You're Being Watched

By adamsaqib

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This is a story about a 15 year old boy named Nolan. He had a very big back yard with a forest in the back. O... More

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Chapter 2

"What was that noise."

"That's the cops were saved, Jacob."

"Put your hands behind your back and stay silent."

"You stupid boys now I am going to jail for this the man said."

"Are you boys okay. yes, we're okay we just really wanna go home."

"Mom is that you. yes, it is and you boys are in trouble when we get back. but we're really sorry mom. save it."

Then the cops take the unknown man to prison he was sentenced to 65 years in prison.

After that, his mom took Nolan and Jacob home.

"Okay boys we're home but I am gonna have to call your mom Jacob and tell her what happened cause she is very worried. please don't. I have to."

"Now you boys go upstairs. okay."

Then Nolan's mom calls Jacobs's mom.

Nolan could hear the phone ringing from downstairs and made him worried that Jacob would not be his friend anymore since what happened last night.

 "Hi is this Jacobs mom. yes, it is who is this anyways. it's me Nolan's mom. oh yeah hi and why did you call me. I have you buy Jacob here he actually went to some random house last night and the cops came. okay, I will be there soon."


DING DONG DING DONG

Nolan's mom heard the door.

"That must be Jacob's mom."

Nolan's mom opens the door to see Jacob's mom.

"Hey Jacob is upstairs I will call him down. okay."

"Jacob your mom is here come down, please. okay."

"Bye Nolan see you soon I guess. okay bye."

Jacob runs downstairs to his mom.

His mom takes Jacob home.

After that Nolan's mom was so exhausted.

His mom then hears a noise outside.

She was confused why someone would come to her house right now.

Nolan's mom opens the door. 

When she opens the door she does not see anyone.

She called loud hello anyone there.

No one answers.

But just then.

Someone pops out and takes Nolan's mom.

"Let me go your stupid man. Shut up and come with me old lady."

"AH HELP ANYONE PLEASE HELP. No one is gonna help you old lady."

The man who took Nolan's mom was no other than the unknown man.

"Mom can you make me dinner please."

No one answers Nolan.

Nolan runs down the stairs to where his mom was before he got taken by the unknown man.

"Mom where are you I have been calling you for the last 5 minutes."

Nolan then sees a note on his front door.

On the note it says this:

Hey, it's me the man I have your mom hostage you have to tell me where the president lives cause I am gonna kill him so you have tell 12 am tomorrow to come to me or else. The address is 226 Maxin road in Orlando. 


OH MY GOSH!!!! 

My mom is hostage by the unknown man and how did he get out of prison Nolan said.

Nolan goes to the phone and calls his best friend Jacob.

Jacob picks up the phone. 

Jacob are you there Nolan says very worriedly and panting.

"Calm down I am here why are you so in rush. It is very important so basically, the man somehow came out of prison he must have come to my house and took my mom hostage cause he left a note saying he did and he said he will kill her if I don't come to his house and tell him where the president lives."

"What really?"

"yes he did and we need to do something about this. can we talk at school its in 20 minutes? sure I guess so bye. bye."'

Nolan starts getting ready for school but is still very worried about his mom at the same time.

Nolan said to himself if he told Jacobs's mom about this she might do something but he knew Jacobs's mom would not believe him.

He remembered he had his driver's license test after school.

After so much running to get to school he saw Jacob standing there and looked like he was worried too.

"Jacob why do you look so worried. It's that the man came to my house this time and took my mom. WHAT REALLY?"

"Yes. now we really have to do something about that bitch. I know right. But here's the thing Jacob it is just that after school I have a driver's license test so it might be our getaway vehicle. yes, that would be great Jacob said."

Then the bell rang and the two of them had to go to class.

Hi, Mr. Crosby Nolan says.

Hey, Nolan how is it going Mr. Crosby replies.

"I am doing great how about you. I am doing great now you go sit down. okay."

Then Mr. Crosby walks over and says his first lesson.

"Class today we will be learning some science."

"Jacob we have science our second worst subject. we just have to go with the flow right?"

"Yeah."

Then they both learn Science after that it was recess.

Nolan, it's recess Jacob said.

" So this is the plan, Jacob so I am gonna do my drivers' license test then if I pass I take my mom's car and go to his house and from there we go. that is a good plan but you don't know how to drive if you pass. I have seen my mom do it so I will do what she does. okay but don't kill us."

After 6 hours of school, they were finished.

Were finally done now I am gonna do my test so come with me.

Then Nolan and Jacob head towards the testing place.

Nolan was very nervous about the test.

Once he got in the building of the testing place he could already see the paper on the tale.

Jacob tells Nolan everything is gonna be okay and try his best.

Nolan said hi to the man who gave him the paper.

He answered the first couple of questions.

But then got to a question that was very hard for Nolan.

After he completed that question he was on the final question.

What do you do if you get in a car accident?

He answered the fourth option.

The test guy took his paper to his room to check if he passed.

As the guy was seeing if Nolan could pass Nolan was so nervous.

Nolan then saw the guy back.

So what did I get...

You passed!

Here is your driver's license.

Oh my god! I am so excited!!!

"Jacob, Jacob, Jacob I passed I don't believe it. oh my gosh, now we have to get to your mom's car."

Nolan and Jacob run towards his mom's car.

Once they got there it was the biggest moment of Nolan's life.

"Okay so how are we gonna do this. I think you pull this thing and it should work."

He puts the key in and presses the button and the car turns on.

"It worked oh my gosh Nolan said."

"Great now press down on this thing and it will go Jacob said."

Nolan carefully steps on the accelerate.

The car moves and gets on the road.

Nolan was so happy.

"Jacob was on road now we have to press accelerate and other stuff. yup!" 

After a little bit, they got to an entry section.

"Okay, so we pull this down to go to the stop and boom."

1 hour later

"Were here Jacob screams."

"But wait Jacob look there is a sign on the door lets goes check it out."

Then Nolan and Jacob get out of the car and make their way towards the door.

When they got to the door they saw a note on the note it said this.

Oh, no very sorry boys you two were late now we're at this place maybe try to be earlier this time from your best friend.

"You're not my best friend stupid man. aw, man now we have to go even further Jacob said."

The wind blowing so fast that the door slams are right open!

"Oh my gosh the wind is so bad today Nolan said. Hey Nolan we should go check the house to see if there not bating us."

Nolan agrees with Jacob and goes inside the house.

At first glimpse all it looked dirty and a lot of cobwebs everywhere.

After they went into the kitchen they were both in shock.

There was blood everywhere and a body.

It wasn't their mom cause it was a man.

He looked closer and there was a note it said sorry dad.

"Jacob, this must have been the man's dad. Yeah probably."

They were in disgust and did not wanna continue with the mission.

Then Nolan checked his watch and there were only 12 hours left about a half of a day.

"Jacob, we have a problem. What is it? We have 12 hours left. Then we have to leave right now!"

Then Nolan and Jacob ran back to the car.

He matched the address that was on the note to his phone GPS the drive was only 35 minutes from where they were.

"Nolan, do exactly what you did last time and we will be there in no time and safe. I will try my best."

Nolan try's very hard to remember how he did it last time.

It took him a minute or two to remember but once he remembered they were on the way there.

"I have a question Nolan, it's just I am very scared and I have never had a friend better than you and I love how you take care of me like I am your brother!"

"It's not a problem Jacob, I just want to tell you this Jacob, whenever you near me I am gonna treat you like your my brother so remember that!"

"I will now focus on driving. Okay."

30 minutes later!


"We are here now Nolan yelled in excitement."

Nolan and Jacob got out of the car.

The wind was so hard that the leaves went right on Jacob's face knocking him over.

"Jacob, are you okay. Yeah, I am okay don't worry Nolan."

"Thank god you're okay."

"Now Nolan, we have to go in check, and hopefully our mom's is there."

Nolan and Jacob ran towards the door.

When they had got to the door.

They heard a lady scream very loud.

"That must be my mom Nolan said. If your mom is there then my mom should we there to."

"MOM WERE COMING DON"T WORRY," Nolan yells very loudly.

Nolan try's to open the door but it would not open.

He called Jacob to help him.

They both tried and it would not open.

Then they both kicked the door so hard with the power of the wind and the door opened.

Nolan again yells, were coming with excitement.

Nolan again hears his mom scream.

She said, please come help me and then Jacob heard her mom saying the exact same thing.

They both run downstairs.

They saw their mom's chained below a cutter.

"You stupid idiot let our mom's out now.

"You think it's that easy."

"Remember your part of the deal the man said."

"Oh yeah."

"The president lives at this address."

Nolan gives the man a fake address.

Because he remembers his mom being friends with the president.

"Okay thank you"

"Let our mom out now."

"Actually I lied I am not letting them out."

Nolan yells no and then starts crying.

"You old man give that button now!"

The man ignores Jacob.

Jacob runs at his full might and pushes the man right over and the man was trapped,

"You little boy I insist you get off me before stuff gets even bigger. Not until I get that button."

The man laughs very loudly.

"Why are you laughing at me. It's that even if you do this you will never get the button."

Then the man takes something out of his pocket.

It looked like a button.

"Hey what are you gonna with that?"

"You just watch."

The man pressed the button.

Everything blows up.

His mom screams NOLAN!

There was smoke everywhere.

Nolan and Jacob could not see a thing.

They both yell.

"Mom are you okay?"

No response.

After the smoke was gone.

The man was nowhere to be seen.

They looked in the chamber where their mom was.

They were nowhere to be seen as well.

All Nolan remembers was his mom saying his name loudly!


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