Anokhi dosti apni - Maddam Sir

By Bahaar2811

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it's a fan fiction story based on the TV show Maddam Sir. It focuses mainly on sweet and sour FRIENDSHIP of H... More

Introduction
I Care for u
Haan ho gayi ghalti
manaaun kaese!
note
Inne nakhre....!!
Maan bhi jaao..!!!
saath ye chhoote na...!
tu kho na jaaye..!!
note
Chanda...!
Mohabbatein!
O ri chiraiyya...!
kon mujhe yun pyar karega!
note
Suhaana din...!
Tu hi sukoon..!!
waqt-e-rukhsat..!!
note-sorry!
Kahaan ho tum..!!!
Tum ghana saaya!!
Kuchh to hai...!!!
Dastak?!!!
Milan ki raenaa..!!
Jhilmil...!
Agla qadam...
Dil khilona nahi..!
Dekho kabhi na aesa kehna!
Mohabbat, ek paheli..!
Note
Ghalat Fehmi...
Blaster Brothers!!!
Makaafaat-e-amal!
note-new story
Rooh bhi!!
Farz!!!
Khone ka hausla nahi!!
Zindagi..!
sorry-note
Wo Raat....!
Subh-e-umeed..!
Yaum-e-naveed!!
Note - Support
Anmol wafaayen!!
Thankyou 💖 - note
Note- Honestly...
Main teri behna..!!
Tu jo rootha...
Khafa Khafa...!
Aaj dosti kar lein..?!!
Roothe yaar ko manaana mushkil...!
Kyun itna hua hai tu khafa..!!
Mujhe tanha kar ke...!!
Tum bhi na...
Naayaab ho tum...!
New shot...
Jashn!!
Kab tak?!!
Kuchh log nibhaate hain aesa..!
Alvida...!
Apna ghar...
Anokhi Shart...!
Ms Malik ki Masti...!!
Teri raat ka fasaana..!!
Mamta!!
Aamad-e-bahaar..!!
Note - Recreation
Phir khile phool naya...!
Writer here...
Motherhood...🥰
Surprise ya Shock..?!!
Chhoti si bhool...!
Khaas Uphaar!!
Knock knock..!!
Mohabbat rooth jaaye to...

Nayi Khushi...!

1.3K 128 77
By Bahaar2811

   (I tried to make it as early as possible....
   Enjoy ❤️)

   Plzz ignore grammar n language mistakes...
   It has been written in a hurry...

          It was evening n duty hours were almost over...
   
    Cheeta n Billu entered in Thana...

KS: Amaa kahaan reh gaye the dono??
   Kab se raah dekh rahe hain hum ...!

      KS blasted upon them as soon as they arrived...

Cheeta: Ye bilauta , Maddam!
Kitna samjhaaye hum isko ke der ho jaayega, magar ye dosa khaaye bina wahaan se hilne ko hi tayaar nahi....

   CC complained putting all the blame on billu...

Billu: Ye saraasar jhoot hai, ilzaam hai  mujh masoom par...!!
  Der dosa ki wajah se nahi is ke gol gappe khaane ki wajah se....

  HM cut him...

HM: Kaam ki baat karo..!
Kuchh pata chala...?

CC: Ji...ji Maddam Sir!
  Pata to chala hai, aur aesa baat pata chala hai ke hum sapna mein bhi nahi soche the...!!!

   He started dramatically...

CC: Baat darasl i hai ke Aadi jo hai....

   Santu interrupted..

SS: Cheete! Aadarsh...!!

   Everyone smacked their heads, except Cheeta who smiled sweetly...

CC: Dhanyawaad Santu ji..!
   
    KS got irritated...

KS:Baat ka hai? Bataaoge, ya phir suspence hi banaate rahoge...??

  
CC: Haa haa... Bata rahe hain Maddam!
   Haa to baat ye hai ke Aadarsh..., Suhaani ka beta nahi hai....!!!

  He finally took the lid off...!
Everyone was shocked to their core...!!

HM:Aadi, Suhaani ka beta nahi hai??

     HM mumbled in utter shock...

CC: Ji haan Maddam Sir!

   He continued, gazing at everyone's expressions...

CC: Aadi, Suhaani ke pati Tushaar ka beta hai.., uski pehli patni Priya se..., jis ka dehaant (death) ho chuka hai...
   Suhaani, Aadi ki sauteli maa (step mother) hai..!!!

      He completed. Everyone was in absolute shock...!
  Silence remained for sometime, which was broken by Billu...

Billu: Aadi ke janm ke qareeb ek mahine baad hi uski maa kisi beemari ke kaaran guzar gayi...
  Phir Aadi qareeb 1 saal ka tha jab Tushaar ne Suhaani se shaadi ki...

          He narrated the entire truth.

HM: Suhaani ne aaj subah humein ye baat bataayi hi nahi.....?!

     She wondered..

KS: Aur, divorce kyun chahta hai tushaar?
Uske baare mein kuchh pata chala...?

Billu: Nahi Maddam! Aas paas se aesi koi bhi baat pata nahi chali...
  Mera tajurba ye kehta hai ke...

    KS n HM glared at him....

Billu: Matlab , mera personal khayaal hai ke..., divorce ki baat abhi pati patni ke beech mein hi hai...

HM: Hmm..., Or kuchh...?

  CC: Aur Maddam Sir  aas pados ke logon ka kehna hai ke...

    He stopped in mid....

KS: Kaa kehna hai?? Bataao...

    CC sighed, n started speaking again...

CC: Unka kehna hai ke..., Suhaani,  kyunki sauteli maa hai..., wo Aadi ke saath durvyavhaar karti hai..., usko ghalat sanskaar deti hai...
  Kuchh to ye bhi keh rahe the ke us par atyachar karti hai...!

    He said, a bit hesitantly..., n once again compelled all of them to think....

KS: Humko nahi lagta ke ye baat sach hai...!

   She said thoughtfully...

KS: Aur iska saboot hai, khud Aadi..!!
   Hum sab ne dekha na, kaese wo apni maa ki udaasi ko dur karne ke liye humaare paas aaya tha..!!
   Aur Suhaani ke saath uska vyavhaar dekh kar saaf pata chal raha tha ke usko Suhaani se kitna pyar hai..! Kitna lagaav hai..!!
    Aur , jab Suhaani us ko dhundti hui aayi thi, tab kitni pareshaan thi..!!

    She expressed her opinion...

PJ: Lekin aas paas ke log bhi yun hi to nahi keh rahe honge na....

HM: Is maamle mein hum Karishma Singh se agree karte hain...
     Aadi bhale hi bachcha hai, par uska aatmavishwas, uski boldness dekh kar kahin se bhi lagta hai.., ke us ke saath koi durvyavhaar kiya jata hai??

    HM made all of them think...

HM: Aur aese kaese atyachaar karegi wo bachche par, uske baap ke hote hue??

    She put forth another point...

PJ: To Maddam Sir, ho sakta hai ke Tushaar isiliye usse alag hona chahta ho...?!!
   Kyunki apne bachche ki itni si takleef bhi koi sehen nahi karta...!

SS: Haa...tabhi to wo keh rahi thi, ke wajah jaan kar hum bhi uske pati ke saath ho jaayenge...!
  Kyunki chaahe divorce ka case ho ya kisi or dispute ka, bachche ke maamle mein qaanoon kabhi sauteli maa ke haq mein faesla nahi karega...!!

      Santu explained quickly, relating to Suhaani's statement...

CC: Uff....ye in detail masoomiyat!!

   Cheeta mumbled...

HM: Khair, pura sach jaane bina hum koi faesla nahi kar sakte...
    Kal Subah Suhaani ko Thana bulaaiyye..
   Aur haan, usse kahiye ga ke Aadi ko saath na laaye...

PJ: Ji Maddam Sir!!

Everybody had different thoughts running in their minds..

SS: Kya Aadi ye baat jaanta hoga, ke Suhaani uski maa nahi hai..??

   Santu was feeling sympathy for Aadi...

HM: Shaayed jaanta bhi ho, ya shaayed nahi...!
    6 saal ke bachche ke liye Maa to Maa hoti hai...., ye to samaaj hai.., jo masoom zehen (mind) mein sauteli naam ka zeher bhar deta hai ...!!

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     It was 9:30 PM at night, n KS was alone in her bedroom, bcoz Vani was out of city for some official work...

    KS was walking to n fro in her bedroom slowly, lost in some deep thoughts...

KS (in mind): Kaa Maddam Sir ka baat sach ho sakta hai??

      She thought...
  She was feeling a little sick since morning, n also felt giddiness once or twice, and all this was adding to her doubt...

KS (in mind): Shaayed humein check karwana chahiye...

    She thought to herself, sitting down on the bed...

KS ( in mind): Ammaan se kehte hain, or phir check-up kara lete hain...!

   She planned....

KS (in mind): Lekin...., Ammaan to ye sun kar hi khushi se paagal hi jaayengi...
   Phir agar aesa kuchh na hua to...?!! Dil toot jaayega unka...!

     She wasn't able to decide what to do...

KS (in mind): Aur sara din to Ammaan saath hi rehti hain, ghar par bhi , Thana mein bhi....!
   Phir aesa kaa karen ke unko bhanak bhi na lage, or test ho jaaye...??

    She was trying hard to think of an idea...

KS: Vani se poochhein??
Par Vani ko kahaan aata hai Ammaan se koi baat chhupaana...?!!

   She was speaking to herself, when suddenly an idea struck her mind...

KS: Home test kit...!!!

    She found it the best n most convenient way..., n the curiosity to check, compelled her to go for it immediately...
    Coming out of the room she searched for PJ n found her fast asleep in her bedroom...

KS: Aaj itni jaldi so gayin Ammaan..?
 
     She wondered, but found it an opportunity..., n left to get the kit....

_______________________________

   
     It was 10:00 PM , n at HM's home , she n her mother were winding up their daily chores quickly, when suddenly the doorbell rang....

     HM opened the door, n was surprised to see the person in front of her...

HM: Karishma Singh! Aap....

    KS was standing at the door in night suit, with just a jacket over it, n her hairs tied in a ponytail..
 
     Before HM could ask anything, KS stepped ahead n hugged her tightly....!!

    HM was shocked by this sudden act...

HM: Karishma Singh!! Aap theek hain na..?

    She asked with concern, reciprocating the hug...

Ammi: Kaun hai Haseena..??
  
     Salma Malik came out of the kitchen...

Ammi:  Arey..., Karishma hai..!

     With a pleasant smile, she came close to them, but suddenly the sound of faint sobs startled both of them...

HM: Karishma..!! Aap ro rahi hain..?

        HM could also feel teardrops on her shoulder now....

Ammi: Karishma...! Bachche kya hua..? Tum ro kyun rahi ho..??

    Ammi also got worried...

HM: Pushpa ji..! Pushpa ji to theek hain na...??!

       She asked, thinking about the possible reasons...

KS: Ji..!

    She replied, within her sobs which were getting louder now...

Ammi: Karishma..!
  Ab mera dil ghabra raha hai beta...!
  Kuchh to bataao kya hua..?
  Kya kisi ne kuchh kaha tum se??

  Ammi asked, tapping her back from behind.....
   KS just shook her head in "No"

HM: Phir kya hua Karishma Singh??
   Plzz... Kuchh to kahiye..!

    Getting more n more worried n tensed, HM tightened her grip around her...

KS: Aap....aap ki baat....sach nikli..!!

     She finally said, trying to control her sobs....

HM: Kaunsi baat..?

    HM asked, trying to recall the conversations they had since morning....

KS: Jo aap ne jeep mein kahi thi...!

    HM thought for a while, n then recalled everything...

HM: Kya..??!!

     She almost screamed, understanding what she meant...

HM: Sach mein...?!!!

         Her voice was loaded with happiness....

   KS:ji..!

    She replied, still weeping...

HM: Ye to bahot khushi ki baat hai Karishma Singh!!
Mubarak ho....!!💕

   She said joyfully, kissing the side of her head...

Ammi: Chal kya raha hai tum dono ka??
   Koi humein bhi kuchh batayega...??

   Ammi scolded them....

HM: Hum bataate hain Ammi..!
   Darasal baat ye hai, ke aap ki Laadli Karishma, bahot jald hum sab ko ek pyara sa nanha-munna tohfa dene waali hain.....

      She revealed the blissful news to Ammi, with a bright smile...

     Ammi took a moment to interpret her, n then her eyes twinkled, while her lips stretched in a pleasant smile....

Ammi: Are waah..!! Ye to...., Ye to...

    Out of joy, she was short of words...!!
     KS was still weeping in HM's arms....

HM: Karishma  Singh !! Ye to khushi ki baat hai na...
   Is mein rone waali kaunsi baat hai...?

   She said softly, rubbing her back....

KS: Humein dar lag raha hai...!

      KS replied in a low voice, still sobbing faintly...

HM: Come on Karishma Singh..!!
Is mein darne ki....

  Ammi: Haseena..!

    She gave her an assuring blink....

Ammi: Rehne do...!

   She started caressing KS's hairs softly n lovingly...

  Ammi:  Pehli pehli baar aesi khabar milne par shuru mein aesa hi hota hai..., Khushi to hoti hai, par us par dar or ghabraahat zyada ghaalib (dominant) hote hain...

    Jaese jaese waqt guzre ga, ye dar khud hi sukoon mein badal jayega....

        She explained with a serene smile...

    Feeling ammi's soft caresses, n being in HM's embrace for some time, KS finally calmed down....

   Ammi: Achha  ab apni dost ke hi gale lagi rahogi, ya hum bhi kuchh lagte hain tumhare...??

     Ammi complained....

Kareena chuckled, n separated...

Ammi kissed KS's forehead...

Ammi: Bahot bahot Mubarak ho mera  bachcha...!!

    Ammi kissed her forehead again., n then hugged her tightly...

HM: Pushpa ji kahaan hain??
   Ideally to aap se pehle unhe aana chahiye tha.., mithaayi le kar bhaagte hue...

   HM said, n Ammi n KS chuckled...

KS: Pushpa ji ko pata hi nahi hai....!!

   She gave another shocking news....

HM: Kya?? Ab tak unhe nahi pata??

    KS smiled n narrated entire incident...

KS: Jaese hi hum ne positive dekha..., humein....humein....sach kahein to jaese kuchh samajh hi nahi aaya kaa karein..??
   Pushpa ji bhi soyi thein, or Vyom to Agra gaye hue hain...
    Hum seedha aap ke paas chale aaye.....

    She explained a bit hesitantly....

Ammi: Bahot achha kiya jo yahaan aa gayi...

    Separating her, ammi kissed her forehead again...!

HM: Bas bas Ammi!!
Sara pyaar aaj hi luta dengi kya??
   
   HM giggled seeing her excitement....

Ammi: Arey 'Mamta' to Laa-mehdood (unlimited) khazaana hai....
       Bachchon par kitna hi ptaar luta le, maa ka dil bharta hai na uska pyaar kam hota hai...

    Ammi said kissing KS's forehead again...

    Ammi: Tum yahaan aao...
  Baitho..! Aaram se...

   She carefully seated her on the sofa....

  Ammi:
   Hum abhi mun meetha karwaate hain tumhara...

    She went to the kitchen....

    HM was smiling all this while, seeing the effect of that one little news on all of them...❤️

   Ammi came back with a bowl of Sheer-khurma...

Ammi: Ye lo....!
Tumhe bahut pasand hai na !!

   Ammi forwarded a spoon to her...,n then to HM...

Ammi: Karishma..! Beta ab bahot khayaal rakhna hai tumhe khud ka...
    Bilkul ghussa nahi, bilkul stress nahi....!!
   Aur jo bhaukaal ke naam par tum uchhal kood karti ho na, ye bhi band karna padega...!!

      Ammi was giving instructions to her, n feeding her simultaneously...

  HM : Vyom bhai ko bataya..??

    KS: Kiya tha phone...
Uthaya nahi unhone...
    
   HM: Ab kal subah jab Pushpa ji ko pata chalega..., Uff...!!
    Unhe to shaayed ek din ki chhutti leni padegi...,pure lucknow mein mithaai baantne ke liye....!!

      HM was enjoying, thinking about PJ's expected condition...

   KS: Unhe hum nahi bataayenge...! Aap hi bataaiyye ga plz...

   She said a bit hesitantly, lowering her eyes...
   HM smiled, knowing that she was feeling shy...

HM: Theek hai! Theek hain..!
Hum hi bata denge kal Thane mein....

   She said mischievously...

Ammi: Karishma! Bachche zara si bhi laaparwaahi mat karna...
   Khaane peene ka achhi tarah khayaal rakhna!
   Aur jaldi se kisi acchi gynaecologist ke paas chali jana...

    Ammi's instructions continued for long time...

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     Next day at MPT, HM was very eager to inform everyone about the goodnews..., but coincidentally, PJ had doctor's appointment..., so she was on a half day leave....
    So KS n HM mutually decided to inform all of them together in the second half....

     At the moment, Suhaani was sitting in front of them in Thana....

HM: Suhaani ! Humein pata chal gaya hai ke...,  Aadi...

      HM left the sentence in mid, hesitantly...
   Suhaani raised her eyes...

   She had understood, what they meant...

Suhaani: ji...!
    She replied slowly...

HM: Aap ne ye baat humein kal kyun nahi batayi...??

       Suhaani lowered her eyes again, to hide the tears that were emerging out...

Suhaani: Kya bataati ma'am..??
   1 saal ka tha wo..., jab Tushaar ne usey meri god mein diya tha..!!
   Pehli baar jab usne apni zabaan se 'Maa' kaha , to mujhe hi kaha tha...!
   Main to khud kab ki bhool chuki , ke main uski maa nahi hun...!!

( I m waiting for your response very eagerly...
   I hope the part was interesting for u...
  Thanks 😊)

   

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