Anokhi dosti apni - Maddam Sir

By Bahaar2811

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it's a fan fiction story based on the TV show Maddam Sir. It focuses mainly on sweet and sour FRIENDSHIP of H... More

Introduction
I Care for u
Haan ho gayi ghalti
manaaun kaese!
note
Inne nakhre....!!
Maan bhi jaao..!!!
saath ye chhoote na...!
tu kho na jaaye..!!
note
Chanda...!
Mohabbatein!
O ri chiraiyya...!
kon mujhe yun pyar karega!
note
Suhaana din...!
Tu hi sukoon..!!
waqt-e-rukhsat..!!
note-sorry!
Kahaan ho tum..!!!
Tum ghana saaya!!
Kuchh to hai...!!!
Dastak?!!!
Milan ki raenaa..!!
Jhilmil...!
Agla qadam...
Dil khilona nahi..!
Dekho kabhi na aesa kehna!
Mohabbat, ek paheli..!
Note
Ghalat Fehmi...
Blaster Brothers!!!
Makaafaat-e-amal!
note-new story
Rooh bhi!!
Farz!!!
Khone ka hausla nahi!!
Zindagi..!
sorry-note
Wo Raat....!
Subh-e-umeed..!
Yaum-e-naveed!!
Note - Support
Anmol wafaayen!!
Thankyou 💖 - note
Note- Honestly...
Main teri behna..!!
Khafa Khafa...!
Aaj dosti kar lein..?!!
Roothe yaar ko manaana mushkil...!
Kyun itna hua hai tu khafa..!!
Mujhe tanha kar ke...!!
Tum bhi na...
Naayaab ho tum...!
New shot...
Jashn!!
Kab tak?!!
Kuchh log nibhaate hain aesa..!
Alvida...!
Apna ghar...
Anokhi Shart...!
Ms Malik ki Masti...!!
Teri raat ka fasaana..!!
Mamta!!
Nayi Khushi...!
Aamad-e-bahaar..!!
Note - Recreation
Phir khile phool naya...!
Writer here...
Motherhood...🥰
Surprise ya Shock..?!!
Chhoti si bhool...!
Khaas Uphaar!!
Knock knock..!!
Mohabbat rooth jaaye to...

Tu jo rootha...

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By Bahaar2811

(My goodness...!
I think I must wear an armour today...😅
Very sincere apologies for being late... I m facing end of academics pressure these days yaar... that's why too packed...
I hope the following part meets ur expectations...
Happy reading ❤️)

Literally no proof read, grammatical mistakes may be more than expected, plz ignore...

Veer locked her in his arms, as tight as he could...!
After the longest n most traumatizing night, she finally felt most safe n secure in the world...!!

Veer was gently tapping her head...

Letting her cry for a few minutes, Veer kissed her head...

Veer: Dulaari..!
Shh... Bas karo Gudiya...!

She cried harder...

"Bhaiyya..." was all she could say within her hiccups...

Veer: Bhaiyya ki jaan...!
Ro'o mat please....
Kitna ro'ogi...?!!

But the turmoil had been too much for her tender mind, n she was now releasing it all...

Veer tightened his grip, n rested his chin on her head...

Dulaari was sobbing loudly hiding in his chest...

After long, she raised her head...
Veer smiled at her.

Dulaari: Bhaiyya! Humein maaf kar dijiye....

Her voice was choking.

Dulaari: humein ek baar aap ko sun lena chahiye tha...

She snuggled in him again, n started crying...
Veer tightened his grip around her, n tapped her head gently...

Veer: come on gudiya!!
It's ok...
Plz ro'o mat...

But the more he consoled her, the more she cried....

Dulaari: hum ne.... hum ne aap par vishwaas nahi kiya..???

She was blaming herself.
Veer couldn't bear it anymore..

Veer: itni takleef to tumhaare shabdon ne nahi di thi, jitni tumhaare aansu de rahe hain ....!

Veer wiped her tears n raised her chin...

Veer: Ab suno meri baat...
I m proud of you princess..!💕
Jab tumhein laga ke main ne ghalat kiya hai, to tum chup nahi rahin...

He kissed her forehead lovingly...

Veer: Agar tumhaari umr mein main ne bhi itni himmat dikhaayi hoti..., to shaayed Jhilmil.........

He stopped..., his mind again flashed with the most painful memory...!
Dulaari was observing him closely...

Dulaari: Kaun jhilmil...??

Veer sighed...

Veer: Jhilmil...!

A long swaying braid tied with paraanda, n then a cheerful smile reflecting equally in black, shiny, lively eyes flashed in his imagination ....!

Dulaari was shocked seeing a layer of tears in his eyes...
She had never seen him crying...
The day when she had blamed him was the first time she had seen his tears..
She was steeped in guilt once again...

How could she be so ruthless?? Even his tears couldn't melt her??!!

As he had said, she had punished him without giving him a chance to defend himself..., still his loving arms had again welcomed her with same warmth....!

Pushing away her thoughts for the time being, she looked at Veer...

Dulaari: Veer bhaiyya! Aap ro rahe hain....??

Veer came out of the world of memories...
He blinked several times to push the tears inside, n then smiled...

Veer: ummhmm...
Tumhara bhai rota thodi hai Raaj Dulaari..!!💖

Dulaari wasn't convinced..

Dulaari: aap ne bataya nahi kaun Jhilmil?

Veer: bataaunga.. phir kabhi...

He said, caressing her hairs....
She frowned..

Dulaari: Mat bataaiyye.. hum pata laga lenge...

Veer laughed on her cuteness.

She placed her palms on his shoulders, n smiled looking into his eyes...

Dulaari: Aap humaare hero hain bhaiyya...!!

Veer was overwhelmed with joy, to get his heroic image back in her eyes...!
He kissed her head...

A few minutes passed, n Dulaari's smile was wiped away by another thought...

Dulaari: bhaiyya! Baba ne aesa kyun kiya...??

Her eyes started bleeding again...!
She was broken, as he was, 9 years back....!

He couldn't stop her from crying..
He just provided her the support of his strong arms, which he didn't have when needed....!

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Haseena Malik rotated the door knob, n pushed it open....

Inside the room, Karishma Singh was sleeping under the effect of sedatives...

Taking small steps, she reached near her...

Her eyes were glued to KS's face for some time...
She settled down beside her on the bed...

She held her hand tightly...
KS would definitely wake up because of her hold, if she had not been given sedatives...

A few drops fell down from HM's eyes on KS's hands...

No matter how much she tried, her mind could not get rid of that scene, when she had seen her KS injured, unconscious, lying in a pool of blood....!
How helpless she had felt, when she couldn't open the gate...?!!

What if...??!!
What if...?!!!!
Her mind was not ready to think further....!!

They both shared an incredible bond...!
Despite being different, they had proven their friendship to the world...!
They were definitely much more than just colleagues...

But...., in that one night, Haseena Malik was feeling her love raised to several times for Karishma Singh...!! 💕

Her heart still shivered, every time she recalled the fear of losing she had been through...

Her eyes started raining...
The relief was temporary..., she could still not bring herself out of the pain n trauma completely....

HM: Karishma Singh...!
Aap....soch bhi nahi saktein ke hum kitna dar gaye the....

She caressed her hairs...

" Safaayi ka ek mauka to mujrim ko bhi deti hain na aap..
Humein nahi dengi..? "
She recalled KS's words....

HM: Nahi...!
Hum nahi denge aap ko kuchh kehne ka mauqa...

She sobbed...

HM: kyunki aap bahot ziddi hain...,
Hum aap se naaraaz hain.., or jab aap zid karengi to hum haar jaayenge...!

Her cute complaint would definitely make KS smile, only if she was awake...💖

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It was night, n in KS's room, Veyom Singh was having fun time teasing his beloved wife...😉 Much for her distraction, as she was quite sad due to HM's anger.
She was taking care of her in every way, but not giving any response to her attempts to apologise...

VS: ye dekho...
Ye hai Lily, ye hai Daisy... or ye hai Meena...!
Kaisi lagi..???😉

He was scrolling his cellphone screen in front of her, although she was neither looking at his phone, nor at him...

She was sitting with a cute frown, turning her face away, n crossing her arms...🤭

KS: Bahot badhiya...!
Or koi Rosy, Sheena.. koi ho to bata dijiye...😒

VS bit his lips, n winked at SS mischievously, who was enjoying this cute banter session of husband-wife duo....

VS: Nahi na yaar...! Bas teen...

His face reflected fake regret...🤭

VS: Par inki company mein dil laga rehta tha...
Warna tumhaare or amma ke bina to akela main paagal ho jata...
Tumhe pata hai na.., mujh se tanhaayi bardaasht nahi hoti...

He said innocently...
KS frowned..

KS: ji bilkul..!
Isiliye to humaare jaate hi ek k teen option dhund liye aap ne...

" Kya ek ka teen ho raha hai bhai...??"
PJ entered with a bowl of soup, n settled down on the bed near KS...

PJ: pehle ye soup pijiye aap, baaki baatein baad me...

KS was irritated...

KS: ab aap is soup se torcher kijiye humein....
Aap ke lalla ne jo kasar chhodi ho, wo puri kar dijiye...

PJ: ab kya kar diya humaare bechaare lalla ne... ??
Jab dekho uske peechhe padi rehti hain aap...

KS turned towards VS..

KS: aap chup kyun ho gaye...
Apni Amman ko bhi dikhaaiyye na apni wo Lazy , Mini ki photos...
Inhe bhi to pata chale in ka lalla kitna bechaara hai...🤨

VS: Daisy , Lily , or Meena...

VS corrected...😉

KS: Dekha aap ne Amman..!
Inka naam bhi ghalat lene par kitna mirchi lag raha hai inko...

VS: Arey to ...
Itne pyaare naam hain....

KS: Amman...!

KS whined like a kid...

PJ: Lalla ! Kyun tang kar rahe ho isey...?

VS: Arey Amman main kahaan tang kar raha hun...??
Yahi puchh rahi thi k itne din main ne iske bina kaese guzaare...😉

Achha tum ne pure din ka schedule to suna hi nahi...

Breakfast Daisy ke saath....
Lunch Lily ke saath
or dinner pe Meena ko ghar bula leta tha...

He bit his lips, naughtily gazing at KS, who was almost in tears now...
PJ smacked her head...

PJ: Kyun sata rahe ho Lalla....?
Dikhao zara kaun hai ye Dizzy, lazy...

VS: Amman Daisy...

PJ: shh....

She snatched away his cellphone, n glanced at the screen...

PJ: ye lo.... Bahuraani...!
Aankhon pe shak ki patti bandhte hi dikhaayi dena band ho jata hai biwiyon ko...
Internet se nikali hui tasweerein hain...
Chhed raha hai ye tumhein....

She showed the screen to KS.
She looked at it carefully, n gave a smack on VS's arm...
Veyom laughed hard, taking KS in a side hug...

Veyom: kya Amman...!
Kitna maza aa raha tha...

PJ: beta Amman hain hum tumhaari....
Bahot achhe se jaante hain tum ko...

KS: hum ne wo.... dhyaan se dekha nahi tha warna pehle hi samajh jaate...
Ye ladkiyaan Aap se.... Aap se dosti karengi...?!
Shakl dekhi hai aap ne apni....

She taunted smacking his arm again...

VS (whispered): kar ke dikha dun Dosti....?????

His voice was audible enough to PJ...
She glared at him.

PJ: Lalla...!
Bas, Khabardaar humaari bahuraani ko sataya to...
Dekh nahi rahe ho uski haalat...

VS: Achha theek hai...
Apni Laadli bahuraani ke saamne to aap ko koi nazar hi nahi aata...🙄

Waese haa Amman...!
Lata bhi aayi thi ghar, aap se milne....
Wahi Lata..., Jisey aap apni bahu banana chahti thein...😉

He winked at PJ...
PJ glared trying to suppress her own smile...

PJ: ek or baar...
Lalla , ek or baar tum ne humaari bachhi ko tang kiya na, to kamre se bahar kar denge tumhein...😑

VS: Arey..Areyy..!
Ok... OK!
Sorry Kashi...!

He surrendered finally...

PJ : hmm....🤨

PJ turned towards KS, n found her smiling naughtily...

PJ: ab aap ko kya hua..??

KS: kaa baat hai Pushpa ji..!
Hum ko pehle pata hota na ke ek goli lagne par itna Laad pyaar milta hai , to do chaar goliyaan aur kha....

PJ: Karishma!!!

PJ cut her n shouted...
Her heart had skipped a beat...!

PJ: soch samajh kar bolna to seekha hi nahi na aapne...???

It took a moment for KS to get the gravity of situation, n in that moment PJ had started shedding tears continuously...
VS instantly got up, n wrapped an arm around her tightly....

KS: Amman!!!
Hum to mazaaq kar rahe the...

She tried to hold PJ's hand, but she didn't allow her...

PJ: Mazaaq!!!
Aese waqt mein aesa mazaaq...

KS: Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! Ammaan...
Hum sach mein nahi samjhe ki...

PJ cut her again...

PJ: Aap nahi samajhtein...
Aap ko kya farq padta hai..??
Farq to humein padta hai...
Farq to un logon ko padta hai jo aap se pyaar karte hain...!
Aap ko kya farq padta hai...??!!

Every word pierced KS's heart, n made her recall much more...!

KS: Sahi keh rahi hain aap...!

Her voice was cracking...
PJ looked at her in surprise..

Her eyes were filled with tears...

KS: shaayed humein hi bhaavnaaon ko maan dena nahi aata...!

Tears were streaming down her face...

KS: tab hi to... hum ne... apni Maddam Sir ko bhi naaraaz kar diya...

She started sobbing...
PJ shifted a little closer, n held her chin...
KS raised tear-filled guilty eyes...

KS: wajah kuchh bhi ho...
Humein koi haq nahi tha ke apne kathor shabdon se unka dil dukhaate...!

PJ: kya hua hai..? Puri baat bataaiyye humein....

PJ asked looking into her eyes...
KS rested her head in her lap, n closed her eyes...
She still believed that HM was angry because of her rude words....!!
She narrated everything to PJ...

PJ, who was caressing her hairs, smiled...

PJ: Karishma Singh..., or Maddam Sir ki naaraazgi se ghabra rahi hai....?!!
Arey aap ke liye to maddam Sir ko manana baayein haath ka khel hai...!

KS made a cute pout...

KS: Is baar aesa nahi hai Pushpa ji...!
Hum ne bhi isi confidence se kaha tha Santu se.., k hum unhe mana lenge...
Par....

She sighed....

On the contrary, PJ was taking it all lightly...
She was sure that the unique duo will solve everything incredibly....!!👍

PJ: Aap ne baat to ki hogi unse....

KS: ji..!
Or hum bata nahi sakte ke Ms ki chup kitni daraavni hai...
Himmat hi nahi hoti kuchh kehne ki...😚

She replied in the most innocent tone....
PJ n SS suppressed their smile with much difficulty...

PJ: sab theek ho jaayega...
Ab uthiye , is position mein aap ki stitches par dabaav padega...
Or chaliye soup pijiye...

KS grimaced while getting up...

KS: PJ please soup nahi....😚
Ek to anu bhaiyya ne humein kaju katli bhi nahi khaane di...

PJ was about to say something, when HM entered...

PJ: lijiye aagayin Ms!
Maddam Sir.., aap hi sambhaaliye apni laadli ko...
Ab inhe soup nahi peena hai
Hum se nahi uthaaye jaate inke nakhre.., aap hi uthaaiyye...!

PJ got up from the bed showing fake irritation, n sat down on another bed...

HM came forward slowly...
KS was looking at her sheepishly...
PJ was gesturing her to speak...

HM picked up the bowl of soup from the side table, n sat down on the bed near KS...!
Her face was devoid of any kind of expressions...!

She forwarded a spoon to KS.
KS didn't dare to refuse ....!!

PJ was gesturing her continuously, but all her senses were focused only on her Maddam Sir...

She was feeding her with her hands...!
KS's heartbeat had raised...

HM was filling the last spoon, when KS finally looked at PJ...
Gaining encouragement from her, she called...

KS: Maddam Sir!

HM raised her eyes..
KS was holding her ears...

KS: Sorry!!

Her eyes were teary, n voice was shivering..

HM took a pause for a second, n then shoved the spoon in her mouth...

The bowl was empty now.
KS was seeing the golden chance slipping away from her hands...

HM kept the bowl on the table..

KS: Maddam Sir!
Har saza seh sakte hain, par aap ki naaraazgi nahi....!

She made one more attempt.
Without giving any response, HM turned to leave...

KS: Maddam Sir!
Aap aese mun modengi to mar jaayenge h......

She could not speak further, as HM's hand had shut her mouth firmly...!

Her face could no more hide the intensity of pain behind stony expressions....

Her eyes instantly got filled with tears, n a few drops rolled down her cheeks....

Mujhe apne zabt pe Naaz tha, sar-e-bazm raat ye kya hua...
Meri aankh kaese chhalak gayi , mujhe ranj hai ye, bura hua...!

(Zabt - control,
Naaz- pride,
Sar-e-bazm : in the assembly/ gathering

Chhalak- spill
Ranj- sorrow )

She slowly removed her hand from her mouth, n lowered her head....

KS wiped her tears..

KS: humesha aap ke aansuon ki wajah ban jaate hain hum...

She said in choking voice...

HM got up with a jerk...

Tearful complaining eyes met with tearful pleading eyes for a moment, n then HM walked out, quickly wiping her tears herself....!

Mujhe chhod de mere haal par, tera kya bharosa hai chaara-gar....!
Teri ye nawaazish-e-mukhtasar, mera dard aur badha na de....!

(Chaara-gar: friend/ healer,
Nawaazish-e-mukhtasar: a short favour. )

KS's expectant eyes chased her till she disappeared, n then started shedding tears in PJ's arms....

SS gestured VS to come in a corner...
She told her something in whisper, n he gave a hi-fi to her...

I know that you all wait eagerly for update, but I bet that I wait more eagerly for your response....
So plz, comment down your reviews...
I m extremely sorry again for the delay...
Stay tuned 😊

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