pyar ki kahani. (Completed)

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shiva an angry young man and an IPS Officer, Raavi is a college going bubbly girl, two opposite characters m... Xem Thêm

introduction
first meet
misunderstanding
nok jhok
planning
Birthday
Kidnapping
care
dosti
Jealousy
diya's engagement
shivi meet
Shiva in hospital
shiva's ignorance
shiva's anger
unexpected
broken
Raavi's condition and shiva's worry
camping
shiva in raavi's house
reason
Raavi in danger
realisation
antics
Jealous shiva
happy Birthday
bike ride
shiva reply to varun
proposal
worried
manali
raavi's efforts
party
confession
raavi's idea
haldi
cute moment
mehendi
shiva in trouble
raavi's trust
sangeet
jutaa churai
return home
Gift
raavi proposed
drunk raavi
kiss
varun true face
let's get married
family drama
kisse hogi raavi aur shiva ki shadi??
Shivi engagement
shivi moments
raavi in pandya niwas
ruthna manana
date
rain and sharing room
thank you
shopping
shivi's haldi
shiva is hiding something
shivi sangeet
do you trust me
in temple
raaavi trust
truth
shadi
shadi
after marriage rituals
gussa
raavi care for shiva
ready for trip
plan to make raavi jealous
raavi jealousy
pehli rasoi
pehli rasoi ka neg
walk
sach me chot lagi hai kya ???
party in pub
shiva ka gussa
Shiva's angry with all
ye kya ho rha hai
shopping for reception
plss maan ja na shiva
reception
reception continues
romantic moment
shiva wants to return
shivi plans to unite ashqi
ahsqi confession
new drabble

apology

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Shiva is crying badly

Akash consoles him : bhaiya ,kuch nhi hoga Raavi ko , chliye ise hospital le kr chlte hai

They went to hospital

Raavi is in ICU

Shiva is crying : ye sb meri wajah se hua ,..mujhe pta tha ki koi Raavi ko nuksan pahuchana chahta hai pr phr bhi mai use pakad nhi paya....agr use pehle hi pakad liya hota to aj ye sb nhi hota.....sb meri galti hai...

Akash : aisa kuch nhi hai ..apne to kosis ki thi...aur ab tk Raavi ko bachaya bhi ap hi ne....ap plss shant ho jaiye

Shiva : kaise shant ho jau ...maine hi Raavi ko khud se dur jane ko kaha tha ...aur aj ...aj wo sch me mujhse dur ja rhi hai....tu shi kehta tha Akash...mai hi nhi smjh paya....kl ke bare me soch kr mai aj use kitna drd de rha tha.....aj jb lga ki wo sch me mujhse hmesa ke liye dur ho jaegi to ehsas hua ki wo kitni jruri hai mere liye....aur koi bhi dar.. koi bhi Dard ...is ehsas ko nhi badal skta....

Akash with tearful eyes : bhaiya  ,mai janta hu ki ap bht hurt hai,pr ...is baare me baad me baat krte hai,....ap chliye ,apko bhi chot lgi hai  ..medicine lgwa lijiye...

Shiva : nhi Akash  ..aj bolne de mujhe ...maine raavi ke sath galat kiya hai ....uske pyar ko smjha hi nhi....pr aj smjh me aya ki kitna galat tha mai,...pyar me bitaya gaya ek lamha bhi puri zindagi ke liye kafi hota hai....aur mai usse hi dur bhag rha tha,...lekin ab nhi...ek baar wo thk ho jaye phr mai use kbhi khud se dur nhi jaane dunga.....kbhi nhi...

Doctor comes out

Shiva : Ravi ab kaisi hai

Doc : unhe jyada chot nhi ayi hai,..dhua jyada inhale krne ke karan wo behosh ho gayi thi....drne ki koi baat nhi hai...ab wo bilkul thk hai ,..bs unhe rest ki jrurt hai

Shiva : kya hm Mil skte hai

Doc : haa

They go inside
Shiva goes near her

Raavi slowly open her eyes

Shiva : tum thk ho

Raavi : hmmm

Akash : kaisa feel ho rha hai av

Raavi : better

Shiva wanted to say something raavi's parents and anshu enters

Radha: kaisi hai tu,..pta hai hm kitna dr gaye the ...agr tujhe kuch ho jata to kya hota hmara( teary eyes)

Raavi : mummy, mai bilkul thk hu...

Anshu : jaan hi nikal di thi tune to hmari...(complaining tone)

Raavi smiles

Rajan to shiva : thank you beta   ..aj agr tum nhi hote to pta nhi kya hota....(.Teary eyes )

Shiva : ap thanks mt boliye ,ye to mera farz tha...

Raavi in mind : akhir shiva ne kyu kiya itna sb mere liye,....

She is looking at shiva and shiva also see her.....a cute eyelock from distance
Doc comes: pls ap sb bahar jaiye ,..inhe rest ki jrurt hai,..hme injection dena hai

Everyone goes out

Shiva and akash convince raavi parents to go to their house and take rest while they will stay in hospital to look after raavi

They agree and left  anshu also went with them

Shiva comes inside and see raavi is sleeping,..he sit beside her on a chair holding her hand

Shiva bs raavi ko dekhta hi rehta hai
(Bgm : tu itna jruri kaise hua)

Morning
Raavi open her eyes and see shiva sleeping holding her hand sitting on the chair

Raavi in mind : ye sch hai ya sapna,..shiva ne sch me mere liye....ye sb.....pr kyu....puchu kya...

Shiva wakes up and see raavi

Raavi quickly start looking other side

Shiva : kaisa lg rha hai av,..thk ho,..kuch chahiye..

Raavi just nods in reply

Raavi in mind : saare sawal ek sath puchega to jawab kaise dungi..(.confused)

Shiva : kya hua,..kya sochne lgi..

Raavi : kuch nhi...

Kuch der tk dono kuch nhi bolte

Thoda awkward feel krte hai

Shiva in mind : itna kuch kehna hai, pr smjh nhi aa rha shuru kaha se kru...

Raavi in mind : kaise puchu ki isne ye sb kyu kiya ..pta nhi kaise react krega...

Shiva in mind: bolna to hoga,..

Raavi in mind : puchna to hoga..

Shiva / Raavi : mujhe kuch bolna hai/ mujhe kuch puchna hai (dono ek sath bolte hai)

Shiva : pucho

Raavi : tum bolo

Shiva : pehle tum

Raavi : pehle tum.

Akash enters and listen all this

Akash : ye kaun si nayi game start kr di ap dono ne....(teasingly)...mai bhi join kru kya...

Shiva : Hm kisi ko pitne wala game bhi start krne wale hai,..tu join krega

Akash : kya ap bhi....mai to majak kr rha tha,...waise is pehle tum ,pehle tum ke chakkar me na pta nhi kitni traine chutt gayi....

Shiva glares akash

Akash   : OK OK ,ap log continue kro,mai Doc se mil kr aata hu

Whispers in shiva's ear: jo bolna hai bol dijiye,...khi der na ho jaye...

He went out

Raavi : to, tum bolo kya bolna tha

Shiva : ok, (taking a deep breathe) : I m sorry raavi...I m really sorry...I know maine tujhe bht hurt kiya hai,...aur koi bhi justification mere kiye ko shi nhi saabit kr skti,..

Raavi stares him thinking : ye kya bola isne,..shi suna na maine...

Shiva : tu yhi soch rhi hai na ki mai kya bol rha hu...pr sch me raavi ..mujhe apne kiye ka bht pachtawa hai....mai nhi khunga itni aasani se maaf kr de mujhe.... tu jo chahe sja de skti hai
mujhe,...sorry

Raavi : sja to tumhe milegi...aur wo kya ye mai tumhe baad me btaungi....pehle tum mujhe ye btao ki tumne ye sb kyu kiya

Shiva : kya...kyu..kiya..tu kis baare me baat kr rhi hai..

Raavi : mujhe pta hai ki mujhe  tune hi bachaya.....

Shiva : haa, ye to sbko pta hai ...to farz tha ye mera

Raavi : bn mt, mai av ki baat nhi kr rhi,..tune camping me bhi kai baar mujhe bachaya na ,..tu tha na wha pr,..???.

So guys what do you think,..Will shiva confess his love.....kya sja degi raavi use...comment
 

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