cake,

Shiva saw cake in her hand, he opened his mouth
Raavi feeds him
They both have an eye lock
(Bgm : Rait jra si)
After 2 min they come in sense
Raavi blushes and was about to go,

shiva holds her hand
Shiva going close to her says in her ears : happy birthday jangli billi

Raavi feels elated bt didn't show
Raavi : aise koi wish krta hai, jangli billi ( fakes anger)....not done,...

Shiva : tu to meri jangli billi hi rhegi,  forever,...
Raavi : aur tu bhi hmesa dinasour hi rhega, khadus khi ka

Shiva smiles on her reaction
Akash and anshu comes there

Anshu  : mai to tujhe gift dena hi bhul gayi
She gives her a gift box
Raavi opens it and see a beautiful bracelet written RS on it

Raavi : wow, ye kitna beautiful hai, thank you
Anshu was about to say shiva signals her to keep quiet

Raavi: ye is pr RS kyu likha hai,
Anshu : kya Raavi tu bhi, tera hi naam hai, R for raavi

Raavi : haa, pr S ....
Akash : S se Shah,...Raavi Shah...

Raavi : ohh,( smiles)
Raavi in mind : mere liye to S se shiva hi hai,...Raavi and shiva

She smiles thinking it
Akash : itna smile kyu kr rhi hai
Raavi : nhi, kuch nhi

Shiva in mind : RS means Raavi aur shiva hi hai,..pr jb tk tujhe apne dil ki baat na bta du ye kaise btau...

Music' starts
Varun comes to raavi and ask for dance
Raavi agrees
They both dance (imagine any song)
Shiva is not able to tolerate it
Shiva tights his fist  in anger

Shiva : ye agr Raavi ka dost nhi hota na to ise to aj mai...
Akash : chill bhaiya,...wo sirf raavi ka dost hai
Shiva : dost hai to dost ki tarah rhe,..pr ye to,...
Akash : baat to shi hai apki, ye kuch jyada hi clingy hai
Shiva : ye jaisa dikhta hai, waisa hai nhi,...
Akash : lg to mujhe bhi rha hai...kuch to fishy hai...
Akash : ap meri baat maano, aur jld se jld Raavi ko propose kr do,...khi sch me der na ho jae,...
Shiva : aise kaise bolu ...mauka to mile,...
Akash : haa, pr ap aise kaise rhoge to mil gaya mauka,...chlo na dance krte hai...
He takes shiva for dance and while dancing he slowly pushes shiva towards Raavi
Raavi stops dancing and look at shiva
Shiva : sorry ,...wo Akash ne...

Looking in her eyes he forgot what he was saying and just asked her for dance
forwarding his hand

Raavi nods and hold his hand
Varun : ye already mere sath dance kr rhi hai
Before shiva could say anything
Raavi : it's OK varun  ,tumhare sath kiya na dance ab inke sath kru to kya problem hai...

Varun : no , no problem (fake smiles)
Shivi dance looking in each other eyes and feeling their closeness

Varun in mind : raavi iske sath aise kyu dance kr rhi hai ..itni closely to wo mere sath bhi dance nhi kr rhi thi...
Songs stopped bt shivi are still lost

Akash : gaana khatm ho gaya ,...aur kb tk dance krne wale ho,...bhook lgi hai hme
Shivi comes in sense
Everyone hv dinner and went back to their houses
Shiva and raavi slept thinking about each other

Next day   ,After college

Raavi and anshu was standing at gate of the college waiting for Akash

Shiva comes on  bike

Raavi gets surprised to see him
Raavi : anshu ko pick krne aye ho

Shiva : nhi, wo bs yha se jaa rha tha, tum dono ko dekha to aa gaya,...waise ghr jaa rhi ho,..mai drop kr du..

Raavi: nhi,..mai scooty layi hu
Shiva feels bad : arey yaar tumhari scooty,..kya kru( in mind)

TBC.......

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