Pain made me(Savitar is Barry...

By LONGLINESISFREEDOM

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When supergirl AKA Kara Danvers break up(Cheated) with Barry Allen AKA Flash for Mon-el he was broken inside... More

Special note
Transformation of Barry Allen
First time out
Finding out
Is it really you?
Last stand of Supergirl?
Help her?
Kara's awaken
New life
Say Hi to new guys
Just the beginning
Old friends
Problem's with Dopple Ganger's
Crisis on Earth-X-part 1
Crisis on Earth-x part-2
Whats's next?
Night Out
Flashback
1K
Sorry
Bad(Good)Dreams
No matter what,I will always be alone
New writer

Crisis on earth-X part-3

622 9 8
By LONGLINESISFREEDOM

Red Daughter POV

one day since Barry Left  

I was in the house watching Netflix,God this is so boring I thought to myself,Then I remembered the time I spent with Barry,The thought bought a smile to my face,He only left for a day and I already want to kill myself.I left out a large sigh Immediately a cold chill ran down my spine which means something was wrong.I stood up

"Alright Barry maybe in trouble,I must go"I mumbled to myself.I sped to the door,Suddenly Barry's Words made there way to my mind

"Don't go anywhere please"He begged in the memory.I sighed and went to the couch,I then made a decision.If he doesn't return by tomorrow,I'am gonna go looking for him

Third person POV

Earth-X

Oliver,Alex,Sara and others were speaking to Winn's Doppleganger,Begging for time to go through breach.

"Winn,listen to us,the people we love are next side of the breach if we can't get to them,they are done we don't know if they are alive oh not you already lost your family and we are talking about our,so for godes sake give us some time"Alex exclaimed the last part.Winn's              Dopple-Ganger was taken back by this,Then he sighed

"One hour is all you got"Winn E-X said

"Thank..."Alex couldn't finish her statement as they heard a loud thud from main room,all of them ran there.On the main room Savitar was thrown into the a big cave.After many attempts he managed to create a breach to Earth-X,As soon as he was on his feet he was a little dizzy.What he doesn't notice is men's sorrounding with him guns

"Please tell me I'am on the right earth"He said as soon as he said he noticed the men holding gun's in his direction

"Well guess I got the correct earth"Savitar mumbled

"On your knees"A man exclaimed

"Sorry?"he asked looking at the man

"On your knees or we will shoot you"Man exclaimed again

"Try me"Savitar said as he pulled out his blades.They were going to shott but Alex and the others entered the room.

"Don't shoot him"Alex yelled

"Alex?"Barry questioned

"How do you two know each other"E-X Winn asked ordering his men to stand down

"He is the Barry on our earth"Alex said

"Oh so your Blitzkrieg's Dopple-Ganger"E-X Winn Asked annoyed.Before someone could say anything Alex spoke

"How did you get here?Is my sister OK?Where are our friend?Please tell me Kara is ok."Alex said

"They are safe,we escaped using A.T.O.M.'s help"He said.Alex calmed down

"Thank god"She murmured

"About time"Oliver said

"I was trying to reach early but I couldn't open a breach to here even I was not allowed here"Barry said

"Alright family reunion's over let's go and kill some Nazi's"Snart said

"Snart?"Barry questioned and he remembered snart was dead

"Of course,Your Snart's Dopple-ganger right?"Barry asked  

"For the last time,No I'am Leonard Snart but you can call me Leo"He said with his normal Sarcastic sense

"Alright,you have one hour to step throught that breach"E-X winn said

"Alright so what's the plan"Savitar asked,All of them looked at him

"I will update him on the way"Oliver said.They all left

(Imagine everything going the way it was in the crossover)

After heroes returned to there earth they were able to Recover Stein

At the waverider 

Third person POV

All of the heroes were in the waverider ready to Battle

"We need to find where they are"Barry said.Alarms started to ring

"Well looks like we don't need to"Cisco said.All the tech guys were in computer.Suddenly a hologram shows up Showing Blitzkrieg

"What do you want"Oliver asked

"Truce"Blitzkrieg said

"For what?"Oliver asked

"We will return to our earth,peacefully.In exchange of Flash and Supergirl"Blitzkrieg demanded

"Well that's the difference between you and me,I don't trade friends"Oliver stated and turned of the Hologram.

"Where are they"Sara asked

"They are in the city trying to sorround it and they are terrorising peoples's"Felicity said

"You ready to go?"Sara asked,Others nodded and they left to the place where the Nazi's are

In the Nazi  air ship

Third person POV

Overgirl and Blitzkrieg is sitting on the the Med-Bay Overgirl getting some treatment to battle while Blitzkrieg was frustrated.Eoboard came to the room

"Here is the Velocity you asked for It will keep you steady for twenty five minutes before you'll be out of power,so before that catck Savitar and take his speed"He said to Blitzkrieg he nodded.But deep down he knew when he uses the velocity after the time runs out he will vanish.He didn't care All he wants to do is kill Barry.

In a certain place in the city

All the heroes were ready to battle now they were facing Blitzkrieg,Thawne,Soldiers and robots

"Let's finish this"Oliver stated

"I agree"Savitar said

"Peace is Overrated"All of them said at once and charged to the heroes

They started to fight Savitar was evacuating people until Two speedsters came in front of him

"Catch us if you can"They said as they ran.Savitar followed them he was cathing up easily until they divided thier paths while he was so close to catching Blitzkrieg he ran up as a building suddenly Reverse-Flash came from up and tackled Savitar he falled down the building

While they were fighting Supergirl was excuting people.Suddenly a soldier came in front of a kid Mick burned the soldier down.Supergirl noticed this before she could say anything Snart jumped in.

"Excuse me...."Snart exclaimed.Mick looked at him and saw Snart

"You can't just go around Roasting people"Snart said

"Why is that?"Mick asked

"Have you ever heard the Due process,rule of law?"Snart added

"I have,But I don't care"Mick said and passed

Sara and the others were fighting Robots and soldiers.Suddenly Nazi spaceship showed up and started to shoot them

"Need a little help here"Sara yelled to the comms

"Got it"Felicity said.Cisco and other tech guys arrived,Brainy was controlling the ship while they were shooting the Nazi ship.Now the two ships are battling

"We need to breach the shield"Felicity said

"On it"Killer frost said and charged with some other

"Overgirl's on the ship"Felicity exclaimed through comms

"Got it covered"supergirl said and flew straight to the ship and positioned herself so Overgil could see her

"Scared to come outside"Supergirl asked.Overgirl suddenly activated her mask and charge to supergirl they start to fight in the air.Now caitlin was Ice bridging her and few others to the ship.Once they got there they knocked the soldiers out.

"How do we breach the ship?"Caitlin asked

"Working on it"Felicity said

"Maybe press the big red button"Killerfroest said and pressed it all gasped in shock and tried to stop her but was too late after a silence someone said something through the comm

"She did it"Felicity exclaimed

"But you guy need to get out of there"She said.On the inside Cisco standed up and put on his gloves and glasses

"Where are you going"Felicity asked 

"To get back our friends"Cisco said

"Set a timer in two minutes shoot with everything you got"He said and opened a breach,It closed.After a while Cisco stepped through the breach with others.they shot the ship and it exploded they all jumped up and down in victory

On the Battle ground Savitar was fighting both of the speedsters,he got them to the ground but soon saw a soldier pointing a gun toward a small child.He left the speedsters and covered the boy suddenly the both speedsters Ran to him sand send him a Super sonic punch it didn't affect him much but drew his attention enough to not to see the the vibrating hand going through his suit with a tranquilizer in it but what happened there surprised Reverse flash,His hand was rejected by the suit it was bleeding all over his hand

"Sneaking wasn't a good choice Eoboard,Specially into someone suit"Savitar said

"How...How"Eobard stuttered in pain

"As I said this suit was made in many layers,All of them are vibrating,intaracting with one another so no one could do anything to this suit"Savitar said with a smile

While they were here Green arrow was fighting Dark arrow they were fighting,Landing punches,kicks,tackles to one another.Any of them never backed down.

while all of them happened Gideon popped in Barry's suit

"Creator I have something to say"

"Not now gideon"Savitar said

"But creator..."Gideon started

"Not now Gideon"Savitar yelled

On the air Supergirl was fighting Overgirl,they were pretty much a tie untill Overgrl stopped and started to glow and fall to the battle ground.

"Guys she's glowing"Supergirl said through Comms

"She is going to explode cause of the extra radiations in her cells"Brainy said

"What should I do?"Supergirl asked

"You must take her out of there,the explosion maybe pretty big"Felicity said

"How big?"Supergirl asked

"Blow-The-Whole-City big"Felicity said.Supergirl saw she was going straight to Savitar she landed there

"Overgirl!!!!"Blitzkrieg yelled and ran to her suddenly he turned into dust.All gasped in shock

"What happened?"Cisco asked

"He took too much velocity"Savitar said and pulled out a Kryptonite blade he pulled it back when he realised she isn't fighting.Now Overgirl was in front of Savitar glowing.then she started to glow more more,Savitar evacuted all of the others but he didn't get time to evacute the child he save he ran to the child and grabbed him he entered the child to the suit and got out knowing that his suit will protect the kid but not him

"BARRY!!!!!"All of them exclaimed

Red Daughter's POV

I woke up again in the couch and then sped around in the house,No sign of Barry.Alright I've run out of patience.I sped to the room to get my suit.I didn't find it their I searched all through the house but nothing.then I saw a room that Barry said nver to go.I ignored it and steped to the room and turned the lights on.There I found somethng incredible,There was blueprints,Laptops,Big screens and many other gadget I rummaged through the objectes and found a bracelet with a logo on it that was shaped as the house of El logo but instead of S it had R.D. on it.I weared the bracelet suddenly it attached to my hand.I gasped in shock.I shaked my hand thinking to get it off but instead a Hologram showed in front of mefrom the bracelet.

"Hi Marley Rose AKA Red Daughter"It said.Marley Rose?of course two weeks ago Barry bought me a I.D.and confirmed my name as Marley Rose

"Who are you and how do you know me?"I asked

"I'am Gideon,and Artificial intelligence made by Barry Allen,How may I help you"It spoke

"You were made by Barry?"I asked

"Yes"She answered

"How do you know me"I asked

" I Have full access to the goverment data base Besides,My creator talks about you all the time"It said.I blushed to the fact that Barry talks about me all the time

"What can I do for you"She asked

"I need to find my suit"I said

"Do you need to activate your suit MS.Rose?"She asked

"Um......Yeah.."I said instantly the bracelet started to grow on me,until I was covered with a suit which was more like my old suit but stronger with the logo R.D. on my chest and a mask on it

"Whoa..."I said

"Gideon are you there?"I asked.She popped in front of my face

"Yes Ms.Rose"She answered

"Could you locate Barry Allen?"I asked

"Yes Ms.Rose"She answered

"Where is he?"I asked.She answered I flew there,I had to admit it flying felt great after a long time I flew through countries to get there.When I get there I saw another person with a suit in Red and Black which was very similar to mine and Supergirl glowing,Then I saw Barry,He sped someone into the suit and and got out I heard all exclaiming his name then the woman started to glow more and more I grabbed he and flew up as fast as I can

"Gideon how much time Do I have?"I asked

"four seconds MS.Rose"She answered.I flew fast as I can and the woman exploded and I was falling down unconciouse.

Barry's POV

I was waiting for something happen but nothing happened,I turned around to see Overgirl carrying Overgirl?Wait what?Then I saw the Logo and I recognised who she was,It was Red Daughter.God can't she listen to me?After six or seven seconds Overgirl exploded,my heart shattered to million pieces Next second she was dropping at high speed.I didn't waste time to think I got the kid out of the suit and I got into it,then I ran and caught her.I layed her down gently,All of the others sorrounded me

"Who is she?"Oliver asked

I ignored him and got out out of the suit and took out the mask revealing R.D.

"Whoa"They all said

"No,no,no.Shoo,we already had enough Kara's.Go away"Cisco said.Kara looked at him and sent a death glare

"That's..."Alex started

"Red Daughter"Kara finished 

"Gideon scan her,level one scan"I said

"Yes creator"She said and scanned her

"the explosion was too much for her,She overused her powers,she must be treated with solar radiation but there are many other way to-"She answered

"Activate the solar absorber I attached to the suit"I commanded,cutting Gideon's sentence short

"Yes creator"She said and activated it suddenly her suit turned into a solar panel,she was absorbing energy

"Damn.....WTH.Who created that???"Cosco said

"I need one of that "Kara said.Waverider landed in front of us and D.E.O. agents and others got down

"Barry how do you know her suit can do that?"Kara asked 

"Yeah how?"Cisco questioned

"Cause I made it"I answered

"You what"Kara exclaimed

"Later"I said

"Wait why did Gideon called you creator?"Sara asked

"Do you know it's creator?"Cisco asked

"No but it has to be some geniuse right?I mean it help us to travel through time and it is vey advance technology....."Ray started

"Barry made it"Caitlin said.All of there eyes widened excluding Kara,Cisco,Caitlin and Wells,Which already know it

"He what?"Sara exclaimed

"He made it in the future,Thawne brought it here"Cisco said.Before they can say anything R.D. groaned and got back her conciouseness

"Am I dead?"She asked to which I chuckled

"Not yet"I said

"Agents arrest her"Alex said.Agents started to walk toward her,I got back to my suit

"Stand down"I said

"What Barry why?You don't know her"Kara said

"She's a friend"I said

"Yeah"She groaned

"Barry she's and criminal,she worked with Lex to kill me"Kara said

"Yeah....that,That was a misunderstanding"R.D. said

"Anyway you tried to kill me,Agents arrest her"Kara said,Savitar tried to object but was too late an agent shot her with a Kryptonite Dart,Savitar caught it with  my hands and stood front of her

"What part of the sentence 'It was a misunderstanding' you didn't understand"I said and turned to the agent who shot her

"And you...."I pointed"Try that again This dart will be in your neck",Suddenly all the agent took a step back

"Why are you standing for her?"Alex asked.I sighed 

"Yeah,If she is a friend she wouldn't hide from us"Kara pointed

"Because....I was the one who kept her hidden"I said,all of them looked at me in shock

"You what?"Kara exclaimed

"Can we talk about this inside?"I asked.they nodded

In the  Waverider

"So start explaining"Alex demanded.From the looks Alex and Kara gave me can say they were pissed

"Calm down alright,Remember the day I saved you from that Lex guy?"I asked.Kara and Alex nodded

"Well when I was leaving I saw her,She pretty much had anger issues at first but it all worked out,So I asked the speedforce if I can help her and after lot of convincing she said yes"

"What do you mean you asked the speedforce?"Kara asked

"Well first:I can't interact with her that much directly,second:I needed money"I answered

"Whoa....Speedforce gave you money?"Cisco asked

"Yep"

"How much?"He asked

"Unlimited"I said

"Whoa du-"Cisco said Alex cut him off

"Why did you help her?"Alex asked

"Well when I found her she was along and she went all Mariah carey on me when I mention any of you so...."

"How did you help her?Where was she all this tim?"Kara asked.I explained her about giving her a new apartment,teaching her new thingsand giving a her a fake I.D.

"So when were you gonna leave her"Kara asked

"Don't know,I was gonna take her to real world two days ago"I answered

"AHa....So all the time when you were sneaking out you were meating her"Kara asked.I nodded

"Knew it"She said,All of the others looked at her Yep classic baby Kara I thought

"So what are you gonna do to her?"Oliver asked

"Wait you are not gonna take her back and leave her along right?"Caitlin asked

"You have a better Idea?"I asked

"Well let her stay with me,I always fancy a roommate"Caitlin said

"Caitlin you trust her?You can't trust her she tried to kill.."Kara said

"Kill you?"I interrupted

"She made a mistake ok move on from it,The first time I knew Oliver was the Arrow he tried to kill me"I stated.She rolled her eyes

"Well if Barry feels like giving her chance and Caitlin agree,I agree with Them,I mean in the beginning I was killing people's,Barry and you showed me it's a bad thing and I proved myself as hero"Oliver said

"Oliver she is different"Kara said

"I know but my point is If I deserved a second chance so does she"Oliver said I nodded.

'"And if you don't trust her trust me,If she do anything I will take the full responsibility"I said

"Allright do what you want"Kara said

"So she lives with me"Caitlin said I nodded

"Alright I think we must tell her"I said but Sara interrupted

"Hey wait,so you have access to Gideon,most specifically our ship"

 "Yep"I said

"But don't worry I won't do anything to jepordize your ship and I won't interact with you ship"I assured them

"Yeah we know"She said and we all went to differnt directions Caitlin and I went to R.D.

Red Daughter's POV

Barry said me to wait in the room till they disscuss about me,So I was waiting for them.But I was getting anoxiouse,it took more time than I expected I used my super hearing to listen to their conversation.They was in the middle of a conversation.The nice lady with Brown hair who I think is Caitlin according to what Barry said to me said I could live with her,Why is she so nice?But as I thought Supergirl interrupted,What is her problem?But Barry stood up for me again as always,He is like my unofficial Bodyuard after they finished thie talk caitlin and Barry walked ton me

Barry's POV 

Caitlin and I went straight to R.D.She was just sitting there looking away with her nice attitude god she drives me crazy,wait what??????Snap out of it idiot we walked straightto her Caitlin was the first to talk

"Hi,Caitlin Snow"She said giving her hand for a hand shake,R.D. looked at me nervouse.I gestured her to take the hand she gladly did.

"Marley Rose"She said,Wow she has improved I thought

"So Marley you are not going to that lonely house again,You are going to stay with me in my apartment"Caitlin sai

"I'am?"She asked looking at me,I nodded

"Well you like right beside it's good than being lonely in that house right?"She asked

"I was not alone Barry came all the time"she said 

"Yeah but you will have a girlie to talk you know....Girl to girl you like that right?"Caitlin said while winking

"I would love to"R.D. replied

"Allright you two talk girl to girl I have someone to talk to"I said and I left to talk to oliver to thank him for standing up for me in the conversation with Kara.After walking few seconds I found him in a room with felicity.I didn't disturb them I waited for him to come out.Finally he came out with a huge grin on his face and glowing like a lantern

"Well someone's happy"I said

"What?"He asked

"You're glowing....Don't deny it,What happened?"I asked

"Felicity agreed to marry me"He said

"Damn.....that's good news"I said

"Yeah,Why do you need to meet me?"He asked

"I need to thank you,You know standing up for me with the conversation with Kara"I said

"Of course What ever happens we got our backs right?"Oliver said

"Right But anyway thanks man"I said.He nodded and left.One of many thing I needed to happen happened R.D. met others and they were fine with it,the next step is......wait what is the next  step?

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