Pain made me(Savitar is Barry...

By LONGLINESISFREEDOM

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When supergirl AKA Kara Danvers break up(Cheated) with Barry Allen AKA Flash for Mon-el he was broken inside... More

Special note
Transformation of Barry Allen
First time out
Finding out
Is it really you?
Last stand of Supergirl?
Help her?
Kara's awaken
New life
Say Hi to new guys
Just the beginning
Old friends
Crisis on Earth-X-part 1
Crisis on Earth-x part-2
Crisis on earth-X part-3
Whats's next?
Night Out
Flashback
1K
Sorry
Bad(Good)Dreams
No matter what,I will always be alone
New writer

Problem's with Dopple Ganger's

740 10 12
By LONGLINESISFREEDOM

Shout ou for Noobcyfydy for the first comment

So...Peoples listen nazis are very powerfull in this story with some extra characters cause .Once again enjoy....

Kara's POV

So..Yes Barry came back to help us all of them met him,with them around there is a high chance that Barry will stay.So everyone greeted him excluding me.I thought that he doesn't like so much to see me so I kept the distance when he explained what happened to him.He went out to do a perimeter check on the way he met Nia soyes after there encounter Nia came straight to me

"Was that your EX?"She asked

"Yeah"I replied

"So....he came"

"Yep"

"How does he know my secret identity"

"I don't know"

"Oh I'll ask him next time and.....weird guy by the way"she said and I nodded

"Ok what happened hear?"She asked

"Oh I'am pretty sure Brainy would fill you up nicely than me"I said she nodded and left to meet brainy 

It's almost been fifteen minutes since Barry left I was pacing back and fourth in the room wondering where he went,I mean he's a speedster right he must be here by now it only fifteen seconds to do a perimeter check but he's been gone for fifteen minutes even team Legends arrived

"Kara he'll come you can't rush it beetween you and him"Oliver said slightly annoyed

"Can't you see something's off with him I mean he volunteered himself to do a perimeter check and didn't even stopped to talk to Nia and he's been impossible to track and he's been gone for freakin fifteen minutes"I exclaimed.I didn't want to push him or something but I'am worried about him.

"Kara calm down I know somethings off with him but he'll tell us if we need to know"Cisco said

"Yeah Kara's right something is off with Barry,but we can't rush it'll only make thing worst"Oliver said 

"I agree"Joe said as all nodded in agreement after few seconds Barry came

"Whoooo..... so the perimeter's clear"He said 

"Mr.Allen If you notice you have taken almost 15 minute's to check the perimeter"J'onn Jonn'z asked

"Well...I....I went to speed force because last time I checked,I can't interact with you this much,at least not directly"He said a bit stammering I suddenly knew he was hiding something

"And why is that?"I asked 

"Cause after I became Savitar I gave away everything I had as much I know I was only able to help you cause there's Eobard  and the other speedster Is there"He said with a stone cold voice

"So what are you saying Is you can't...Interact with us personally?"Cisco asked  

"yeah"he said most of them sighed heavily

"Why would you agree with it then Barr"Joe asked

"Cause if I didn't I'am already dead"He said,everyon's eyebrows widened excluding Brainy

"Brainy you don't seem suprised at the fact"Alex said

"Oh umm yeah well....it's obvious speedforce has given him life with some conditions It isn't a point to get suprise"

"Wha-"

"Allright back to work did you locate the Nazis?"Oliver interrupted

"Yeah we got a location "Cisco and Felicity said

"Alright let's move people"As soon as he said that Me,Barry and Oliver went there to check the location.we elected us to go because we have more experience once I got there Barry was already there Oh no suprise he's like fourty oh fifty time's faster than me

"Hey"I said he didn't responded

"Hey I'am trying to aplogise ok"I exclaimed 

"Well apology accepted"He said

"Then Hi"I said,he let out a deep sigh

"Look You want to talk find someone else I'am not much of a talking person anymore"He said

"But-"I was cut short by a bike revving sound of bicycle.I looked back only to notice Oliver coming and then he got off 

" Quick reminder...Super speed......I don't have it"He said.

"Noted"barry said

"Yeah...Ok"I said then two speedsters came running and a guy with an bow an arrow appeared out of nowhere with a the woman I fought before 

"Why are you here?"Barry asked slightly annoyed

"We believe you have you have couple of things we need"soon after the guy with the bow and arrow said,reverse flash put down a box with a red star and the other speedster put down a box of nanites.....which I guess for Barry

"What ever you stole.."Barry started

"We are gonna need it back"Oliver finished

"Your confidemce is predictable,you have faced some greatest evil known to man and defeated them,If you think you can defeat anything that come's in you way...."The man revealed himself and the othrs did too leaving us all shocked

Third person POV

The man and the ohers revealed their identity leaving the three heroes confused

"What do you think about yourself?"The Nazi Oiliver asked

"This is sick"E-1 Oliver said

"You mean looking at yourself and seing only weekness?I agree E-X Oliver said

"Thawne?"Barry asked

"Straight from the future....So how have you been Flash..I see you got a new suit for yourself huh"

"You died"Barry said

"Time travelling Flash It's confusing...I always seems to be saying that..so do you like my face?"He questioned

"It's the same face you used when I became the flash"

"I thought I'd put it on again,you know for old time's sake,plus,handsome"He mocked flash

"I see you got a new sidekick...afraid to take me along?"Barry demanded gesturing to E-X Barry

"You think just because you are fast you can take me on?well let's see"Thawne said slightly angry now

"You're preverse"Kara said

"No,Kara you're the preversion,the most powerfull being in the world rendered weak by saccharine Americana?My pod was blessed to land on fatherland"E-X Kara Exclaimed

"This is not you'r earth..leave"Barry demanded

"My alliegence is to fatherland...and to my wife"E-X Barry said staring at E-X kara kara and Barry's eyebrows widened but Barry's suit hided it perfecly

"Last chance,Go home..."Barry started

"And stay there..."Kara said

"All of you"Oliver finished

As soon as he finished all of them put their masks on the two speedster put their masks on and  sped away then Barry chased them.Oliver took ou an arrw and aimed it into Overgirl

"Bullet's bounce off me,and what do you think that will do"Overgirl asked in a mocking way 

"Oh believe me this arrow won't"With that green arrow released the arrow,after it travelled halfway it uncovered it self into an kryptonite arrow and it hit Overgirl in the collar-bone.

"Is that an kryptonite arrow?"Supergirl asked

"Why would you have and kryptonite arrow?"Supergirl questioned

"In case an evil you showed up"Green Arrow said raising his voice slightly

Now pissed Overgirl flew to the air to unleash her anger on green arrow but Supergirl used her freeze breath.Overgirl was thrown across the battleground and landed on the floor Dark arrow ran to her side.As soon as  Dark Arrow ran to her side Reverse Flash and Blitzkrieg was tossed across the floor like ragdolls by Savitar.

"Are you alright?"Dark arrow asked Overgirl

"I'am pissed"Overgirl said

"well take it ou on that"Dark arrow said gesturing to a large constructing site where workers are still working then she used her laser eyes to take out some poles and distabalize it.As all this was happening Savitar was ready with his blades to kill Reverse Flash And Blitzkrieg

As soon as Savitar got close to them he heard the construction site falling apart and the people in it as soon as he directed his attention to another side Reverse Flash and Blitzkrieg ran away. Savitar without hestitating ran to the construction site carrying Oliver along with Supergirl.

"Take the prism and the nanites out of here"Dark arrow ordered and Blitzkreig and Reverse flash obeyed.Then they used the distractions and got out out of there

As soon as the heroes started working on the building a steel pole was gonna crash down and Supergirl got hold of it

"Get the workers to safety"Supergirl exclaimed.With that Savitar got each and every worker to safety in less than ten seconds

"We must stabilize the building"Savitar yelled and noted they can't here them cause they are not on comms

"Gideon Hack into their Comms"Barry commanded to his suit

"Yes maker"Within seconds Gideon hacked into their Comms and Savitar spoke

"We need to stabilize the building"Savitar yelled again

"Yes..."Supergirl froze and frowned remembering that Savitar is speaking through their Comms

"How are you speaking with us"Supergirl asked

"Well I hacked Into your Comms-Is this really necessary we need to stabilize the building"Savitar yelled....Again

"Right yeah on it"Supergirl said and get to work she used her heat vision to weld pices together while Green Arrow used his rope arrows to stabilize it after a moment one of the Bottom poles start to crumble

"I can't go there I'am already holdin another one"Supergirl said

"On it"Savitar said 

"Wait you cant't remember you can run fast I'am the one with the super strength"Supergirl said

"I agree"Green Arrow said

"Perhap you'r right I can't.....But my armour can"He said and sped off He caught it and raised It He didn't feel a thing cause his Armour was holding it off

Supergirl and Green Arrow watched in shock at how Barry was doing it

"Stop staring and help me,I cna't hold this whole day"Savitar said.Supergirl quickly cut the gaze and finished her work there and went to help Savitar.Once there work is done they went straight to the D.E.O.

At the D.E.O.

"Why do they even stole ?"Alex asked

"Dayton optical system call it the prism"Felicity said

"What on the earth do they need a sub light generator for?"Harry asked

"Well there are many causes,It's basically a spectral emitter that uses quantem entanglement,you could also use it to create a stable fusion reaction"Brainy explained

"Which all means what?"Alex asked they were silent for a moment

"No seriousely guys I would like to know what you're talking abou"Alex said

"You might wanna take this"Brainy said to Harry 

"Well basically the device they stoled can be use to create a neutron bomb"Well explained 

"pwooooof"Felicity said

"I'll take that back"Alex said

"We need to find them"Mon-El said.As soon as he finished the heroes came,Supergirl and Arrow arrived while Savitar went for a perimeter check 

"This will help"Supergirl said gesturing a Kryptnite arrow

"Is that a Kryptonite arrow"Alex asked

"I know I don't have to ask this question.....But I'am asking,Did Oliver shoot you?"Felicity asked

"Yes...I kind of did"Oliver said all of them looked at him with a suspiciouse look.then Savitar arrived

"What he means is the the archer,flying woman and one of the speedsters are our Dopple-ganger's of us"Barry said

"When you said Earth-X was Horrible,you might have undersold it"Nia told

"Wait--wait how would there be another Kara?"Alex asked

"There are 53 Kara's"Barry said

"And 53 kryptones and-"Brainy was cut short by wells Alex walked to the lab

"well if this arrow has not-so-Supergirl blood on it we can track it using Quantum Analysis"Wells said slightly annoyed

"Well I have a better way"Alex yelled from the lab.All went in that direction's

"Thes Blood Cells have been suffused with shortwave radiation"Alex said

"Solar Radiation?"Nia asked

"Yeah incredibly high amount,like nothing I've ever seen"Alex said

"Can you track it"Barry asked felicity

"Well I once caught a deranged serial killer,off his face cream so...."Felicity said all gave her a look

"No joke heh....."She said

"Well let's do it fast"Barry said.All of them got to work

At a abonden warehouse Overgirl and Reverse flash

"Will it work?"Overgirl asked

"It will with a few adjustments and a significant power source"Reverse flash said

"Dark arrow's on his way to handle it as we speak"Overgirl said 

"Your husband has to make a choice"Reverse flash said

"Beetween me and Reich?"

"Thats right.Because we have two goals,and my worry is if we can't accomplish both,he's gonna chooce you"

"I'll make sure he choose Reich"

"How?" Reverse Flash spat

"By taking the choice out of his hands"Overgirl spat back

At the D.E.O.

Wells,Felicity,Alex,Brainy and Caitlin is working on tracking Overgirl while mick was laying on a bed having a beer.

"So how do you do it"Mick asked getting out of the bed

"Do what?"Caitlin asked

"Getting your other you out of you"

"It happens when I'am scred or angry"

"Well it means if I do,um....booo....."Mick yelled,All threw him a glare while felicity stared at the ceiling annoyed

"Nice try"Caitlin said

"Found em"Wells said while hitting his keyboard

At the D.E.O. Balcony

Barry was standing there staring at the night sky,thinking about Red daughter.He haven't visited her since yesterday,and he can't everyone is keeping an eye on him they may do a trick and find out what is going on.But if he doesn't go he don't know what will she do.Many things were on his mind,Now he was lost in his thoughts.

"Thought I could find you here"Oliver said from behind him

"Hey...man"Barry greeted him witha hug.What ever changed about Barry Oliver was still like a brother to him

"What's with the sore mood?"Barry asked

"Nothing Oliver Lied

"Come on man....No lies what happened?"Barry asked

"Before all this happened I asked felicity to marry me"as soon as Oliver said that Barry's face gave a huge grin

"Man I'am happy about you"Barry said his smile faded when he noticed his sore mood

"Let me gues it didn't go well does it?"Barry asked

"She said that she doesn't want to marry me..."He let out a huge sigh

"She said she didn't believe in marriage"He said andmake a more sore face

"Well man....Love it's...it's a complicated thing.Relationships have there up and downs the main point is she doesn't gave up on you for another person right.She was there for everything with you,You jus gotta have a little faith man.I'am pretty sure she will understand it and will marry you"Barry said

"Thanks man I needed it but...My point is if she love me as I do she must marry me"Oliver said Now Felicity was standing behind him barry gave a scared and denying face

"She's standing right back of me doesn't she"Oliver asked,Barry nodded

"She's Just...She's standing...Back of you"Barry said

"We tracked the Nazi's"Felicity announced Barry left leaving the couples along

"Oliver I---"Felicity stutterd

"Don't--I just need the head in the game we'll talk afterward's"Oliver said

"Well then get the head back in the game"Felicity said and Oliver left after giving her a aprproving nod while.

No one noticed supergirl was using her super hearing to their conversation a tear rolled down her cheek while hearing Barry's speach while she was eavesdropping Alex came into the room

"Hey we tracked the--"Alex stopped cause she noticed the tear on her sister's face

"Hey what happend?" Alex asked 

"Nothing..Nothing just....."Supergirl tried to lie

"Come on you can't lie crinckle,You can talk anything with me"Alex said,As soon as she  said Kara broke into tears and hugged Alex crying into her shoulder

"It's Barry...Did I broke his heart?Will I never be able to take place in his heart?"Kara asked still crying

"No,no,no as long as he is here you still have a chancr=e and everyone make's mistakes"Alex said

"Now we need to focus on this war alright"Kara nodded and they both left

Red Daughter's POV 

It's been one whole day since he visited me I woke up today ate my breakfast while waiting for him to pop up.And then I ate lunch without him.and watched some movies scrolled through Instagram.in the night I was staring into the night sky.Did he really abonden me?No he will never do that He said me to wait and I must,But what if he is in trouble?I need to help,No you can't.He said it for a reason you must stay my mind commanded.after that I slowly drifted to sleep in the couch

Right all done 2522 word's I didn't know i had it in me I'll update a chapter soon



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