Miñeil Expedition|A Mineil Fa...

By mineil_vibez

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Continuing the story which was left ... #BringBackPatialaBabes →If u enjoy or liked my story so please ‡Foll... More

NB knows Neil's truth
CARTOON ENTRY
Ranu Aunty
mickey get to know about mini's love
All about MiNeil
Courtroom bettle get ugly
MiNeil separation
Mini's secret meeting
Khatri & Sandhu
Mini rocked😎, Isha shocked😱
Neil's Girl Friend
Celebration 🥳 & Dancing 💃🕺
New cover
MINI IN DANGER
kiya gains consciousness
Emotional Neil
Kiya agree to stay at haveli
1K Reads 🥺😭
Monkey.. 🐒🐒
SWEET DREAMS
All get fine
Part 21-MiNeil was injected 💉
Part 22- SIYAAPAA!!
Part23→ENTRY OF A NEW GUEST
Part 24→NB talks to Neil
1st April
Ending of FF?
Part 26- Pari's weired behaviour
Part 27- Hot mini 🔥
Part 28- Kiya wants to go Delhi
Part 29- Mini felt relieved
Part 30- chit-chat
Thanku ❤️ Note
Part31- Flashback
Part-32- what's happening?
Part 33-Engagement 💖
Part 34- Who was that?
Part 35- Dance
Part 36- Reunion and Storm
Part 36- Left for the Party
Part 37- Manmeet & Ankle lost
Part 27- Neil had fever?
Not an update
Sorry 👉🏻👈🏻😔
Part 28- Savina!
PART 29: Past meet Mini
Part 42: Any Danger?
Part 43: Arya n Kiya??
Not An Update
44: Is MiNeil on mission?
45: Will they able to rescue stolen girls?
46: Path of Victory
47: MiNeil Moments
2 YEARS ♡

MINEIL and KIYA

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By mineil_vibez

PLS IGNORE GRAMMAR MISTAKES & COMMENT HOW IS THE PART

....(voice from behind)kya ye tu kya keh rahi hai mini??

Continue

In the kitchen

Neil was adoring his little baby who was busy in playing with her doll while making pastries. Other staff was doing their work silently. They wanted to ask so many questions ringing in their mind about neil, Isha and kiya. But nobody has courage to ask so they decided to directly asked from NB. Neil knew that the whole staff had seen him with Isha and kiya. So he broke the silence.

Neil- vo aurat meri wife hai or vo ladki meri beti or ab hamara divorce hone jaa raha hai ab iske aage mujhe se koi kuch nahi puchega. .

He goes out of the kitchen to serve pasteries leaving all shocked

In the hall

He placed pasteries on the table. Kiya saw pastries and smile. Isha saw her smile and couldn't digest her own daughter smiling on pastries made by the neil and guess by the mini. She got a call and excuse herself. Kiya saw her mom going so she also get up from her seat and about to go but neil held her hand

Neil- Where r u going baby??

Kiya- Mumma!!

Neil-vo abhi aa jayegi

He made her again sit on her seat but she again stand up.

Neil- what happened baby?? Papa ke paas nahi bethogi?? See I have made pasteries for  u.

Kiya-(silent)

Neil- u don't want to eat

Kiya- (nodded in no)

Neil- but abhi to aapne mini se kahan tha mein aapke liye kuch or banake laao

Kiya- (pointing towards her) mumma!!

Neil becomes sad as her daughter doesn't want to spend some time with him. She was about to go but stop when mini called her.

Mini- where r u going?? And u haven't had ur pastries??

Kiya- mumma!!

Mini-she was on call. She will come in some time. Sit!

She made her again sit on her seat. And had pastries to kiya and she ate.

Mini- how is it ?

Kiya- yummy 😋🤤

Neil smiled seeing this. He sees dadu biji was going out.

Neil- mini

Mini-hmm

Neil-dadu biji

Mini- pind se aa gaye hai or mujhe se milne  aae the

Neil-but cabin mein to tum or naeem bi baat kar rahe hai the na

Mini- ☺️☺️

Neil understand the reason behind her smiling and he smiled back. Isha came and saw kiya was eating pasteries from mini's hand and she felt jealous. Mini saw her jealousy.

Mini- kiya mera haath na thak gaya hai ab aapko aapke papa khilange

Neil-mein

Mini- yes u q uske koi or papa hai

Isha- (in mind) ho bhi to sakta hai

Mini gave him spoon. Neil forward her hand toward kiya's mouth.

Neil- open ur mouth baby!

Kiya doesn't open her mouth this made neil sad but Isha happy.

Mini- have it na? He is ur .....who was he???

Kiya- papa (whisper slowly)

Mini- hmmm

Kiya- papa (again whisper)

Mini-kya ?? Mujhe samajh nahi aara

Kiya-(in mini ears) papa

Mini- don't tell me. Tell him (point towards neil)

Kiya- papa

Neil smiled after hearing 'papa' first time. He wants to hug her but can't as kiya was not comfortable by it. He again become sad.

Isha- chalo baby!! Ghar bhi chalna hai

Kiya- but mumma abhi to maine pap ke haatho se pasteries khai hi nahi

After listening this neil smiled wholeheartedly. He again forward her hand to kiya's mouth and she ate it smiling. Mini smiled by seeing this and rembered her and her Hanuman uncle  moments. Isha was fumming in angry. After finishing pasteries Isha and kiya was about to go but stop.

Isha- (to neil)see u soon baby.(looking at mini) meet u in the court

Kiya- bye papa!! By mi..mi

Mini- Mini!!

Coming to the kiya sit on knees

Mini- tum chaho to mujhe MI keh kar bhi bula sakti hoo

Kiya- ok, bye mi

Mini- bye

Isha and kiya left. She turned towards neil who smiling. She came to him

Mini-kya he??

Neil- what??

Mini-vahi to

Neil- kya vahi to??

Mini- q smile kar rahi hoo

Neil- nahi kar sakta

Mini- karsakte ho

Neil- so y r u asking? Mini madam

Mini- fine mat batao

Neil- Haan to mein bta bhi nahi raha

Mini-mat batao

Neil- vahi to kaha ki nahi batara

Mini-( pointing toward him )listen

Neil-(pointing towards her) no u listen

Mini- i m going

Neil- so go na maine konsa haath pakad kar rakh rakha hai

Mini- Haan ja rahi ho

She goes

Mini cabin

Mini- chicken gahinka

,,,,,,,(Voice from behind)- duck gahinki

Mini saw neil at the door. With two coffees in his hand.

Mini-kya kar rahe ho yahan

Neil- dikahi nahi deta

Mini- mtlb

Neil- mtlb mini madam? U can't see two coffee mug in my hand.

Mini- whatever

Neil- vaise tum mein essa hai kya jisse sab log  tumhari taraf attract ho jate

Mini- mtlb

Neil- mtlb ki kiya tumse kitna jaldi attract hogai or mujhse

Mini-(change the topic) neil ....tum jaana nahi chahoge dadu biji me tumhare baare mein sunkar kya kahan

Neil- hmmm (handing her coffee)

Mini-sit na

Neil-abhi to puch rahi thi ki kya kar rahe ho

Mini- nahi jaana, mat Jano

Neil- arre tumne toh muh Fula liya i want to know.....vaise muh fulane per tum or bhi cute lagti hoo

Mini- (blushed)so listen unhone kaha.....

.......(voice from behind ).miniiiii

*What do u think whose voice is that???

Ab to pta chal gaya hoga na ki kal mini ke cabin mein (voice from behind)kiski thi!!!

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