1. Who thinks I should rewrite this? I'm planning on leaving the first part up to the appearance of a dragon cough cough. Sinon, I'm planning on taking out and Shiro as well.
ADDING ONTO THE QUESTION! Should Sinon stay? Shiro... I'm taking out, 100%. Also, which chapters should stay as is? I'm thinking to fix up the Sus chapter after my bestu friendu's bio.